Cats of the Clans Wiki talk:Character Art Project

Pansyfur (W) for approval
Here she is! What do you think? Please comment! Clar ris  sa! :)  09:42, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

maybe add some shadin to Pansyfur?pebble2pineow 15:03, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the boundaries between brown and white, and add shading, but other than that, it looks pretty good.  Blaze -Pelt   Huzzah  15:04, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading, blur white transitions, make pupils bigger and add white and fix the ear pink. Maybe add more white onto it because she is "brown and white" this just looks brown with white markings.-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   17:56, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded -I blured the white transitions,shaded,fixed the ear pink and made the pupils bigger. Better? Clar ris  sa! :)  18:47, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Look at the other approved images to see what the ear pink should look like. Darken the shading more and blur the white transitions more-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   00:40, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded -I blured the white transition a little bit more and I fixed the ear pink,I did it the way the approved images are. Clar ris  sa! :)  08:01, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading and highlights. Mist cloud  10:40, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading and highlights, also if Pansyfur is brown and white add some large white patches. :) Very good Clara! Γǻώή  ςτόŗm  18:02, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Where should I put the patches? Clar ris  sa! :)  10:33, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

You wanna put it everywhere also highlights aren't neccesary she only has to put them if she wants to but you do have to put shading. Mo onp elt  ₪   19:04, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded - I put a few spots in. Does it look nicer or should i get rid of them? Clar ris  sa! :)  17:41, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

I think its better. CBA? Zoe27 18:58, May 12, 2010 (UTC)

'''This is not in the CBA stage. Zoe, you can not CBA or Approve images unless you are a senior warrior. Understood? Good.''' All I see is that the image needs shading and highlights. Quailflight 09:52, May 13, 2010 (UTC)

I've already added highlights, should I make them larger? Clar ris  sa! :)  09:40, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

Add or darken the shading. -- Nighty Lohan's PRE-DEPO PARTAYYY! 12:49, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded -I darkened the shading, better? Clar ris  sa! :)  16:17, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more reddish, and blur all of the white patches  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:33, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:18, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded -I darkened the ear-pink and blurred the shading. Better? 07:34, May 29, 2010 (UTC)

Darken shading and add shading to white patches-- Night s h i n e   R  05:54, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Fawndapple (Ki)- For Approval
ǻώή ςτόŗm  18:59, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

This is great,Fawny! Just blur the back a bit more. Clar ris  sa! :)  19:25, May 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred the back-shading and flecks. ;) Γǻώή  ςτόŗm  12:13, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

Darken ear pink and make pupils bigger-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:07, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? Γǻώή ςτόŗm  08:46, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Where's the image? Raven flight 92 23:51, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Here. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  15:30, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Comments.....? Γǻώή ςτόŗm  15:39, May 13, 2010 (UTC)

Relax, it's only been two days. Users will comment when they have the time. For the image, darken the shading, and brighten the highlights. -- Icestorm Peace 20:26, May 13, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:48, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Night. :( I think the highlights and shading look fine. Γǻώή  ςτόŗm  15:19, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

Make the pupils much bigger and darken the ear pink-- Night s h i n e   R  07:10, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

REuploaded  Γǻώή ςτόŗm  10:17, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

This should be a long haired blank-- Night s h i n e   R  05:56, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

If you made the white spots flecks instead of dapples and darkened the whole image, this could be Fawnkit.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 08:40, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Ashblaze(BC) -for approval
ah well here's ashblazepebble2pineow 00:41, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Wow that was quick. Blur the highlights and take away the ear pink away on the ear farthest to us. PaRtY In TeH UsA!  00:44, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

The eyes look orange. Mo onp elt  ₪   03:52, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Blur it more. Some cats have orange eyes. Clar ris  sa! :)  18:50, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

It says amber not orange. Mo onp elt  ₪   04:36, May 13, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. <font color="#330066">Mo <font color="#CC6600">on 03:00, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

His eyes look fine to me. The only thing I see wrong is that the ear pink on the ear farthest from us needs to be removed  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:23, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

Pleaase work on this or it will be declined. Ice fall 13:08, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Shinekit(M) (Ki) For Approval
I like her. Constructments? --<font color="#333399">Mo <font color="#3333CC">onp <font color="#333399 ">elt  <font color="#3366FF ">₪   17:25, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

It looks good. Maybe blur the patches some more. <font color="#50c878">Raven <font color="#6495ed">flight <font color="#9966cc">92 23:50, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? <font color="#333399">Mo <font color="#3333CC">onp <font color="#333399 ">elt  <font color="#3366FF ">₪   02:05, May 13, 2010 (UTC)

Desaturate the patches a bit  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:38, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

??? <font color="#330066">Mo <font color="#CC6600">on 02:58, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Desaturate means make it less bright. I think the tool is a sponge in pixlr, I don't know if it's on GIMP  ddevans96z Goodbye Middle School! 03:01, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

I think Nightfall would have sid darken it if she wanted me to darken it. I think duserate means to makea color more rich color. <font color="#330066">Mo <font color="#CC6600">on 01:54, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

Desaturate doesn't mean "darken," it means take the color out. Like if you have a dark color, if you desaturate it enough, it turns into a dark gray. "Saturation" is making a color more rich.  ddevans96z Goodbye Middle School! 17:00, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

Thats what I said. You said dursurate is make it less bright (darken). <font color="#330066">Mo <font color="#CC6600">on 13:37, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

"Less Bright" and "Darker are two different things, and you didn't say that, you reversed it.  ddevans96z Goodbye Middle School! 15:21, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

Mintblaze(W) - For Approval
Ugh I hate it. XP My first tortie. Comments? PaRtY In TeH UsA!  22:07, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

It's not that bad, Echo! Darken the ear pink some. <font color="#50c878">Raven <font color="#6495ed">flight <font color="#9966cc">92 22:08, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

On her hind leg the brown/black isn't blurred. Also there is a lot of blurred lineart. I'll add a diagram later, can you sort it out? Γǻώή ςτόŗm  09:17, May 12, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:41, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Fawny: What are you talking about? Lucy Whiskers!  18:30, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

On the back leg there is a spot between the brown and black that isn't blurred-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   05:37, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

I don't see any blurred lineart, but there is a place where the black is blurred near the lineart  ddevans96z Goodbye Middle School! 22:00, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

I'm so sorry but I don't see any thing about the gray and brown not being blurred.  Brook paw   The truth  20:07, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

Look carefully:



And there are also some spots with burred lineart. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  09:11, May 29, 2010 (UTC)

Blur it. 12:38, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

When you say, "Blur it," you should be more specific, so they know what to blur dde  vans  96z  14:34, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

someone else can work on this. withdrawing.  Brook paw   The truth  17:22, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

May I take over? There's really not much that needs to be fixed  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:52, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Sure.  Brook paw   The truth  01:40, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Alright, I fixed a few things. But guys, seriously? When you said blurred lineart, I thought you meant real blurred lineart. That was hardly blurred, you couldn't even see it unless you zoomed in a lot. I fixed anyway. I also changed the color of the eye and ear pink  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 18:26, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

Make the gray patches bigger-- Night s h i n e   R  05:58, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Better?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 16:36, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah. Comments before approval? Ice fall 13:06, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Yellowpool (Q) for approval
Do you think this is okay? I did this because she is currently a queen and she was a queen when she had Brownkit(who is also up for approval), anyway, i don't think it is over the limit, and I know it looks bad. Clar ris  sa! :)  19:28, May 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the back, apart from that, it's fine <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 08:19, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink should be enlarged.  ddevans96z Science Project... 18:43, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded -I enlargened the ear-pink and blured her back more, better? Clar ris  sa! :)  16:05, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

Center the ear pink more, and blur the shading and highlights  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:42, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:14, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded -I blured the shading and highlights. Is it better? I can't blur it any more. 17:59, May 29, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading and make the ear pink more red-- Night s h i n e   R  07:11, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

What colour should I use for ear-pink? 08:30, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Just a dark pink-- Night s h i n e   R  05:49, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Flipperpaw (A) - For Approval
Here's Flipperpaw! I know it's horrible. Comments? -- Quailflight 10:14, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

He's good! Blur the shading and highlights a lot; lighten the eyes; and the ear pink looks a bit purple, make it more pink  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:59, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. It only looks the same. sigh. I'll lighten the eyes later.-- Quailflight 09:59, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink looks way too light.  ddevans96z Goodbye Middle School! 15:08, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

I'll get to this soon. I have a huge project to work on. Quailflight 09:36, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. Won't be able to get to this until Friday/Saturday. -- Quailflight 11:37, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading and darken the ear pink-- Night s h i n e   R  05:50, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

This will be the last charart I'll make before I'll leave CotCW. Quailflight 10:49, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Your leaving!? Aww should I put your cats up for adoption? Oh and the iamge is lovely all i see is that you should darken shading  Brook step   Not "paw"  14:28, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Temporarily put them up for adoption. I could come back. Quailflight 09:05, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Aww, Quail. :( We'll miss you. I'll see you on WWiki sometime. :) *huggles* Bye, I hope you come back. As for the image, comments before approval? Ice fall 13:02, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Petal (PH) - For Approval
Comments?-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   00:53, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

WOW. This is incredible! Darken the stripes on her face, and shouldn't she have ear pink?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:43, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded darkened face stripes. These blanks don't need ear pink-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   01:05, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Okay then :) Comments Before Approval?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:45, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

On the ear to our right there does need to be ear pink. <font color="#330066">Mo <font color="#CC6600">on 02:57, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Wouldn't the ear be facing backwards slightly, so we wouldn't see it? It looks like that to me...  ddevans96z Goodbye Middle School! 02:59, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Mousetalon also said this: Cats of the Clans Wiki talk:Character Art Project/Disscussions 1-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   07:03, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

The right ear looks strange then... <font color="#330066">Mo <font color="#CC6600">on 15:20, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

No, I don't think so. It just looks like the ear is turned away, like he or she is flattening it againist his or hers head. Lightning that Burns Sky Unattractive... 16:21, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Any other comments?-- Night s h i n e   R  06:58, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

This s amazing as always Night! Maybe blur the stripes on her back leg furthest away from us? They look a little sharp. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  10:20, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred those stripes-- Night s h i n e   R  06:00, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

She looks fine :) Comments Before Approval?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:40, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Brookpaw (kit) - For Approval
- Well here she is! Sorry I didn't researve her but firefox is being stupid. Comments?  Brook paw   The truth  22:05, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes don't look blurred enough.  ddevans96z Goodbye Middle School! 22:07, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

Looks awesome Echo! CW -  Always workin'!  22:08, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a bit bigger, and the pupils look kinda wierd. Look at Berrystep's kit image for how to do the eye. This is really good :)  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:12, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I will get to the ear pink thing later. For now comments? :)  Brook paw   The truth  20:05, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the stripes some more-- Night s h i n e   R  19:48, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

Icekit (I) - For Approval
Here she is! Comments? I think she's pretty good. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">ICEY Wait, that's not how you spell Icy! 23:47, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

I love it! But she needs white spots, like Snowstorm. Other wise, it looks awesome! Lightning that Burns Sky Unattractive... 02:59, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks, Snow! I added white spots. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">ICEY Wait, that's not how you spell Icy! 12:04, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe add some to her legs? You don't have to if you don't want too. :) Lightning that Burns Sky Unattractive... 15:06, May 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:blue; border:2px solid; -mox-border-raiuds: 1em;color:white;">Midnighttail I will serve SkyClan with every breath I can take 12:01, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Pansy (K)- For Approval
I am proud of her :D Lightning that Burns Sky Unattractive... 03:23, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

You should be! 'Tis is good! And by good, I mean really good! Blur the ear pink some and lighten the back shading and head shading. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">ICEY Wait, that's not how you spell Icy! 12:14, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe make her pupils bigger? CW -  Always workin'!  19:29, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

Blackberry(W) - For Approval
- Comments?  Brook paw   The truth  20:44, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

Blue the ear pink some more, but other than that, it looks really good! CW -  Always workin'!  21:58, May 29, 2010 (UTC)

Beechpaw (A) - For Approval
My first apprentice! Comments? CW -  Always workin'!  14:24, May 29, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights more and the ear pink. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">ICEY Wait, that's not how you spell Icy! 14:25, May 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Comments? CW -  Always workin'!  16:29, May 29, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink looks a little bit crooked.  ddevans96z Goodbye Middle School! 16:47, May 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Comments? CW -  Always workin'!  19:24, May 29, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading, make the ear pink more red and blur it-- Night s h i n e   R  07:13, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Partially Reuploaded. I changed the ear pink and blurred it, but I'm really bad at darkening the shading. Can someone do it for me? That'd be a huge help. Remember, he's supposed to be light gray. Construction  Worker  Beechpaw for approval! Please comment! 11:17, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

All you have to do is run the burn tool where the shading is and blur. It's like giving it a second coat of paint. Quailflight 00:53, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

I know, but I always screw up. Would someone mind doing it for me please? Construction  Worker   Do you need help?  21:47, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

I will, but if I screw it up, I won't upload it. dde vans  96z  21:57, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Ok, thanks! Let me know too if you screw up. Construction  Worker   Do you need help?  22:47, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

I darkened it, but it wouldn't blur :( revert it if you want, I think mine fails dde  vans  96z  00:56, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

CW: Want me to help you? I could fix it.  Brook step   Not "paw"  01:20, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

It's ok Dalton. Sure Echo, that'd be great! =) Construction   Worker   Do you need help?  20:04, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Spiderstep - Warrior (For Approval)
Here he is. He's back and better than ever! GIMP is screwing up with the blur tool, so if anyone can help, I'd appreciate it. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Crimson;">Nightwhisker Now... Nightkit! 21:20, May 29, 2010 (UTC)

I can try, if you want. Other than that, it looks good.  ddevans96z Goodbye Middle School! 21:58, May 29, 2010 (UTC)\

OK, thanks. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:black;">Who am I? Nighty98 21:59, May 29, 2010 (UTC)

Nighty said I could help, so yeah, I tried. What do you think? dde vans  96z  14:44, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading and ear pink-- Night s h i n e   R  06:02, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Tried to blur, the shading and right ear didn't wan't to. Nighty, tell me if your blur tool works again, okay? dde vans  96z  16:11, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading and this should be good-- Night s h i n e   R  05:00, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I don't know if I blurred enough, my computer's being screwy. :( dde  vans  96z  20:23, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Icestar (L) - For Approval
Here she is! Comments? Brookheart I must not give up... 16:14, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

I like it! The ear pink on her right ear looks like a boomerang. And Make the white in her eye bigger. Very goo though. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  16:24, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

Very goo? xD Anyways, it looks great. The ear does look a little weird, and the white looks big enough, but a little awkward. dde vans  96z  00:06, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Troutleap - For Approval
He came out more worse than I thought. -shudders- Probably my most fail of all my Chararts. Comments? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:blue; border:2px solid; -mox-border-raiuds: 1em;color:white;">Midnighttail I will serve SkyClan with every breath I can take 18:42, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

It doesn't look that bad. maybe blur the earpink a little more?  ddevans96z Goodbye Middle School!

He's great! I wish he will join Cloverheart one day... any way do what Dalton said and fix the eyes. 01:40, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

The earpinkk is fine, it's blurred enough. Do you mean the inside of the ear? That'll work. And Echo, he will someday. :) What do you mean by, 'fix the eyes'? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:blue; border:2px solid; -mox-border-raiuds: 1em;color:white;">Midnighttail I will serve SkyClan with every breath I can take 20:39, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Left eye's pupil looks weird.  Brook paw   The truth  21:06, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great! Darken the highlight on the chest just a tinsy bit; it kind of gives the impression that he has a white chest  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:46, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I think I fixed that. Ice fall 20:26, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Blazepelt - For Approval
Nighty98 made this for me when I first came here and she said I could put it up for approval and edit it if needed. Comments? dde vans  96z  22:12, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a pink colour, not white. Make the white face smaller, so that it ends at his chin. Thicken and blur the shading, make the highlights bigger-- Night s h i n e   R  07:14, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Magicheart(W) - For Approval
comments?  Brook paw   The truth  17:46, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great! The eyes are a little odd though. Darken the ear pink-- Night s h i n e   R  06:04, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Kk I will get to that tomorrow.  Brook step   Not "paw"  19:14, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Tawnywing (W) - For Approval
I'm very happy with this one-- Night s h i n e   R  06:08, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Gorgeous! Thicken the stripes on the haunches, and darken the shading on the legs farthest from us  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 06:22, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded thickened haunch stripes and darkened far leg shading

Comments Before Approval?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 06:46, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Berrystep (W) - For Approval
Comments?-- Night s h i n e   R  06:07, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Awsome :) Darken the shading on the legs farthest from us  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 06:23, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded darkened far leg shading-- Night s h i n e   R  04:56, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Comments Before Approval?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 06:53, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Sunfall (W) - For Approval
Comments?-- Night s h i n e   R  04:55, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Beautiful, Awesome, '''Amazing!!! '''A lot better than my failure when I tried him. It's pretty early to say CBA. In about a day or two to see if anybody else has opinions. WOW. <font color="#009900">Mo <font color="#00FF00">onp <font color="#009900">elt <font color="#00FF00">TM 17:15, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

oh my goodness nightshine...he...is...amazing...:D. Agreed with Moon, we should wait a couple hours or a day to CBA. Ice fall 20:25, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Ice fall 12:45, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Redclaw (W) For Approval
Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 16:39, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten his eyes-- Night s h i n e   R  20:47, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Copperfall (W) For Approval
Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 16:39, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink-- Night s h i n e   R  20:48, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Crookedpaw (A) For Approval
Yay :3 I like how he turned out  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 16:39, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Make the two back paws cream. <font color="#009900">Mo <font color="#00FF00">onp <font color="#009900">elt <font color="#00FF00">TM 17:12, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure that Icy based Crookedpaw's description entirely off of Crookedstar, who has cream only on on his front paws. However, I'll change it if Icy says otherwise  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 17:15, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, I did. But he doesn't need cream back paws. He's really good! Just darken the tail shading some. Ice fall 20:24, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Rainpaw (RC) (Ki) - For Approval
Here she is. I think I went fail on the white splash. Comments? Ice fall 23:19, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Smokepaw (A)- For Approval
Γǻώή ςτόŗm  16:48, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten his pelt a lot and darken his paws. Ice fall 16:51, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink-- Night s h i n e   R  18:05, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Elmopaw (A) For Approval
He's wierd looking.... Comments? --<font color="#009900">Mo <font color="#00FF00">onp <font color="#009900">elt <font color="#00FF00">TM 18:56, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Ah...Elmopaw <3. His nose needs to be bigger and black. 火の毛皮 19:01, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Doodlepencil (W) For Approval
Comments? <font color="#009900">Mo <font color="#00FF00">onp <font color="#009900">elt <font color="#00FF00">TM 18:59, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Amazing. Darken and blur the shading some. Ice fall 19:57, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Sugarbreath (Q) - For Approval
Comments? Mo   us    et    al    on    !!   19:54, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great. Darken the shading on her haunch, back haunch, top of her tail, and her back, and her chest. Ice fall 19:56, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Also add some ear pink  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:58, June 6, 2010 (UTC)