User blog comment:.Echo/DREAMMMM/@comment-76.185.139.101-20111019224719

~Echo on 3DS~

KAY. Soooo I've been inspired to write a story, and for those of you who don't know, I'm grounded from the computer. So I can't type it and I hate writing. SOOOO imma type it here :3 I'd love if you could critique it. Here it goes.

Prologue

Alright. Here's some info. Being a demigod is hard. But being a Roman AND Greek demigod? Thats hard. Renya and Octavion have no exception for sneaking halfway across the country to Camp Half-Blood. Well, lets put it this way. I'm the daughter of Artemis. Well, while I was on vacation with my family, Lupa found me. She said my mother was Drina and that I was a Roman demigod. So this is how messed up my life is.

Chapter 1

Location: Camp Jupiter, California Time: Before Lost Hero, After Last Olympian

Percy and I walked along. I was spending my time in California. My dad worked in Manhatten, but he lived in California. So during the school year, I stay in California. I had met Percy Jackson a few days ago. He seemed lost and out of place. He had a leather necklace with beads on it from Camp Half-Blood. "Hey Kiki?" He asked. I looked at him, waiting for him to continue. Instead, he just looked at me, like he forgot what he was going to say, "Er... nevermind." He muttered. We continued to walk.

Time: June

I stood, looking at the beautiful ocean ahead of me. "Kayok!" My father called. I rolled my eyes, but ran over. My goodbyes had been said and I doubted that I would see Percy again.

thats all i got :3