Cats of the Clans Wiki talk:Character Art Project

Flowercloud -(W) For Approval
I'm really proud of this!:D Comments? Clarrissa  My Talk Page  Brownkit... 20:00, December 3, 2010 (UTC)

Smudge the white transition a little more  Sand  Merry Christmas 03:17, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-I smudged the transition. Comments? Clarrissa  My Talk Page  Brownkit... 16:20, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading and ear pink-- 01:49, December 10, 2010 (UTC)

This is the same charart I approved with Yellowpool. I just added green eyes and her white foot.(Flowercloud is Yellowpool's daurghter) I'll darken the shading and stuff, I'm just a little surprised. Clarrissa  My Talk Page  Brownkit... 18:43, December 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Done. I get how the haunch highlight looked a little unnatural. Didn't really notice before:P Clarrissa   My Talk Page  Brownkit...

17:19, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

Can you change this to be the new blank? I can help you if you want. Blur the ear pink, smudge the white transition, darken the shading-- 21:43, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Huh? Clarrissa  My Talk Page  Brownkit... 16:57, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- (Could you please help me with that:P-it's hard)Anyways, I used Foxclaw33's image and made a few changes:) Comments?(I basically did the previous comments).

I changed the line art for you. Darken the shading a lot. This looks a little too yellow, so can you make it more gingery?-- 19:47, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Do you use the dodge tool and the burn tool for shading & highlights? here are some tutorials that might help. http://catsofclans.wikia.com/wiki/Character_Art_Project/Tutorials

Here is mine.. Its not the best though... Foxclaw33's CAP Tutorial And my tutorial continued... Foxclaw33's CAP Tutorial Continued Foxclaw33 My talk!17:27, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I tried to make her more gingery. I'm kinda taking over now...(Clara said I could) Improvements? Zoe27 Gossip Queen!!! 17:52, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

Just darken the shading and ear pink-- 02:42, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I darkened the ear-pink, but every time I darken the shading, the fur around it becomes darker than the rest of the fur, so I decided I'd leave it. If anyone can tell me what to do about it, it would be greatly appreciated:) Zoe27 Gossip Queen!!! 16:56, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Just use a bigger brush or spray on the shading--  night  shine  ❄  03:43, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

(i took over-thanx zoe) could somebody help me with that?? Clarrissa  My Talk Page  Brownkit...

18:10, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I darkened the shading and smudged the white transition a bit-- Night  shine  04:32, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks a lot better; brighten the white on her leg though, there seems to be some ginger in it  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 18:51, February 1, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks so much for helping me with it! :) Do I get to do the improvements now? Clarrissa   My Talk Page  Brownkit...  20:00, February 1, 2011 (UTC)

Of course :)  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:18, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blackberry (W) For Approval
The shading sucks i know, Lost mah skillz at shading XD but i will get it back at one point XD but whatever, Heres Blackberry the spot was easy amazingly  Sand  Merry Christmas 23:17, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

Desaturate the ear pink, blur the shading, blur the white transition-- 04:29, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Blurred shading all the way didn't know what white transition you were talking about so i blurred both of them  Sand  Merry Christmas 17:38, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading to the back of the haunch and to her back, blur the ear pink more, blur the shading a lot, blur the white transition-- 20:58, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I added shading to the back of her haunch but not the back cause of light source and if i blurred the shading anymore it would mess up the highlights i blurred the ear-pink and the white transition  Sand  Merry Christmas 16:31, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

Where exactly is the light coming from? Blur all the shading a lot, 19:35, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

"If i blurred the shading anymore it would mess up the highlights" The light is coming from the top or side i'm not going to pout shading on the back cause even though im not really sure where the light is coming from wherever it is there would be no back shading, Also like i said if i blur the shading anymore it would mess up the highlights  Bird  2011 19:39, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Bird asked for my help on the IRC. The shading was difficult for me to work with; I think mainly because I'm too used to my own style xD Anyway though, I tried to smudge the shading all around the leg and belly, because the back leg shading was only in one spot, as was the belly shading. I brightened the highlights as well, blurred the ear pink, smudged the white dab a bit, and added depth to the eyes  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:40, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

The haunch shading looks very spiky, so smooth that out. --  night  shine  ❄  03:40, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded i tried to smooth it out thats teh best i can do  Bird  2011 22:25, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the haunch shading and blur it--  night  shine  ❄  22:16, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

I might need help with that too  Bird  2011 02:15, January 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I fixed the shading for you-- Night  shine  04:24, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the dab on her chest  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:42, January 31, 2011 (UTC)

It won't work D: Bird  2011 20:56, February 4, 2011 (UTC)

Just use the dodge tool or paint on a brighter white-- Night  shine  23:31, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Mion (Ro)-for approval
I dont like it  --bracken-- ~23:52, December 29, 2010 (UTC)

It's cute! Make the ear pink more salmony color. ;D Jinglepaw :D 'Merry Christmas 11:10, December 30, 2010 (UTC)

This is beautiful!! Make the pupil a bit bigger, and add eye white  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:06, January 3, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know why you dont like it! it's beautiful. The right and left ear are different eye pink colors, plus i would make it a little more reddish-salmon. Foxclaw33 My talk!17:57, January 6, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined-- 19:19, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

I could take over for you, if you'd like, Bracken. Zoe27 Gossip Queen!!! 17:59, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

go ahead ` --bracken-- ~01:49, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:50, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

reuploaded  --bracken-- ~00:12, January 23, 2011 (UTC)

Man this is pretty. Blur the stripes, and make the ear pink bigger  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:41, January 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Bracken asked me if I would take this over  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 17:40, February 1, 2011 (UTC)

Skykit (Ki) - For Approval
Hi, this isn't my, charart. It's Clara's. Since she's been blocked though, she said I could take over for her, so any improvements that need to be made, will be taken over by me, until she returns:) Comments? Zoe27 Gossip Queen!!! 17:40, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more triangular, darken the shading, and smudge the white transition a lot  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:48, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

Add more highlights and blur the ear pink slightly. I would also blur the edges of the highlights of the eyes slightly as they are very pronounced. ddevans96 back and ready for action 01:13, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I tried to do what you all asked:) Comments? Zoe27 Gossip Queen!!! 16:35, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, make the ear pink more triangular, smudge the white transition-- 06:20, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

reuplooaded-done:D Zoe27 <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:violet">Gossip Queen!!! 18:08, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink bigger, darken the shading--  night  shine  ❄  02:25, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

reuploadedimprovements?? <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:violet">Gossip Queen!!! 17:12, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink lighter near the top and darken the shading a lot--  night  shine  ❄  22:16, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I'm taking her back now:D (Thanks Zoe-you did a good job) I lightened upper ear pink. Could someone help me to darken the shading? I might sound stupid, but it's really hard, even though its obvious the shading need to be darkened:P Clarrissa   My Talk Page  Brownkit... 17:46, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Is this good?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:47, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Make the back paw fully white-- Night  shine  04:13, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Made whole paw white  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 07:21, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Are you doing the improvements now? Clarrissa  My Talk Page  Brownkit... 20:06, February 1, 2011 (UTC)

No, you can take her back now :) I was just helping out  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:55, February 4, 2011 (UTC)

Cloudkit (Ki) For Approval
Hi, this isn't my image-it's Clara's she fixed the legs and emailed it to me to put it up. I'll be doing the improvements though. Comments? <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:violet">Gossip Queen!!! 17:56, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the black on her paws, make the ear pink bigger and darken it, darken the shading and brighten the highlights  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:48, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I smudged her paws, made the ear pink bigger and kinda darkened it. I also brightened the highlights on the tail, as I felt this was where the highlights were needed most. I really think it looks much better now:D Comments? <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:violet">Gossip Queen!!! 19:09, January 12, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and smudge the black transition-- 06:22, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I've done that now. Improvements? <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:violet">Gossip Queen!!! 16:54, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading--  night  shine  ❄  02:24, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Done!!:) <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:violet">Gossip Queen!!! 17:11, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a lot more--  night  shine  ❄  22:16, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Well. I've taken her back now. I guess I tried (and failed) to darken the shading. :P Clarrissa   My Talk Page  Brownkit...

18:04, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

It's hard to distinguish the shading from the color of the pelt  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:46, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

I could help you with the shading if you'd like, Clara. Marluxia; The Graceful Assassin  19:10, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

If there was a tutorial or something it would help...and if you could give me some tips, Elorisa, I might be able to improve on it:) Clarrissa   My Talk Page  Brownkit...

20:09, February 1, 2011 (UTC)

Ok :). Marluxia;  The Graceful Assassin  23:51, February 1, 2011 (UTC)

Clovershine (Ro)- For approval
I hope you like! I worked really hard on her! Tigerfur of Bloodclan 01:24, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

This is good :) Darken and blur the shading. Blur the white on her muzzle a lot  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:04, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Blurred the white on her muzzle a lot. I also Darkened and blurred the shading. Tigerfur of Bloodclan 18:13, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

I'm still having a hard time seeing the shading. Thicken, darken, and blur it  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:00, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I Darkened the shading once more, and blurred it.

This is REALLY Good blur the stripes a bit  Bird  2011 01:12, January 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes, and the shading is still hard to see. Also, where are the highlights? <font face="Stencil">我愛羅 As long as theres others to kill the world is wonderful  05:06, January 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Blurred the stripes again. I cannot blur them anymore; GIMP won't let me :( Tigerfur of Bloodclan 03:52, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken and blur the shading, make the stripes longer--  night  shine  ❄  22:16, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: How about now?

I don't see anything wrong :) <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">Ooh eye ahh ahh a.. TANG TANG WALLA WALLA BING BANG!20:10, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Add some stripes to the back of the neck, add more to the face, make the haunch stripes longer so there isn't a patch of no stripes. Thicken and blur the shading-- Night  shine  04:12, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Tigerfur of Bloodclan 04:17, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken and blur the shading, add shading to the belly area, make the tail stripes longer-- Night  shine  04:35, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

I don't understand what you mean about 'thivken and blur the shading.' All I do is make more shading, look at the hind leg. I like the tail stripes...:(

The shading isn't thick enough in some places. Shading needs to be added to where the red areas are, and you need to get rid of the shading in the orange areas. The ear pink should be the colour that I indicated or similar to it-- Night  shine  04:46, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded

(And If you want you can delete all my chararts besides Clovershine. Or you can ghive them to someone else. Anyone want my chararts besides this one?) Tigerfur of Bloodclan 03:04, February 3, 2011 (UTC)

This is very pretty Tiger. :) If you want, I can help with Clovershine.

Charcoal (Q) - For Approval
- Do. Not. Like. Also, I'm making her page. Gaara What is pain? 愛t 03:12, January 19, 2011 (UTC)

I think she looks beautiful! :D Blur the pink in the ears a little more. Tigerfur of Bloodclan 13:14, January 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink more, and blur the shading between the front of back legs, it sorta forms a straight line. <font face="Stencil">我愛羅 As long as theres others to kill the world is wonderful  05:06, January 20, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined-- Night  shine  04:07, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded

Make the ear pink smaller  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:35, February 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded

Make the ear pink more reddish pink, and add depth to the eyes  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:51, February 3, 2011 (UTC)

30, 2011 (UTC)

To-be blanks - For Approval
Ahh, good old fashioned Hawkey-made blanks. :D Just like the good ol' days! These aren't my BEST blanks, I finished them in about four minutes, so...yeah. Comments?  HA WK FI RE98  20:27, January 23, 2011 (UTC)

These are good! The back paw closest to us is a bit deformed, maybe round it off a bit, and make the eyes more almond shaped instead of oval shaped  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:32, January 24, 2011 (UTC)

Here's a diagram I made to help:

Reuploaded Sorry about that! Also one of the blanks has an accidental ear tuft in its ear; I'll fix that next time. Echo, I appreciate the diagram, but thats WAY too much unneccessary work.  HA WK FI RE98  18:34, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

I like them :) Chickenstar 18:37, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

The paws need to be rounder, the torso need to be thickened, make the ears wider, eyes should be more cat-like, the whiskers should be closer to the muzzle, and the haunch needs to be reshapen-- Night  shine  23:23, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

I'm just going to redo these, I don't like them.  HA WK FI RE98  00:06, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Ichigo (R) - FOr Approval
- I had to use pixlr for this and found some cool brushes to use =3 anyway, I failed at the Loner blanks and I'mma givin um up. So yeah. Here's Ichigo, and if you want me to change the lineart, I will. Gaara What does pain feel like? 愛 00:00, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

Line art is way to thick, color and eyes aren't right. <font face="Stencil">我愛羅 As long as theres others to kill the world is wonderful  00:03, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

It's good :) The line art is a bit too cartoony though; I suggest thinning it out and make it look spiky. And he looks too golden, saturate him more  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:05, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

Echo, I'll give tou the basic color layout on IRC. <font face="Stencil">我愛羅 As long as theres others to kill the world is wonderful  00:07, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

Echoey, looks kewl :) The thing about pixlr is that even with the magic wand tool, things blur together. Try making one layer that's just the white section of the lineart, erasing the lineart so there isn't any, and make another one that's just the lineart with the white part taken out. If that made any sense. Agent WindFire  Because it's snowing,  Blowing, All over town...     00:02, January 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded @Agent: I don't use layors for pixlr or GIMP

The spikiness still looks cartoony.. Marluxia; The Graceful Assassin  14:19, February 1, 2011 (UTC)

I really don't know how to fix that. Cartoony is my style... {[User:Echopaw/Signature}}

i could try for you --bracken-- ~04:01, February 3, 2011 (UTC)

Go ahead

Toshiro (R) For Approval
Fail. Comments? -- Jalapeño I look really CREEPY with these glasses on...  21:16, January 28, 2011 (UTC)

Holy cow :D thats really good. I dont see shading or a light source, though.... <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">Ooh eye ahh ahh a.. TANG TANG WALLA WALLA BING BANG!20:11, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

There's no shading or highlights, and the spikey fur looks odd. Gaara What does pain feel like? 愛 22:40, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Odd how? That's how he looks, and I'm not changing it. As for the shading and highlights, I choose not to use highlights. I've never done highlights before, and last time I checked, they weren't required, so I'll darken the shading, if I can. -- Jalapeño I look really CREEPY with these glasses on...  15:51, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

At least make the spikeyness look natural. Right now it looks looks very weird. I'd either remove it or redo it. Lighten black, add highlights, lighten shading and fis ear pink and eye. Gaara What does pain feel like? 愛 18:00, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

I think the spikiness looks fine, just thicken the line art on the bang over his eye. Blur the black transition, and darken the shading on the white parts  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:59, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Stormpaw (WC) - For Approval


My first piece of work back after so long! I'm not sure about it... comments? -- Fawny Keep On Smiling :D 20:31, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

This is incredible! Lighten the shading a bit, and add ear pink  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:36, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Not sure if this is any better?

The ear pink looks good. Lighten the chest and paw shading more though  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:42, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Blazingstar(L) For approval
I just love it. I only hate the ear pink :/ <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">Ooh eye ahh ahh a.. TANG TANG WALLA WALLA BING BANG!20:40, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more centered and more reddish. Blur the shading, darken the nose colour-- Night  shine  04:00, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading, keep the pupil of the eye inside of the eyes, and make the ear pink/nose pink more reddish. -- Fawny Keep On Smiling :D 13:05, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Stormfoot (W) - For Approval
Comments?-- Night  shine  23:17, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, this is gorgeous! I don't see anything wrong  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:09, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Wow! This is amazing! I'm speechless! There dosen't seem to be anything wrong! -- Fawny Keep On Smiling :D 13:03, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

The right ear pink is hardly visable. Could you fix that? Lighten the black paws and darken the tail shading on the white transition. Gaara What does pain feel like? 愛 18:03, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I think the black paws are fine but I darkened the right ear pink and darkened the shading on the white part on the tail-- Night  shine  19:17, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

It's either me or my computer, but I can't see the toes on the black paws. i K  i  ba☼  02:19, February 1, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with Echo, I'm having a hard time seeing the toes as well. Either lighten all the black, or add a highlight to each paw  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:40, February 1, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded lightened paws-- Night  shine  00:15, February 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the patches. 03:23, February 2, 2011 (UTC)

I think the patches look fine-- Night  shine  22:39, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with Nightshine, it would take away the fuzzy texture. I would lighten the ear pink though  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:59, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Birch (Ki) For Approval
Comments? I like how he turned out :)  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:09, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink looks a little funny, but he's really great :D Birchyyy Agent WindFire  Because it's snowing,  Blowing, All over town... 03:23, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

lol, thanks :D But, funny how?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:26, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Saturate the muzzle a bit, darken the shading, blur the tail stripes-- Night  shine  03:59, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Saturated muzzle, darkened shading, and blurred tail stripes  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 07:20, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

I love this image Nightfall! Great job! Darken the shading on the back hind leg, and blur the patch on his front haunch a tad more! Well done! -- Fawny Keep On Smiling :D 13:01, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Better?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 17:51, February 1, 2011 (UTC)

Amazing. But there's a part on the neck where the shading just drops down to a very light level. Darken that to the same tone as the rest of the shading, and that's pretty much it. 03:22, February 2, 2011 (UTC)

Well, the light source is sort of coming from an angle, down towards his right ear, and is shining on the chest; but I added shading under his chin because the muzzle is above the chest, and it adds depth. I'll change it if you guys really think I should, but I like it the way it is  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:10, February 2, 2011 (UTC)


 * Okay. I seae nothing else wrong with the image. Beautiful job, Night. CBA? ♥Loveheart♥  ☮Happy Valentines Day!☮  21:57, February 4, 2011 (UTC)

I think there are some white pixels around the outside of the eyes... Agent WindFire  Because it's snowing,  Blowing, All over town... 22:18, February 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Nice catch ;) Better?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:34, February 4, 2011 (UTC)

CBA?-- Night  shine  23:10, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Brightkit (Ki) - For Approval
Comments? Marluxia; The Graceful Assassin  14:43, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

This looks great! Make the ear pink more triangular and darken the face and tail stripes-- Night  shine  19:15, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

This is absolutely gorgeous :) Do what Night said, and maybe lighten the shading on her back  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:54, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? I was hesitant to lighten her back, I did a bit, because that's a broad back stripe or something. There's little stripelets coming off of it. Marluxia; The Graceful Assassin  21:17, January 31, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, I see. I think it looks fine; maybe make the ear pink a bit bigger though  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:42, February 1, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? Marluxia; The Graceful Assassin  00:29, February 2, 2011 (UTC)


 * I missed so much, I can hardly tell shading from highlights anymore. But that doesn't mean I'm exactly stupid right now ;) Anyways, the spots on the haunch should be darkened, so it's more visible. 03:21, February 2, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Horray, I failed at that. Comments? Marluxia; The Graceful Assassin  22:25, February 3, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes a little more, it's kind of hard to tell that she's a tabby. And no you did not fail :)  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:44, February 3, 2011 (UTC)

Flaresong (W) ~ For Approval
I like it! :) Comments? <font color="Magenta" >☯Maxine: <font color="Black" >Your Cutest Nightmare☮ 21:04, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

This looks great! Darken the ear pink and darken the shading. There is a bit of white on the haunch so make that ginger-- Night  shine  21:15, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? <font color="Magenta" >☯Maxine: <font color="Black" >Your Cutest Nightmare☮ 21:45, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

This is pretty :) Make the white stretch all the way up past her muzzle (see real life image for reference), and saturate it more, she looks a bit brown  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:44, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty kitty! Blur the shading under her chin and on her haunch a little bit.  HA WK FI RE98  18:16, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Firefur (Ro)- For approval
I don't really like him...Tigerfur of Bloodclan 21:36, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Firefur I think you need to be careful about how many images you put up on this page. You have Tigerfur, Clovershine, Flower, Mistytail, Flamebelly, and an orange rogue. That's six images, not including this one. Also, please be sure to upload your images using the full size version, I took it out of thumb nail for you. Blur the shading a lot, and darken the shading on the white part of his pelt.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:52, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

It's not that I don't love the image, but I think this will have to be declined due to the reason above. ~

I don't think that's necessary. There used to be users here who put up a ton of chararts, and I'm just warning Tigerfur that they were more than those users could handle. I just recommend keeping the number of images down.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 17:46, February 1, 2011 (UTC)

DON'T DECLINE THIS ONE, THOUGH NIGHTFALL! Tigerfur of Bloodclan 03:08, February 3, 2011 (UTC)

Tigerfur, did you not read what I just typed? I'm just saying, you may want to keep the number of your chararts to a minimum. Like I said before, blur the shading a lot, and darken the shading on the white part of his pelt.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:39, February 3, 2011 (UTC)

Cloudpaw (A) - For Approval
Comments? Marluxia; The Graceful Assassin  14:38, February 1, 2011 (UTC)

This is beautiful! Lighten the black on the paws  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 17:47, February 1, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? Marluxia; The Graceful Assassin  23:45, February 1, 2011 (UTC)

I just realized how much I love the expression on her face... This looks pretty good, but maybe the ear pink should be a little tiny bit more pink. Agent WindFire Because it's snowing,  Blowing, All over town... 00:05, February 2, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? Marluxia; The Graceful Assassin  00:31, February 2, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah :) Blur the face and neck shading  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:34, February 3, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Failure. Better? Marluxia; The Graceful Assassin  22:39, February 3, 2011 (UTC)

Not a failure, El :) Darken the left ear pink, and there's some blurred line art around her hind paw closest to us, the tail tip, and the front leg farthest from us  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:14, February 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Marluxia; The Graceful Assassin  03:00, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Much better. :) Darken the shading a bit more.  HA WK FI RE98  18:15, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? Marluxia; The Graceful Assassin  00:32, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Dapplestep (W) - For Approval
- FAIL FAIL FAIL UBER FAIL D:

Fail? Echo, you're seriously going blind. This is marvelous. It's so pretty <3 Blur the ear pink and make it more of a reddish color and darken the shading on the tail. 20:54, February 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded

Make the ear pink less gray, and more reddish pink. Add some depth to the eyes, and smudge the patches a little. Ice is right, this is great :)  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:34, February 3, 2011 (UTC)

Ripplepool (W) - For Approval

 * [[File:Ripplepool.warrior.png]]I'll upload the other half of it right now. 22:49, February 3, 2011 (UTC)

This is pretty :) Darken the stripes and shading  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:31, February 4, 2011 (UTC)

Add some stripes to her face and darken the shading. :)  HA WK FI RE98  18:11, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Lightstep(W)- For approval



 * Shake head* Bad Chickenstar 23:51, February 4, 2011 (UTC)

Finally someone did one of my characters! :D This isn't bad at all! Maybe darken the shading a little, blur the stripes more, and darken the ear pink.  HA WK FI RE98  18:12, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

'''I am redoing this whole thing! Chickenstar 18:54, February 5, 2011 (UTC)'''

Oh...okay! This time make him a light brown  HA WK FI RE98  20:26, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Whitespeckle (W)- For approval
If she becomes a warrior, which I asked her to become.

Anyway,

Took me a long time to do this. A couple hours. I think about three. I had this planned even before I made her article. Comments? Chickenstar 03:34, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

this is BEAUTIFUL! Make the ear pink more red ;D i  K  i  ba☼  16:31, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur Ear-pink more 173.33.130.5 18:12, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

This is BEAUTIFUL!!!!! My mouth dropped open when I saw this. Make the ear pink smaller, blur it, and make it more red. All about the ear pink. :)  HA WK FI RE98  18:14, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry that was me above the wikia contributer  Bird  2011 18:14, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Ear pink!

PERFECT! Comments before approval? :D  HA WK FI RE98  18:33, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks guys! Hard work paid off! Chickenstar 18:36, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Wait! I have one thing to add. First, this is outstanding Chickenstar :) Now, you didn't use the new blank we have, but I think I can fix it for you. Just give me a second  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:29, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Hm, it's proving to be difficult. Let me ask Nightshine for her help, she has a more advanced art program than I do  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:49, February 5, 2011 (UTC)\

Hey Chickenstar, this looks very similar to a charart I did a while ago:. Make sure that when you make a charart it's all your work, not someone else's-- Night  shine  19:59, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Sparkfire (D) For Approval
I really want to upload Diedara, Amberdawn, and Sun, but I can't because my laptop won't connect to the internet. I thought in the mean time, I'd do Sparkfire's deputy image on the computer I'm on right now. Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:17, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

This is fantastic! Blur the right ear pink a bit-- Night  shine  23:09, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Eagle (CG) - For Approval
Comments?- Night  shine  22:44, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Perfect as usual.  HA WK FI RE98  23:03, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

This is incredible! Saturate him a bit more, he doesn't really look reddish brown at the moment  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:57, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Swifttail (W) - For Approval
A new style! :) What do you think?  HA WK FI RE98  23:03, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Lighten the white areas. Some of the line art looks blurred-- Night  shine  23:09, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Black is wayyy to dark. I can hardly see the lineart. Lighten that a lot and that's pretty much it. ♥Loveheart♥ ☮Happy Valentines Day!☮  00:26, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Thorn (CG) - For Approval
Comments?- Night  shine  00:23, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Wow...I see nothing wrong this! I might make the ear pink a little more noticeable though, maybe lighten it  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:56, February 6, 2011 (UTC)