Cats of the Clans Wiki talk:Character Art Project

Echowave (Q) - For Aprroval
I'm really proud of her. any comments? Echo Kit  23:08, April 1, 2010 (UTC)

Wow, this is really good. Just blur the white on her belly. Ice Spring is here! 23:16, April 1, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED Echo  Kit  23:22, April 1, 2010 (UTC)

This is really pretty! Blur the ear pink some more Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 03:37, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded blurred it as much as i could. ^.^ comments? Echo  style=color:#006666;">Kit 13:06, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

You need to add the wave-mark on her haunch. Midnightpelt ♥ 20:56, April 2, 2010 (UTC)!

I actually don't think she does cause on the warrior pic its on the other side. But you need to make the one eye and the ripped ear. ( I think not sure)  Moon  pelt   22:17, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Moonpelt your right about the wave mark, but she got those scars after her kits became warriors. Echo Kit  21:35, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink a touch and this will be ready. Midnightpelt ♥ 18:23, April 9, 2010 (UTC)!

Reuploaded Mist  cloud  20:43, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

Is there any thing wrong??? Mist cloud  19:52, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Relax, users will comment when they get time. And watch the extra exclamation points, it can be accused of screaming. I'm going to say this again, since no one commented in the last three days. Comments before approval? -- Ice The stars will light your path... 14:12, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

There is one white pixel on the face fluff to the left. Just fill that in and this will be perfect-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   18:05, April 18, 2010 (UTC) Yeah just that and it'll be great! Clar ris  sa! :)  08:57, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   16:28, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Dawnbrook (Q) - For Approval
Ah, she has so many kits.... comments? Maplefern Carrying the torch... 23:34, April 1, 2010 (UTC)

Ah, this is amazing. Blur the shading. Ice Spring is here! 23:38, April 1, 2010 (UTC)

Darken shading and blur ear pink--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     00:50, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

This is good!!! Blur the patches a little bit more~ Starpelt Look at the stars 01:38, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Well, I did all of that stuff. I'm not going tot list it. And I blurred all the shading as much as I could on pixlr. Maplefern Carrying the torch... 11:29, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten her back shading more, than this will be ready. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 14:12, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Fixed. Brookheart I must not give up... 23:02, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more triangular-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   00:45, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

There's a white pixel on the stomach. ddevans96z Huzzah! 13:01, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

Alpinefrost(W)-for approval
sorry nightwhisker ... er hem so here's Alpinefrost...uhm...how is he? construc,ents?Pebble2Pineow 22:24, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

He's good. Just darken the shading a little. -- Nighty Meh kitteh is hoplessley confused... 22:30, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry but this is over the limit.--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     23:09, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

What you don't realize, Nightshine, is that there are some images in the CBA stage. I'm no senior warrior, but I know that this can stay. §₩1ƒ₮¥ Do da Kitteh bop! 00:31, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

Okay this can stay now--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     00:36, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

reuploadedPebble2Pineow 19:25, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink and blur the tail stripes some more--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     20:38, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

Blur his texture a tad more. Ice Spring is here! 15:54, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

reuploadedpebble2pineow 00:26, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

The only thing left is that the eye white is a bit hard to see Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 21:04, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

reuploadedpebble2pineow 18:31, April 15, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink some more-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   18:05, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   16:29, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Starpelt(BC) - For Approval
I like this. Comments? :) Echo  Kit  23:21, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Blur her stripes more. Ice Spring is here! 23:47, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

I can't blur them any more. I tried. Echo Kit  23:49, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

It's good, but her artcile says that she has amber eyes Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 03:42, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Ah, Mousefang's mortal enemy. c: Just change the eye color like Night said, and blur the collar highlights. Midnightpelt ♥ 17:41, April 6, 2010 (UTC)!

I did do that, I just didn't have time to put it up but Reuploaded! Mist cloud  20:38, April 13, 2010 (UTC)\

Sharpen her stripes, then this should be ready. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 14:17, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   16:30, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Lightfire (Q)-For Approval
Here is Lightfire as a queen!!! ( I copied the real picture so it has some cream in the real picture so thats why she has some cream on her) Constructments??? Mo onp  elt   ۞  14:34, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

This is great, Echo. Blur the highlights on the front paws and add some to the tail and haunch. Midnightpelt ♥ 01:33, April 12, 2010 (UTC)!

Reuploaded 1. My name is Moonpelt not Echo. 2. Thanks!!! 3. Constructments??? Mo onp  elt   ۞  02:58, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Lol sorry, your siggies are almost exactly the same. Darken the ear pink a little bit. Midnightpelt ♥ 11:17, April 13, 2010 (UTC)!

Reuploaded Constructments? Mo onp  elt   ۞  03:12, April 14, 2010 (UTC)

Eyes look crosseyed. LucyϠ in the Sky With Diamonds 04:48, April 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Constructments? Mo onp  elt   ۞  02:09, April 15, 2010 (UTC)

Could you add a few more patches of pale orange?-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   18:05, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Constructments? Bur npe  lt  20:53, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

This is almost ready. Jut make the ear pink more triangular-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   16:27, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Mintbar(W) - For Approval
OMGZ I love how she turned out!*Huggles myself* Comments? Mist cloud  15:39, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Wonderful. =) Just darken the ear pink a tad. Midnightpelt ♥  01:33, April 12, 2010 (UTC)!

Reuploaded Mist  cloud  20:40, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

Some of her 'flecks' look evenly blurred. Can you fix that? And blur her green transitions more. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 20:43, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

? Mist  cloud  19:51, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Her flecks look un-evenly blurred. Fix that please, and blur her green transitions more. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 20:03, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink a bit and blur the light green transitions.-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   18:05, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Darkfang (W) -for approval
reminds of my first charcat birchfall's stripes xD ok eh constructments?pebble2pineow 01:27, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink and WOAH on the stripes! Thats crazy but cool at the same time! (Thats a REALLY good thing) Also darken the eyes to yelo the look to pale. A yellow eyed cat's eyes POP! Otherwise really good job!!! Mo onp  elt   ۞  03:49, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded pebble2pineow 18:30, April 15, 2010 (UTC)

Looks really cool. Darken the ear pink a bit and this should be ready-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   18:05, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great,darken the ear pink a little. Zoe27 11:08, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   16:30, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Firespark (W) For Approval
Yay :D I like this one! Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 05:01, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Me too! Just darken the shading on the front leg closest to us. Midnightpelt ♥ 01:35, April 12, 2010 (UTC)!

Reuploaded: Thanks! Darkened shading on front let (My siggie's messed up, this is Nightfall)

Come on guys, I want this approved. Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:35, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the back and chest shading. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 14:18, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink a bit.-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   18:05, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Darkened ear pink, and lightened chest shading  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:45, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit more-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   00:34, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I blurred it as much as I could  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:25, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Sweet. CBA?-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   16:25, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Dew (PH)- For approval
Constructments? §₩1ƒ₮¥ Do da Kitteh bop! 15:57, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

This is great! Blur the shading a bit more and lighten the nose pink a bit-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   17:22, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. §₩1ƒ₮¥ Do da Kitteh bop! 18:48, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 20:40, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

The shading looks fine to me. Just blur it some more-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   18:05, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   00:48, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Blur it a bit more. Zoe27 11:09, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Nutellatoast(W) - For Approval
Constructments?-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   17:25, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Really good! StarClan, I love nutella XD Blur the ginger on her legs, and the brown stripe on her back - [[User:Nightfall101|Nightfall]

Blur a tad like Nightfall said. Perhaps darken the ears? OMG love nutella. NUTELLA ATTACK!-- LucyϠ in the Sky With Diamonds 07:36, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred markings and darkened ear pink-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   22:59, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Comments?-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   00:59, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

This looks fine to me :) Comments Before Approval?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 06:44, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Honeymist(W) - For Approval
Constructments-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   17:25, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Amazing as always, Night. Just darken the shading some and brighten the highlights. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 19:13, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. And Nightshine...? On your kit blanks, mind naming each blank a seprate file? Thanks, 'cause they're all one file. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 14:23, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded darkened shading and brightened highlights-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   22:56, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Comments?-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   01:01, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the earpink. Brookheart I must not give up... 15:36, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded darkened ear pink-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   16:24, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Batwing (L) - For Approval
I don't know what the heck is up with her shading/highlights, it won't blur anymore. :/ Someone help me out? Midnightpelt ♥ 02:04, April 12, 2010 (UTC)!

What do you use? (pixlr, gimp, etc) Mo  onp  elt   ۞  04:21, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

She uses gimp

 ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:24, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

You could go to sircle fuzzy on brush sizes and make it a little bigger. Thats what I di fir my highlights. Mo onp  elt   ۞  13:13, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Grr, what is wrong with this, it looked like 1000 times better in GIMP. Midnightpelt ♥ 00:20, April 13, 2010 (UTC)!

Lighten the white transition. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 22:50, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

It's supposed to be silver. Midnightpelt ♥ 19:17, April 14, 2010 (UTC)!

The lineart isn't visible. Lighten the black so it's a very dark gray-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   16:57, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink, it's too dark at the moment. And the silver needs to be darkened, since it looks grey right now. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 01:20, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

Ravenstar - For Approval
First image ever since I got a new computer. :) I have no idea what's wrong with GIMP. It wasn't letting me colour in the transparent pixels, gosh. I can't blur the shading anymore, thanks to stupid GIMP 2. Er, so, cristcim construments? -- Ice The stars will light your path... 21:49, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Make some white in the eyes. Also maybe darken the ear pink. It's pretty light for a black cat. Otherwise nice job! And congrats on the new computer!!! Mo onp  elt   ۞  02:32, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded, thanks Moon. ^^ :) -- Ice The stars will light your path... 21:08, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

The black it too dark and the white is too light-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   18:05, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

I copied the colours from her warrior image. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 15:37, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

There's some white pixels on the tail. ddevans96z Huzzah! 13:06, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I lighten the black and darkened the white. I filled in the white pixels on her tail. Construcments? -- Ice The stars will light your path... 01:19, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

Blur it some more. Zoe27 11:12, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Make ear pink more red. Darken shading-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   16:31, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

I can't blur it anymore, and the shading looks fine. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 16:35, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Silverleaf (MC) - For approval
To all my fellow WWikia users: Remember Millie (Kp)? Thats what i tried to do, and I'm pretty sur this is legal. Comments?-- LucyϠ in the Sky With Diamonds 07:59, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading and highlights more, and fixed the deformed lineart. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 20:31, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

Woo hoo! REUPLOADED. It won't blur anymore. Comments?-- LucyϠ in the Sky With Diamonds 04:46, April 14, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading and ear pink. The line art looks a little blurred around the haunch.-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   18:05, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

HI, I can't carry on doing this anymore. Could someone please take over for me? Quailflight 08:28, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

I'll take over if you'd like. Your choice. Moon April fools! 01:57, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

Anyone can take over it! Quailflight 06:11, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'll take over. Constructments? Moon April fools! 04:09, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

I think it looks great. Zoe27 11:13, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Brookheart I must not give up... 11:14, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Dewstar - For Approval
Er, here she is. I cannot blur her highlights anymore. =/ stupid GIMP 2. Anyways, I'm ready for construcments! :) -- Ice The stars will light your path... 21:34, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

I don't see any shading/highlights on her head, as well as stripes. Add those. Midnightpelt ♥ 23:02, April 16, 2010 (UTC)!

There are a few white pixels on the tail-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   18:05, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 15:36, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

There's a white pixel on one ear ddevans96z Huzzah! 01:47, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

There are many white pixels along the fore arms also. Add a highlight to the dace and darken the shading-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   16:32, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Russetstar (L)-For Approval
This is Russetstar as a leader :3 I have done better work on WW and on my own wiki. :) Γǻώή  ςτόŗm  18:35, April 14, 2010 (UTC)

Add ear pink, and blur the shading more. 火の毛皮 21:36, April 14, 2010 (UTC)

There is a white pixel on the ear-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   18:05, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading, blur it, brighten the highlights and add earpink. Also, work on this or it will be declined. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 01:21, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

Declined, ready for archiving 火の毛皮 30 16:33, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Riverstar (L) For Approval
There are two discussions, and one in the CBA stage; so I hope this is alright. Okay, don't laugh at the ear pink it's just an experiment. Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:30, April 15, 2010 (UTC)

The shading and highlights don't look right. And I don't think the ear pink looks normal. Also in the eyes the left is different from the right.( the black part) I think the color of the eyes are Purrrfect. LOL Maybe darken the ear pink too. Bur npe  lt   ۞  04:31, April 15, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, the shading and highlights look fine to me. As for the ear pink, I acually think it looks pretty good... if you think about the angle of the ears and such. I'll get to work on the eyes though  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 06:11, April 15, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 12:06, April 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Blurred shading and fixed pupil  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:37, April 16, 2010 (UTC)

If I weren't being nominated for senior warrior, I'd just be sitting here for two whole hours staring at this image with my mouth open. :) Just blur his neck shading. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 23:36, April 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Lol :) Blurred neck shading  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:48, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink looks a little too big-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   22:51, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I tried to make the ear pink smaller  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:24, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and make it a tad smaller. Zoe27 11:15, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Wetstar (L)-For Approval
Here is Wetstar as a leader. Constructments??? Bur npe  lt  01:44, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Amazing. Just lighten him up a little, and add tabby stripes. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 01:47, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

He's not a tabby. Bur npe  lt  01:53, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

And Reuploaded It wasn't in his description so it's just a gray tom not a gray tabby tom so I shouldn't have to change it. Bur npe  lt  01:56, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

I swore I added him as a tabby....idiotic Ice. Anyways, he looks good to me. Just brighten his highlights a tad. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 15:07, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Constructments? Bur npe  lt  17:47, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

The back line art looks a little blurred. Make the highlights wider and blur them more-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   00:32, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried... Constructments? Moon April fools! 04:15, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Better! Just blur the ear pink a bit more-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   04:44, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Cpnstructments? Moon April fools! 13:24, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Featherstar -- For Approval
Comments? Brookheart I must not give up... 12:31, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Love it, Maple! Blur the shading on his haunch more, that's the only thing I see. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 15:05, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

I tried to, without overly blurring the markings. Brookheart I must not give up... 22:52, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Add some more stripes to the face-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   00:51, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Lightningice (W) - For Approval
Nothing to say but there is one 'Can I join' Mist  cloud  13:50, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Ah, Tigerfang's wonderful mate. As for the image, just darken the shading. -- Nighty You know what... I like pie. XD 13:53, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

I really can't add any or darken the shading! :O Mist  cloud  13:57, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Then I would say that it's good, but the right (her right) eye looks a little weird. Can you fix it? -- Nighty You know what... I like pie. XD 14:20, April 17, 2010 (UTC) Reuploaded Mist  cloud  14:24, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

You need to darken the shading. I see no shading right now. Blur her white parts more. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 15:03, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

My shading tool doesn't want to work. :( Mist  cloud  22:49, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

Try to blur it more and shade it more. Zoe27 11:18, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Tigerfang (W) For Approval
Here's Tigerfang. I am withdrawing Yewfoot, and there's a can I join discussion so this will be OK to keep up. Constructments? -- Nighty You know what... I like pie. XD 14:22, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

I see nothing wrong. Mist cloud  14:24, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Blur his highlights more, and the shading needs to be lightened. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 15:02, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

I think its fine,blur it a little more.Zoe27 11:20, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Nightfoot (W) - For Approval
Um...a fail. One of my fails. Comments? -- Ice The stars will light your path... 16:42, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more red. Blur the black paws.-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   00:52, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Hm... Make the ear pink more of a red colour, and blur the black transition more, 火の毛皮  00:54, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 15:30, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

I think its nice, but it sorta looks odd toward the neck area, maybe extend the gray up into the head and neck area? 火の毛皮 21:07, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Uh...what do you mean? -- Ice The stars will light your path... 21:14, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Blur it more and lighten the ear pink. Zoe27 11:21, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Froststar (L)-For Approval
Here is Froststar as a leader. Contructments? Bur npe  lt  17:50, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Blur his highlights more, add some to the paws and tail. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 17:52, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Constructments? Bur npe  lt  18:38, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the ear tips a bit and blur the ear pink-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   00:52, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Cunstructments? Moon April fools! 04:16, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights a lot more

 ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:10, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

Repuloaded Constructments? Moon April fools! 13:07, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink a little more. Zoe27 09:23, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Rainbowpelt (W) For Approval.
I've only just joined so this will kinda be my first charart(I did do one for Blues charart contests,though.) Shes a Darkclan warrior that I put up on Darkclans page,I think i'm allowed her,because they said I could have Goldenpath so here she is. What do you think? Zoe27 14:44, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

No offense, but she looks nothing like a rainbow. I suggest making curved rainbow coloured lines on the body, facing the shoulder. Blue the green more and yellow, and add shading. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 14:47, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Okay,should i try to put a rainbow along her back? I'll do that. <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 17:21, April 18, 2010 (UTC) I tried to put a kind of rainbow on her back but it didnt work so i did this,which one is better? <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 17:33, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Just curious, what are the three stripes on the green leg? ddevans96z Huzzah! 00:44, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

They are all 7 colours of the rainbow,would u like me to make them bigger so they are easier to see? <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 08:26, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

No, the red, green, and, blue stripes on the top of the green leg. ddevans96z Huzzah! 13:11, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

I know,I think its a rainbow,aswell. Could u make it larger,Zoe? Clar ris  sa! :)  18:17, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

I was a rainbow. <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 09:20, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded -Any better? I made the rainbow larger and filled in blank squares i didnt even know existed! <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 09:20, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Which image are you keeping? The one with or without the rainbow on the haunch. Add shading and blur the markings-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   16:34, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Berrykit(Ki) - For Approval
Constructments?-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   20:52, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

This looks great,nightshine! Just blur the ear pink a little more. <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 16:48, April 19, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred ear pink-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   01:03, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Tawnykit(Ki) - For Approval
Constructments? There are a few images in CBA so this should be fine-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   20:52, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm.... blur the highlight on the shoulder a tiny bit more, maybe. 火の毛皮 00:49, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded fixed shoulder highlight-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   01:03, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Actually,I see nothing wrong with this what so ever, should I CBA it, or wait? 火の毛皮 30 16:27, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Mistcloud (Ki) - For Approval
(I) - She fails, like, really badly. Okay, ready for comments! -- Ice The stars will light your path... 21:47, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Oh Ice I love her! Just put the big white blob closer to her muzzle and belly and add a white pixel in her eyes. Mist cloud  21:54, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

I actucally think it looks fine the way it is, and I keep messing up the lineart when I try. Reuploaded, added white pixel. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 16:59, April 19, 2010 (UTC)

I thought Mistcloud's description said she had a white chest, not a white chest and shoulder, can you move it over more? 火の毛皮 00:49, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

It's not a shoulder. It said 'white chest and belly' so I added that. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 15:40, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Move it over a bit. right now it is on the arm and should, not the chest and underbelly. Brookheart I must not give up... 11:14, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

Coppernose (Ki) - For Approval
Here she is! This is my first ginger cat, believe it, after how long I've been doing PCA and CAP art. O.o Construcments? -- Ice The stars will light your path... 17:02, April 19, 2010 (UTC)

Amazing Iceh! Maybe blur the Shoulder highlights more? 火の毛皮 19:47, April 19, 2010 (UTC)

I can't blur the highlights anymore. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 20:32, April 19, 2010 (UTC)

Extend the pupil and darken the ear pink-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   00:30, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, I agree with Nightshine, extend the pupil (its to short at the moment) and darken the ear pink, and I see nothing besides that. 火の毛皮 00:47, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

LOL Iceh, It looks like it's looking up. Quailflight 08:29, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 15:40, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Emeraldstar(D) - For Approval
Now that we can do past ranks, here is Emeraldstar!-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   00:56, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

WOW. Nightshine, this is incredible. I honestly don't see anything wrong :D I think it's a bit early for the 24 hour call, though. And, sorry about my siggie guys, I know it's probably annoying. I'm just to lazy to transfer the siggie I have on warriors wiki here XD  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 05:25, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

WOW! The only thing I see is that the haunch shading could be darkened. Very good. :D -- Ice The stars will light your path... 18:44, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded darkened haunch shading-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   01:02, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Comments Before Approval?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 16:57, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

One thing: blur the stripes a touch. Brookheart I must not give up... 20:31, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

They are supposed to be well defined-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:17, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

They look fine to me. Repeating, Comments Before Approval?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:26, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Rainbowstar (L)-For Approval
Since I found out post as many as you want so.. Constructments? Moon April fools! 01:38, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

OMG, I <3 this. Just lighten her paws, they look dark. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 18:45, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Constructments? Moon April fools! 02:05, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

Tigerfang (Ki) For Approval
Constructments? Moon April fools! 01:51, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry but i think this is over the limit. Clar ris  sa! :)  10:35, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

When I put this up there was 2 discussions and 1 or 2 in CBa stage so you can take it down if you need to. Moon April fools! 13:01, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

Its changed since then,so you can still have it up. I think it looks great,but blur it a little more. Clar ris  sa! :)  17:57, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded As much as I could.. Constructments? Moon April fools! 04:11, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Rainfeather - For Approval
Here she is! I can't blur the shading or the highlights anymore...silly GIMP. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 01:08, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

I'd redo it then cause it doesn't look natural. It looks like a white spot on her haunch. And there is no highlight on her shoulder. Moon April fools! 04:03, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

Ice doesn't need to redo it,she just needs to blur the spot on her haunch. <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 11:25, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Elder Blanks - For Approval
Their back...worse than ever. Comments? -- Ice The stars will light your path... 22:34, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

Make the tail lay on the ground, not under they're paw. Mist cloud  01:07, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

They are laying on the ground...the paw is over the tail. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 13:44, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Re-shape the head and paws. Add another ear and extend the tail farther back to the haunch. Add some fluffiness to the long hair tails-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   16:18, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Yellowpool (W) up for approval.
Well here she is. Not sure if she's good enough. I'll propably have to redo her. What do you think? Clar ris  sa! :)  17:04, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Well, she needs ear pink, and I can't really see the pupil and eye-white. And I can't really see the shading, I'd darken and blur it

 ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 17:25, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

I don't see how she is yellow. *shrugs* darken the ear pink and shading-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:15, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

I'll redo it and darken the ear pink. Clar ris  sa! :)  08:42, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded -I darkened the ear pink and did the eye white. Is it better? Clar ris  sa! :)  08:52, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading and make the pupil bigger.-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   16:13, April 24, 2010 (UTC)