Cats of the Clans Wiki talk:Character Art Project

Flowercloud -(W) For Approval
I'm really proud of this!:D Comments? Clarrissa  My Talk Page  Brownkit... 20:00, December 3, 2010 (UTC)

Smudge the white transition a little more  Sand  Merry Christmas 03:17, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-I smudged the transition. Comments? Clarrissa  My Talk Page  Brownkit... 16:20, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading and ear pink-- 01:49, December 10, 2010 (UTC)

This is the same charart I approved with Yellowpool. I just added green eyes and her white foot.(Flowercloud is Yellowpool's daurghter) I'll darken the shading and stuff, I'm just a little surprised. Clarrissa  My Talk Page  Brownkit... 18:43, December 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Done. I get how the haunch highlight looked a little unnatural. Didn't really notice before:P Clarrissa   My Talk Page  Brownkit...

17:19, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

Can you change this to be the new blank? I can help you if you want. Blur the ear pink, smudge the white transition, darken the shading-- 21:43, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Huh? Clarrissa  My Talk Page  Brownkit... 16:57, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- (Could you please help me with that:P-it's hard)Anyways, I used Foxclaw33's image and made a few changes:) Comments?(I basically did the previous comments).

I changed the line art for you. Darken the shading a lot. This looks a little too yellow, so can you make it more gingery?-- 19:47, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Do you use the dodge tool and the burn tool for shading & highlights? here are some tutorials that might help. http://catsofclans.wikia.com/wiki/Character_Art_Project/Tutorials

Here is mine.. Its not the best though... Foxclaw33's CAP Tutorial And my tutorial continued... Foxclaw33's CAP Tutorial Continued Foxclaw33 My talk!17:27, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I tried to make her more gingery. I'm kinda taking over now...(Clara said I could) Improvements? Zoe27 Gossip Queen!!! 17:52, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

Just darken the shading and ear pink-- 02:42, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I darkened the ear-pink, but every time I darken the shading, the fur around it becomes darker than the rest of the fur, so I decided I'd leave it. If anyone can tell me what to do about it, it would be greatly appreciated:) Zoe27 Gossip Queen!!! 16:56, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Just use a bigger brush or spray on the shading--  night  shine  ❄  03:43, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

(i took over-thanx zoe) could somebody help me with that?? Clarrissa  My Talk Page   Brownkit... 18:10, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

Ashflame(W) for approval
Echo helped me with it. I have to say now its pretty good. I think i might need to blur? :3 please set out a thing(Can't remember the name of it) that tells me to blur, that would help ALOT. Thanks, Foxclaw33(I gotta problem with SIGGIES!!! AHHHH!!!)12/12/10 (Celebrate! Almost all the numbers are the same xD) 22:33/10:33 (UTC)

This is good! Perhaps change the color of the ear pink though, it's way too purple, it needs to be more of a salmony pink  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 18:37, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Actually, now that i look at it, I agree! Let me work on it then reupload it.... Foxclaw33 10:30, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Even though it's my image I helped, yes, make the ear pink redish/pink then blur the shading. Jinglepaw :D 'Merry Christmas 18:51, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED- So how's it now? Foxclaw33 10:49, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

I took it out of thumbnail for you. Make sure the ear pink stays inside the line art. Darken the shading a bit more-- 22:59, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 18:06, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Is this better? Or is the shading to dark? Is there anything i need to edit? Beileve it or not, this IS my siggnature! Foxclaw33 06:53, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

want me to help? --bracken-- ~06:55, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, that'd be wonderful if you helped me o.o. Beileve it or not, this IS my siggnature! Foxclaw33 22:16, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded- ok i got it but thanks anyways, braken.&#91;&#91;User-Foxclaw33&#124; 02:03, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

Add shading, the back of the tail is cut off, make the ear pink more reddish and blur it. Make sure no colour is out of the line art. -- 19:39, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

>.< THERE IS SHADING! I am tired of people saying there is no shading when there is! Let me reupload it with the tail Foxclaw33 My talk!01:52, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Foxclaw33 My talk!01:54, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Note I don't use the burn and dodge tool but i am starting to. I just want to not use it on him, i just want to get him done already :P Foxclaw33 My talk!17:06, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Fix the ear pink- see a tutorial. It's a little to bright. Zoe27 Gossip Queen!!! 17:56, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

Foxclaw, you don't use the dodge and burn tool? What are using to shade and highlight? Those are the only two tools that effectively work for highlights and shading  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:38, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

Yea i just started to, i thought by now it would be CBA already.... And i dont need tutorials, i figure out things on my own. For instance, if i played a wii game... I just throw away the instructions. :P Believe it or not i do that :P :D... Ok so ill darken AshflameFoxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">My talk!00:14, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I'm glad you started to. Like I said, the burn tool is the only tool that creates shading, and the dodge tool is the only tool that creates highlights. Darken the shading and desaturate him too, he's too neon orange. Just click the sponge tool if you use pixlr, and set it to "desaturate". Make the ear pink less of a purple color, and make sure that it doesn't overlap the lineart  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:36, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-<font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">TEEEHEEE o3o Made ya look!!02:33, January 18, 2011 (UTC)

I see no light source in this, there is a line of lighter colour going across the pelt, so get rid of it. Make the ear pink more reddish and blur it--  night  shine  ❄  03:42, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

It says he's a tabby on his article, add tabby stripes to his pelt. Also, rename this image "Ashflame.warrior.png"  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:40, January 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blackberry (W) For Approval
The shading sucks i know, Lost mah skillz at shading XD but i will get it back at one point XD but whatever, Heres Blackberry the spot was easy amazingly  Sand  Merry Christmas 23:17, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

Desaturate the ear pink, blur the shading, blur the white transition-- 04:29, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Blurred shading all the way didn't know what white transition you were talking about so i blurred both of them  Sand  Merry Christmas 17:38, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading to the back of the haunch and to her back, blur the ear pink more, blur the shading a lot, blur the white transition-- 20:58, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I added shading to the back of her haunch but not the back cause of light source and if i blurred the shading anymore it would mess up the highlights i blurred the ear-pink and the white transition  Sand  Merry Christmas 16:31, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

Where exactly is the light coming from? Blur all the shading a lot, 19:35, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

"If i blurred the shading anymore it would mess up the highlights" The light is coming from the top or side i'm not going to pout shading on the back cause even though im not really sure where the light is coming from wherever it is there would be no back shading, Also like i said if i blur the shading anymore it would mess up the highlights  Bird  2011 19:39, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Bird asked for my help on the IRC. The shading was difficult for me to work with; I think mainly because I'm too used to my own style xD Anyway though, I tried to smudge the shading all around the leg and belly, because the back leg shading was only in one spot, as was the belly shading. I brightened the highlights as well, blurred the ear pink, smudged the white dab a bit, and added depth to the eyes  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:40, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

The haunch shading looks very spiky, so smooth that out. --  night  shine  ❄  03:40, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded i tried to smooth it out thats teh best i can do  Bird  2011 22:25, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the haunch shading and blur it--  night  shine  ❄  22:16, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

I might need help with that too  Bird  2011 02:15, January 26, 2011 (UTC)

Frostpelt (W) For approval
<font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">My talk!21:58, January 6, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good. Does she have an eye color? -Sagestorm70 16:31, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

There are tons of white pixels and there is some faded lineart on her. Also, she needs eye color and earpink. I can fix that for you, if you'd like, and you can take it from there. <font color="Silver" >☯Silver <font color="Goldenrod" > Bells☮ 16:49, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

That's very nice of you, but i think i need to do it myself and learn. I'm working on it right now. And Sagestorm, sorry that i forgot the eye color. I will go and redo that, as i will also add eye pink. I just didnt have time, and you know, it's the holidays, in a hurry to wrap presents and decorate. I was in quite a rush.(I didnt look at her description that much, i will in a sec) I didn't realize that, and thank you for reminding me. In just a second i'll have it all done. Beileve it or not, this IS my siggnature! Foxclaw33 22:07, December 24, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded-How's thisBeileve it or not, this IS my siggnature! Foxclaw33 22:20, December 24, 2010 (UTC)'''

Use this blank: make the ear pink more pinkish and blur it, darken the shading and blur it, get rid of all the white pixels-- 20:57, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is sorta coming out of the blank. -Sagestorm70 15:42, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

Sis is working on it, she is working on many other ones, and she's fixing Ashflame, too! ~Bloodclaw 22:32, December 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-you have to look at it really close if you want to see the highlights and shading--Beileve it or not, this IS my siggnature! Foxclaw33 02:25, December 30, 2010 (UTC)

Her page says that she's a dark gray she-cat, and this is a pale gray she-cat. Darken the image a lot. <font color="Silver" >☯Silver <font color="Goldenrod" > Bells☮ 01:18, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">My talk!21:58, January 6, 2011 (UTC)

Add shading, make sure the ear pink stays in the lines, blur the ear pink, make the ear pink more reddish. Darken the whole thing-- 19:35, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-<font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">My talk!01:49, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

This is fantastic! Blur the face shading, and the shading on the foreleg. Make the ear pink on both sides smaller, the tips are overlapping the line art  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:57, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

Hey, Foxclaw33, would you like Frostpelt? She's up in Adoption Center(she's been there for some time now. -Clara said she's cutting back on her rp's)<font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:violet">Gossip Queen!!! 18:19, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Sure :) <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">TEEEHEEE o3o Made ya look!!02:35, January 18, 2011 (UTC)

There are areas on the line art that are blurred, and there is a darker spot of (shading?) on the right side of her face. <font face="Stencil">我愛羅 As long as theres others to kill the world is wonderful  05:06, January 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Haven't worked on it for a while. <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">TEEEHEEE o3o Made ya look!!16:58, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

I don't see a light source in this, make the ear pink more reddish and blur it--  night  shine  ❄  22:16, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

Make the pelt a lot lighter. Also, rename the image, "Frostpelt.warrior.png"  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:40, January 26, 2011 (UTC)

Kittypet Blanks - For Approval
Ack. Please forgive my terrible excuse of a drawing. *headdesk* Agent WindFire  Because it's snowing,  Blowing, All over town... 17:48, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

I took it out of a gallery. The legs are way too long, make the paws more rounded and less hoof-like. Make the tails rounded on the short haired ones-- 00:03, December 24, 2010 (UTC)

Make the stomachs rounder/larger. After all, they are well-fed kittypets.-Mapleshade iz Awesum! 06:40, December 24, 2010

~Comment that might help...

I am not exactly a drawing expert but i would put pupils in the eyes and make the head just a LITTLE round; then make the stomachs larger, i agree with Mapleshade and nightshine, the legs ARE a little long. After you do that then i'd think i'd be approved :). ~Bloodclaw 06:01, December 25, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. StarClan save us all, I tried to make paws. x.x Someday that's going to end the world as we know it.

@Nightshine fixed the legs/paws on the long-haired female as an example, I actually think I messed it up further by trying. Tails on short-haired's are rounded.... I think.

@Darkie Yeah... made these old things back a while. They were supposed to be feral cats - I guess in the process of fixing them up for this, that slipped my mind. I did it on the long-haired female as an example. If you like it, I'll do it on the rest.

@~Bloodclaw Pupils aren't there for a reason, it's a blank. Same case with the apprentice blank, but yeah, you're probably right on the head. I fail epically at anything I try to draw XD I'll give it a shot with the other improvements I'm working on now. Agent WindFire Because it's snowing,  Blowing, All over town... 11:13, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

Want me to help >.<? I'd be glad to. Sorry, i forgot that pupils have to be added by the person USING the blanks o.o You think that you fail epicly on drawing? You should see me when i don't sketch first It's like a horror show >.< ---~Bloodclaw 22:36, December 29, 2010 (UTC)

Try altering the line art like this. Also, the long haired female's hind paws are different then the others  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 06:25, January 3, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined-- 19:34, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

I actually don't think this is even a good starter lineart... maybe I should just re-do it completely. This was really really old anyway. Agent WindFire Because it's snowing,  Blowing, All over town... 00:47, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with you. The anatomy on this isn't correct in many spots and the legs are bent backwards.-- 01:08, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

They are? o.o Sorry, I'm really not the best with cats, I have a dog and I've never really seen a cat before... not up close, that is... *headdesk* StarClan save us all, I'm just going to mess this up again. Agent WindFire Because it's snowing,  Blowing, All over town... 10:48, January 12, 2011 (UTC)

lol, it's fine. Just google a cat online, and draw your line art while looking at it. That's what I did with the leader blanks  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:07, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Mion(R)-for approval
I dont like it  --bracken-- ~23:52, December 29, 2010 (UTC)

It's cute! Make the ear pink more salmony color. ;D <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">Jinglepaw :D 'Merry Christmas 11:10, December 30, 2010 (UTC)

This is beautiful!! Make the pupil a bit bigger, and add eye white  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:06, January 3, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know why you dont like it! it's beautiful. The right and left ear are different eye pink colors, plus i would make it a little more reddish-salmon. <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">My talk!17:57, January 6, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined-- 19:19, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

I could take over for you, if you'd like, Bracken. <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:violet">Gossip Queen!!! 17:59, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

go ahead ` --bracken-- ~01:49, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:50, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

reuploaded  --bracken-- ~ 00:12, January 23, 2011 (UTC)

Man this is pretty. Blur the stripes, and make the ear pink bigger  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:41, January 24, 2011 (UTC)

Hippieheart(W) For approval
I just made her and her page, and i wanted to get her image done. I really like it :D. Her description says she's rainbow with peace and shine marks. The shine marks were VERY, VERY hard. So i just did 2. <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">My talk!20:51, January 6, 2011 (UTC)

Nice. I just see a few places where the color goes out the line art. -Sagestorm70 00:45, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-<font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">My talk!02:34, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

Here's a tip for doing Chararts: Do NOT change the lineart. Use a normal bucketfill and a normal smudge. Blur peace markings, add shading and highlights, fix lineart and get all the color out of the lineart INTO the lineart. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">Jinglepaw :D 'Merry Christmas 22:18, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

What? I did do shading and highlights but since shes rainbow its hard to see -_-. What i did was i colored it all red, then i made a black line, and a put blue OVER the the black line so the black line wasnt visable, then i did that with all over the other colors. I didnt change the lineart to be honest :o. I'll reuploaded with blurred peace signs and shine marks. <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">My talk!23:16, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

I don't see any shading or highlights. Brighten the highlights and darken the shading a lot if there is though. And there is a lot of blurred line art  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:41, January 8, 2011 (UTC)


 * Fix the lineart. And the signs are very hard to see. I would re-do them if I were you. ♥Loveheart♥  ☮Happy Valentines Day!☮  17:24, January 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * I dont understand whats wrong with the lineart ?_? I meant for it to be blurred because she has alot of different colored tranitions. I also dont know how the signs are hard to see, they are white and out there. The peace signs and the white shines are the signs. I'll darken the shading, just give me some time.. *SPOILER AHEAD!* I'm working on the To-Be blanks i'm putting up for approval.. <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">My talk!23:20, January 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * I dont understand whats wrong with the lineart ?_? I meant for it to be blurred because she has alot of different colored tranitions. I also dont know how the signs are hard to see, they are white and out there. The peace signs and the white shines are the signs. I'll darken the shading, just give me some time.. *SPOILER AHEAD!* I'm working on the To-Be blanks i'm putting up for approval.. <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">My talk!23:20, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Foxclaw, the lineart shouldn't be altered at all unless the character has a crooked paw, bent tail, scarred ears, ect. It's basically the outline of the cat, it wouldn't make sense for the outline to be blurred just because she has different colors on her pelt. And, I'm sorry to tell you this but Hawkfire has the to-be blanks reserved  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:09, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the peace signs a bit. <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:violet">Gossip Queen!!! 17:42, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

Use a slightly thicker brush for the symbols. Another thing you can do is take a circle tool, make a circle, and then use a line or path tool to make the symbols straighter. ddevans96 back and ready for action 01:21, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Oh... I am sorry lol... I wont be very active so can you guys give me some more time before you do a 'Please work on this or it will be declined'?<font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">My talk!22:14, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Sure we can give you a few more days--  night  shine  ❄  22:16, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks,Guys! <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">Ooh eye ahh ahh a.. TANG TANG WALLA WALLA BING BANG! 20:08, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Skykit (Ki) - For Approval
Hi, this isn't my, charart. It's Clara's. Since she's been blocked though, she said I could take over for her, so any improvements that need to be made, will be taken over by me, until she returns:) Comments? <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:violet">Gossip Queen!!! 17:40, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more triangular, darken the shading, and smudge the white transition a lot  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:48, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

Add more highlights and blur the ear pink slightly. I would also blur the edges of the highlights of the eyes slightly as they are very pronounced. ddevans96 back and ready for action 01:13, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I tried to do what you all asked:) Comments? <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:violet">Gossip Queen!!! 16:35, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, make the ear pink more triangular, smudge the white transition-- 06:20, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

reuplooaded-done:D <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:violet">Gossip Queen!!! 18:08, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink bigger, darken the shading--  night  shine  ❄  02:25, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

reuploadedimprovements?? <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:violet">Gossip Queen!!! 17:12, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink lighter near the top and darken the shading a lot--  night  shine  ❄  22:16, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I'm taking her back now:D (Thanks Zoe-you did a good job) I lightened upper ear pink. Could someone help me to darken the shading? I might sound stupid, but it's really hard, even though its obvious the shading need to be darkened:P  Clarrissa   My Talk Page  Brownkit... 17:46, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

Cloudkit (Ki) For Approval
Hi, this isn't my image-it's Clara's she fixed the legs and emailed it to me to put it up. I'll be doing the improvements though. Comments? <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:violet">Gossip Queen!!! 17:56, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the black on her paws, make the ear pink bigger and darken it, darken the shading and brighten the highlights  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:48, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I smudged her paws, made the ear pink bigger and kinda darkened it. I also brightened the highlights on the tail, as I felt this was where the highlights were needed most. I really think it looks much better now:D Comments? <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:violet">Gossip Queen!!! 19:09, January 12, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and smudge the black transition-- 06:22, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I've done that now. Improvements? <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:violet">Gossip Queen!!! 16:54, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading--  night  shine  ❄  02:24, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Done!!:) <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:violet">Gossip Queen!!! 17:11, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a lot more--  night  shine  ❄  22:16, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Well. I've taken her back now. I guess I tried (and failed) to darken the shading. :P Clarrissa   My Talk Page  Brownkit...

18:04, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

It's hard to distinguish the shading from the color of the pelt  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:46, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

Tigerfur (Ro) - For approval
I'm not really good at these. Tigerfur

Be sure to put your images here, not in the archives, those are past images that have already been approved. And no, don't think that; it just takes practice and this is good for your first try. Create an article for him, if there's no article, then there's no place to put the image. Add more stripes and blur the stripes, and add shading, ear pink, and eye white as well.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:20, January 12, 2011 (UTC)

Create an ear pink.(This is good if its your first tabby) <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:violet">Gossip Queen!!! 19:18, January 12, 2011 (UTC)

Please remember to tell us when you've reuploaded. Make the ear pink more of a reddish pink, right now it's more hot pink. Thicken the shading a lot, and darken the shading  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:44, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I made the ear insides pinker and blured the shading a little. I also Darkened the shading. Tigerfur of Bloodclan 01:30, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, and blur it a lot. Make the stripes a bit thinner, and make the ear pink more reddish  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:01, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful. You can use the Dodge dool for highlights and the Burn tool for shading. Make the ear pink salmony then blue it. Blur the stripes <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">TEEEHEEE o3o Made ya look!!23:03, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

I'll try as best as I can to fix him. Tigerfur of Bloodclan 13:17, January 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I totally fixed it! Tigerfur of Bloodclan 13:36, January 19, 2011 (UTC)

That sure is alot of stripes O.O nice job on the highlights! Do you want help on Tabby stripes? I would be glad to help. In fact i would be delighted ;) I just think its not natural for Tabby stripes to be straight... Don't you agree??<font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">TEEEHEEE o3o Made ya look!!22:33, January 19, 2011 (UTC)

Sure you can help! You can on my two other ones too! Tigerfur of Bloodclan 03:44, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:57, January 27, 2011 (UTC)

Flower That Moves In Wind (PH) - For approval
Please! I worked really ard on this but will edit it if needed. :)



Tigerfur of Bloodclan 02:49, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

Hey, Tigerfur? Can you please stop putting your images in the archives? Those are images that have already been approved, this is where they must go first; so users can offer comments and critique. As for the image, this is lovely! Blur the stripes a lot, make them thinner, and darken the shading.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:52, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes thinner and more blurred in, darken shading and make highlights more visable, and fix the areas of line art in which the stripes over lip i.e. along the back. <font face="Stencil">我愛羅 As long as theres others to kill the world is wonderful  05:06, January 20, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined--  night  shine  ❄  22:16, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Is she good?

Clovershine (Ro)- For approval
I hope you like! I worked really hard on her! Tigerfur of Bloodclan 01:24, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

This is good :) Darken and blur the shading. Blur the white on her muzzle a lot  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:04, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Blurred the white on her muzzle a lot. I also Darkened and blurred the shading. Tigerfur of Bloodclan 18:13, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

I'm still having a hard time seeing the shading. Thicken, darken, and blur it  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:00, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I Darkened the shading once more, and blurred it.

This is REALLY Good blur the stripes a bit  Bird  2011 01:12, January 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes, and the shading is still hard to see. Also, where are the highlights? <font face="Stencil">我愛羅 As long as theres others to kill the world is wonderful  05:06, January 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Blurred the stripes again. I cannot blur them anymore; GIMP won't let me :( Tigerfur of Bloodclan 03:52, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken and blur the shading, make the stripes longer--  night  shine  ❄  22:16, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: How about now?

I don't see anything wrong :) <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">Ooh eye ahh ahh a.. TANG TANG WALLA WALLA BING BANG! 20:10, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Cave Guard Blanks - For Approval
Comments? I'm not that proud of these :\--  night  shine  ❄  05:55, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

I like them :) I'd add the second hind leg, and make both the hind legs longer  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 06:05, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on these or these will be declined. Gaara What does pain feel like? 愛 23:25, January 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded sorry for the delay. I made the back leg longer and added the second one -- Night  shine  02:29, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

That's a lot better! Make the back of the upper part of the hind leg a bit rounder. I'll circle it if I'm too confusing xD  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:31, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded made hind leg rounder-- Night  shine  22:46, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Darkstrike (W) - For approval
My first character art since I returned to the wiki, And -bracken let me do Darkstrike! :D §₩1ƒ₮¥ BLAAAHH, Elder dance! 23:39, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

This is really good! Fix the white pixels on his paws  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:19, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded §₩1ƒ₮¥ BLAAAHH, Elder dance! 01:31, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

There's a bit of gray outside his chest, near his neck  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:15, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed with whats stated above. Also, on the front left leg there are still white pixels near the paw and top of the leg. Fills those in. I also see a few pixels of gray way outside the line art, under the tail. <font face="Stencil">我愛羅 As long as theres others to kill the world is wonderful  05:06, January 20, 2011 (UTC)

Under the belly there is some gray. Tigerfur of Bloodclan 14:20, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

Sneer(Ro)For approval
I love him :3 By the way, he has a fang sticking out because he had crooked teeth. <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">TEEEHEEE o3o Made ya look!!03:27, January 18, 2011 (UTC)

Finally someone does him. I see a few patched of white on the legs. Could you color them in? -I like Sage 14:02, January 18, 2011 (UTC)


 * Darken the shading and thin it out. The ear pink is tro pink. Make it more red like. Same with the nose. Fill in the white specks and rearrange the eye. Thicken the lineart on the tooth. ♥Loveheart♥  ☮Happy Valentines Day!☮  00:08, January 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * Reuploaded- I liked him better how he was but OK :) <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">TEEEHEEE o3o Made ya look!!00:17, January 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * Reuploaded- I liked him better how he was but OK :) <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">TEEEHEEE o3o Made ya look!!00:17, January 19, 2011 (UTC)


 * It might be me, but I think his face is a little dark. :P -I like Sage 13:55, January 19, 2011 (UTC)


 * Reuploaded- I dont know if its you or not :P but i lightened it. <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">TEEEHEEE o3o Made ya look!!22:18, January 19, 2011 (UTC)


 * Ok, Re-arange the ear pink (i can't spell D:), make the ear pink a salmony colour, Add shading, add highlights, blur them and it's either my screen, but there's flecks outside of the lineart. ~ Gaara What is pain? 愛t 22:24, January 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * I did do shading and highlights. Look close.... I think its your screen i dont see flecks O.o <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">TEEEHEEE o3o Made ya look!!22:27, January 19, 2011 (UTC)

I don't see a light source, make the ear pink more reddish and blur it, blur the shading thoroughly--  night  shine  ❄  02:05, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Charcoal (Q) - For Approval
- Do. Not. Like. Also, I'm making her page. Gaara What is pain? 愛t 03:12, January 19, 2011 (UTC)

I think she looks beautiful! :D Blur the pink in the ears a little more. Tigerfur of Bloodclan 13:14, January 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink more, and blur the shading between the front of back legs, it sorta forms a straight line. <font face="Stencil">我愛羅 As long as theres others to kill the world is wonderful  05:06, January 20, 2011 (UTC)

Mistytail(R) - For approval
I just wanted to try a cat that wasn't a tabby. Comments? Tigerfur of Bloodclan 04:10, January 21, 2011 (UTC)



Thicken the shading a lot, it's just a thin line going from her chest to her haunch. Thicken it and blur it a lot as well. Make the ear pink more reddish, and there seems to be two purple spots at the corners  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 05:00, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

REIPLOADED: Better?

Thicken and blur the shading, add neck shading, make the earpink more reddish and blur it--  night  shine  ❄  22:16, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: That came out messier then I expected. Good?

The shading still needs to be a lot thicker, and the ear pink needs to be more reddish. This is hot pink. Also, either desaturate the nose color, or make the nose color darker gray  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:13, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

Flamebelly(RO) - For approval
DO NOT LIKE!



REALLY BAD! Tigerfur of Bloodclan 23:05, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

I'm kind of confused; is the darker color on his belly shading, or is his belly and haunch actually darker?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:14, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

To-be blanks - For Approval
Ahh, good old fashioned Hawkey-made blanks. :D Just like the good ol' days! These aren't my BEST blanks, I finished them in about four minutes, so...yeah. Comments?  HA WK FI RE98  20:27, January 23, 2011 (UTC)

These are good! The back paw closest to us is a bit deformed, maybe round it off a bit, and make the eyes more almond shaped instead of oval shaped  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:32, January 24, 2011 (UTC)

Mudkit (Ki) For Approval
Comments? I should probably darken the gray  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:32, January 24, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty. :D I would darken the gray. It is sorta faint. -I like Sage 00:34, January 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Thank you! I darkened the gray, and saturated the brown a bit to make it more distinguishable  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:45, January 24, 2011 (UTC)

I want to ask can non-admins do CBA??? If they can then... Comments before approval? <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">Ooh eye ahh ahh a.. TANG TANG WALLA WALLA BING BANG!22:20, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

Woah, wait a minute Foxclaw. Only project leads, (the leader, deputy, or senior warriors) may CBA images ;)  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:27, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

Blur Patches  Bird  2011 12:43, January 26, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I fear that if I blur the patches much more, it will make them more difficult to see  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:41, January 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur it a tiniest bit it wont be difficult to see if it is you can change it  Bird  2011 21:46, January 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Alright, I blurred it a bit  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:00, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Got it Night. I need to do more images lol..... <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">Ooh eye ahh ahh a.. TANG TANG WALLA WALLA BING BANG!20:13, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Well, perhaps. But always be sure to be careful about how many images you put up on here. It's kind of difficult to keep track of them all if you do more than three. So I suggest keeping your image amount on this page up to three or four, and always reserve the character art before putting it up for approval  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:28, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

o.e i just put up Blazingstar without reserving it.... I'll go put it up there. <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">Ooh eye ahh ahh a.. TANG TANG WALLA WALLA BING BANG! 20:41, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Orange tom (Ro)- For approval
This is an orange tom rouge. If it gets approved I'll make him a page with a new name.

Tigerfur of Bloodclan 13:56, January 24, 2011 (UTC)

You can't exactly just '"make a charart and then make him a page and name after he is approved." 'It has to have a page and name already. Don't just post random art =| <font face="Stencil">我愛羅 As long as theres others to kill the world is wonderful  22:12, January 24, 2011 (UTC)

Satsujin is right Tigerfur, I'm sorry. If you really want to keep this up, then you could add tabby stripes, and change his eye color to dark blue; and he could be Blaze. You'd have to change the file name to Blaze.rogue.png  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:30, January 24, 2011 (UTC)

Ichigo (R) - FOr Approval
- I had to use pixlr for this and found some cool brushes to use =3 anyway, I failed at the Loner blanks and I'mma givin um up. So yeah. Here's Ichigo, and if you want me to change the lineart, I will. Gaara What does pain feel like? 愛 00:00, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

Line art is way to thick, color and eyes aren't right. <font face="Stencil">我愛羅 As long as theres others to kill the world is wonderful  00:03, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

It's good :) The line art is a bit too cartoony though; I suggest thinning it out and make it look spiky. And he looks too golden, saturate him more  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:05, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

Echo, I'll give tou the basic color layout on IRC. <font face="Stencil">我愛羅 As long as theres others to kill the world is wonderful  00:07, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

Echoey, looks kewl :) The thing about pixlr is that even with the magic wand tool, things blur together. Try making one layer that's just the white section of the lineart, erasing the lineart so there isn't any, and make another one that's just the lineart with the white part taken out. If that made any sense. Agent WindFire  Because it's snowing,  Blowing, All over town...     00:02, January 26, 2011 (UTC)

Fangpaw (A) For Approval
Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:05, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

Make the eyes more purple and smudge the white a bit-- Night  shine  06:53, January 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Better?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:05, January 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Frosty told me on the IRC to lower the two white spots  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:40, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

CBA?-- Night  shine  23:18, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Blueclaw (W) For Approval
Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:17, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading-- Night  shine  06:53, January 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Darkened shading  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:04, January 27, 2011 (UTC)

CBA?-- Night  shine  23:18, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Sootpaw (A) - For Approval
Comments?-- Night  shine  02:40, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

I love it! Make the tuft of white brighter  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:08, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded brightened tuft -- Night  shine  03:13, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

Toshiro (R) For Approval
Fail. Comments? -- Jalapeño I look really CREEPY with these glasses on...  21:16, January 28, 2011 (UTC)

Holy cow :D thats really good. I dont see shading or a light source, though.... <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">Ooh eye ahh ahh a.. TANG TANG WALLA WALLA BING BANG!20:11, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

There's no shading or highlights, and the spikey fur looks odd. Gaara What does pain feel like? 愛 22:40, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Stormpaw (WC) - For Approval


My first piece of work back after so long! I'm not sure about it... comments? -- Fawny Keep On Smiling :D 20:31, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

This is incredible! Lighten the shading a bit, and add ear pink  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:36, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Not sure if this is any better?

The ear pink looks good. Lighten the chest and paw shading more though  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:42, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Blazingstar(L) For approval
I just love it. I only hate the ear pink :/ <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">Ooh eye ahh ahh a.. TANG TANG WALLA WALLA BING BANG! 20:40, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Spottail (Q) For Approval
Putting her back up. Made a few minor changes here and there. Comments? ddevans96 Legend of the Stars 21:20, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink smaller and I think she'll be ready :)  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:24, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Made a few more minor changes, made the ear pink smaller ddevans96 Legend of the Stars 21:39, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Stormfoot (W) - For Approval
Comments?-- Night  shine  23:17, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, this is gorgeous! I don't see anything wrong  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:09, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Amberkit (Ki) For Approval
Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:09, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Birch (Ki) For Approval
Comments? I like how he turned out :)  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:09, January 30, 2011 (UTC)