Cats of the Clans Wiki talk:Character Art Project

Locustkit (Ki) - For Approval
Aw, my little man. :') Comments? Hawkey  I am a Ninja Duck! Fear me!  17:56, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink, blur the shading-- 19:21, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? I added the scar. :) Hawkey  I am a Ninja Duck! Fear me!  19:41, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

I like it! Darken the stripes on his haunch  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:26, August 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Any better? Hawkey I am a Ninja Duck! Fear me!  14:28, August 22, 2010 (UTC)

Nice :) but i can barely see the earpink (Barely i somewhat see it)  Birdstar  You infected me with mildew? 00:02, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink a lot, blur the head stripes a bit-- 05:21, September 7, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined-- 06:14, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sorry, I've been a bit busy with school and sickness lately. :) (and I'm STILL sick) I blurred his head stripes, and darkened the ear pink ALOT. I will scream if you complain "I don't see it! DAARKEN IT!" ;D  HA WK FI RE98  19:18, September 13, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink; make it more triangular-- 04:23, September 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. It's always about the ear pink, isn't it? -.-  HA WK FI RE98  15:41, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Comments?  HA WK FI RE98  13:52, October 3, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Hawkey but.....I can not see the earpink :P  Birdstar  You infected me with mildew? 17:44, October 3, 2010 (UTC)

Seriously Birdpaw...what the cuss.... anyway, it's not reuploading. You can see the ear pink just fine! Your mind is playing tricks on you, yeah. I said it. :P  HA WK FI RE98  21:53, October 3, 2010 (UTC)

I can see the ear pink fine. Just had to tilt my computer screen.- Daughter of Scourge Place of no ☆s!

Hey my comp is really high tech i am not stupid i know waht i see >:(  Birdstar  You infected me with mildew? 21:59, October 3, 2010 (UTC)

Calm down Birdpaw. This is brilliant Hawkfire, the ear pink is fine, but on the right ear, there is some blurred lineart, please fix it. You may want to darken the ear pink but if you don't want to, it's fine, it goes well with the pelt colour, -- Fawny People of Earth! Awesomeness has come online! 10:53, October 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I fixed all blurred lineart and darkened the ear pink some.  HA WK FI RE98  19:06, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

Tweak Week
As some users suggested in above discussions, I'm starting to agree with it myself. But I'm a bit uneasy with it, since there are images that need to be deleted due to cats being deleted, users leaving. Also, a Roleplaying Stop would be good. So...do you guys agree? May we start the Tweak Week? 01:54, August 23, 2010 (UTC)

Not a bad idea..... Dalton  Bulldog Pride! 03:09, August 23, 2010 (UTC)

I say yes to Tweak Week! :D Hawkey  I am a Ninja Duck! Fear me!  13:29, August 23, 2010 (UTC)

Um Ok LOL of course i say yes  Birdstar  You infected me with mildew? 14:39, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

When should we have the tweak week?-- 23:08, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

Once a month or twice a month? what i mean is one month two months?

 Sand  I'm a new level of awesome 21:37, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

I think once every 2 months seeing as it usually takes a while to approve images. 火の毛皮 16:44, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

I like the idea. Lets users update their chactars pages, add catagories, and clean out the clans.- Daughter of Scourge Place of no ☆s!

I'll get to work right away on the regulations  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:11, October 7, 2010 (UTC)

Okay guys, the first stage of Tweak Week has been set up here :)  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:30, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

Yellowpool (Q) For Approval


Can you approve the above image? Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 17:06, October 8, 2010 (UTC)

Pixlr won't work. How can I approve this? Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 17:30, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

How is pixlr not working? I'm literally using it right now. Or do you mean your computer isn't letting you get on?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 17:59, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

It isn't letting me save my improved cat. When I hit the save button, it just go's, instead of finishing the savng process. Then when I try to open it here, the changes are obviously not saved, as they come up as they were before I made the changes on pixlr. Basically its not saving properly. Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 16:26, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, I'm not sure if we can help-- 03:07, October 8, 2010 (UTC)

It's okay, I'm downloading GIMP, anyway. Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 16:35, October 8, 2010 (UTC)

There, I got it for you :) The ear pink doesn't match her warrior image. Take that color, and use it for this one  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:54, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

Brindlepaw (A) For Approval
This didn't turn out exactly how I wanted it to, but I'm pretty proud of her. Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 14:44, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Lovely! But she looks really...pixely. And the ear pink is not where it should be. Besides that, looking good! :) Hawkey  I am a Ninja Duck! Fear me!  01:25, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Is this better? I'm trying so hard to make her look like her real life image xP  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:27, September 16, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading some-- 01:20, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Darkened shading  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:29, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

No matter how stunning this is, I think it looks really pixely. It should be smooth. -- Mousebrair o r Cloudfrost  15:49, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

That's the texture actually, but I'll blur it some more  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:35, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Okay, I really don't want to blur it anymore, she's supposed to be brindled  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:58, October 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Added some sleekness  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:45, October 7, 2010 (UTC)

Nice :D Center our left earpink  Sand  BOO...Trick or treat 11:06, October 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Better?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:19, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

Flintwhisker
-This is my first warrior.....SCRATCH THAT This is my first Tabby too  Sand  I'm a new level of awesome 11:29, September 16, 2010 (UTC)

Not bad at all, but it needs some improvement. Yes, I am a bit harsher than the other senior warriors, but it gets the point across. ;)


 * Look at the tabbies posted on character articles. Notice how their markings are all different? These stripes you have here have no character, they look just like brown blobs. Give them some definition. Make them swirl, make them wavy, make them thin.


 * Add more stripes to the legs, head, neck, back, haunch, forelegs.


 * Blur ear pink alot and make it slightly lighter


 * Darken the shading, and add some highlights, and blur it completely.

Hope this keeps you busy for a while ;) It'll look great by then, though!  HA WK FI RE98  14:53, September 16, 2010 (UTC)

Re uploaded K then let me clarify some things

1. Thats the only tabby i can do since i have Hypoglycimea (Spelling fail)

2. Thats all the stripes that will fit

3, Thats as far the ear pink will go and its the color for a brown cat

4. There are highlights and they are all blurred  Sand  I'm a new level of awesome 19:54, September 16, 2010 (UTC)

I think plenty more stripes could be fit in; not all the stripes have to connect with the line art. The haunch could use the most amount though. And the shading looks good, but add some to the face  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:32, September 16, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Can you help me add some more stripes then i will do the rest :)  Sand  I'm a new level of awesome 23:47, September 16, 2010 (UTC)

Sure, I'll have it done very soon! :)  HA WK FI RE98  01:44, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded This is what I meant by giving the stripes some character. :) I didn't touch the shading or highlights, only the stripes. I blurred the ear pink for you. Is this okay with you? If not, you can just reupload your original version and ask Nightfall to do it or something.  HA WK FI RE98  01:59, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

Whoah O.O yes its great :D thanks Hawkey  Sand  I'm a new level of awesome 11:17, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a lot more. Nice charart though! -- Mousebrair o r Cloudfrost  15:49, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Truthfully i think the shadings fine so i will wait for other peoples say cause i dont want to darken it then lighten it  Sand  I'm a new level of awesome 16:31, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Which Ashblaze, mine or the BC one? 火の毛皮 16:42, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah yours  Sand  I'm a new level of awesome 17:03, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Comments?  Birdstar  You infected me with mildew? 17:07, October 3, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the back-- 03:07, October 8, 2010 (UTC)

The light source is coming from the back it does not need shading  Sand  BOO...Trick or treat 11:43, October 8, 2010 (UTC)

If the light source is coming from the back, then he'll need more shading on his belly, arms, and chest  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 06:10, October 9, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Why is the link red....... >:|  Sand  BOO...Trick or treat 22:27, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

Hm...was he deleted? Well, it was probably because he's never roleplayed. However, if you change the file name, and change the eye color to green, this could be Flintwhisker.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:10, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded :)  Sand  BOO...Trick or treat 23:14, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

Flintwhisker has no tabby stripes. Lighten it so it becomes a light golden. 23:25, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

Wait, Icestorm is says here that he's a light brown tabby. If he's not a tabby at all, then 1) That shouldn't be on his page and 2) we should find a different brown tabby that this can be.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:26, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, if you add eye lashes then this can be Briarshine  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:29, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

Orangeblossom (R)-For approval
So... My second cat. She's Rug 's mom. :D Comments?- Daughter of Scourge Place of no ☆s!

Hm; her page says she's a kittypet. If she is, then you'll have to wait until we get kittypet blanks approved to put her up  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:24, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

For now, can I use this blank? It's my fave.- Daughter of Scourge Place of no ☆s!

If she's currently a rogue, then you can  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:29, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks!- Daughter of Scourge Place of no ☆s!

No problem ;) Blur and darken the shading a lot, and add more shading. Blur the ear pink as well  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:59, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

Will try!- Daughter of Scourge Place of no ☆s!

Reuploaded...I think. My computer hates me.- Daughter of Scourge Place of no ☆s!

You need to darken and blur the shading a lot more. And don't blur the black part in the eye. -- Mousebrair o r Cloudfrost  15:46, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Do you need any help? :)  HA WK FI RE98  16:03, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Not right, Hawky. But thanks! :D Daughter of Scourge Place of no ☆s! 21:30, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Better?- Daughter of Scourge Place of no ☆s!

I see absolutely no shading, please add a lot, and darken and blur it  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:41, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Now I need help! Hawky?- Daughter of Scourge Place of no ☆s!

I'm on it. :)  HA WK FI RE98  22:24, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Is this any good?  HA WK FI RE98  22:54, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Wow.. but.. she's more brown now. D:- Daughter of Scourge Place of no ☆s!

Then go over the image with the sponge tool set to 10 strength. :)  HA WK FI RE98  23:04, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

I did that, and she more orange now. :D Thanks for the help Hawkfire!!- Daughter of Scourge Place of no ☆s!

Lighten the shading, it's way too dark  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:44, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, but I'm a huge person on shading, and i love how it defines the image. I like dark shading. I think it looks fine, but do whatever with it. :/  HA WK FI RE98  23:11, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, the shading is way too dark. Blur it as well-- 23:44, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

Shading does define the image, but it's not supposed to be as noticeable as this. Like, the first thing you see when you look at this image is shading. When you look at a charart, the first thing you should is, well, the charart :)  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:14, September 29, 2010 (UTC)

You don't fail! I like it this way. Makes it unquie! :D- Daughter of Scourge Place of no ☆s!
 * sigh* Then change it back to the way it was, and someone else better than me help her. I fail.  HA WK FI RE98  23:28, September 29, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe lighten it?  Birdstar  You infected me with mildew? 17:45, October 3, 2010 (UTC)

If I lighten it, she turns too brown, so I'd rather not.- Daughter of Scourge Place of no ☆s!

Don't lighten the image, just lighten the shading  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:13, October 3, 2010 (UTC)

Will do.- Daughter of Scourge Place of no ☆s!

I did change it, but my compter won't let me upload it. I'll trry later.- Daughter of Scourge Place of no ☆s!

She isn't a rogue. She's a kittypet. She shouldn't be on here. I doesn't say she is a rogue. This should be declined due to the reason. Mysticfur You don' say shut up you say please shut up''' 13:30, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

She was formerly a kittypet, she is currently a rogue  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:34, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

Birdpaw (TC)~Up for approval
Well thsi took a bit to fix and tweak :D but im nto proud of it  Sand  I'm a new level of awesome 23:29, September 25, 2010 (UTC)

This is very good. Blur the shading and the ear pink. Then look here:

http://images3.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20100607173332/catsofclans/images/7/7a/Windpaw.png

forr the way to do apprentice's eyes! -- Mousebrair o r Cloudfrost  15:43, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I did not change the eyes cause i like that style. I haver looked at pictures and some are diffrenent and also the shadings blurred to max and the ear pink i blurred that though

Desaturate ear pink, darken and blur shading-- 23:42, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded  Birdstar  You infected me with mildew? 23:40, September 29, 2010 (UTC)

Comments?  Birdstar  You infected me with mildew? 22:37, October 2, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading, make the ear pink a bit bigger-- 22:52, October 4, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  Birdstar  You infected me with mildew? 21:55, October 5, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading and ear pink some more, then this will be ready-- 03:06, October 8, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded The shading is blurred to max now and so is the earpink  Sand  BOO...Trick or treat 11:47, October 8, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the white transition on the white paw, and darken the shading on the white paw  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:20, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  Sand  BOO...Trick or treat 22:29, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

Petalfur (W) for Approval
Petalfur. The insane warrior. Need I say more? :D- Daughter of Scourge <sup style="font-family:Ariel;color:Red">Place of no ☆s!

I've taken it out of thumbnail for you. Make sure you put it in full-size. Although this is a very good image, it shouldn't be this colour. Make it more of a pink grey. Try #a26161 for a colour. :) -- Mousebrair o r Cloudfrost  15:41, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Will do!- Daughter of Scourge <sup style="font-family:Ariel;color:Red">Place of no ☆s!

Reuploaded: Better?- Daughter of Scourge <sup style="font-family:Ariel;color:Red">Place of no ☆s!

This is way too pink. Her article says pinkish orange. Make her more creamy orange  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:35, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Will do!- Daughter of Scourge <sup style="font-family:Ariel;color:Red">Place of no ☆s!

Repuploaded- Daughter of Scourge <sup style="font-family:Ariel;color:Red">Place of no ☆s!

Can i ask one thing what program do you use?  Sand  I'm a new level of awesome 11:26, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

There's no shading at all, please add a lot  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:28, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

I use gimp, and i will try to add shading. Shading is the one thing I'm not good at.- Daughter of Scourge <sup style="font-family:Ariel;color:Red">Place of no ☆s!

Really? It's not that hard. Select the burn tool, and choose the fuzzy edged round brush. Then, just put shading in places where shading should be (along with muscle lines, the legs farthest from us, ect.) I think Nightshine has a tutorial  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:43, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

I can help you add the shading :) but i use Pixlr  Sand  I'm a new level of awesome 01:11, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Better?- Daughter of Scourge <sup style="font-family:Ariel;color:Red">Place of no ☆s!

I still don't see any shading  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:52, October 3, 2010 (UTC)

I could help you ad them :)  Birdstar  You infected me with mildew? 21:07, October 3, 2010 (UTC)

I did add shading, but my computer isn't letting me upload it. So HELP!!!- Daughter of Scourge <sup style="font-family:Ariel;color:Red">Place of no ☆s!

Strange i tried uploading it with shading it did not work :/ wierd :/  Birdstar  You infected me with mildew? 21:38, October 3, 2010 (UTC)

Try renaming the file and uploading it-- 03:05, October 8, 2010 (UTC)

Breezestorm (W)-for approval
so i withdrew rockey for this little...idiot --bracken-- ~02:09, September 29, 2010 (UTC)

Well this is awesome! Blur the ear pink a bit more. -- Fawny People of Earth! Awesomeness has come online! 09:03, September 29, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a bit more  Birdstar  You infected me with mildew? 17:46, October 3, 2010 (UTC)

Birdpaw, Fawny's comment above says the exact same thing xD Just be aware of that in the future. As for the image, this is beautiful! Lighten the neck shading  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:14, October 3, 2010 (UTC)

I know i dont think he/Or she sorry Bracken got it though XD  Birdstar  You infected me with mildew? 21:08, October 3, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded --bracken-- ~ 15:02, October 8, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the shading more, it he looks gray right now instead of white  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:21, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

DF/Starclan blanks
I saw that in earirler dicussions, you guys had agreed to make StarClan and Dark Forest cat blanks. What happened to that? Did it just die, or are you not doing that?- Daughter of Scourge <sup style="font-family:Ariel;color:Red">Place of no ☆s!

Darkcloud, you've got to understand that we are extremely busy cleaning out and organizing Clans and rogue groups, updating and fixing character articles, and catching up on our images. We'll get to that later. For now, nobody cares about it. If you want, you can make some, but that's not our top priority at the moment.  HA WK FI RE98  21:56, October 3, 2010 (UTC)

Frostwing (E) For Approval
Yay :D Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:00, October 5, 2010 (UTC)


 * D:D:D:D:D:D I see nothing wrong! Maybe make the ear pink a bit lighter. :D I always imagined him as a tabby but I never put that on his page. o.O Mysticfur You don' say shut up you say please shut up 12:23, October 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Lol, I always pictured him a tabby too :) I added stripes, and lightened the ear pink, but I wasn't sure which one I should keep  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:27, October 6, 2010 (UTC)

This looks great! The tabby is really good. I added that to his page. He's blind, right? I don't really see anything wrong.-- 23:33, October 6, 2010 (UTC)

Lightfang (E) - For Approval
Comments?-- 00:45, October 8, 2010 (UTC)

Lovely! Brighten the highlights  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:50, October 8, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded brightened highlights-- 04:50, October 8, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the shading some  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:19, October 8, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded lightened shading-- 02:39, October 9, 2010 (UTC)

Pansyfur (W) For Approval
Hi, thats the image. Pixlr isn't working so i put it up like that. Comments? Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 17:34, October 8, 2010 (UTC)

Um, Clara? You've gotta make a new section for this. I'll do it for you  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:19, October 8, 2010 (UTC)

I uploaded it for you. Blur the ear pink. Darken the shading-- 02:35, October 9, 2010 (UTC)

Short-tail (E) - For Approval
Comments?-- 02:32, October 9, 2010 (UTC)

This is absolutely lovely! I see nothing wrong, but please make the chest slightly lighter, and the tabby stripes on the tail more visible. :D  HA WK FI RE98  15:13, October 9, 2010 (UTC)

Darken head shading. 12:59, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

Catherine (R) - For Approval
Ugh, head shading + ear pink problem! D: But besides that, comments?  HA WK FI RE98  15:38, October 9, 2010 (UTC)

LE GASP! 8D Mysticfur You don' say shut up you say please shut up 17:35, October 9, 2010 (UTC)

This is good! Blur the shading some, and lighten the head shading.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:31, October 9, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, it's a bit messy, and blur it too. Darken the ear pink. Other than that, awesome. 12:58, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Played around with shading and highlights, darkened ear pink, fixed head shading, and fixed any blurred lineart that showed up. :D  HA WK FI RE98  22:24, October 10, 2010 (UTC) ==                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     Rivermoon (Q) For Approval ==

I really like the shading and highlight style on this one :) Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:22, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

This is stunning! The ear pink is a bit dark for me, you may want to lighten it. Other than that, this image is stunning; some of your best work yet! -- Fawny People of Earth! Awesomeness has come online! 09:47, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

great job Night. I see nothing wrong with the image, expect head shading could be darkened. 12:55, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

Serinna (E) - For Approval
I sure have not done one of these in a long time, I told Nightfall I'd come back with a really good one, what do you guys (or gals) think? Moon  Z  05:42, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

This is so good :D Darken the shading on the chest some  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 05:45, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Like that? Moon  Z  05:54, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah. Darken the highlights a smidge, they almost look like white patches.

This is awesome! Blur the face stripes a tad. :) -- Fawny '''People of Earth! Awesomeness has come online! 09:48, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

Grace (E) - For Approval
The shading is awful. :( -- Fawny People of Earth! Awesomeness has come online! 10:24, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is too red. Vampirewave ☺ ♫Happy Halloween! ♫ 19:02, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

The nose is red as well. Make the ear pink and the nose color much more of a subtle reddish-pink. Try desaturating them a lot. And I think you did a great job on the shading :)  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:35, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

Shadow (Ro) - For Approval
- I am really proud of this one. Mysticfur You don' say shut up you say please shut up''' 13:27, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

This is very good :) But you'll have to lighten the shading a lot, his page says he's gray and he looks black. Plus, I can't see the lineart on the face  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:43, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

Graymist (E) - For Approval
Which one? First one's darker 2 is lighter. I couldn't decide. I didn't like the light one so I tried a darker one. *Shruggs* Mysticfur You don' say shut up you say please shut up 13:43, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

Darker one seems to fit his personality and description more. Make the ear pink more reddish and change the eye colour to blue. 14:27, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

His page says green... Vampirewave ☺ ♫Happy Halloween! ♫ 16:35, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

It does? My mistake, I must have been thinking about Dawnfrost. Never mind about that, just change the nose colour and ear pink colour, and the stuff I had listed above. 19:54, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

Make the nose color a darker gray instead of pink. And I like both of them a lot, but I think I like the first one better  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:36, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

Pearltwist (E) - For Approval
Not to proud of this, but it's okay. What do you people think? (Since he was just a pink-gray tom, I wanted to make it look more interesting, tell me if it looks bad) -- Moon  Z   15:27, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

Moonpelt (D) - For Approval
OMG! I can't believe I haven't done this image sooner! I tried a new style for his pelt, tell me what you think, comments? Moon  Z  17:16, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

I liked it the way it used to be. Vampirewave ☺ ♫Happy Halloween! ♫ 17:31, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

I <3 <3 <3 IT!! :D  HA WK FI RE98  19:02, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

OMG, this is beautiful!! The only thing I see is to darken the shading on the white paws. Other than that, this is beautiful!  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:41, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

Stunning, Moonpelt. I see that the shading on the back patch should be lightened, it looks rather red. Darken the shading on the white transistion and there seems to be blurred lineart on the paws. Darken the head shading and fix some lineart around the stomach and tail area. 19:53, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Icestorm, there was nothing wrong with the lineart, anyways, comments? Moon  Z  21:53, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink a bit, and this will be ready  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:57, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

Brindledove (Q) - For Approval
Not my best cat ever, but a try. The earpink and nose pink are different because there are two different pelt colors there. Comments. <font color="Orchid" style="background:Wheat">Hazepaw <font color="Wheat" style="background:Fuchsia"> and <font color="Magenta" style="background:Purple">Birdwing 20:26, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

Not bad! But, to be creative, why don't you smudge the patches all over the place, and the stripes darker? Right now, the patches are just circular blobs with stripes in them. Darken the shading as well.  HA WK FI RE98  22:30, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

Thunder's Rumble (E) - For Approval
I have to say I'm really proud of this one. :D Anyway, about the darkness of the image, he's pitch-black. It's supposed to be really dark. You can still see the lineart, eyes, and ear pink fine. Comments?  HA WK FI RE98  23:07, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

I cant see the line art :| and no my mind is NOT playing tricks on me i have very good eyesight what i do see is the eyes earpink  Sand  BOO...Trick or treat 23:10, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

Strange...I can see it fine, and I have bad vision. :/  HA WK FI RE98  23:12, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

Well, I can see the lineart, but it is difficult. You don't have to make it a lighter color, but maybe doge the haunch, shoulder, tail, and face  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:16, October 10, 2010 (UTC)