Cats of the Clans Wiki talk:Character Art Project

Yellowpool (Q) for approval
Do you think this is okay? I did this because she is currently a queen and she was a queen when she had Brownkit( who is also up for approval ), anyway, i don't think it is over the limit, and I know it looks bad. Clar ris  sa! :)  19:28, May 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the back, apart from that, it's fine Zoe27 08:19, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink should be enlarged.  ddevans96z Science Project... 18:43, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded -I enlargened the ear-pink and blured her back more, better? Clar ris  sa! :)  16:05, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

Center the ear pink more, and blur the shading and highlights  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:42, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:14, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded -I blured the shading and highlights. Is it better? I can't blur it any more. Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 17:59, May 29, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading and make the ear pink more red-- Night s h i n e   R  07:11, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

What colour should I use for ear-pink? Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 08:30, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Just a dark pink-- Night s h i n e   R  05:49, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined-- Night s h i n e   R  22:21, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded -Darkened the ear-pink. How else can I improve it? Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 17:08, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

It's a bit to electric pink now. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  17:16, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Can you give me a colour I could use? I am really stuck with trying to get the right one. Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 16:33, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Use this ear pink chart to get the ear color for a ginger cat. dde vans  96z  17:39, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded -Thanks Ddevans! I finally got my ear-pink right! Is it better? Or is there any othr way I can improve? Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 19:42, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Make nose colour darker and move the left <-- ear pink down. Blur the ear pink-- Night s h i n e   R  02:47, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded-  I tried, is it better? Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 15:40, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink should be moved down more and blur both of the ear pinks-- n i g h t  s h i n e  19:23, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined-- n i g h t  s h i n e  02:33, July 14, 2010 (UTC)

No DON'T decline it! Clara is on holiday, she can't work on it! Leave iit till Friday, because then she will have come back. Zoe27 17:59, July 14, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded -Thanks so much for not declining this! I just got back from holiday so I have moved down the ear-pink, and blurred them more. Does is look any better? Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 16:27, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

Blur highlights epicly -- Nightpaw Bring on the fight!  14:05, July 24, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights, -- Fawny Keep on Smiling :D 15:21, July 26, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded  - I blurred the highlights, comments? Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 10:28, July 27, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a bigger, blur it, and darken the shading  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:50, July 29, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, I'll do that but i don't have enough time right now. Please don't decline it though. Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 11:13, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded -I made the ear-pink bigger. Comments? Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 12:30, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

I think it's fine. Zoe27 20:02, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is still too small, and the nose needs to be the same color as the ear pink. Also, dodge the muzzle  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:36, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

Try making the ear pink go out to the blue on this diagram:  -♜  ðältøñ  ♜- 22:09, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded -I dodged the muzzle and did the ear-pink like the diagram. Thanks for the diagram, Dalton! Comments?

Make the nose the same color as the ear pink, blur the ear pink, and darken the shading  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:51, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

Brookstep (Q) - For Approval
failfailfail. I always imagined Brookstep with darker tabby streaks, when I first suggested a name for her when she was first born on a PT. So, that's how I drew it. Yay, I'm going to get a tablet next week. :D Icefall★  Talk 01:11, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Lucky you. I've been asking for one for a very long time, but still haven't got one. I only have the terrible 5-year-old laptops from my dad's work. As for the image, darken the ear pink, add more stripes in between-- Night s h i n e   R  04:06, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Aww, poor you. :P Although your art is SO good. Icefall★ Talk 15:05, June 27, 2010 (UTC)(boo yah Icestorm here)

Darken the ear pink some more. Add a few smaller stripes on the haunch, tail, and face. Blur all the stripes, they look very rounded and straight right now--  Night s h i n e    ~  18:52, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

They're supposed to look straight.. Icefall★ Talk 19:12, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink, add more face stripes. Add more tail and arm stripes as well.--  Night s h i n e    ~  04:51, July 3, 2010 (UTC)

And her article says she has blue eyes  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 05:33, July 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ♥Ice storm★  00:02, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights-- n i g h t  s h i n e  02:36, July 14, 2010 (UTC)

Actually, I really like it this way. I don't want to blur it, but will if other people think I should. ♥Ice storm★  01:01, July 16, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the streaks more  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:55, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

I actually think the highlights are too concentrated. Πόλη στην  κοιλάδα  17:48, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 15:49, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Goldenshine (MC) - For Approval
I am actually proud of how she turned out. . . Mo    us  et  al  on   !! Here comesSUMMER!   23:05, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

This is great! Thicken the shading on her haunch and darken the arm shading. -- n i g h t  s h i n e  23:22, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

She looks a bit too yellow, make her more golden  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:21, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

I am having trouble finding a way to make her golden. Any suggestions? W   a  t  e  r   bender MouseHRULES!   22:36, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe try darkening and desaturating her  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:57, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:52, July 29, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I failed. ❦✌Mo   us  et  al  on❦✌   !! Andy SchleckSUPER FAN!!!!!    22:45, August 1, 2010 (UTC)

Gorgeous! Blur the ear pink, and I think one of the herb leaves is pink; make it green or brown  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:09, August 3, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 15:50, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Mintbar(A) - For Approval
- I really don't give a crap about the change in DarkClan. Anyway, comments? Echo Guess what! What SHUT UP! XD  19:59, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

This is great! Darken the ear pink a bit-- n i g h t  s h i n e  20:20, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Echo  Guess what! What SHUT UP! XD  20:28, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

Awesome image! Blur the green transition  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:34, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. ♥Ice storm★  02:10, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry but I won't be able to work on this. Please don't decline yet. I will be very inactive for the next year. Echo Guess what! What SHUT UP! XD  21:56, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

Um, if you're going to be gone for a year I don't think we can keep this up...I could take over if you like.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:29, July 21, 2010 (UTC)

Thank you. But I have some good news. I most likely will be more active untill August. :D You can take over Night. Streamtail I miss her so much...  01:52, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Awesome!  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:08, August 4, 2010 (UTC)

Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:21, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Eagleheart (W) - For approval
I'm nervous, my first charart since I left the wiki. How does he look?  HA WK FI RE98  16:26, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

The image is great! I've missed your chararts! Just lighten the thing abit, and make the bg transparent. §₩1ƒ₮¥ Do da Kitteh bop! 16:27, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Aw, thanks! :D But how do you make the background transparent?  HA WK FI RE98  16:30, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Hawkey this is beautiful! Echo Guess what! What SHUT UP! XD  18:59, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded, but it made no difference. I always imagined him as like brown-black color, so i think it's fine. it's impossible to lighten him up. And could someone make the background transparent please/ thanks so much!  HA WK FI RE98  19:18, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

It's fine, it is transparent. Lighten the pelt a bit, I can't see the lineart. Darken the shading. ♥Ice storm★  20:11, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

It's not transparent. I changed my wikia background to grayish, so I can see the white. It's not a huge deal, but yeah.. ★Dalton★ Through the fire and the flames we carry on…  20:52, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Completely redone. Is it better?  HA WK FI RE98  23:33, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

I think it's not dark enough. And the background is transparent now :) ★Dalton★  Through the fire and the flames we carry on…  23:37, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Any better?  HA WK FI RE98  17:18, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and darken the stripes-- n i g h t  s h i n e  07:01, July 15, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I got permission from Hawkey. Darkened the stripes-- n i g h t  s h i n e  17:41, July 15, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a bit. ♥Ice storm★  02:03, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Anything else?  HA WK FI RE98  20:07, July 26, 2010 (UTC)

Run the dodge tool over the entire image a few times, it's a bit too dark  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:15, July 30, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:56, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry about that! Reuploaded. Hawkey I am a Ninja Duck! Fear me!  17:35, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

Comments Before Approval?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:41, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Mintbar (Ki) - For Approval
I'm not that proud, but she turned out okay, not like Echo's epic apprentice and warrior version. ♥Ice storm★  02:24, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

This is very good! Just make the ear pink bigger and blur it really well, and blur where the blue meets the green.  HA WK FI RE98  16:41, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the blue and darken the ear pink, then blur. Echo Guess what! What SHUT UP! XD  17:34, July 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Better? ♥Ice storm★  02:03, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading and blur the ear pink  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:26, July 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ♥Ice storm★  23:43, July 26, 2010 (UTC)

Desaturate the highlights  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:25, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 15:50, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Beechpaw (A) - For Approval
I tried to fix him, but ended up screwing up, so I didn't save it. Can someone please fix him for me? I'm still working on getting my old, not the greatest Pixlr skill back. I'd really appreciate it! Please help! Remember, he's supposed to be light gray. Construction  Worker   Do you need help?  19:52, July 16, 2010 (UTC)

I think i can but i also think this is over the limit  Birdstar  You infected me with mildew? 20:34, July 16, 2010 (UTC)

I appreciate you wanting to help and I have nothing against you, but I'd personally rather have someone with more experience fix him. Construction  Worker   Do you need help?  21:33, July 16, 2010 (UTC)

Nuts, I didn't know there was a new limit. =P. Nightshine, maybe you should decline some of the images that haven't been worked on in several weeks? Idk, just a suggestion. Construction  Worker   Do you need help?  23:33, July 16, 2010 (UTC)

The limit was always there. I hate it too, but yeah. ★Dalton★ Through the fire and the flames we carry on…  23:34, July 16, 2010 (UTC)

Well I guess I could try and help; what is it exactly you want me to fix? And by the way, Birdpaw may not have been on as long, but her (or his) art skill is pretty impressive :)  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:57, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

I knew there'd been a limit, but I thought it was higher. My memory was never great. =P. Well, from what I read, I think he needs his shading blurred and ear pink color changed and blurred. I think that's all. Oh, I didn't think Birdpaw posted any Chararts... Construction  Worker   Do you need help?  11:22, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

I do chararts on warriors wiki and i have had practice so trust me im not a newbie and the reason because i did not post any chararts is because it would be over the limit  Birdstar  You infected me with mildew? 18:17, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

Ok. I'm sorry if I offended you. I didn't mean too. I guess it depends if Nightfall is fixing him. Construction  Worker   Do you need help?  18:50, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

Hm, well, I don't see why anyone should take over. I think the only reasons somebody should take a charart over for another user, is if that user is going away for a long period of time, or it that user is withdrawing the image. The whole point of putting an image up for approval is for the artist himself/herself to do the improvements themselves.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:21, July 22, 2010 (UTC)

Alright...well I've been practicing on some random images in Pixlr, so I think I'm ready now. Construction  Worker   Do you need help?  11:28, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Comments? Construction  Worker   Do you need help?  11:44, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading and highlights  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 06:21, August 1, 2010 (UTC)

Whitewater (W) - For Approval
I know this is over the limit as well, but I really need some constructive criticism and lots of help. I couldn't get the black background to go away, plus I couldn't fuse the yellow and brown colors. I don't know how to make a yellow-brown cat. He looks awful, but I'm ready to take anything you'll throw at me (as long as it's tips and obviously how to improve it =P). Construction  Worker   Do you need help?  22:50, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

I do but it depends on what you use i use pixlr and the head is blurredand use a 9 pencil if you are using piclr never paint it just does not work if you use pencil blur it and eye color  Sand  I'm a new level of awesome 01:10, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

I could help if you like. ♥Ice storm★  03:09, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

Ummmm, I'm sorry Birdpaw, but I don't understand what you said. I can't read something unless it has proper grammer (I'm a grammer freak =P). Sure Ice. Thanks so much! =D Construction   Worker   Do you need help?  10:26, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

The space didn't work 0.0 ok all im saying is i do know how to create a yellow and brown cat all you need is eye color and blurring the brown never use a paint brush use a size 9 pencil then blur it :)  Sand  I'm a new level of awesome 13:01, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

Ok, I think I understand now. I used Paint to make this, (which would explain why it's so screwed up) then used Pixlr to blur it. I'll wait and see how Ice fixes it. Construction  Worker   Do you need help?  21:03, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 18:24, July 30, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but I cannot help, CW. I am now very busy and have no time for it. Please understand. Thank you. ♥Ice storm★  18:52, July 30, 2010 (UTC)

I could help if you want. Shouldn't be too difficult :D Πόλη  στην  κοιλάδα  19:13, July 30, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 15:42, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Birdkit (Ki)~For appoval
Don't like how she turned out this is one of my roleplay characters :| Birdpaw

She looks pretty good :) Darken the shading, blur the white transition on the paw, blur the ear pink, and add some depth to the eyes  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:20, July 21, 2010 (UTC)

What do you mean by depth?  Sand  I'm a new level of awesome 20:31, July 21, 2010 (UTC)

Like, add shading to the eyes  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:41, July 21, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  Sand  I'm a new level of awesome 21:15, July 21, 2010 (UTC)

Hm, it doesn't look like anything was changed  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:17, July 21, 2010 (UTC)

Well i darkened the shading and blurred the white transition and ear pink to the max and added depth to the eyes like you said :|  Sand  I'm a new level of awesome 21:30, July 21, 2010 (UTC)

Try blurring the white transition more  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:31, July 21, 2010 (UTC)

It wint blur anymore :/  Sand  I'm a new level of awesome 14:31, July 26, 2010 (UTC)

Hm, try smudging it instead. Also, darken the shading more  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 18:24, July 30, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:12, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

ah it still wont work i smuged it then it messed up can you help me?  Sand  It's not your fault Texas 17:12, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: How's this?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:37, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

OMG thats awesome :D  Sand  It's not your fault Texas 13:41, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks :3 Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 15:42, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Blazepelt (W) for approval
My first charart in a long time, I had to have help with the eyes, ear pink, and shading because my computer sucks, but yeah. ★dalton | uoʇlɐp★ 20:15, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good! Blur the white on the face more, and blur the shading  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:52, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

The shading won't blur at all, but I'll fix the face right now. ★dalton | uoʇlɐp★ 00:10, July 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried to blur the shading more, but failed, and I blurred the face. ★dalton | uoʇlɐp★ 00:18, July 21, 2010 (UTC)

The face looks better. Try lightening the shading, and also add some to his haunch  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:33, July 21, 2010 (UTC)

Actually, the shading looks fine to me. Just add some on the legs, haunch, as Nightfall said, paws, and chest. ♥Ice storm★  12:23, July 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I tried to lighten the shading, but it didn't work to well, so I undid it :( Added shading. ★dalton | uoʇlɐp★  21:08, July 21, 2010 (UTC)

I was bored, so I redid the whole thing. I think it looks much better now. ★dalton | uoʇlɐp★ 18:39, July 26, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the face a bit. ♥Ice storm★  19:29, July 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Really couldn't blur it that much more, but I tried. ★dalton | uoʇlɐp★ 19:46, July 26, 2010 (UTC)

Try smudging the white on the face this time, instead of just blurring it  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:13, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Well...I tried. Πόλη στην  κοιλάδα  18:04, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Add some shading under the chin, and blur the black transitions  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 15:43, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Failed at blurring paws, added shading on chin. -♜ ðältøñ  ♜- 17:01, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Fawnkit (Ki)- For approval
This one took a LOOONNNGGG time. Comments? §₩1ƒ₮¥ Do da Kitteh bop! 14:41, July 21, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good! Make the spots more fleckish though, they look like big spots right now  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:18, July 21, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 18:58, July 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. §₩1ƒ₮¥ BLAAAHH, Elder dance! 12:00, August 2, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more reddish, and blur the flecks  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:50, August 3, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:57, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. Feel free to post this back up when you are able to keep track of it. This is ready for archiving. 火の毛皮 06:47, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Pansyfur (W) up for approval.
Hi, I put Pansyfur up ages ago, but she was declined, because I didn't have enough time to do her. I blurred the patches like I was told to before, and I'm hoping to get her approved this time, because I have more time on my hands, now that it's the Summer Holidays! I hope I get her approved before I go on Holiday again. Please comment! Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 10:42, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe blur the white spots a little more? Construction  Worker   Do you need help?  11:26, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

And darken the shading  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 18:59, July 30, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:14, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded -Sorry, I didn't have enough time to reupload it before. I blurred the spots more and darkened the shading. Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 12:24, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

I think it's great, just blur the burning on the haunch a bit. Zoe27 20:17, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Smudge the patches, and add shading to them  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:38, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded -added shading to patches and smudged them, blurred the haunch. Comments? Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 20:10, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more reddish, and darken the shading  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 15:43, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Amelia (Q)- For Approval
I like this one. :D -- Fawny Keep on Smiling :D 15:26, July 26, 2010 (UTC)

I do too! The ear pink is kinda hard to see, though ★dalton | uoʇlɐp★  15:35, July 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? -- Fawny Keep on Smiling :D 15:54, July 26, 2010 (UTC)

I'm confused, I thought Amelia was a tortoiseshell and white she-cat? Meh, anyways; darken the shading on the white parts  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 16:57, July 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darken shading on white parts. -- Fawny Keep on Smiling :D 16:22, July 27, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the white parts more, and lighten the ear pink  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 06:40, August 1, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:38, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, away on hols. I'll work on this as soon as I can. -- Fawny Keep on Smiling :D 16:32, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

Frostwing (W) - For Approval
Comments? ★dalton | uoʇlɐp★ 19:48, July 27, 2010 (UTC)

Very nice! I see nothing wrong except for the ear pink. Make it lighter, smaller, and blur it REALLY good.  HA WK FI RE98  19:54, July 27, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Mossstar of FireClan☮ I change my siggie way too often.20:54, July 27, 2010 (UTC)

The shading won't blur anymore, and that's how I do it anyways. For the ear pink, I'll do that in a while. ★dalton | uoʇlɐp★ 21:04, July 27, 2010 (UTC)

Add a highlight to the muzzle  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 06:23, August 1, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Tried to blur ear pink and shading, added highlight. Πόλη στην  κοιλάδα  23:37, August 1, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the legs farthest from us  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:15, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Not sure if it's dark enough, if I need to I'll try it more later. Πόλη στην  κοιλάδα  17:04, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the tail  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 15:44, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened shading on tail. -♜ ðältøñ  ♜- 17:05, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Idea!
You know that some Character arts are harder then others? I was thinking that apprentices could work on teams. On ones like calicos, tortoiseshells and tabbies. Is it a good idea? Mossstar of FireClan☮ I change my siggie way too often.20:25, July 27, 2010 (UTC)

It's a nice idea, but for, say, a tortoiseshell, the only thing different from any other patched cat is that you need to smudge the patches. It'd be more work actually getting the images from one person to another than one person making the whole thing.

I guess it's an idea. But it would be a bit difficult. I guess one user could upload the image up for approval, then different apprentices could take turns reuploading.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:17, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Flare (Ro) - For Approval
Well....let's just say I tried on this one.  HA WK FI RE98  02:30, August 2, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Hawky. I think this is over the limit. Mossstar of FireClan☮ I change my siggie way too often. 11:18, August 2, 2010 (UTC)

You may wanna alter the blank to make his back legs and tail lopsided. -- Nightpaw Bring on the fight!  17:38, August 2, 2010 (UTC)

Nah, I think that would look weird. Besides, he was a rogue before the accident. The hind legs don't really show unless he is sitting down or crouched down.  HA WK FI RE98  17:40, August 3, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the stripes a bit more, and make the eyes a bit more green  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 17:57, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Hawkey I am a Ninja Duck! Fear me!  17:42, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

Comments Before Approval?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 15:44, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Shunji (Ro) For Approval
Yay :3 I'm really proud of this :D Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:52, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

The amber eye doesn't look....amber. I think it looks too orangish. Πόλη στην  κοιλάδα  17:55, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Well, I'm not to sure. I made it redder at first, but then it looked the same color as the pelt, and that looked kind of weird  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 17:57, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 15:45, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Flameshine (W) For Approval
I know this doesn't look much like the image she already has, but this is how I picture her. Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:52, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 15:45, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Crackle (Ro) For Approval
I like this one too :D Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:52, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great! I don't see anything wrong! Beautiful! Mõŏń    ۞   17:49, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

darken the stripes. Sasuke Does it hurt? Heh. Scaredy cat. 17:51, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

They're not really stripes, more of a fur texture. I tried to darken them, but it turned out looking sort of weird. If you still want me to darken them though, I will  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:18, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Oh. My bad. The ear pink isn't really visible, could you define it? User:Icestorm123/Signature 15:44, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Is this any better?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:35, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

Looks good, Night! I'd just say lighten the highlights on the back just a smidge. And when i say smidge, I mean very tiny Tawny is here... 19:31, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Thanks Tawny :) I lightened the highlights a tiny bit more  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:40, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Spottail (Q) For Approval
My first queen and my first tortoiseshell. Epic fail... Πόλη στην  κοιλάδα  17:30, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

She's not that bad! Blur the patches, and darken the tail shading  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 17:45, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Added shading, tried to blurred patches, added nose color, saturated image. Πόλη στην  κοιλάδα  17:57, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Make the nose the same color as the ear pink, and there's a shadow by her tail; erase that  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:45, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I cleaned it up a little bit as well. -♜ ðältøñ  ♜- 21:57, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a tinsy bit smaller, and add some more shading to the legs and underbelly  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:20, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

I'm having a lot of trouble shrinking the ear pink.... -♜ ðältøñ  ♜- 17:06, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Do you know how to use the color picker tool?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:24, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, that's the easiest thing to use. All you have to do is click xD -♜  ðältøñ  ♜- 19:40, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

lol :) Just click the color of the fur around the ear pink, and color around the edges of the ear pink until it's smaller. Blur it, and that should work :)  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:42, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Silverdapple (W) For Approval
Fail, fail, epic FAIL! Here's my cat Silverdapple. Comments? ♫Dovesong-Moonleaf♪ ♫Dove's gentle song♪  19:29, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Looks pretty good. Blur the dapples, and lighten the shading then make it wider. -♜ ðältøñ  ♜-

Reuploaded Better? ♫Dovesong-Moonleaf♪ ♫Dove's gentle song♪  21:05, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more reddish, and the dapples look way to much like spots, make them bigger and more irregular  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:38, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I redid the image because this failed. Better? ♫Dovesong-Moonleaf♪ ♫Dove's gentle song♪   13:32, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

They still look too much like spots, make them bigger. Blur the shading more, and desaturate the ear pink  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 15:46, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Busy
Starting August 18, if I have charart up for approval and I don't edit for a week or so, don't decline it because I will be very busy with school and homework and play practice. ♫Dovesong-Moonleaf♪ ♫Dove's gentle song♪   11:38, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

Alrighty, I'll save your chararts for ya! :D I will make sure nobody declines them. Hawkey I am a Ninja Duck! Fear me!  17:44, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

Stormsurge (W) For Approval
Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:40, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

Rainfall (W) For Approval
Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:40, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

Watermist (W) For Approval
Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:40, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

Sundapple (W) For Approval
Like it? Moon  Z  04:21, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

Ooh yeah! Define the ear pink a bit, and darken the tail shading  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:42, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

Bronzepelt (W) - For Approval
Yup. Mah first charart for this wiki. Criticism? Tawny is here... 19:05, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

It's very good, but she looks too golden. Her article describes her as orange-ginger  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:19, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Well, I RP her, and that's supposed to be her pelt color, just couldn't get the right gist of the coloring, like maybe golden-yellow. Sorry about that, Night ;) Tawny is here... 19:29, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Oh okay. Define the flecks more, and make the ear pink more reddish  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:41, August 15, 2010 (UTC)