Cats of the Clans Wiki talk:Character Art Project

Pansyfur (W) for approval
Here she is! What do you think? Please comment! Clar ris  sa! :)  09:42, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

maybe add some shadin to Pansyfur?pebble2pineow 15:03, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the boundaries between brown and white, and add shading, but other than that, it looks pretty good.  Blaze -Pelt   Huzzah  15:04, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading, blur white transitions, make pupils bigger and add white and fix the ear pink. Maybe add more white onto it because she is "brown and white" this just looks brown with white markings.-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   17:56, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded -I blured the white transitions,shaded,fixed the ear pink and made the pupils bigger. Better? Clar ris  sa! :)  18:47, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Look at the other approved images to see what the ear pink should look like. Darken the shading more and blur the white transitions more-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   00:40, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded -I blured the white transition a little bit more and I fixed the ear pink,I did it the way the approved images are. Clar ris  sa! :)  08:01, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading and highlights. Mist cloud  10:40, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading and highlights, also if Pansyfur is brown and white add some large white patches. :) Very good Clara! Γǻώή  ςτόŗm  18:02, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Where should I put the patches? Clar ris  sa! :)  10:33, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

You wanna put it everywhere also highlights aren't neccesary she only has to put them if she wants to but you do have to put shading. Mo onp elt  ₪   19:04, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded - I put a few spots in. Does it look nicer or should i get rid of them? Clar ris  sa! :)  17:41, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

I think its better. CBA? Zoe27 18:58, May 12, 2010 (UTC)

'''This is not in the CBA stage. Zoe, you can not CBA or Approve images unless you are a senior warrior. Understood? Good.''' All I see is that the image needs shading and highlights. Quailflight 09:52, May 13, 2010 (UTC)

I've already added highlights, should I make them larger? Clar ris  sa! :)  09:40, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

Add or darken the shading. -- Nighty Lohan's PRE-DEPO PARTAYYY! 12:49, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded -I darkened the shading, better? Clar ris  sa! :)  16:17, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more reddish, and blur all of the white patches  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:33, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:18, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded -I darkened the ear-pink and blurred the shading. Better? Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 07:34, May 29, 2010 (UTC)

Darken shading and add shading to white patches-- Night s h i n e   R  05:54, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined-- Night s h i n e   R  22:21, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded -I added more shading and added shading to the white atches. Better? Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 17:04, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Add/darken the shading to the white patches a lot more. Blur them as well-- Night s h i n e   R  04:38, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, but I honestly can't blur the white patches anymore. Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 16:31, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Shineheart (Ki) For Approval
I like her. Constructments? --Mo onp elt  ₪   17:25, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

It looks good. Maybe blur the patches some more. Raven flight 92 23:50, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? Mo onp elt  ₪   02:05, May 13, 2010 (UTC)

Desaturate the patches a bit  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:38, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

??? <font color="#330066">Mo <font color="#CC6600">on 02:58, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Desaturate means make it less bright. I think the tool is a sponge in pixlr, I don't know if it's on GIMP  ddevans96z Goodbye Middle School! 03:01, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

I think Nightfall would have sid darken it if she wanted me to darken it. I think duserate means to makea color more rich color. <font color="#330066">Mo <font color="#CC6600">on 01:54, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

Desaturate doesn't mean "darken," it means take the color out. Like if you have a dark color, if you desaturate it enough, it turns into a dark gray. "Saturation" is making a color more rich.  ddevans96z Goodbye Middle School! 17:00, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

Thats what I said. You said dursurate is make it less bright (darken). <font color="#330066">Mo <font color="#CC6600">on 13:37, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

"Less Bright" and "Darker are two different things, and you didn't say that, you reversed it.  ddevans96z Goodbye Middle School! 15:21, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

Please work in this or it will be declined-- Night s h i n e   R  22:21, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Im still confused on what to do! :? <font color="#009900"><font color="#00FF00">  M  o  o  n  p  e  l  t   1786  22:44, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, what do you use? (Pixlr or GIMP) dde vans  96z  22:51, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

I use GIMP. The patches need to be blurred a lot more. Make the pupil bigger and rounder-- Night s h i n e   R  23:10, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

I use GIMP for pelt coloring and Pixlr for shading. <font color="#009900"><font color="#00FF00">  M  o  o  n  p  e  l  t   1786  23:17, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, on Pixlr, take the sponge tool, make sure the drop down box up top says desaturate and the strength is 20-30. Then run it over all the yellowish parts. Hope this helps. dde vans  96z  23:37, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ohh it mean make less bright. Like dull it some. Okay. Better? <font color="#009900"><font color="#00FF00">  M  o  o  n  p  e  l  t   1786  15:13, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Yellowpool (Q) for approval
Do you think this is okay? I did this because she is currently a queen and she was a queen when she had Brownkit(who is also up for approval), anyway, i don't think it is over the limit, and I know it looks bad. Clar ris  sa! :)  19:28, May 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the back, apart from that, it's fine <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 08:19, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink should be enlarged.  ddevans96z Science Project... 18:43, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded -I enlargened the ear-pink and blured her back more, better? Clar ris  sa! :)  16:05, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

Center the ear pink more, and blur the shading and highlights  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:42, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:14, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded -I blured the shading and highlights. Is it better? I can't blur it any more. Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 17:59, May 29, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading and make the ear pink more red-- Night s h i n e   R  07:11, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

What colour should I use for ear-pink? Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 08:30, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Just a dark pink-- Night s h i n e   R  05:49, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined-- Night s h i n e   R  22:21, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded -Darkened the ear-pink. How else can I improve it? Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 17:08, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

It's a bit to electric pink now. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  17:16, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Can you give me a colour I could use? I am really stuck with trying to get the right one. Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 16:33, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Icekit (I) - For Approval
Here she is! Comments? I think she's pretty good. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">ICEY Wait, that's not how you spell Icy! 23:47, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

I love it! But she needs white spots, like Snowstorm. Other wise, it looks awesome! Lightning that Burns Sky Unattractive... 02:59, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks, Snow! I added white spots. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">ICEY Wait, that's not how you spell Icy! 12:04, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe add some to her legs? You don't have to if you don't want too. :) Lightning that Burns Sky Unattractive... 15:06, May 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:blue; border:2px solid; -mox-border-raiuds: 1em;color:white;">Midnighttail I will serve SkyClan with every breath I can take 12:01, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Make the pupils rounder.-- Night s h i n e   R  22:21, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Beechpaw (A) - For Approval
My first apprentice! Comments? CW -  Always workin'!  14:24, May 29, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights more and the ear pink. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">ICEY Wait, that's not how you spell Icy! 14:25, May 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Comments? CW -  Always workin'!  16:29, May 29, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink looks a little bit crooked.  ddevans96z Goodbye Middle School! 16:47, May 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Comments? CW -  Always workin'!  19:24, May 29, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading, make the ear pink more red and blur it-- Night s h i n e   R  07:13, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Partially Reuploaded. I changed the ear pink and blurred it, but I'm really bad at darkening the shading. Can someone do it for me? That'd be a huge help. Remember, he's supposed to be light gray. Construction  Worker  Beechpaw for approval! Please comment! 11:17, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

All you have to do is run the burn tool where the shading is and blur. It's like giving it a second coat of paint. Quailflight 00:53, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

I know, but I always screw up. Would someone mind doing it for me please? Construction  Worker   Do you need help?  21:47, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

I will, but if I screw it up, I won't upload it. dde vans  96z  21:57, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Ok, thanks! Let me know too if you screw up. Construction  Worker   Do you need help?  22:47, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

I darkened it, but it wouldn't blur :( revert it if you want, I think mine fails dde  vans  96z  00:56, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

CW: Want me to help you? I could fix it.  Brook step   Not "paw"  01:20, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

It's ok Dalton. Sure Echo, that'd be great! =) Construction   Worker   Do you need help?  20:04, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Better?  Brook step   Not "paw"  03:04, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the back shading. Icefall Icy Winds 12:15, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink-- Night s h i n e   R  22:21, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

It's good, but darken the ear-pink a tad more Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 16:35, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Spiderstep - Warrior (For Approval)
Here he is. He's back and better than ever! GIMP is screwing up with the blur tool, so if anyone can help, I'd appreciate it. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Crimson;">Nightwhisker Now... Nightkit! 21:20, May 29, 2010 (UTC)

I can try, if you want. Other than that, it looks good.  ddevans96z Goodbye Middle School! 21:58, May 29, 2010 (UTC)\

OK, thanks. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:black;">Who am I? Nighty98 21:59, May 29, 2010 (UTC)

Nighty said I could help, so yeah, I tried. What do you think? dde vans  96z  14:44, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading and ear pink-- Night s h i n e   R  06:02, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Tried to blur, the shading and right ear didn't wan't to. Nighty, tell me if your blur tool works again, okay? dde vans  96z  16:11, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading and this should be good-- Night s h i n e   R  05:00, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I don't know if I blurred enough, my computer's being screwy. :( dde  vans  96z  20:23, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

It's been 6 days, and no comments, can someone please comment? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:black;">Who am I? Nighty98 23:29, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading more-- Night s h i n e   R  22:21, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Troutleap - For Approval
He came out more worse than I thought. -shudders- Probably my most fail of all my Chararts. Comments? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:blue; border:2px solid; -mox-border-raiuds: 1em;color:white;">Midnighttail I will serve SkyClan with every breath I can take 18:42, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

It doesn't look that bad. maybe blur the earpink a little more?  ddevans96z Goodbye Middle School!

He's great! I wish he will join Cloverheart one day... any way do what Dalton said and fix the eyes. 01:40, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink is fine, it's blurred enough. Do you mean the inside of the ear? That'll work. And Echo, he will someday. :) What do you mean by, 'fix the eyes'? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:blue; border:2px solid; -mox-border-raiuds: 1em;color:white;">Midnighttail I will serve SkyClan with every breath I can take 20:39, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Left eye's pupil looks weird.  Brook paw   The truth  21:06, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great! Darken the highlight on the chest just a tinsy bit; it kind of gives the impression that he has a white chest  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:46, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Darkened chest. Ice fall 20:26, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Comments? Icefall Icy Winds 12:09, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Add stripes to his left forearm. Darken chest highlight-- Night s h i n e   R  22:21, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blazepelt - For Approval
Nighty98 made this for me when I first came here and she said I could put it up for approval and edit it if needed. Comments? dde vans  96z  22:12, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a pink colour, not white. Make the white face smaller, so that it ends at his chin. Thicken and blur the shading, make the highlights bigger-- Night s h i n e   R  07:14, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined-- Night s h i n e   R  22:21, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

My apologies for not having time to work on my chararts. :( i'll try to get this back up tonight dde  vans  96z  14:15, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Crookedpaw (A) For Approval
Yay :3 I like how he turned out  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 16:39, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Make the two back paws cream. <font color="#009900">Mo <font color="#00FF00">onp <font color="#009900">elt <font color="#00FF00">TM 17:12, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure that Icy based Crookedpaw's description entirely off of Crookedstar, who has cream only on on his front paws. However, I'll change it if Icy says otherwise  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 17:15, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, I did. But he doesn't need cream back paws. He's really good! Just darken the tail shading some. Ice fall 20:24, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Thanks :) Darkened tail shading  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 07:33, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

How did you do those awesome stripes? <3 Comments before approval? Ice fall 21:24, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry but can ou blur the stripes some more? They look a bit sharp. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  09:04, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

I really like them that way, it's how I always pictured Crookedpaw with a apprentice image. Ice fall 12:14, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, they do look sharp. Almost like they aren't blurred at all. Darken the ear pink-- Night s h i n e   R  05:10, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Rainpaw (RC) (Ki) - For Approval
Here she is. I think I went fail on the white splash. Comments? Ice fall 23:19, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Comments? Icefall Icy Winds 12:04, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink and darken the shading. Also can you make his eye pupis a little smaller they look huge! LOL Nice job! <font color="#009900">Mo <font color="#00FF00">onp <font color="#009900">elt <font color="#00FF00">TM 02:45, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Icefall Icy Winds 21:37, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Make the eye white bigger. Make the pupils rounder. The stripes look strange-- Night s h i n e   R  04:40, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

I think their to straight. Make the white patch whiter. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  15:18, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Smokepaw (A)- For Approval
Γǻώή ςτόŗm  16:48, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten his pelt a lot and darken his paws. Ice fall 16:51, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink-- Night s h i n e   R  18:05, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? Γǻώή ςτόŗm  15:36, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

I fixed the signature, and for the image, the ear pink looks a little small. But then, I fail at chararts xD dde  vans  96z  16:57, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Elmopaw (A) For Approval
He's wierd looking.... Comments? --<font color="#009900">Mo <font color="#00FF00">onp <font color="#009900">elt <font color="#00FF00">TM 18:56, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Ah...Elmopaw <3. His nose needs to be bigger and black. 火の毛皮 19:01, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? <font color="#009900">Mo <font color="#00FF00">onp <font color="#009900">elt <font color="#00FF00">TM 03:12, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Blur ear pink-- Night s h i n e   R  22:21, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? <font color="#009900"><font color="#00FF00">  M  o  o  n  p  e  l  t   1786  23:14, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Add eye colour. Make his nose red-- Night s h i n e   R  20:14, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Read the description it says beady black pupils. Also Elmo doesn't have an eye color. And FirePelt said up above to make the nose black and this is his character. <font color="#009900"><font color="#00FF00">  M  o  o  n  p  e  l  t   1786  20:34, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

His eyes are white right now. They should be all black or a dark gray-- Night s h i n e   R  04:41, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Doodlepencil (W) For Approval
Comments? <font color="#009900">Mo <font color="#00FF00">onp <font color="#009900">elt <font color="#00FF00">TM 18:59, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Amazing. Darken and blur the shading some. Ice fall 19:57, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? (Can't really blur it anymore) <font color="#009900">Mo <font color="#00FF00">onp <font color="#009900">elt <font color="#00FF00">TM 03:13, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

The image is great! But we have a problem. No one rps Doodle....  Brook step   Not "paw"  03:18, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

On I thought somebody adopted him and didn't change the name to theirs..... <font color="#009900">Mo <font color="#00FF00">onp <font color="#009900">elt <font color="#00FF00">TM 03:43, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

He doesn't? I could, if he needs a roleplayer. dde vans  96z  05:47, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Rosepetal (W)-For Approval
Sorry but I can't blur the shading anymore. Comments? <font color="#009900">Mo <font color="#00FF00">onp <font color="#009900">elt <font color="#00FF00">TM 17:29, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry Moonpelt but I have this reserved. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  17:45, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

I put this up right after I made the page today. Also you couldn't have reserved it on June 8th because I made it today, June 9th. <font color="#009900">Mo <font color="#00FF00">onp <font color="#009900">elt <font color="#00FF00">TM 19:55, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

I meant June 9th, my timetables are mixed up. I saw you make the page and thought it would be a good cat to make. THen I reserved it thinking it was June 8th. Anyway, you would still have had to revsrved it, which you haven't. Γǻώή  ςτόŗm  11:43, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

On this site you don't have to reserve the cats. I aways just put them up and nobody tells me to reserve it. <font color="#009900">Mo <font color="#00FF00">onp <font color="#009900">elt <font color="#00FF00">TM 14:29, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Seeing as I'm in a good mood today, you can do Rosepetal. You should reserve cats, as someone might want to do them. @Image: Do you want me to blur it for you? ;) Γǻώή  ςτόŗm  15:25, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

You can try.. I don't know I used the best bluring tool I know of and it won't make a huge difference. Do you want me to roleplay another cat thats the same color pelt? Thankz! :) <font color="#009900">Mo <font color="#00FF00">onp <font color="#009900">elt <font color="#00FF00">TM 21:20, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

I'll try. I have my ways. xD And I'll just find another cat to do. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  11:56, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

I've tried on Pixlr but the only way I can blur it properly is to make the image again. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  11:25, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

It doesn't need bluring that bad. <font color="#009900"><font color="#00FF00">  M  o  o  n  p  e  l  t   1786  20:08, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

The back shading needs to be blurred a lot-- Night s h i n e   R  04:42, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Mystic Blanks For Approval
Like them? Comments?

<font color="#009900"><font color="#00FF00">  M  o  o  n  p  e  l  t   1786  00:38, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

The things on the head should be the same for all four. dde vans  96z  01:31, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry... Better? <font color="#009900"><font color="#00FF00">  M  o  o  n  p  e  l  t   1786  02:11, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

What is on their heads?-- Night s h i n e   R  05:11, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

She got that from me- they're like headbands. I guess the idea just popped into my head for some reason. But remember, Moonpelt, Mystics were all med. cats. Maybe give them some herbs? Mo   us    et    al    on    !!   14:49, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

I was going to change the med. cat blanks but I wasn't sure. <font color="#009900"><font color="#00FF00">  M  o  o  n  p  e  l  t   1786  21:38, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I thought I might try giving each one a different herb... LOL... Comments? <font color="#009900"><font color="#00FF00">  M  o  o  n  p  e  l  t   1786  22:20, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

They look fine to me. Mo   us    et    al    on    !!   22:10, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

They should all have the same herbs. The thing on their heads is too rectangular-- Night s h i n e   R  04:43, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Hawkflight (W) For Approval
I like this one! :D Comments? <font color="#009900"><font color="#00FF00">  M  o  o  n  p  e  l  t   1786  00:59, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

I like it! Blur the shading some more and add some to the underside of the belly. Lighten the ear pink. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  11:17, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? <font color="#009900"><font color="#00FF00">  M  o  o  n  p  e  l  t   1786  17:46, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink and chest shading-- Night s h i n e   R  04:44, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

There wouldn't be chest shading. The light source is coming from the right. <font color="#009900"><font color="#00FF00">  M  o  o  n  p  e  l  t   1786  14:46, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Darkfrost (W) - For Approval
Comments?-- Night s h i n e   R  05:12, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Great! Just, the highlights look a bit wierd to me. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:green; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">ँঁઁଁఁँঁઁଁఁ ˚, ˳˚, ˳˚, ˳˚, ˳ 13:18, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights look fine to me. I see nothing wrong with this amazing peice of art, Nightshine. Icefall Icy Winds 13:27, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

I said they looked wierd to ME. IF you think they're fine, OK, you are the more experienced out of us. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:green; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">ँঁઁଁఁँঁઁଁఁ ˚, ˳˚, ˳˚, ˳˚, ˳ 13:32, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

The only thing I see; is that the white on the paws should be extended and blurred  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:25, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Smallstorm (W) - For Approval
Comments?-- Night s h i n e   R  05:12, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

It looks great, Night! All I see is you need to blur the leg dark thingy transition a bit more. But that's just me. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:green; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">ँঁઁଁఁँঁઁଁఁ ˚, ˳˚, ˳˚, ˳˚, ˳ 13:16, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred dark gray transitions-- Night s h i n e   R  22:21, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Comments Before Approval?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:23, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Muse Blanks- For Approval
They are all female because Mousetalon is female. Well, I altered the deputy blanks and re-did the tails. Comments? Mo   us    et    al    on    !!   14:52, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

The tails look weird on the longhairs. dde vans  96z  22:53, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, the lineart goes thick-thin etc. make it fluffier as well. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  10:55, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' Mo    us    et    al    on    !!   20:42, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, what's a muse? xD Batwing  |  Dovefeather  19:49, June 14, 2010 (UTC)!

A member of the Council of Light and Prophecy. dde vans  96z  19:52, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

LOL Blue. So, anything else? Mo   us    et    al    on    !!   22:09, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

The tail line art should be thickened. There are strange pixels jutting out of the back left paw. The front paws don't look natural at all. What is on their heads?-- Night s h i n e   R  04:36, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Nightshine, these were the deputy blanks before she changed them. And she didn't change the paws at all. She erased the back right so she can put the tail there but nothing else. <font color="#009900"><font color="#00FF00">  M  o  o  n  p  e  l  t   1786  14:45, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

The paws do look pretty odd though-- Night s h i n e   R  01:56, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

I don't get what your saying. The paws look fine to me. dde vans  96z  03:46, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

The two front paws don't look like paws. The back paw has a huge rectangular pixel jutting out of the top. -- Night s h i n e   R  21:06, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Shadepaw (A) For Approval
Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:29, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great! I see nothing wrong-- Night s h i n e   R  02:35, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Mooneyes (W) For Approval
Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:42, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Amazing. I see nothing wrong-- Night s h i n e   R  02:35, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Rainpaw (A) For Approval
I wasn't sure which one to use...I'm quite fond of both :3 Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:25, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

I like the right one better, but they are both awesome. dde vans  96z  21:31, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

I like the second one better. Does this mean I'll need to re-do my image of Rainkit? Icefall Icy Winds 21:32, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Wait...Icy's is light gray, and this is just gray...I'm confused dde vans  96z  21:38, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Her description here describes her as "silver and black" I didn't know if that meant silver with black tabby stripes; or mottled silver and black. So I just did both  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:47, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Snowstripe- For Approval
I'm on a white cat spree! So, comments? Mo   us  et  al  on   !! <font color="#7a009a">Here comesSUMMER!   22:51, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great! You forgot the ear pink though-- Night s h i n e   R  04:35, June 15, 2010 (UTC)