Cats of the Clans Wiki talk:Character Art Project

Thistleflame (W) For Approval


Comments?The gost,12:37,june 28,2011.

Reuploaded.08:53,4 August,2011.(UTC)

Brighten the highlights on his shoulder and face, to even out the brightness of the one on his haunch  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 05:11, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:14, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.The changes aren't showing yet.The gost,09:13,14 August ,201.(UTC)

Reuploaded.14:17,august 15,2011.(UTC)

Blur the highlights  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:45, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink smaller  England  Flying Mint Bunny 17:23, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

In my opinion, the ear pink looks okay... The highlight on the shoulder looks really bright compared to the other ones.... either lighten the others or darken that one? It might just be my screen though You know my rattata...? The top percentage of rattata 18:00, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on the tail looks rough, blur it out some. Moon 03:18, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on the front shoulder looks oddly placed. Venomsplash 01:07, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.The Gost Pazuzu ,the greatest villain ever! 20:14, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Mudheart (W) For Approval
The gost,13:07,July 26,2011.(UTC)

The shading and highlights are a bit messy, blur them both. Add eye white as well  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:56, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

Hey, is it okay if i have mine back :/ Yes, it is true I was on this page but i usually only swoop in for the Blanks... I just want to get done with those. So can i please? If you want to keep them its fine, also, the shading+highlights are pretty messy, as Nightfall said. Nightfall, i see eye white on there XD So i herd... YOU LIEK MUDKIPS????17:11, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, Gost I think you should let Foxclaw have the charart back since it was her's to begin with.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:46, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Can i also have Foxfire back, too? I did most of the work but i don't want to be unfair D: So i herd... YOU LIEK MUDKIPS????18:04, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Foxfire's image is on her article already  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:23, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry,but i want to keep this.And Nightfall,please give me the original grey and brown color,and how is Foxfire's image approved?14:11,august 09,2011.(UTC)

Fine. Foxfire's image is on her page. So i herd... YOU LIEK MUDKIPS????15:09, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Wait a minute though, I think Fox has a right to this image, she's the one who did it  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 15:58, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not sure whats going to happen, but Nightfall, can you give me a heads-up on how more images i need to be a Warrior on CAP? You know my rattata...? The top percentage of rattata 16:30, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Let's see, Foxfire counts for both you and Gost, and then you've got Mudkip on CBA, so one more  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky!

Fine,then I let you.20:04,august 04,2011.(UTC)

Thanks gost :) There are plenty of other images on this wiki that need to be done, if you go to the reservation table, you'll find a link to a whole list  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 17:09, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Sorry Gost, but you could do Foxfire as a queen once she gets there, i'll let you do that if you want to You know my rattata...? The top percentage of rattata 19:25, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

That's a good idea :) Blur the shading a lot  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 17:41, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blurred it to the max You know my rattata...? The top percentage of rattata 01:46, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

I think you should try lightening the shading some  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:56, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:45, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - You know my rattata...? The top percentage of rattata 18:04, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

This is really good :) I'd blur the transition a bit though. <font color="white" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Zoeyy <font color="black" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:hotpink">My Talkpage!!! 10:36, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

? <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="6" color="blue" > Beware the Foxkip! <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="gray"> The Foxkip are coming, the Foxkip are coming! 00:56, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Oh and can you guys hold this image? Just look at the bottom of the page for a while. Thanks. <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="6" color="blue" > Beware the Foxkip! <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="gray"> The Foxkip are coming, the Foxkip are coming! 08:19, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Whitethroat (W) For Approval
Comments?The gost,09:38,21 July,2011.(UTC)

Blur the shading  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:56, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.10:11,August 2,2011.(UTC)

This is realy good! I'd blur the hghlights a little though. <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:violet">Gossip Queen!!! 13:08, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.18:07,august 9,2011.(UTC)

Make the ear-pink a bit smaller  England  Flying Mint Bunny 16:23, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.12:43,august 16,2011.(UTC)

Darken the shading on the white and blur the ear pink  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:38, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 13:46, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Try smoothing out the white transition, it's a bit sloppily blurred  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:46, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a little, it looks pitch black... <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="5" color="purple" >You know my rattata...? <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="orange">The top percentage of rattata 18:05, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.22:09,august 21,2011.(UTC)

I can't see any improvements...CBA? <font color="white" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Zoeyy <font color="black" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:hotpink">My Talkpage!!! 10:37, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry Zoe, but only project leads (the leader, the deputy, and the senior warriors) may CBA images. I still think the white transition is a bit sloppy, use the smudge tool to sort of straighten it out  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:04, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, what Nightfall said Venomsplash 01:08, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Silverpaw(TC) (A)-For approval


Can somebody help me fix this? I tried but i couldn't :/ Otherwise, i love this <3 <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="5" color="gray" > So i herd... <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="darkblue">YOU LIEK MUDKIPS???? 18:42, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

I tried i think i messed up the lineart a little bit tho think you can fix that ?

Blur the stripes a lot, add ear pink, and the eyes look awfully strange; look at an approved apprentice image to see how the pupils and eye white could be arranged  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:23, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry guys, this one's the wrong file. All my files are on my mother's laptop so can you wait a little bit? <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="5" color="gray" > So i herd... <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="darkblue">YOU LIEK MUDKIPS???? 15:22, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Sure!  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 15:59, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry Fox, but it's been a little over a week. Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:46, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, i'm back at my Mom's. Can someone fix the waste? I don't know how to do it D: Thanks for trying Pebble, but i dont know how to get the lineart fixed.... <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="5" color="purple" > You know my rattata...? <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="orange">The top percentage of rattata 18:09, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

I will help you!The gost,20:55,august 23,2011.(UTC)

Thanks! <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="5" color="purple" > Eevee <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="gray">I love dem! 01:07, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

What is the white on her tail? -Sagestorm70 01:32, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.The Gost Pazuzu ,the greatest villain ever! 06:42, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Shading is too dark, there is a circle on her chest, isn't she a tabby? Tabbies dont have circles. Venomsplash 01:08, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

.-. come on can i have the original image back? i just wanted someone to fix the linart, not redo it .-. it took me a long time ot do this <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="6" color="blue" > Beware the Foxkip! <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="gray"> The Foxkip are coming, the Foxkip are coming! 21:12, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Eveningpaw(A)-For approval
a little dark...? --bracken-- ~ 19:02, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Not too dark, the white on her just needs to be lightened. And add the blue-gray flecks as well  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:55, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

The blue gray flecks are supposed to be in the eye but yea I added them in I'll fix the white a little later --bracken-- ~ 02:09, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

Can I take over this? 06:40, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

lol i was just gonna upload but yea go ahead idont mind

Adeline(Ro)-For approval


The gost,pazuzu,10:05,august 10,2011.(UTC)

Blur the brown and white transition  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 16:27, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.14:45,11 August,2011.(UTC)

Blur the ear pink slightly, <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:violet">Gossip Queen!!! 18:11, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blured to max.10:36,august 14,2011.(UTC)

Reuploaded.I redid it.19:32,August 19,2011.(UTC)

This looks beautiful! Blur the white transition, and perhaps darken the highlight on her shoulder just a little  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 16:15, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.19:58,August 20,2011.(UTC)

Pretty! I would just smudge the creamish parts, as the chest is the only thing smudged. <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="5" color="purple" > You know my rattata...? <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="orange">The top percentage of rattata 18:10, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.The Gost Pazuzu ,the greatest villain ever! 22:39, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Lol, I like the eyes. Blur the shading  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:02, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Tweek weak
When will tweek weak will begun?The gost,roxi,11:28,august 13,2011.(UTC)

By the way,i wanna know if I can be a warrior,because I do have 3 images.11:29,August 13,2011.(UTC)

Well, we already had tweak week; there really aren't any other images that need tweaking at this moment. Once you get either Adeline's, Willowtail's, Thistleflame's, or Frostwind's image approved, then I'll add you in as a warrior. The thing about Shaderiver and Foxfire was that you didn't really 'do' the images, you just finished them for the artists. That doesn't necessarily count to me, the only images that I would count up to becoming a warrior were the ones you actually made yourself  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:54, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Ohhh...I've done 3 images too! (Skypaw(A), Cloudflower(W) and Yellowpool(E)), I also helped withsome of Clara's images. Can I be a warrior too? <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:violet">Gossip Queen!!! 15:08, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Yep, congrats :)  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:44, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! :D <font color="white" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Zoeyy <font color="black" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:hotpink">My Talkpage!!! 15:19, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Can I be a warrior too?I've Snowy's rogue image,Abby as a kit,Frostwind as a warrior,Minpaw as a apprentice. 19:26, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

I know, I've added you a few days ago ;)  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 16:14, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Oakclaw (W)- For Approval
Oakclaw

Tigerfur of Bloodclan 21:31, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur and smudge the patches a little :) <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:violet">Gossip Queen!!! 10:26, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Blurred and smudged patches Tigerfur of Bloodclan 16:08, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken the shading  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:21, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

The changes aren't showing.May I help you?The gost,17:05,august 15,2011.(UTC)

Reuploaded- The changes should show now :) Tigerfur of Bloodclan 15:58, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

I sort of recommend redoing this, the white on his fur should be a very pale gray, not straight white. First just fill in the fur with a very pale gray, then use a softer edged brush for the shading  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:42, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:02, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Can I take over this?The Gost Pazuzu ,the greatest villain ever! 08:36, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

There is yellow on his chest, and a big blob of gray on his cheek. If the gray is shading, blur it. Yes, You need to blur the shading. Alot. LOL :3 Venomsplash 01:10, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Go ahead and take over gost! :) Tigerfur of Bloodclan 03:37, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

!Darkangel ~ For Approval

 * [[File:Darkangel.warrior.png]]- UGH I hate this! >.> [[File:Anger.gif]]  M e e p!  16:42, August 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * It's quite good actually :) Blur the highlights and white transition more though, <font color="white" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Zoeyy <font color="black" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:hotpink">My Talkpage!!! 18:09, August 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * Can I take over this?The gost,19:52,august 20,2011.(UTC)
 * Reuploaded No. :|  M e e p!  01:15, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

The only thing I would do is lighten the white some, it looks a bit gray  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 15:35, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blueclaw(A)-For Approval
I'm going to need a LOT of help with this... <font color="white" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Zoeyy <font color="black" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:hotpink">My Talkpage!!! 15:18, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

The shading and highlights are done nicely, it's just the white spots. Make them less circular, and more irregular  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:40, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Could someone help me? I've been trying all day. <font color="white" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Zoeyy <font color="black" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:hotpink">My Talkpage!!! 20:47, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Sure :)  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:56, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: The spots aren't as crisp as I was trying to make them...but I think this is better  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:10, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Looks like snow :D, maybe blur the ear-pink more  England  Flying Mint Bunny 17:26, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

 Reuploaded- Thanks! I blurred the ear-pink a little :) <font color="white" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Zoeyy <font color="black" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:hotpink">My Talkpage!!! 19:22, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

So...improvements? 86.135.44.121 10:01, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading under his neck, and blur the ear pink more. Then he should be ready :)  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:58, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

 Reuploaded-  Blurred the ear-pink a LOT, and darkened the shading under his neck :) <font color="white" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Zoeyy <font color="black" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:hotpink">My Talkpage!!! 12:14, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Just make the shading under his next a TEENY bit more :3 Venomsplash 01:11, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Hollybreeze(W)-for Approval


Can someone help with this? She's come out pinkish and I'm not sure what earpink to use. Thanks, <font color="white" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Zoeyy <font color="black" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:hotpink">My Talkpage!!! 16:06, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Could I help you?The gost,20:50,16 August,2011.(UTC)

Reuploaded.How is this? 11:04, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks :) <font color="white" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Zoeyy <font color="black" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:hotpink">My Talkpage!!! 11:49, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading some, and blur the ear pink  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:10, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

 Reuploaded:- Done :) <font color="white" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Zoeyy <font color="black" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:hotpink">My Talkpage!!! 20:05, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Improvements? <font color="white" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Zoeyy <font color="black" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:hotpink">My Talkpage!!! 19:32, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think the changes have shown yet  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:59, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blackkit(RC)(Ki)- For approval


It's okay...I guess.

Tigerfur of Bloodclan 16:16, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken and blur the shading, and make the ear pink narrower  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:40, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.

The shading is still a bit too defined, maybe lighten it some and blur it  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:46, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.How is this?The gost,20:29,August 22,2011.(UTC)

It's good :) Just blur the shading a tad more, if it's possible. 86.135.44.121 10:03, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Blackpaw(A)- For approval


Tigerfur of Bloodclan 17:16, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

I will help you with his apprentice and kit image. 21:02, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Okay! Thanks :) Tigerfur of Bloodclan 01:56, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

This needs alot of work. Thicken and blur the shading, add ear pink and highlights and the back front paw is too dark. Kiba Inuzuka  w00f w00f! :D 23:29, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.How is this?The gost,20:28,august 22,2011.(UTC)

Move the highlights on his chest a bit more towards his shoulder. Light dosent hit the way you have it naturally. Venomsplash 01:12, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Hollybreeze(A)-For Aprroval
Comments? 20:28, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

This is beautiful! Desaturate the ear pink, and blur the shading on the tail  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:45, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.19:49,august 20,2011.(UTC)

The ear pink still looks to saturated and bright, run the desaturate tool over it again  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:51, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.15:09,august 22,2011.(UTC)

Hello?

I might make the ear pink smaller, but that's all I see  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:00, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on her face and neck is WAY too dark. Venomsplash 01:13, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Shadefall(W)-For Approval


Comments?The gost,08:53,August 20,2011.(UTC)

She's too dark; Shadefall is dark gray, not black. I suggest lightening it a lot, and then blur the shading and ear pink  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 15:53, August 20, 2011 (UTC)


 * Blur highlights. Alot. 76.185.139.101 00:14, August 21, 2011 (UTC)


 * The highlights look REALLY weird.... <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="5" color="purple" > You know my rattata...? <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="orange">The top percentage of rattata 18:12, August 21, 2011 (UTC)


 * Reuploaded.Yeah,yeah,I know about the name,but this is the only way to show the change.The name will be changed when will be approved.15:54,august 25,2011.(UTC)

Blur the neck shading, and darken the highlight on her tail  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:00, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.I changed the name slightly to show the changes.The Gost Pazuzu ,the greatest villain ever! 08:36, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Happymealpaw(W)-For Approval
Comments?The gost,09:23,August 21,2011.(UTC)

The M's look weird. And Happymealpaw isn't a warrior. Kiba Inuzuka  w00f w00f! :D 23:24, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

'''Should we decline this? <font color="white" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Zoeyy <font color="black" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:hotpink">My Talkpage!!! 19:34, August 26, 2011 (UTC)'''

On her article says: Rank:Aprrentice\Warrior.The Gost Pazuzu ,the greatest villain ever! 08:36, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

The Gost, I think you should change it to an apprentice since she does not have her warrior name yet  Don't get me confused  With something i'm not 14:47, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

The M's do look wierd, Ghost... Nothing Lost 14:58, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Foxkit (WC2)-For approval
The gost,10:`10,august 21,2011.(UTC)

This is just me being picky, but I would make her eyes a different color. Green or amber or something, so she's not an exact copy of her mom. The article doesn't specify blue eyes, just the same pelt color  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 15:34, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

I indended her to have Green eyes. The color is kind of a red, can you make it a little dark orange-red? <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="5" color="purple" > You know my rattata...? <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="orange">The top percentage of rattata 18:13, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.The changes aren't showing yet!13:36,august 22,2011.(UTC)

Mudkit(WC)-For approval
The gost,10:12,august 20,2011.(UTC)

Make the eye white bigger, and blur the shading  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 15:37, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty~ Although the eyes... look kinda Cross-eyed...Might just be my screen though.<font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="5" color="purple" > You know my rattata...? <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="orange">The top percentage of rattata 18:14, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Add some shading in the eyes and blur the shading like Nightfall said. Moo  nstr   ike  21:00, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.20:00,august 25,2011.(UUTC)

Hello?

I dont see anything wrong but i would define the shading a bit more <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="6" color="blue" > Beware the Foxkip! <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="gray"> The Foxkip are coming, the Foxkip are coming! 21:14, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Image is not showing
Nightfall,there is a problem with the images .At Hollybreeze's apprentice image,i did do what did you say to do.The thing is that the changes aren't showing.It's so at Shadefall's warrior image,Hershey's,Adeline's.Just look at the history.It is so even with other users.The gost,11:02,august 12,2011.(UTC)

Yep, I noticed that issue. Let's try saving images under a different file name, and then just moving them to the appropriate name when they're approved. However, I think it may be working now, I can tell that Echopaw's image of Darkangel has reuploaded correctly.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 15:33, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, that happens to me too. It does showafter about a day, though. <font color="white" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Zoeyy <font color="black" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:hotpink">My Talkpage!!! 19:09, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Redfire (W) For Approval
The Origional Spoofy 20:07, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

It's good for your first try :) Add ear pink, blur the shading, and fix the eye white; it's overlapping the line art  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:08, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED better? ish? The Origional Spoofy 20:12, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah! Make the ear pink a bit more of a reddish salmony color, and blur it. I think you should try making his pelt a little more reddish. Just pick the sponge tool and set it to saturate. You can choose the vibrancy setting too  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:32, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED Better? The Origional Spoofy 01:29, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

The color looks better, but the ear pink is still off. It's a very hot pink at the moment; make it more of a salmony red  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:55, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED Is that good? It's at least salmon-ish. The Origional Spoofy 02:02, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I think that is better, but darken it a little bit  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:10, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

May I help you?the gost,09:26,august 22,2011.(UTC)

Yeah the color is a bit off, it looks kind of purple. And the highlights are to harsh, level them out more with the shading to make it look more natural. Moon 18:07, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED Like that? Kind of?? (the highlights are better at least.) The Origional Spoofy 00:27, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Remove it from a thumbnail  Don't get me confused  With something i'm not 14:46, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

what the heck is a thumbnail Theirs but to do- and die 00:16, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

The box around the charart  Don't get me confused  With something i'm not 01:04, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed it for you. Venomsplash 01:17, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Also, the right eye is a bit blurred. Venomsplash 01:19, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

It is? I don't see it... Theirs but to do- and die 23:22, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

One pupil is bigger than the other Venomsplash 00:35, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED Is that okay? I redid the eyes altogether. Nothing Lost 14:57, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Dappler (Ro) For Approval
Okay, this is Dappler, Redfire's rouge dad. Does the shading look okay? The Origional Spoofy 01:47, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

I like it! Blur the ear pink, and blur the highlights  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:55, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED Better? The Origional Spoofy 01:59, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Make the color of the ear pink a bit more reddish  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:01, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED Like that? The Origional Spoofy 00:22, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but it still looks hot pink to me. Perhaps look at another black charart for some reference? Maybe Nightstar's warrior image.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:09, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED That should be a bit better. The Origional Spoofy 23:39, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, it does :) I would make the highlights bigger  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:46, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

May I help you?The Gost Pazuzu ,the greatest villain ever! 08:36, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

This isn't about Dappler, jsyk: 'The Ghost', you keep saying 'can i help you. can i help you.' Who says I need help?! Theirs but to do- and die 19:25, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

I wanna be nice with you! cries The Gost Pazuzu ,the greatest villain ever! 19:02, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry... but it's my picture, and... um... *in loss for words* *cries* Theirs but to do- and die 22:02, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

... Back to the picture, smallen the earpink a bit, and add depth to the eyes  Don't get me confused  With something i'm not 14:45, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Depth, insomuch how? Theirs but to do- and die 00:16, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Depth: Add shading to the bottom of the eye  Don't get me confused  With something i'm not 01:06, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED Better? Nothing Lost 14:56, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Mudheart (Q) For Approval
Slightly different shading style I think, if it's too much then tell me.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:05, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

So pretty. :D -Sagestorm70 02:13, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

I'm glad you think so :3  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:15, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

I'd blur the transitions a little, but apart from that, it's really good :) <font color="white" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Zoeyy <font color="black" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:hotpink">My Talkpage!!! 08:42, August 22, 2011 (UTC)


 * Pretty! Darken the gray and blur the gray transition on the head, Kiba Inuzuka  w00f w00f! :D  12:40, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I darkened the gray on the head, and blurred the gray transition. I had to change the file name slightly so the changes would show up, but we can rename it whenever it's approved  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:02, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

There's a big blotch of gray inbetween the tail and paws/shoulder. Kiba Inuzuka  w00f w00f! :D 12:49, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Ah, I forgot to fix that  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:52, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Rockpelt~ Up for Aproval
I need help with the shading, and I know he is a whitehorn, but i'm taking a wild guss that's the same of a warrior  Don't get me confused  With something i'm not 14:37, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Very nice! Blur the ear pink, and darken the shading some  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:01, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Can I help you?The Gost Pazuzu ,the greatest villain ever! 08:36, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

No thanks Gost, I can do it on my own, And Nightfall, sure, you might have to wait a bit cause school is starting  Don't get me confused  With something i'm not 15:18, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded and it's gross, can you help me Night?  Don't get me confused  With something i'm not 15:53, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Can Venomsplash become a warrior?
Can she become a warrior?She has three aproved images! Anyway,I love her!(As a user!I'm not yuri!)

The Gost Pazuzu ,the greatest villain ever! 18:47, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

I would, I just don't know how to edit the userbox xD Kiba Inuzuka  w00f w00f! :D  01:00, August 28, 2011 (UTC)!i 

'''I know!The Gost Pazuzu ,the greatest villain ever! 06:18, August 28, 2011 (UTC)\'''

OMG. Gost this is so sweet of you!! Venomsplash 18:16, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I agree you are a warrior, but I wish you would have told Nighfall Ghost (Cause there is no deputy, and only senior warriors and the leads are allowed to add names) and Echo, you just go and add a name  Don't get me confused  With something i'm not 18:25, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

I didn't even notice about the whole rank thing. All I care about is having fun and help with the CAP. :3 Venomsplash 18:37, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

That's vine Venom, your an amazing artist :P All i'm saying is GHost should have asked Night first :P When she got Night's permission, then I would have added you XD  Don't get me confused  With something i'm not 18:53, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Ah I understand Venomsplash 20:10, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

It's like, impossible to edit the user box. I would have added Venom awhile ago. Kiba Inuzuka  w00f w00f! :D 01:28, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Pepper(K)~For Approval
Its about time I upload another char art! Im slowly challenging myself to get tougher and tougher with the patterns. Since there is alot of peppers, here is the link to hers. Pepper. Thanks! Venomsplash 18:36, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

This looks awesome :). Blur the shading on the haunch and darken the shading overall. Vega;  Beauty is absoulute.  03:12, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

This amazing! I agree with Elorisa, Other then that I see nothing wrong  Don't get me confused  With something i'm not 15:54, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry.. I need to withdraw this, Gimp is being weird. Venomsplash 01:00, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Venom... Are you sure it's GIMP? Because if it's not showing the changes it's been happening to eveyone. If not.... sorry... <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="6" color="blue" > Beware the Foxkip! <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="gray"> The Foxkip are coming, the Foxkip are coming! 08:16, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Finchkit (WC) (Ki) For Approval
Yay :D Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:17, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

I don't see anything wrong!The Gost Pazuzu ,the greatest villain ever! 06:50, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

The eyes look great. The shading might be a bit odd, but it looks really good overall! Nothing Lost 14:54, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

.-. i don't see anything wrong with the shading. beautiful nightfall! <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="6" color="blue" > Beware the Foxkip! <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="gray"> The Foxkip are coming, the Foxkip are coming! 21:16, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, so then mah eyes are bein wierd! :) Nothing Lost 23:51, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

As in, I apparantly can't see straight... :P Nothing Lost 23:51, September 4, 2011 (UTC)


 * P <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="6" color="blue" > Beware the Foxkip! <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="gray"> The Foxkip are coming, the Foxkip are coming! 08:15, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Scarheart (W) For Approval
I really like how he turned out. I had a bit of trouble with the eye, but I've had previous practice with Smolder's rogue image. Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:17, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Good job on the scars. Nothing Lost 14:55, September 3, 2011 (UTC)


 * This is really beautiful Night! :D CBA? Kiba Inuzuka  w00f w00f! :D  19:19, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the gray and the scars a tad more, otherwise looks beautiful :) Vega;  Beauty is absoulute.  01:38, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Thanks guys! I blurred the gray and the scars.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:56, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Opalshine (A) For Approval
I like the shininess of her pelt :) Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:17, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

You're right, the shininess does look good. Really looks like her name! Nothing Lost 14:55, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Febreezemist(W)-For Aproval
Comments?The Gost Pazuzu ,the greatest villain ever! 08:58, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Hello?

Not sure if i'm allowed to comment here. If I'm not, tell me. So. I think it's pretty, but the highlights make it look pink where the body is purple, and I don't see any shadows. You might want to take that into consideration. Nothing Lost 14:54, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Sunpaw (WC2) (A) for Approval
This is my first Character Art. Any Comments? Hollyleaf Of Thunderclan  16:18, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Good Job!

It needs shading, and the yellow is to bright and unatural for a cat. The eyes sghould always be a different color. Tigerfur of Bloodclan 17:10, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Not bad, but it defanitely (who cares on spelling...!) needs shading. On the right ear, the pink doesn't show up as well as on the left. You might also want to make the fur more orangish so that it looks more natural. Nothing Lost 18:05, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

This might not be the best example, but my picture of Sunlion below is slightly orangish and looks more natural. Nothing Lost 18:14, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  Hollyleaf Of Thunderclan  19:43, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Better... but there still isn't shading. Nothing Lost 20:03, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded But it's not showing the changes or anything. It's acting strange. I'll try again tomorrow. Hollyleaf Of Thunderclan  20:34, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

May I help you?The Gost Pazuzu ,the greatest villain ever! 06:18, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Sure! Hollyleaf Of Thunderclan  15:07, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Bramblekit (WC) (K) For Approval
I don't know what to do about the outline bit, and I havn't figured out how to make good eyes yet. Hollyleaf Of Thunderclan  20:09, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

The outline, I dunno. But you might want to make the eye shine a bit bigger. If you're using Pixlr, you can use the burn tool to add shading to the bottom of the eye. That might help. And the orangish paw looks solid; you might want to blur it out a bit. Nothing Lost 22:14, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Make him more brownish, otherwise, looks neat :D Vega;  Beauty is absoulute.  01:37, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I don't have the burn tool. Hollyleaf Of Thunderclan  15:43, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Absent
Guys,I will be absent for 4-5 days.I must go to the hospital .Don't decline my characters.The Gost Pazuzu ,the greatest villain ever! 21:39, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Oh my god, the hospital!? What for!? D: Toshiro  Hyorinmaru cannot be two DeathGod's sword!  00:04, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

I have diabetes.The Gost Pazuzu ,the greatest villain ever! 04:44, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

D: I'm sorry Gost! Hope you get out of the hospital soon... I know what the hospital is, trust me.... I know, it sucks. <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="6" color="blue" > Beware the Foxkip! <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="gray"> The Foxkip are coming, the Foxkip are coming! 08:14, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

i'll be unactive on CAP for a while
Well what the title says. Won't be active for CAP for a while. That doesnt mean you can take over all my chararts and ask if you can. Thank you. <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="6" color="blue" >Beware the Foxkip! <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="gray">The Foxkip are coming, the Foxkip are coming!08:13, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Moon (Ro) - Kit
I named this character after me so he must look awesome. Comments? Moo  nstr   ike  17:23, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

This is so cute :3 Imma wait to CBA it, incase someone sees somethin wrong :P -- Toshiro  Hyorinmaru cannot be two DeathGod's sword!  17:25, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Akiko (Kit) ~ For Approval
-- I'm pretty proud of this. Haven't done a charart in a looooonnnngggg time. =) -- Toshiro  Hyorinmaru cannot be two DeathGod's sword!  17:46, September 5, 2011 (UTC)