Cats of the Clans Wiki talk:Character Art Project

Orangeblossom (R)-For approval
So... My second cat. She's Rug 's mom. :D Comments?- Daughter of Scourge Place of no ☆s!

Hm; her page says she's a kittypet. If she is, then you'll have to wait until we get kittypet blanks approved to put her up  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:24, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

For now, can I use this blank? It's my fave.- Daughter of Scourge Place of no ☆s!

If she's currently a rogue, then you can  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:29, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks!- Daughter of Scourge Place of no ☆s!

No problem ;) Blur and darken the shading a lot, and add more shading. Blur the ear pink as well  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:59, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

Will try!- Daughter of Scourge Place of no ☆s!

Reuploaded...I think. My computer hates me.- Daughter of Scourge Place of no ☆s!

You need to darken and blur the shading a lot more. And don't blur the black part in the eye. -- Mousebrair o r Cloudfrost  15:46, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Do you need any help? :)  HA WK FI RE98  16:03, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Not right, Hawky. But thanks! :D Daughter of Scourge Place of no ☆s! 21:30, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Better?- Daughter of Scourge Place of no ☆s!

I see absolutely no shading, please add a lot, and darken and blur it  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:41, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Now I need help! Hawky?- Daughter of Scourge Place of no ☆s!

I'm on it. :)  HA WK FI RE98  22:24, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Is this any good?  HA WK FI RE98  22:54, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Wow.. but.. she's more brown now. D:- Daughter of Scourge Place of no ☆s!

Then go over the image with the sponge tool set to 10 strength. :)  HA WK FI RE98  23:04, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

I did that, and she more orange now. :D Thanks for the help Hawkfire!!- Daughter of Scourge Place of no ☆s!

Lighten the shading, it's way too dark  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky!00:44, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, but I'm a huge person on shading, and i love how it defines the image. I like dark shading. I think it looks fine, but do whatever with it. :/  HA WK FI RE98  23:11, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, the shading is way too dark. Blur it as well-- 23:44, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

Shading does define the image, but it's not supposed to be as noticeable as this. Like, the first thing you see when you look at this image is shading. When you look at a charart, the first thing you should is, well, the charart :)  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky!23:14, September 29, 2010 (UTC)

You don't fail! I like it this way. Makes it unquie! :D- Daughter of Scourge Place of no ☆s!
 * sigh* Then change it back to the way it was, and someone else better than me help her. I fail.  HA WK FI RE98  23:28, September 29, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe lighten it?  Birdstar  You infected me with mildew? 17:45, October 3, 2010 (UTC)

If I lighten it, she turns too brown, so I'd rather not.- Daughter of Scourge Place of no ☆s!

Don't lighten the image, just lighten the shading  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky!19:13, October 3, 2010 (UTC)

Will do.- Daughter of Scourge Place of no ☆s!

I did change it, but my compter won't let me upload it. I'll trry later.- Daughter of Scourge Place of no ☆s!

She isn't a rogue. She's a kittypet. She shouldn't be on here. I doesn't say she is a rogue. This should be declined due to the reason. Mysticfur You don' say shut up you say please shut up 13:30, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

She was formerly a kittypet, she is currently a rogue  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky!21:34, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

Dark never said she was a rogue.

Hm; her page says she's a kittypet. If she is, then you'll have to wait until we get kittypet blanks approved to put her up  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky!00:24, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

For now, can I use this blank? It's my fave.- Daughter of Scourge Place of no ☆s!

If she's currently a rogue, then you can  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky!03:29, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks!- Daughter of Scourge Place of no ☆s!

She just did it because she likes the blank.... :/ Vampirewave ☺ ♫Happy Halloween! ♫ 00:22, October 11, 2010 (UTC)

'''Darkcloud, you may only use this blank if Orangeblossom is a rogue. If not, wait until kittypet blanks are approved. 21:02, October 11, 2010 (UTC)'''

Orangeblossom is a rouge.- Daughter of Scourge <sup style="font-family:Ariel;color:Red">Place of no ☆s! 

Guys, seriously! Quit arguing! Orangeblossom is a rogue, okay? Now back to the image. Can you reupload it back yet?  HA WK FI RE98  23:29, October 13, 2010 (UTC)

I did.

Reuploaded: Better?- Daughter of Scourge <sup style="font-family:Ariel;color:Red">Place of no ☆s! 

Yes, but do you want me to redo the shading to make it better? I can. It will save you time and energy. :) Lighter and neater.  HA WK FI RE98  02:03, October 14, 2010 (UTC)

I like it the way it is... Thank you for the offer though! :D- Daughter of Scourge <sup style="font-family:Ariel;color:Red">Place of no ☆s!

I think the shading at least needs to be lighter  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky!02:51, October 16, 2010 (UTC)

If I do that, she goes yellowey. I like it the way it is.- Daughter of Scourge <sup style="font-family:Ariel;color:Red">Place of no ☆s!

The shading is really dark. Find a way to make it look more natural. Blur the ear pink a bit more-- 02:53, October 30, 2010 (UTC)

All right, I'm gonna say it again, Everytime I try to lighten her, she goes yellow! So I can't lighten her. I can blur the ears however, and that's what I'm doing.- Go Giants! <sup style="font-family:Ariel;color:Black">We won the World Series! 20:18, November 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * pouts* Fine! I'll make the shading lighter! D:- Go Giants! <sup style="font-family:Ariel;color:Black">In the World Series!

Darkcloud, if she goes yellow than saturate her  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:55, November 5, 2010 (UTC)

I dont know how to do that.- Go Giants! <sup style="font-family:Ariel;color:Black">We won the World Series! 21:05, November 5, 2010 (UTC)

All you have to do is select the sponge tool, and make sure it's set on "saturate" then, run it over her pelt  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:07, November 5, 2010 (UTC)

I use GIMP, so there is no sponge.-Rawr. I win. 08:47, November 7, 2010 (UTC)

In GIMP, go to Colors>Hue Saturation, then you can move the saturation thing back and forth to change it-- 20:29, November 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Comments?-Rawr. I win. 05:51, November 8, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the shading-- 06:11, November 8, 2010 (UTC)

I Can't.-_- -Rawr. I win.

You can't? Just run the dodge tool over the shading on a low opacity, it should be lightened if you do that-- 06:35, November 8, 2010 (UTC)

I've tried that. I have a lousy mouse, so the brush usally slips, and make it look strange.-Rawr. I win. 07:12, November 8, 2010 (UTC)

Make it a bit more orange. Creamsplash The stars will never forget you.  22:06, November 11, 2010 (UTC)

It was more orange, and she looked like a cat popiscle. -Rawr. I win. 00:15, November 12, 2010 (UTC)

Just lighten the shading and it will be good.-- 07:20, November 14, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:02, November 21, 2010 (UTC)

Ok, I'm going to say this for what, the 10th time?! I CAN"T LIGHTEN THE SHADING ANYMORE!!!-Rawr. I win. 19:33, November 21, 2010 (UTC)

Why not? It's too dark. And if you're worried about the color, than saturate her afterwards  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:59, November 21, 2010 (UTC)

I've tried that. I use GIMP, so it goes yellow, then bright orange. I've tried. I can't get it.-Rawr. I win. 22:16, November 21, 2010 (UTC)

Want some help? I use Pixlr, but I could probably make it work. <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 23:40, November 21, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, please help me.-Rawr. I win. 02:35, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

Dark, can I PLEASE redo it? It will help SO much better!  HA WK FI RE98  22:24, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Sure, I guess.. I personally like it the way it is, but ok, Hawky.-Mapleshade iz Awesum! 22:43, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. See? Much easier. :)  HA WK FI RE98  23:19, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

o_o that's really purty!!-Mapleshade iz Awesum! 00:10, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

Blur and desaturate the earpink, then she'll be ready  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:54, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:54, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

o-o I'll try to work on it. I don't want it to be declined after all the hard work Hawky put into it.-Mapleshade iz Awesum! 06:01, December 24, 2010 (UTC)

Rug BC- For approval
I think I've finally gotten the hang of it! :D Anyways, it's Rug. -Rawr. I win. 08:25, November 7, 2010 (UTC)

The texture looks like a actual rug. 火の毛皮 22:28, November 7, 2010 (UTC)

So you like it?-Rawr. I win. 05:53, November 8, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink bigger and look more like the ear pink on this image: Thicken the shading. There is some blurred line art on the collar. The colour doesn't really match her other image-- 07:02, November 8, 2010 (UTC)

Aright, I 'll fix the ear, collar, and shading, but does the fur color have to exactly the same?-Rawr. I win. 07:01, November 11, 2010 (UTC)

Well, actually it does. Unless Rug's pelt actually changed color when she joined BloodClan, then it would have to be the same as her rogue image to remain consistent  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:54, November 12, 2010 (UTC)

Well, it is a bit darker... and Rug is older. So it makes sense.-Rawr. I win. 04:12, November 12, 2010 (UTC)

Well no, not really. It's not extremely common for cats' pelts to grow darker and more saturated with age  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:33, November 12, 2010 (UTC)

Their pelt colours do not change if they age. Only their size and figure changes. Nothing else. Smoothen the texture, and blur it more into the pelt. The streaks aren't supposed to stand out, if you look at real-life-cats. 02:09, November 20, 2010 (UTC)

Wow, it looks fantastic! Darken the shading and brighten the highlights just a tiny bit.  HA WK FI RE98  22:24, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Better?-Mapleshade iz Awesum! 07:05, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten it a bit and blur it more. <font face="Mistral">FiRePeLt My Talk ☹  18:58, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Lightened her, and blurred the pelt.-Mapleshade iz Awesum! 08:58, December 8, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the shading, add more shading to the haunch, shoulder, and neck, blur the shading-- 01:15, December 10, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 17:57, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

I'll try and get to it...... I've been SUPER busy lately w/ highschool applications 0-0-Mapleshade iz Awesum! 06:03, December 24, 2010 (UTC)

Marsh -for approval
It's Marsh. :D Comments?-Rawr. I win. 22:16, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a lot, and make the earpink more reddish. Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  01:51, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Make it more ginger coloured; it looks very yellow. -- 04:10, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded:Better?-Mapleshade iz Awesum!

Add shading to her other forearm, under the chin, on her head, haunch, and thicken it. Blur the shading all around. Blur the ear pink-- 05:54, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Tried my best with the shading.-Mapleshade iz Awesum! 09:10, December 8, 2010 (UTC)

Darken and blur the ear pink a lot. Blur the shading a lot as well and add shading to her other forearm. Add shading to her face-- 01:51, December 10, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 18:01, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

Same reason as posted on Rug.. HIGHSCHOOL. *screams* I'll try to work on it.-Mapleshade iz Awesum! 06:17, December 24, 2010 (UTC)

Spencer (R) - For Approval
- Haven't done a charart for awhile. Last approved one was in August before I left. Well heres Spencer, he was by far the most hardest I've ever had to do. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">Jinglepaw :D 'Merry Christmas 19:42, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the scars on his muzzle, make the ear pink more reddish, darken te shading on the legs and back, darken the nose colour-- 01:51, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">Jinglepaw :D 'Merry Christmas 23:05, December 3, 2010 (UTC)

The Scar on his leg in the lineart fix the lineart around there also get rid of the purple in his ears  Sand  Merry Christmas 03:18, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I need help with the ear pink. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">Jinglepaw :D 'Merry Christmas 18:25, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: How is this?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:37, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the belly shading-- 21:43, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Snuggles (R) - For Approval
- Did this awhile back. Ain't it purdy :3 <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">Jinglepaw :D 'Merry Christmas 19:42, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

Make the brown more grayish, blur the white patches, blur the ear pink, darken it, and make it more reddish, add nose colour-- 01:52, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

I will get to the nose, ear pink and white patches but the brown was off of his real life image... <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">Jinglepaw :D 'Merry Christmas 23:03, December 3, 2010 (UTC)

The brown is fine. Darkne the white transistion, it's pure white right now. 23:26, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded finally got my act together to edit this. >.< <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">Jinglepaw :D 'Merry Christmas 18:22, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and he'll be ready  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:53, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined-- 21:43, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Flowercloud -(W) For Approval
I'm really proud of this!:D Comments? Clarrissa  My Talk Page  Brownkit... 20:00, December 3, 2010 (UTC)

Smudge the white transition a little more  Sand  Merry Christmas 03:17, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-I smudged the transition. Comments? Clarrissa  My Talk Page  Brownkit... 16:20, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading and ear pink-- 01:49, December 10, 2010 (UTC)

This is the same charart I approved with Yellowpool. I just added green eyes and her white foot.(Flowercloud is Yellowpool's daurghter) I'll darken the shading and stuff, I'm just a little surprised. Clarrissa  My Talk Page  Brownkit... 18:43, December 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Done. I get how the haunch highlight looked a little unnatural. Didn't really notice before:P Clarrissa   My Talk Page  Brownkit...

17:19, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

Can you change this to be the new blank? I can help you if you want. Blur the ear pink, smudge the white transition, darken the shading-- 21:43, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Draco (W) - For Approval
- IT'S TERRIBLE! D: <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">Jinglepaw :D 'Merry Christmas 02:47, December 10, 2010 (UTC)

This is good! Just darken the ear pink a lot and darken the shading a bit-- 02:53, December 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I totally redid it. The shading tool didn't work right. TT.TT <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">Jinglepaw :D 'Merry Christmas 13:32, December 10, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a little. Clarrissa  My Talk Page  Brownkit...

19:12, December 10, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink. Blur the shading. Thicken it on the shoulder and add it to the face. Add some to the paws as well. Darken the white spot. 23:33, December 10, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the highlight somewhat. Otherwise, he is ... AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reuploaded can't blur shading no more. :( <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">Jinglepaw :D 'Merry Christmas 18:18, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink less purple and more salmony pink  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:53, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:55, December 21, 2010 (UTC)Please with

draw, It's the holidays and I won't have much time to work on this. :( <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">Jinglepaw :D 'Merry Christmas 20:59, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Magicpaw (A) ~ For Approval
Comments? <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 21:54, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

This is beautiful! Lighten the ear pink, and make the dash on her forehead more gray  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:06, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Tried to fix earpink and dash on her forehead. <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 21:05, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Make the right ear pink smaller, desaturate it, blur all the patches a bit more. Make the colours more natural looking, right now it looks like a DarkClan cat-- 02:46, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. She has to have a large amount of purple and pink in her gray and cream, but they are a little more natural. <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 01:29, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Desaturate the ginger, lighten the ear pink, smudge the patches together more, darken the shading-- 21:37, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Ashflame(W) for approval
Echo helped me with it. I have to say now its pretty good. I think i might need to blur? :3 please set out a thing(Can't remember the name of it) that tells me to blur, that would help ALOT. Thanks, Foxclaw33(I gotta problem with SIGGIES!!! AHHHH!!!)12/12/10 (Celebrate! Almost all the numbers are the same xD) 22:33/10:33 (UTC)

This is good! Perhaps change the color of the ear pink though, it's way too purple, it needs to be more of a salmony pink  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 18:37, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Actually, now that i look at it, I agree! Let me work on it then reupload it.... Foxclaw33 10:30, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Even though it's my image I helped, yes, make the ear pink redish/pink then blur the shading. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">Jinglepaw :D 'Merry Christmas 18:51, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED- So how's it now? Foxclaw33 10:49, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

I took it out of thumbnail for you. Make sure the ear pink stays inside the line art. Darken the shading a bit more-- 22:59, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 18:06, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Is this better? Or is the shading to dark? Is there anything i need to edit? Beileve it or not, this IS my siggnature! Foxclaw33 06:53, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

want me to help? --bracken-- ~06:55, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, that'd be wonderful if you helped me o.o. Beileve it or not, this IS my siggnature! Foxclaw33 22:16, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

Tigerdawn (W) - For Approval

 * [[File:Tigerdawn.warrior.png]]Here ya go. 01:04, December 13, 2010 (UTC)
 * The stripes don't look natural.... Ellie says;  Merry Christmas!  01:38, December 13, 2010 (UTC)
 * I always imagined her like this. So I'm not going to change the style of the stripes. 13:08, December 13, 2010 (UTC)
 * Erm...Elorisa's right, they don't...maybe you should just blur them a little. Clarrissa   My Talk Page  Brownkit...undefined

17:30, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

It doesn't look like they have any shading on them either... Ellie says;  Merry Christmas!  19:02, December 13, 2010 (UTC)


 * Clara and Elorisa, first of all, if I blur them too much, they'll blend in with the pelt. Second, they do have shading. 21:54, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

"First of all blah blah blah" is all I read. If they blur to much re-do the image. Users are saying the stripes are not natural, and they aren't. I'm pretty sure tabby's aren't supposed to have STRAIGHT stripes. <font face="Mistral">FiRePeLt My Talk ☹  23:11, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

I know, I've never seen a tabby with straight stripes...I agree, Firepelt, I'd redo the imige if I were you, Ice. Clarrissa  My Talk Page  Brownkit...

17:37, December 14, 2010 (UTC)


 * Sorry Clarrissa, but I always imagined her like this, so I'm not changing it. 21:40, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

I appreciate you standing up for yourself, but as a friend giving advice I'd make them more irregular, and smudge them instead of blur them. If you're not going to make them irregular, then at least smudge them, and add a lot more  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:56, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:57, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

She is inactive at the moment. Shes having computer problems and christmas :\ <font face="Stencil">Ayako My Talk ☹  01:32, December 25, 2010 (UTC)

We'll wait a few more days until this is declined-- 21:28, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Lilyblossom (W) ~ For Approval
Not my best cat ever, but comments? <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 00:49, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

The shading on this is excellent, Dovesong! But, I picture her like this. Perhaps spread the patches out more, add more gray, and make the yellow ginger more of a reddish ginger. Add some to her face as well  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:57, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

I made her like this because her article said that she was white with tortoiseshell patches. I'll get to work. <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 00:59, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry if the description is misleading, I'll change it if necessary. But technically, the cat in her real life image is white with tortoiseshell patches  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:00, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the patches a bit. Apart from that, it's fine:) Clarrissa   My Talk Page  Brownkit...  17:32, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 21:52, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the patches together, darken the shading, -- 03:00, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded <font color="Silver" >☯Silver <font color="Goldenrod" > Bells☮ 15:00, December 24, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the white part on the tail and blur the white part on the tail, blur the ear pink-- 21:19, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Featherstorm (TC) ~Up For Approval
Please excue the fail shading the shading tool has been acting up  Sand  Merry Christmas|undefined  20:38, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good! Thicken the shading a lot, and blur it as well.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:48, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Can someone please help me with the shading?  Sand  Merry Christmas 01:02, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

I'll try ....i have to lighten the shading...can you do that birdwing?  --bracken-- ~18:00, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

I tried to lighten the shading  Sand  Merry Christmas 21:30, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

I'd love to help with it now that i've got the hang of shading! Please leav a comment on my talk page if you want me to help ;). It looks beautiful :3Beileve it or not, this IS my siggnature! Foxclaw33 06:46, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

I lightened the shading for you-- 21:18, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Mistshine (W) - For Approval
Haven't done a character in a while. How is it? :D 19:15, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

This is beautiful! I really don't see much wrong actually. Maybe darken the line art a bit around the pearl on her necklace, it's kind of hard to distinguish against her pelt  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:15, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

Blackberry For Approval
The shading sucks i know, Lost mah skillz at shading XD but i will get it back at one point XD but whatever, Heres Blackberry the spot was easy amazingly  Sand  Merry Christmas 23:17, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

Desaturate the ear pink, blur the shading, blur the white transition-- 04:29, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Blurred shading all the way didn't know what white transition you were talking about so i blurred both of them  Sand  Merry Christmas 17:38, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading to the back of the haunch and to her back, blur the ear pink more, blur the shading a lot, blur the white transition-- 20:58, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Frostpelt (W) For approval
Beileve it or not, this IS my siggnature! Foxclaw33 07:01, December 23, 2010 (UTC)The shading's not the best but here it is:

Looks good. Does she have an eye color? -Sagestorm70 16:31, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

There are tons of white pixels and there is some faded lineart on her. Also, she needs eye color and earpink. I can fix that for you, if you'd like, and you can take it from there. <font color="Silver" >☯Silver <font color="Goldenrod" > Bells☮ 16:49, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

That's very nice of you, but i think i need to do it myself and learn. I'm working on it right now. And Sagestorm, sorry that i forgot the eye color. I will go and redo that, as i will also add eye pink. I just didnt have time, and you know, it's the holidays, in a hurry to wrap presents and decorate. I was in quite a rush.(I didnt look at her description that much, i will in a sec) I didn't realize that, and thank you for reminding me. In just a second i'll have it all done. Beileve it or not, this IS my siggnature! Foxclaw33 22:07, December 24, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded-How's thisBeileve it or not, this IS my siggnature! Foxclaw33 22:20, December 24, 2010 (UTC)'''

Use this blank: make the ear pink more pinkish and blur it, darken the shading and blur it, get rid of all the white pixels-- 20:57, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is sorta coming out of the blank. -Sagestorm70 15:42, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

Sis is working on it, she is working on many other ones, and she's fixing Ashflame, too! ~Bloodclaw 22:32, December 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-you have to look at it really close if you want to see the highlights and shading--Beileve it or not, this IS my siggnature! Foxclaw33 02:25, December 30, 2010 (UTC)

Kittypet Blanks - For Approval
Ack. Please forgive my terrible excuse of a drawing. *headdesk* Agent WindFire  Because it's snowing,  Blowing, All over town... 17:48, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

I took it out of a gallery. The legs are way too long, make the paws more rounded and less hoof-like. Make the tails rounded on the short haired ones-- 00:03, December 24, 2010 (UTC)

Make the stomachs rounder/larger. After all, they are well-fed kittypets.-Mapleshade iz Awesum! 06:40, December 24, 2010

~Comment that might help...

I am not exactly a drawing expert but i would put pupils in the eyes and make the head just a LITTLE round; then make the stomachs larger, i agree with Mapleshade and nightshine, the legs ARE a little long. After you do that then i'd think i'd be approved :). ~Bloodclaw 06:01, December 25, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. StarClan save us all, I tried to make paws. x.x Someday that's going to end the world as we know it.

@Nightshine fixed the legs/paws on the long-haired female as an example, I actually think I messed it up further by trying. Tails on short-haired's are rounded.... I think.

@Darkie Yeah... made these old things back a while. They were supposed to be feral cats - I guess in the process of fixing them up for this, that slipped my mind. I did it on the long-haired female as an example. If you like it, I'll do it on the rest.

@~Bloodclaw Pupils aren't there for a reason, it's a blank. Same case with the apprentice blank, but yeah, you're probably right on the head. I fail epically at anything I try to draw XD I'll give it a shot with the other improvements I'm working on now. Agent WindFire Because it's snowing,  Blowing, All over town... 11:13, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

Want me to help >.<? I'd be glad to. Sorry, i forgot that pupils have to be added by the person USING the blanks o.o You think that you fail epicly on drawing? You should see me when i don't sketch first It's like a horror show >.< ---~Bloodclaw 22:36, December 29, 2010 (UTC)

Wishkit (Ki) ~ For Approval
I really like how this turned out. :) Comments? <font color="Silver" >☯Silver <font color="Goldenrod" > Bells☮ 14:58, December 24, 2010 (UTC)

It turned out well Smudge and blur patches  Sand  Merry Christmas 16:09, December 24, 2010 (UTC)

Bloodfoot(R) For approval
Please, I know i did terrible on the shading. It was interesting to make the paws, I thought i should you the spray and blur tool on it. It took me like 2 minutes so i wont mind if i have to edit it :) Beileve it or not, this IS my siggnature! Mosspelt7 22:50, December 24, 2010 (UTC)

Well put the red back in the lineart your not supposed to spray it your supposed to smudge it there are white pixels that have to be filled and...... I can help you with it how about that XD  Sand  Merry Christmas 12:31, December 25, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry about the white lines on the outlining its because anything grey to black will do that, OK let me Un-spray (LOL) the paws. I'm not sure how to make the white lines dissapear, also it didn't do that on one side of the tail O.O! Beileve it or not, this IS my siggnature! Mosspelt7 04:06, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

Use this blank: m Blur the markings, blur the shading, make the ear pink more reddish and blur it, get rid of the white pixels. You may have to redo this. -- 20:56, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I think it looks pretty good :D!!! I really want it to be approved :DBeileve it or not, this IS my siggnature! Mosspelt7 22:53, December 29, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading, make the ear pink more of a salmony color, blur the ginger transition a lot, and add ginger to his chest. And, is it me or do the eyes look small than normal?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 06:43, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- No, the eyes are regular Mosspelt7 07:46, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Silversong(Q) - For approval
Okay, so the tuft on her head isn't perfect. I almost forgot the ear pink. Maybe you think it's sloppy, but it took many MANY tries to make it like it is. I also did the Queen version, on there i added eye pupils and ear pink. Not sure if i wasnt supposed to but here it is ~Bloodclaw 23:50, December 24, 2010 (UTC)

You were not supposed to do 2 images, and you didn't even use the RIGHT BLANK. Re-do these images with the rogue blank ONLY. <font face="Stencil">Ayako My Ta  lk ☹  01:29, December 25, 2010 (UTC)

WHAT? Nightfall told me that i could do them both and what? Rogue blank? Silversong's RIVERCLAN. The R on my thing stands for riverclan. Uh, actually that IS confusing, let me re do the title. Silversong was a former rougue, Nightfall told me i didnt have to do the rogue blank. Silversong & Bloodfoot joined riverclan and then Silversong was like BOOM she's a queen. ~Bloodclaw 05:10, December 25, 2010 (UTC)

R means rogue -_- <font face="Stencil">Ayako My Talk ☹  01:45, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, sorry for the misuderstanding, i am new. I also talk back when people dont expect me to. Please excuse that ;) ~Bloodclaw 03:56, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

I took it out of the slideshow and created another section. Rename this one Silversong.queen.png or something like that. Blur the markings, add shading, make the ear pink more reddish and blur it, darken the nose colour-- 20:51, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED- OK here it is ~Bloodclaw 02:09, December 30, 2010 (UTC)

Silversong (w) - For Approval
~Bloodclaw 07:27, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

There are a lot of white pixels all around, fix the blurred line art, add eye colour, make the ear pink more reddish and blur it. Use this blank: -- 20:51, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Not sure what the eye color is, but i think that it's light blue. Let me redo it with that blank ~Bloodclaw 02:36, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded- YAY! I DIDN'T FAIL EPICLY ON THE HIGHLIGHTS!!! :D! But you must look closely to see them. ~Bloodclaw 22:39, December 29, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, make the highlights lighter and... turn the mout back, she looks like her mouth is deformed. Smudge the lighter gray translations and make the lineart all black. Nothing else but black! I suggest redoing this. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">Jinglepaw :D 'Merry Christmas 01:27, December 31, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I really like it now :) ~Bloodclaw 06:02, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink smaller and more of a reddish pink. Darken the shading and blur the silver transition a lot  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 06:41, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Sorry sometimes i go on Foxclaw's account and do stuff for her when she is busy and thats why that happened, i forgot to log out lol ~Bloodclaw 07:27, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Dreamfrost (W) For approval
MEH LIKEZ IT :) Here it is! ~Bloodclaw 06:24, December 25, 2010 (UTC)

I see a few things. You need to blur it a little bit,the legs also look smudged. The ear color looks purple, and it's coming out of the blank. -Sagestorm70 02:59, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Let me redo the whole thing. I'll have it done in a minute. ~Bloodclaw 03:57, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded ~Bloodclaw 04:13, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Great looks way better. All now I see is the Line art is Slightly Blurred. Everything other then that looks AWESOME. -Sagestorm70 17:16, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks! I'll trace the outline again, because the shading got out of the outlining o.o Beileve it or not, this IS my siggnature! Foxclaw33 19:30, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

You should redo this and use this line art Blur the markings, add shading, make the ear pink more reddish and blur it-- 20:53, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Blurred markings, added AND blurred shading, blurred and made ear pink more red-ish. ~Bloodclaw 02:35, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

This description isn't correct, Dreamfrost is a pure white she-cat with blue eyes, see here.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:22, December 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-OOps i was watching TV while reading it and thought it was pure grey-blue shecat with white paws and icy blue eyes >.< Yes, i'm that bad XD ~Bloodclaw 06:13, December 29, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink smaller, and lighten the whole image, she still looks gray. Some of the line art is blurred as well  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 06:40, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-~Bloodclaw 07:52, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Darkfang(D) For approval
OK i noticed that nobody would do him so i decided to. It was fun :). I changed Dreamfrost to Darkfang. I wanted to do Darkfang more because the un-natural stripes seemed to be very fun. I tried ot match it up as well as the Warrior image as i could. I know the eyes are bad, please excuse that. Beileve it or not, this IS my siggnature! Foxclaw33 06:39, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

Use this blank: blur the markings, make the ear pink more reddish, get rid of all the white pixels, darken the shading and blur it-- 20:54, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Used different blank, blured markings, made ear pink a little more reddish, blurred the shading -Beileve it or not, this IS my siggnature! Foxclaw33 02:06, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

Alright good now it's the right size. Make the shoulder stripes longer, blur all of the stripes, make sure there is no colour outside of the line art, make the ear pink more reddish and blur it. -- 02:34, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

OK, I'll be extra active this week, so i can work on it Beileve it or not, this IS my siggnature! Foxclaw33 04:42, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Did what you told me to do. Couldn't find anything outside the lineart. Anyway i did everything else. Sorry that the ears are uneven >.< Beileve it or not, this IS my siggnature! Foxclaw33 05:15, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink needs to be much smaller, and made more of a salmony pink color instead of hot pink. Darken the shading, and blur the stripes  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 06:38, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-&#91;&#91;User-Foxclaw33&#124; 07:54, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Foxkit (K) - For approval
Okay, so it's not perfect. I know. I dont really like it :/ ~Bloodclaw 06:12, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

It looks okay, but there's a problem with the lineart. Shading and highlights should also be added, maybe a little work on the markings. What do you use to draw? Agent WindFire Because it's snowing,  Blowing, All over town... 10:46, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

I use pixlr of course. I dont really see anything wrong with the lineart:/ I dont see any tutorials around for kit shading and highlights, so thats a problem for me. Can you help me with that :)? ~Bloodclaw 21:15, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded-~Bloodclaw 22:53, December 31, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink needs to be much smaller, as does the eye pupil. Something is wrong with the line art, it seems chopped off and blurred in some places. The shading needs to be darkened, and the black transition blurred  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 06:36, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-~Bloodclaw 07:57, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Cave Guard Blanks - For Approval


I like these. :-3. Comments? Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  00:12, December 29, 2010 (UTC)

The tuft on the head on the longhairs look weird and the back leg looks deformed. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">Jinglepaw :D 'Merry Christmas 01:42, December 29, 2010 (UTC)

I can help with the tuft on the head and the back leg....Please leave a comment on my talk page if you would like my help ;) If you do it might take a while because i'm working on a BUNCH including Darkfang and Ashflame. And if you don't want my help, it's ok :) Beileve it or not, this IS my siggnature! Foxclaw33 22:08, December 29, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  02:55, December 30, 2010 (UTC)

The foot is better, the tuft of fur needs to look more like this:<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">Jinglepaw :D 'Merry Christmas 03:34, December 30, 2010 (UTC)

Branchpaw (MCA) For Approval
I really like this...comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 05:37, December 29, 2010 (UTC)

Leopardspots (MCA) For Approval
Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 05:37, December 29, 2010 (UTC)

Swiftkit (Ki) For Approval
I used the coat pattern on her real life image, comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 05:37, December 29, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten shading. :) <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">Jinglepaw :D 'Merry Christmas 11:10, December 30, 2010 (UTC)

Mion(R)-for approval
dont like it  --bracken-- ~ 23:52, December 29, 2010 (UTC)

It's cute! Make the ear pink more salmony color. ;D <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">Jinglepaw :D 'Merry Christmas 11:10, December 30, 2010 (UTC)