Cats of the Clans Wiki talk:Character Art Project

Thistleflame (W) For Approval


Comments?The gost,12:37,june 28,2011.

Reuploaded.08:53,4 August,2011.(UTC)

Brighten the highlights on his shoulder and face, to even out the brightness of the one on his haunch  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 05:11, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:14, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.The changes aren't showing yet.The gost,09:13,14 August ,201.(UTC)

Reuploaded.14:17,august 15,2011.(UTC)

Blur the highlights  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:45, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink smaller  England  Flying Mint Bunny 17:23, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

In my opinion, the ear pink looks okay... The highlight on the shoulder looks really bright compared to the other ones.... either lighten the others or darken that one? It might just be my screen though You know my rattata...? The top percentage of rattata 18:00, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on the tail looks rough, blur it out some. Moon 03:18, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on the front shoulder looks oddly placed. Venomsplash 01:07, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.The Gost Pazuzu ,the greatest villain ever! 20:14, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the white transition  Don't get me confused  With something i'm not 15:18, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah. Other than that it's good. Story Horse 22:00, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Mudheart (W) For Approval
The gost,13:07,July 26,2011.(UTC)

The shading and highlights are a bit messy, blur them both. Add eye white as well  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:56, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

Hey, is it okay if i have mine back :/ Yes, it is true I was on this page but i usually only swoop in for the Blanks... I just want to get done with those. So can i please? If you want to keep them its fine, also, the shading+highlights are pretty messy, as Nightfall said. Nightfall, i see eye white on there XD So i herd... YOU LIEK MUDKIPS????17:11, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, Gost I think you should let Foxclaw have the charart back since it was her's to begin with.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:46, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Can i also have Foxfire back, too? I did most of the work but i don't want to be unfair D: So i herd... YOU LIEK MUDKIPS????18:04, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Foxfire's image is on her article already  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:23, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry,but i want to keep this.And Nightfall,please give me the original grey and brown color,and how is Foxfire's image approved?14:11,august 09,2011.(UTC)

Fine. Foxfire's image is on her page. So i herd... YOU LIEK MUDKIPS????15:09, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Wait a minute though, I think Fox has a right to this image, she's the one who did it  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 15:58, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not sure whats going to happen, but Nightfall, can you give me a heads-up on how more images i need to be a Warrior on CAP? You know my rattata...? The top percentage of rattata 16:30, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Let's see, Foxfire counts for both you and Gost, and then you've got Mudkip on CBA, so one more  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky!

Fine,then I let you.20:04,august 04,2011.(UTC)

Thanks gost :) There are plenty of other images on this wiki that need to be done, if you go to the reservation table, you'll find a link to a whole list  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 17:09, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Sorry Gost, but you could do Foxfire as a queen once she gets there, i'll let you do that if you want to You know my rattata...? The top percentage of rattata 19:25, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

That's a good idea :) Blur the shading a lot  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 17:41, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blurred it to the max You know my rattata...? The top percentage of rattata 01:46, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

I think you should try lightening the shading some  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:56, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:45, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - You know my rattata...? The top percentage of rattata 18:04, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

This is really good :) I'd blur the transition a bit though. <font color="white" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Zoeyy <font color="black" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:hotpink">My Talkpage!!! 10:36, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

? <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="6" color="blue" > Beware the Foxkip! <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="gray"> The Foxkip are coming, the Foxkip are coming! 00:56, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Oh and can you guys hold this image? Just look at the bottom of the page for a while. Thanks. <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="6" color="blue" > Beware the Foxkip! <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="gray"> The Foxkip are coming, the Foxkip are coming! 08:19, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Not bad. Story Horse 22:00, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Whitethroat (W) For Approval
Comments?The gost,09:38,21 July,2011.(UTC)

Blur the shading  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:56, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.10:11,August 2,2011.(UTC)

This is realy good! I'd blur the hghlights a little though. <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:violet">Gossip Queen!!! 13:08, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.18:07,august 9,2011.(UTC)

Make the ear-pink a bit smaller  England  Flying Mint Bunny 16:23, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.12:43,august 16,2011.(UTC)

Darken the shading on the white and blur the ear pink  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:38, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 13:46, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Try smoothing out the white transition, it's a bit sloppily blurred  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:46, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a little, it looks pitch black... <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="5" color="purple" >You know my rattata...? <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="orange">The top percentage of rattata 18:05, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.22:09,august 21,2011.(UTC)

I can't see any improvements...CBA? <font color="white" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Zoeyy <font color="black" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:hotpink">My Talkpage!!! 10:37, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry Zoe, but only project leads (the leader, the deputy, and the senior warriors) may CBA images. I still think the white transition is a bit sloppy, use the smudge tool to sort of straighten it out  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:04, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, what Nightfall said Venomsplash 01:08, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed. Story Horse 22:00, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Silverpaw(TC) (A)-For approval


Can somebody help me fix this? I tried but i couldn't :/ Otherwise, i love this <3 <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="5" color="gray" >So i herd... <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="darkblue">YOU LIEK MUDKIPS????18:42, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

I tried i think i messed up the lineart a little bit tho think you can fix that ?

Blur the stripes a lot, add ear pink, and the eyes look awfully strange; look at an approved apprentice image to see how the pupils and eye white could be arranged  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:23, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry guys, this one's the wrong file. All my files are on my mother's laptop so can you wait a little bit? <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="5" color="gray" >So i herd... <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="darkblue">YOU LIEK MUDKIPS????15:22, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Sure!  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 15:59, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry Fox, but it's been a little over a week. Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:46, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, i'm back at my Mom's. Can someone fix the waste? I don't know how to do it D: Thanks for trying Pebble, but i dont know how to get the lineart fixed.... <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="5" color="purple" >You know my rattata...? <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="orange">The top percentage of rattata 18:09, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

I will help you!The gost,20:55,august 23,2011.(UTC)

Thanks! <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="5" color="purple" >Eevee <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="gray">I love dem!01:07, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

What is the white on her tail? -Sagestorm70 01:32, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.The Gost Pazuzu ,the greatest villain ever! 06:42, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Shading is too dark, there is a circle on her chest, isn't she a tabby? Tabbies dont have circles. Venomsplash 01:08, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

.-. come on can i have the original image back? i just wanted someone to fix the linart, not redo it .-. it took me a long time ot do this <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="6" color="blue" >Beware the Foxkip! <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="gray">The Foxkip are coming, the Foxkip are coming!21:12, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

The Gost, you can't take over someone's image without permission. :/ You've been doing this alot and you have way too many chararts up for approvel. :| -- Toshiro Hyorinmaru cannot be two DeathGod's sword! 17:49, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Also, Fox, If you want I can take the image you did it and fixed it :3 -- The Original Echo The one and only Sierra!! X333  22:29, September 20, 2011 (UTC)


 * D YAYYYYY- fox too lazy to sign in <3
 * XD Story Horse 22:00, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Eveningpaw(A)-For approval
a little dark...? --bracken-- ~ 19:02, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Not too dark, the white on her just needs to be lightened. And add the blue-gray flecks as well  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:55, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

The blue gray flecks are supposed to be in the eye but yea I added them in I'll fix the white a little later --bracken-- ~ 02:09, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

Can I take over this? 06:40, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

lol i was just gonna upload but yea go ahead idont mind

Adeline(Ro)-For approval


The gost,pazuzu,10:05,august 10,2011.(UTC)

Blur the brown and white transition  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 16:27, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.14:45,11 August,2011.(UTC)

Blur the ear pink slightly, <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:violet">Gossip Queen!!! 18:11, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blured to max.10:36,august 14,2011.(UTC)

Reuploaded.I redid it.19:32,August 19,2011.(UTC)

This looks beautiful! Blur the white transition, and perhaps darken the highlight on her shoulder just a little  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 16:15, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.19:58,August 20,2011.(UTC)

Pretty! I would just smudge the creamish parts, as the chest is the only thing smudged. <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="5" color="purple" > You know my rattata...? <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="orange">The top percentage of rattata 18:10, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.The Gost Pazuzu ,the greatest villain ever! 22:39, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Lol, I like the eyes. Blur the shading  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:02, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Please Work On This or it will be declined  Don't get me confused  With something i'm not 18:46, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Tweek weak
When will tweek weak will begun?The gost,roxi,11:28,august 13,2011.(UTC)

By the way,i wanna know if I can be a warrior,because I do have 3 images.11:29,August 13,2011.(UTC)

Well, we already had tweak week; there really aren't any other images that need tweaking at this moment. Once you get either Adeline's, Willowtail's, Thistleflame's, or Frostwind's image approved, then I'll add you in as a warrior. The thing about Shaderiver and Foxfire was that you didn't really 'do' the images, you just finished them for the artists. That doesn't necessarily count to me, the only images that I would count up to becoming a warrior were the ones you actually made yourself  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:54, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Ohhh...I've done 3 images too! (Skypaw(A), Cloudflower(W) and Yellowpool(E)), I also helped withsome of Clara's images. Can I be a warrior too? <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:violet">Gossip Queen!!! 15:08, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Yep, congrats :)  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:44, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! :D <font color="white" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Zoeyy <font color="black" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:hotpink">My Talkpage!!! 15:19, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Can I be a warrior too?I've Snowy's rogue image,Abby as a kit,Frostwind as a warrior,Minpaw as a apprentice. 19:26, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

I know, I've added you a few days ago ;)  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 16:14, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Oakclaw (W)- For Approval
Oakclaw

Tigerfur of Bloodclan 21:31, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur and smudge the patches a little :) <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:violet">Gossip Queen!!! 10:26, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Blurred and smudged patches Tigerfur of Bloodclan 16:08, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken the shading  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:21, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

The changes aren't showing.May I help you?The gost,17:05,august 15,2011.(UTC)

Reuploaded- The changes should show now :) Tigerfur of Bloodclan 15:58, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

I sort of recommend redoing this, the white on his fur should be a very pale gray, not straight white. First just fill in the fur with a very pale gray, then use a softer edged brush for the shading  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:42, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:02, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Can I take over this?The Gost Pazuzu ,the greatest villain ever! 08:36, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

There is yellow on his chest, and a big blob of gray on his cheek. If the gray is shading, blur it. Yes, You need to blur the shading. Alot. LOL :3 Venomsplash 01:10, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Go ahead and take over gost! :) Tigerfur of Bloodclan 03:37, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

!Darkangel ~ For Approval

 * [[File:Darkangel.warrior.png]]- UGH I hate this! >.> [[File:Anger.gif]]  M e e p!  16:42, August 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * It's quite good actually :) Blur the highlights and white transition more though, <font color="white" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Zoeyy <font color="black" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:hotpink">My Talkpage!!! 18:09, August 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * Can I take over this?The gost,19:52,august 20,2011.(UTC)
 * Reuploaded No. :|  M e e p!  01:15, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

The only thing I would do is lighten the white some, it looks a bit gray  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 15:35, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blueclaw(A)-For Approval
I'm going to need a LOT of help with this... <font color="white" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Zoeyy <font color="black" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:hotpink">My Talkpage!!! 15:18, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

The shading and highlights are done nicely, it's just the white spots. Make them less circular, and more irregular  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:40, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Could someone help me? I've been trying all day. <font color="white" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Zoeyy <font color="black" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:hotpink">My Talkpage!!! 20:47, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Sure :)  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:56, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: The spots aren't as crisp as I was trying to make them...but I think this is better  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:10, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Looks like snow :D, maybe blur the ear-pink more  England  Flying Mint Bunny 17:26, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

 Reuploaded- Thanks! I blurred the ear-pink a little :) <font color="white" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Zoeyy <font color="black" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:hotpink">My Talkpage!!! 19:22, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

So...improvements? 86.135.44.121 10:01, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading under his neck, and blur the ear pink more. Then he should be ready :)  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:58, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

 Reuploaded-  Blurred the ear-pink a LOT, and darkened the shading under his neck :) <font color="white" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Zoeyy <font color="black" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:hotpink">My Talkpage!!! 12:14, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Just make the shading under his next a TEENY bit more :3 Venomsplash 01:11, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Hollybreeze(W)-for Approval


Can someone help with this? She's come out pinkish and I'm not sure what earpink to use. Thanks, <font color="white" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Zoeyy <font color="black" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:hotpink">My Talkpage!!! 16:06, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Could I help you?The gost,20:50,16 August,2011.(UTC)

Reuploaded.How is this? 11:04, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks :) <font color="white" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Zoeyy <font color="black" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:hotpink">My Talkpage!!! 11:49, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading some, and blur the ear pink  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:10, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

 Reuploaded:- Done :) <font color="white" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Zoeyy <font color="black" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:hotpink">My Talkpage!!! 20:05, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Improvements? <font color="white" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Zoeyy <font color="black" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:hotpink">My Talkpage!!! 19:32, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think the changes have shown yet  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:59, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights blend into the shadows; what color is she supposed to be? And there's no highlights on the top of the head. Me will steal Darkeh&#39;s cookiez &gt;:3 MUAHAHAHA 02:42, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Blackkit(RC)(Ki)- For approval


It's okay...I guess.

Tigerfur of Bloodclan 16:16, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken and blur the shading, and make the ear pink narrower  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:40, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.

The shading is still a bit too defined, maybe lighten it some and blur it  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:46, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.How is this?The gost,20:29,August 22,2011.(UTC)

It's good :) Just blur the shading a tad more, if it's possible. 86.135.44.121 10:03, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Blurred the shading as much as I can :) Tigerfur of Bloodclan 12:13, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blackpaw(A)- For approval


Tigerfur of Bloodclan 17:16, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

I will help you with his apprentice and kit image. 21:02, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Okay! Thanks :) Tigerfur of Bloodclan 01:56, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

This needs alot of work. Thicken and blur the shading, add ear pink and highlights and the back front paw is too dark. Kiba Inuzuka  w00f w00f! :D 23:29, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.How is this?The gost,20:28,august 22,2011.(UTC)

Move the highlights on his chest a bit more towards his shoulder. Light dosent hit the way you have it naturally. Venomsplash 01:12, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Hollybreeze(A)-For Aprroval
Comments? 20:28, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

This is beautiful! Desaturate the ear pink, and blur the shading on the tail  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:45, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.19:49,august 20,2011.(UTC)

The ear pink still looks to saturated and bright, run the desaturate tool over it again  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:51, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.15:09,august 22,2011.(UTC)

Hello?

I might make the ear pink smaller, but that's all I see  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:00, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on her face and neck is WAY too dark. Venomsplash 01:13, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Shadefall(W)-For Approval


Comments?The gost,08:53,August 20,2011.(UTC)

She's too dark; Shadefall is dark gray, not black. I suggest lightening it a lot, and then blur the shading and ear pink  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 15:53, August 20, 2011 (UTC)


 * Blur highlights. Alot. 76.185.139.101 00:14, August 21, 2011 (UTC)


 * The highlights look REALLY weird.... <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="5" color="purple" > You know my rattata...? <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="orange">The top percentage of rattata 18:12, August 21, 2011 (UTC)


 * Reuploaded.Yeah,yeah,I know about the name,but this is the only way to show the change.The name will be changed when will be approved.15:54,august 25,2011.(UTC)

Blur the neck shading, and darken the highlight on her tail  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:00, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.I changed the name slightly to show the changes.The Gost Pazuzu ,the greatest villain ever! 08:36, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Happymealpaw(W)-For Approval
Comments?The gost,09:23,August 21,2011.(UTC)

The M's look weird. And Happymealpaw isn't a warrior. Kiba Inuzuka  w00f w00f! :D 23:24, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

'''Should we decline this? <font color="white" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Zoeyy <font color="black" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:hotpink">My Talkpage!!! 19:34, August 26, 2011 (UTC)'''

On her article says: Rank:Aprrentice\Warrior.The Gost Pazuzu ,the greatest villain ever! 08:36, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

The Gost, I think you should change it to an apprentice since she does not have her warrior name yet  Don't get me confused  With something i'm not 14:47, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

The M's do look wierd, Ghost... Nothing Lost 14:58, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Please, work on this. Story Horse 02:53, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Come on ,Gost..... <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="3" color="dark blue" > noone can hear me scream... <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="dark red"> maybe it's just a dream... 03:02, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Can sameone take over this?

Foxkit (WC2)-For approval
The gost,10:`10,august 21,2011.(UTC)

This is just me being picky, but I would make her eyes a different color. Green or amber or something, so she's not an exact copy of her mom. The article doesn't specify blue eyes, just the same pelt color  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 15:34, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

I indended her to have Green eyes. The color is kind of a red, can you make it a little dark orange-red? <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="5" color="purple" > You know my rattata...? <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="orange">The top percentage of rattata 18:13, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.The changes aren't showing yet!13:36,august 22,2011.(UTC)

Reuploaded.The Gost Pazuzu ,the greatest villain ever! 17:31, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Really pretty. ^^ <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="3" color="dark blue" > noone can hear me scream... <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="dark red"> maybe it's just a dream... 01:59, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Mudkit(WC)-For approval
The gost,10:12,august 20,2011.(UTC)

Make the eye white bigger, and blur the shading  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 15:37, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty~ Although the eyes... look kinda Cross-eyed...Might just be my screen though.<font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="5" color="purple" > You know my rattata...? <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="orange">The top percentage of rattata 18:14, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Add some shading in the eyes and blur the shading like Nightfall said. Moo  nstr   ike  21:00, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.20:00,august 25,2011.(UUTC)

Hello?

I dont see anything wrong but i would define the shading a bit more <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="6" color="blue" >Beware the Foxkip! <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="gray">The Foxkip are coming, the Foxkip are coming!21:14, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Is it just me, or are the eyes, like, EPICALLY bright? Story Horse 02:52, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.The Gost Pazuzu ,the greatest villain ever! 17:32, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

The shading doesn't look right! <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="3" color="dark blue" > noone can hear me scream... <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="dark red"> maybe it's just a dream... 21:02, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Image is not showing
Nightfall,there is a problem with the images .At Hollybreeze's apprentice image,i did do what did you say to do.The thing is that the changes aren't showing.It's so at Shadefall's warrior image,Hershey's,Adeline's.Just look at the history.It is so even with other users.The gost,11:02,august 12,2011.(UTC)

Yep, I noticed that issue. Let's try saving images under a different file name, and then just moving them to the appropriate name when they're approved. However, I think it may be working now, I can tell that Echopaw's image of Darkangel has reuploaded correctly.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 15:33, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, that happens to me too. It does showafter about a day, though. <font color="white" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Zoeyy <font color="black" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:hotpink">My Talkpage!!! 19:09, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Redfire (W) For Approval
20:07, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

It's good for your first try :) Add ear pink, blur the shading, and fix the eye white; it's overlapping the line art  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:08, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED better? ish? The Origional Spoofy 20:12, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah! Make the ear pink a bit more of a reddish salmony color, and blur it. I think you should try making his pelt a little more reddish. Just pick the sponge tool and set it to saturate. You can choose the vibrancy setting too  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:32, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED Better? The Origional Spoofy 01:29, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

The color looks better, but the ear pink is still off. It's a very hot pink at the moment; make it more of a salmony red  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:55, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED Is that good? It's at least salmon-ish. The Origional Spoofy 02:02, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I think that is better, but darken it a little bit  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:10, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

May I help you?the gost,09:26,august 22,2011.(UTC)

Yeah the color is a bit off, it looks kind of purple. And the highlights are to harsh, level them out more with the shading to make it look more natural. Moon 18:07, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED Like that? Kind of?? (the highlights are better at least.) The Origional Spoofy 00:27, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Remove it from a thumbnail  Don't get me confused  With something i'm not 14:46, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

what the heck is a thumbnail Theirs but to do- and die 00:16, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

The box around the charart  Don't get me confused  With something i'm not 01:04, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed it for you. Venomsplash 01:17, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Also, the right eye is a bit blurred. Venomsplash 01:19, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

It is? I don't see it... Theirs but to do- and die 23:22, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

One pupil is bigger than the other Venomsplash 00:35, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED Is that okay? I redid the eyes altogether. Nothing Lost 14:57, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

WHAT THE HECK SOMEONE JUST COMMENT ALREADY Me will steal Darkeh&#39;s cookiez &gt;:3 MUAHAHAHA 02:02, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Spoof, that's unacceptable. It's only been about six days, I mean usually I go five days before asking for comments but that was just a bit too harsh. Blur the ear pink  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:54, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED Better? Me will steal Darkeh&#39;s cookiez &gt;:3 MUAHAHAHA 16:09, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

someone comment plz Story Horse 21:11, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Dappler (Ro) For Approval
Okay, this is Dappler, Redfire's rouge dad. Does the shading look okay? The Origional Spoofy 01:47, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

I like it! Blur the ear pink, and blur the highlights  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:55, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED Better? The Origional Spoofy 01:59, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Make the color of the ear pink a bit more reddish  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:01, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED Like that? The Origional Spoofy 00:22, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but it still looks hot pink to me. Perhaps look at another black charart for some reference? Maybe Nightstar's warrior image.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:09, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED That should be a bit better. The Origional Spoofy 23:39, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, it does :) I would make the highlights bigger  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:46, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

May I help you?The Gost Pazuzu ,the greatest villain ever! 08:36, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

This isn't about Dappler, jsyk: 'The Ghost', you keep saying 'can i help you. can i help you.' Who says I need help?! Theirs but to do- and die 19:25, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

I wanna be nice with you! cries The Gost Pazuzu ,the greatest villain ever! 19:02, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry... but it's my picture, and... um... *in loss for words* *cries* Theirs but to do- and die 22:02, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

... Back to the picture, smallen the earpink a bit, and add depth to the eyes  Don't get me confused  With something i'm not 14:45, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Depth, insomuch how? Theirs but to do- and die 00:16, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Depth: Add shading to the bottom of the eye  Don't get me confused  With something i'm not 01:06, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED Better? Nothing Lost 14:56, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

WHAT THE HECK SOMEONE JUST COMMENT ALREADY Me will steal Darkeh&#39;s cookiez &gt;:3 MUAHAHAHA 02:02, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Enough of that please. Make the highlights a little bigger and blur the ear pink  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:54, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED Better? Me will steal Darkeh&#39;s cookiez &gt;:3 MUAHAHAHA 16:10, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

It's better and pretty.The Gost Pazuzu ,the greatest villain ever! 13:31, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

thx, anyone else want to comment? Story Horse 21:11, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Mudheart (Q) For Approval
Slightly different shading style I think, if it's too much then tell me.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:05, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

So pretty. :D -Sagestorm70 02:13, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

I'm glad you think so :3  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:15, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

I'd blur the transitions a little, but apart from that, it's really good :) <font color="white" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Zoeyy <font color="black" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:hotpink">My Talkpage!!! 08:42, August 22, 2011 (UTC)


 * Pretty! Darken the gray and blur the gray transition on the head, Kiba Inuzuka  w00f w00f! :D  12:40, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I darkened the gray on the head, and blurred the gray transition. I had to change the file name slightly so the changes would show up, but we can rename it whenever it's approved  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:02, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

There's a big blotch of gray inbetween the tail and paws/shoulder. Kiba Inuzuka  w00f w00f! :D 12:49, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Ah, I forgot to fix that  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:52, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Rockpelt~ Up for Aproval
I need help with the shading, and I know he is a whitehorn, but i'm taking a wild guss that's the same of a warrior  Don't get me confused  With something i'm not 14:37, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Very nice! Blur the ear pink, and darken the shading some  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:01, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Can I help you?The Gost Pazuzu ,the greatest villain ever! 08:36, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

No thanks Gost, I can do it on my own, And Nightfall, sure, you might have to wait a bit cause school is starting  Don't get me confused  With something i'm not 15:18, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded and it's gross, can you help me Night?  Don't get me confused  With something i'm not 15:53, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Can Venomsplash become a warrior?
Can she become a warrior?She has three aproved images! Anyway,I love her!(As a user!I'm not yuri!)

The Gost Pazuzu ,the greatest villain ever! 18:47, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

I would, I just don't know how to edit the userbox xD Kiba Inuzuka  w00f w00f! :D  01:00, August 28, 2011 (UTC)!i 

'''I know!The Gost Pazuzu ,the greatest villain ever! 06:18, August 28, 2011 (UTC)\'''

OMG. Gost this is so sweet of you!! Venomsplash 18:16, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I agree you are a warrior, but I wish you would have told Nighfall Ghost (Cause there is no deputy, and only senior warriors and the leads are allowed to add names) and Echo, you just go and add a name  Don't get me confused  With something i'm not 18:25, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

I didn't even notice about the whole rank thing. All I care about is having fun and help with the CAP. :3 Venomsplash 18:37, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

That's vine Venom, your an amazing artist :P All i'm saying is GHost should have asked Night first :P When she got Night's permission, then I would have added you XD  Don't get me confused  With something i'm not 18:53, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Ah I understand Venomsplash 20:10, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

It's like, impossible to edit the user box. I would have added Venom awhile ago. Kiba Inuzuka  w00f w00f! :D 01:28, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Pepper(K)~For Approval
Its about time I upload another char art! Im slowly challenging myself to get tougher and tougher with the patterns. Since there is alot of peppers, here is the link to hers. Pepper. Thanks! Venomsplash 18:36, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

This looks awesome :). Blur the shading on the haunch and darken the shading overall. Vega;  Beauty is absoulute.  03:12, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

This amazing! I agree with Elorisa, Other then that I see nothing wrong  Don't get me confused  With something i'm not 15:54, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry.. I need to withdraw this, Gimp is being weird. Venomsplash 01:00, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Venom... Are you sure it's GIMP? Because if it's not showing the changes it's been happening to eveyone. If not.... sorry... <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="6" color="blue" >Beware the Foxkip! <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="gray">The Foxkip are coming, the Foxkip are coming!08:16, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

are you working on this?The Gost Pazuzu ,the greatest villain ever! 17:23, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Obviously not. And NO, you are not taking this over. 20:03, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not taking over ! I just asked ! Plus,school have started!( Jesus Christ!)The Gost Pazuzu ,the greatest villain ever! 05:52, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

But you've been doing it wayy do often...... And, school has started for almost all of us by now. ._. <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="3" color="dark blue" > noone can hear me scream... <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="dark red"> maybe it's just a dream... 15:36, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Finchkit (WC) (Ki) For Approval
Yay :D Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:17, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

I don't see anything wrong!The Gost Pazuzu ,the greatest villain ever! 06:50, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

The eyes look great. The shading might be a bit odd, but it looks really good overall! Nothing Lost 14:54, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

.-. i don't see anything wrong with the shading. beautiful nightfall! <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="6" color="blue" > Beware the Foxkip! <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="gray"> The Foxkip are coming, the Foxkip are coming! 21:16, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, so then mah eyes are bein wierd! :) Nothing Lost 23:51, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

As in, I apparantly can't see straight... :P Nothing Lost 23:51, September 4, 2011 (UTC)


 * P <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="6" color="blue" > Beware the Foxkip! <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="gray"> The Foxkip are coming, the Foxkip are coming! 08:15, September 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * Um... yeah Story Horse 02:51, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Scarheart (W) For Approval
I really like how he turned out. I had a bit of trouble with the eye, but I've had previous practice with Smolder's rogue image. Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:17, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Good job on the scars. Nothing Lost 14:55, September 3, 2011 (UTC)


 * This is really beautiful Night! :D CBA? Kiba Inuzuka  w00f w00f! :D  19:19, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the gray and the scars a tad more, otherwise looks beautiful :) Vega;  Beauty is absoulute.  01:38, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Thanks guys! I blurred the gray and the scars.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:56, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Why is all your work so good? I'm jealous. :( You might want to thicken the lineart on the torn ear. If it dosen't work, don't worry about it, I'm just being picky. :D -- Fawny Keep on Smiling :D 12:28, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

The lost eye might be a bit... wierd. Or it might just be me, the oddeyed Spoofy. It looks strange to me how you can still see the amber thru it. Story Horse 02:50, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Nah, it's good. It's supposed to look like that because his eye got clawed in, but you can still see 0.05% of it. <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="3" color="dark blue" > noone can hear me scream... <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="dark red"> maybe it's just a dream... 21:00, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Opalshine (A) CBA
I like the shininess of her pelt :) Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:17, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

You're right, the shininess does look good. Really looks like her name! Nothing Lost 14:55, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:38, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

I don't see anything wrong with this. <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="3" color="dark blue" > noone can hear me scream... <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="dark red"> maybe it's just a dream... 19:05, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Niether do I :D CBA?  Don't get me confused  With something i'm not 17:58, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Simply brilliant, Night. Simply brilliant. :3 Me will steal Darkeh&#39;s cookiez &gt;:3 MUAHAHAHA 17:41, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Febreezemist(W)-For Aproval
Comments?The Gost Pazuzu ,the greatest villain ever! 08:58, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Hello?

Not sure if i'm allowed to comment here. If I'm not, tell me. So. I think it's pretty, but the highlights make it look pink where the body is purple, and I don't see any shadows. You might want to take that into consideration. Nothing Lost 14:54, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

This is actually very well done. There is some shading on her hind legs, there doesn't really need to be really, really dark shadows. As long as it's noticable, it's fine. I would like to say that the earpink looks really odd, i don't know why, but to me it seems out of the blue because of her pelt color. Otherwise, well done. <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="3" color="dark blue" > noone can hear me scream... <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="dark red"> maybe it's just a dream... 00:08, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink looks like it's smudged too big, or mebbe that's just me. >_< Me will steal Darkeh&#39;s cookiez &gt;:3 MUAHAHAHA 17:40, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Sunpaw (WC2) (A) for Approval


This is my first Character Art. Any Comments? Hollyleaf Of Thunderclan  16:18, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Good Job!

It needs shading, and the yellow is to bright and unatural for a cat. The eyes sghould always be a different color. Tigerfur of Bloodclan 17:10, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Not bad, but it defanitely (who cares on spelling...!) needs shading. On the right ear, the pink doesn't show up as well as on the left. You might also want to make the fur more orangish so that it looks more natural. Nothing Lost 18:05, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

This might not be the best example, but my picture of Sunlion below is slightly orangish and looks more natural. Nothing Lost 18:14, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  Hollyleaf Of Thunderclan  19:43, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Better... but there still isn't shading. Nothing Lost 20:03, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded But it's not showing the changes or anything. It's acting strange. I'll try again tomorrow. Hollyleaf Of Thunderclan  20:34, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

May I help you?The Gost Pazuzu ,the greatest villain ever! 06:18, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Sure! Hollyleaf Of Thunderclan  15:07, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.How is this?The Gost Pazuzu ,the greatest villain ever! 20:07, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Bramblekit (WC) (K) For Approval
I don't know what to do about the outline bit, and I havn't figured out how to make good eyes yet. Hollyleaf Of Thunderclan  20:09, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

The outline, I dunno. But you might want to make the eye shine a bit bigger. If you're using Pixlr, you can use the burn tool to add shading to the bottom of the eye. That might help. And the orangish paw looks solid; you might want to blur it out a bit. Nothing Lost 22:14, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Make him more brownish, otherwise, looks neat :D Vega;  Beauty is absoulute.  01:37, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I don't have the burn tool. Hollyleaf Of Thunderclan  15:43, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Is there anything else that needs doing? HollyleafOfThunderclan You have their friendship, and that is a loyalty that never dies  15:51, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

I find it odd that your program doesn't have a burn tool. If you use pixlr, then it's the little fist icon on the tool panel. If you use GIMP, it's the black microphone icon set to "burn". Make the ear pink more reddish, and darken the ginger paw  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 16:49, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried using the burn tool, but It doesn't seem to work. (I don't use GIMP often, and only use it for a bit of my image.) HollyleafOfThunderclan  You have their friendship, and that is a loyalty that never dies  01:01, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Absent
Guys,I will be absent for 4-5 days.I must go to the hospital .Don't decline my characters.The Gost Pazuzu ,the greatest villain ever! 21:39, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Oh my god, the hospital!? What for!? D: Toshiro  Hyorinmaru cannot be two DeathGod's sword!  00:04, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

I have diabetes.The Gost Pazuzu ,the greatest villain ever! 04:44, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

D: I'm sorry Gost! Hope you get out of the hospital soon... I know what the hospital is, trust me.... I know, it sucks. <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="6" color="blue" > Beware the Foxkip! <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="gray"> The Foxkip are coming, the Foxkip are coming! 08:14, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

I'm really sorry about this Gost, and I'll be praying for you. I also promise that you're chararts won't be declined while you're gone.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:12, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

I've comed back.Plus,don't worry,I hav diabetes for 9 years and 8 months.The Gost Pazuzu ,the greatest villain ever! 05:17, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

i'll be unactive on CAP for a while
Well what the title says. Won't be active for CAP for a while. That doesnt mean you can take over all my chararts and ask if you can. Thank you. <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="6" color="blue" >Beware the Foxkip! <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="gray">The Foxkip are coming, the Foxkip are coming!08:13, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Moon (Ro) (K) - CBA
I named this character after me so he must look awesome. Comments? Moo  nstr   ike  17:23, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

This is so cute :3 Imma wait to CBA it, incase someone sees somethin wrong :P -- Toshiro  Hyorinmaru cannot be two DeathGod's sword! 17:25, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

I don't see anything wrong :P 98.149.212.158 17:50, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Comments Before Approval?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 16:47, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Shading needs to be darkened. 18:13, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed, -- Fawny Keep on Smiling :D 12:25, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe so. But it's still so totally good! Story Horse 02:49, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

reuploaded.I have fixed it!The Gost Pazuzu ,the greatest villain ever! 20:48, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

The gost, did Moon ask for help?  Don't get me confused  With something i'm not 21:26, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Lemme answer that... hm, no. Story Horse 01:22, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Akiko (Kit) ~ For Approval
-- I'm pretty proud of this. Haven't done a charart in a looooonnnngggg time. =) -- Toshiro Hyorinmaru cannot be two DeathGod's sword! 17:46, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

The black is a little to dark, you can't see the lineart. Moo  nstr   ike  20:10, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Moon's right. But it still looks good- good shading on the white and good blurs. Nothing Lost 21:44, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Nice job Echo, the eyes look a little funny. -- Fawny Keep on Smiling :D 12:24, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Fawn's right; maybe lighten them a bit to separate them a bit more from the fur? Story Horse 02:48, September 19, 2011 (UTC)


 * Reuploaded: If your wondering how I did pure white an shaded, I use Photoshop/GIMP and I mainly use layors. Other than that, I lightened it and the eyes are fine. ifgimpdidntupdateimmurderingmycomputer -- The Original Echo The one and only Sierra!! X333  22:27, September 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * hohohohohoh pretty. <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="3" color="dark blue" > noone can hear me scream... <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="dark red"> maybe it's just a dream... 01:49, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Mosspetal (W) ~ For Approval
So... this is Mosspetal. First tabby, and it kinda fails... Nothing Lost 22:28, September 5, 2011 (UTC)


 * Add shading/highlights. -- Toshiro Hyorinmaru cannot be two DeathGod's sword! 22:30, September 5, 2011 (UTC)


 * oh DUH Nothing Lost 22:38, September 5, 2011 (UTC)


 * REDUPLOADED better?


 * IGNORE THE LAST ONE


 * REUPLOADED is that okay? Nothing Lost 23:01, September 5, 2011 (UTC)


 * It has blurred line art on the nose and eyes. The ear pink looks odd, make it darker. Moo   nstr   ike  23:03, September 5, 2011 (UTC)


 * I agree with Moon. Also, add highlights on the white. -- Toshiro Hyorinmaru cannot be two DeathGod's sword! 23:05, September 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * REUPLOADED better? Nothing Lost 23:10, September 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * It looks pretty good- but what do I know, I fail at this stuff xP- Darkcloud Current obsession: Bleach!  00:31, September 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Yeah... good for you, Dark. Anything to say about shading or the stripes? Me will steal Darkeh&#39;s cookiez &gt;:3 MUAHAHAHA 00:04, September 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * Lighten the white on her fur, it looks too gray. Make the ear pink more reddish as well, and add eye white to her eyes.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky!

01:39, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED Like that? Me will steal Darkeh&#39;s cookiez &gt;:3 MUAHAHAHA 01:55, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Anyone? Me will steal Darkeh&#39;s cookiez &gt;:3 MUAHAHAHA 16:11, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

The eye white looks strange.The Gost Pazuzu ,the greatest villain ever! 16:56, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

... I don think it looks bad Me will steal Darkeh&#39;s cookiez &gt;:3 MUAHAHAHA 02:44, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

The eye white needs to be fixed, and the earpink isn't like other warrior images, for your first tabby, this is good Darken the ear pink,  Don't get me confused  With something i'm not 18:00, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED I darkened the ear pink, and I tried darkening the green so that the highlight on the eyes were more defined. (Before, the green was much lighter.) Me will steal Darkeh&#39;s cookiez &gt;:3 MUAHAHAHA 02:44, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

The eyes' outline are.... Weird. Although, the rest is really good. <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="3" color="dark blue" >noone can hear me scream... <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="dark red">maybe it's just a dream... 00:09, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

The eyes' outline... I can't really help. It's the blank. Me will steal Darkeh&#39;s cookiez &gt;:3 MUAHAHAHA 17:39, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes, make the ear pink more pinky, check out a different warrior image or a tutorial to see the eyes, but this is good! Well Done!! -- Fawny Keep on Smiling :D 12:23, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED The stripes are about as far blurred as they can go now; I did my best on the earpink, and sort of maybe fixed the eyes? Story Horse 02:47, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

This looks really pretty! I don't see anything wrong <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="3" color="dark blue" > noone can hear me scream... <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="dark red"> maybe it's just a dream... 02:48, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Thx. Is it just me, or does the mark on the head look like wheat? >_< Story Horse 21:08, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Redfrost (W) - For Approval
There ya go! Comments? Moo  nstr   ike  22:43, September 5, 2011 (UTC)


 * Very pretty Moon! :D -- Toshiro Hyorinmaru cannot be two DeathGod's sword! 22:49, September 5, 2011 (UTC)


 * Naice. But why, on the tail, is the shading on TOP? Just a question....Me will steal Darkeh&#39;s cookiez &gt;:3 MUAHAHAHA 00:05, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

I LOVE this! I would lighten the ear pink as it's a bit difficult to distinguish from the ginger on his head. Maybe lighten the white too, it looks a bit gray  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:27, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Very pretty! I would lighten the earpink, it looks barley seeable because of his pelt color. This is beatiful! <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="3" color="dark blue" >noone can hear me scream... <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="dark red">maybe it's just a dream... 00:15, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

@Spoof: Well, You know how... Man, it's really hard to explain... Uhm, let's say.... If you stick out your arm, you'll see that one side is shaded. And it's pretty much the same thing with his tail. Sorry, i'm REALLY bad at explaining. xD <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="3" color="dark blue" >noone can hear me scream... <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="dark red">maybe it's just a dream... 00:15, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Moon, this is amazing! I've missed you and your art!! Could you blur the shading on the tail? -- Fawny Keep on Smiling :D 12:21, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Here, I fixed it for you. Comments? The Gost Pazuzu ,the greatest villain ever! 20:33, September 19, 2011 (UTC)


 * Ghost, you can't take over images without premission! You have to stop! :| -- The Original Echo The one and only Sierra!! X333  22:44, September 19, 2011 (UTC)


 * This is taking over? Excuse me!And I don't want take over this! I just wanna help! I wanna my help to fill up the unactivity of other users!

O_O The Gost Pazuzu ,the greatest villain ever! 05:34, September 20, 2011 (UTC)


 * But it doesn'y seem fair. You redid my Silverkit when i only asked for someone to fix the waste. I worked REALLY hard on it. And it's their responsibility. Plus, most of us are living life in High School/Junior High, and we've got a LOT of stress on us, and we don't have enough time to do this stuff. You have to be patient. <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="3" color="dark blue" >noone can hear me scream... <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="dark red">maybe it's just a dream... 20:58, September 20, 2011 (UTC)


 * 'Cept us Fox xD We're in middle school. But dats not the point. Yes, that is taking over. Also, I'm going to punish your or be mean and I know you live in another country, but when you add punctuation, add a space, like I'm doing. I ficed some of your mistakes for now. :) -- The Original Echo The one and only Sierra!! X333  22:23, September 20, 2011 (UTC)


 * Shhhh echo xD Yea das not the point tho. Echo. When you said "i fixed some of your mistakes" you said ficed.... xDDDD <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="3" color="dark blue" > noone can hear me scream... <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="dark red"> maybe it's just a dream... 01:49, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Leafheart - For Approval
I. Dratically. Improved. Comments? 00:28, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

So. Purtayyy.... I would just lighten the shading a tad more, then it'd be... Perfect <3 <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="3" color="dark blue" >noone can hear me scream... <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="dark red">maybe it's just a dream... 00:30, September 16, 2011 (UTC)'

Re-Uploaded: Thanks =) Lightened shading. 00:34, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

No problem! That was fast! This is really nice. I don't see anything wrong now ;) <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="3" color="dark blue" >noone can hear me scream... <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="dark red">maybe it's just a dream... 00:40, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Wow! :L This is amazing! I don't see anything wrong  Don't get me confused  With something i'm not 11:32, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Nice job Ice. :) I think you should blur the strips a bit more. And darken th ear pink, it's too light for the fur colour. -- Fawny Keep on Smiling :D 12:20, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes on the head look a bit awkward. Story Horse 02:39, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, that is true. But i don't exactly know how you could fix it... It would also be really hard to remove the stripes, i'm not really sure what you should do about that. <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="3" color="dark blue" > noone can hear me scream... <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="dark red"> maybe it's just a dream... 02:48, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Hm. Well, okay; you might want to try; if it totally fails just don't worry about it XD tabbies are the WORST. Story Horse 02:55, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

The Gost's Images

 * Snuck on the computer xD Anyways, I just counted all of Ghost's images up for approval and it way 11. E-le-ven. That is WAY over th limit. :/ What to do... I dunno. -- Toshiro Hyorinmaru cannot be two DeathGod's sword!  04:59, September 7, 2011 (UTC)


 * Yes...I agree that that is quite a number of chararts to have. Technically, the rule of thumb is that you can have as many images up as you want, as long as you update them regularly. And, I think Gost is actually pretty good with keeping up with all her chararts. But, most of the page consists of her chararts. I promised that I wouldn't decline her images while she's at the hospital, but when she gets back I think we should bring this up again.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky!

01:36, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

She's back up, and i think that she is good at updating, but i'm getting a little annoyed with her always asking to take over our chararts. I don't mean to be offensive, but it's just getting old. I just want to say that just because we don't always update, it doesn't mean you can go around redoing everything for everybody. It is very nice of her to offer help, but i don't think that she needs to always do it. And i do feel like 11 is... i don't know... Way over what people usually do....<font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="3" color="dark blue" > noone can hear me scream... <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="dark red"> maybe it's just a dream... 00:11, September 16, 2011 (UTC)'''

'''Asking isn't too bad, but now the gost is editing WITHOUT asking. Someone needs to talk with them. Story Horse 01:23, September 20, 2011 (UTC)'''

Grace (E) - For Approval
Nervous about this. I haven't done one of these for a while. Comments? -- Fawny Keep on Smiling :D 17:34, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Hm... *shrugs* Not bad, although the eyes look to me like they're too dark for the pelt. (Might totally just be me.) Story Horse 02:39, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Really pretty! Spoof: I don't really think that it looks like it, but if Fawn wants to change it, i guess she will... <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="3" color="dark blue" >noone can hear me scream... <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="dark red">maybe it's just a dream... 02:47, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

That's me, the totally random nonsense oddeyed Spoofy XD Story Horse 02:56, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

XD Hey, without my contacts, my laptop is just a blue and gray blurry dot xD <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="3" color="dark blue" >noone can hear me scream... <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="dark red">maybe it's just a dream... 02:59, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

It's kind of the colour I imagine her eyes being. :) -- Fawny Keep on Smiling :D 15:00, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. This is really beautiful, i don't see anything wrong. Good job ;) <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="3" color="dark blue" > noone can hear me scream... <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="dark red"> maybe it's just a dream... 20:55, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the white and darken shading. Also, there's some white on her belly. -- The Original Echo The one and only Sierra!! X333  22:20, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Applefall (Q)-For approval
Here she is! Hope you like her! <3 The only thing that really bothers me is the creepy eyes and the earpink. Can someone help with that? And when i ask that, i don't mean to redo the whole image... ._. And i'm not going to let someone take over the images i'm recently going to post up. My goal is to get at least half of the cats who needs Images in ThunderClan done. At least i'll be active and improving... right? <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="3" color="dark blue" >noone can hear me scream... <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="dark red">maybe it's just a dream... 20:54, September 20, 2011 (UTC)


 * Who are you and what have you done with Fox :OOOO THIS IS AMAZING <3 I would blur shading, add white to the eye and make the ear pink more.. pink lawl. -- The Original Echo The one and only Sierra!! X333  22:19, September 20, 2011 (UTC)


 * I agree with Echo. You probs think that the ears look creepy without the highlights. The earpink nearly blends in with the pelt and is a little... big. But it's still purdy good!! :3 97.121.143.208 22:45, September 20, 2011 (UTC)


 * OHOHOHOHO MAYBE I'M LUCAS OR- No i'm Fox <3 Thank you mai dear Echo. I'll get on ittt. And thank chu..... contributer? xD <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="3" color="dark blue" > noone can hear me scream... <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="dark red"> maybe it's just a dream... 01:47, September 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * Ofail. That contrib was me. My com is flipping me around logged in logged out... Story Horse 23:10, September 21, 2011 (UTC)


 * Maybe I should make Eric comment on this c:< -- The Original Echo The one and only Sierra!! X333  16:49, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Loner blanks
If I want to create an image for a loner, Do I use a Rogue blank? I think there should be Loner blanks. HollyleafOfThunderclan You have their friendship, and that is a loyalty that never dies  00:51, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

A couple of people are already making some. :p but nobody's put any up, so if you beat them to it, then sure :) <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="3" color="dark blue" > noone can hear me scream... <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="dark red"> maybe it's just a dream... 01:14, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Foxfire(R)-For approval
Yep! Foxfire's rougue image. She was just moved to Rougue, but i'm going to move her back. :P Might as well. I have a bunch of files that have been sitting in this laptop, so prepare for charart spam. :P I personally don't like this, but i think it kinda looks cute <3 <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="3" color="dark blue" > noone can hear me scream... <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="dark red"> maybe it's just a dream... 04:16, September 24, 2011 (UTC)


 * Can I approve this? Liek, Right now? <3 -- The Original Echo The one and only Sierra!! X333  16:47, September 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * Blur the shading on the haunch, add earpink, and the eyes look a tad odd. Selene;  She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  16:49, September 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * Yeah, The eyes look Cross Eyed. (Might Just Be Me) -<font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="3" color="orange" > I shall stand by your side... <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="dark red"> My Talk 16:50, September 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * Not just you. The black around the nose and muzzle looks a bit odd, you need earpink, there are ginger flecks on the hind left leg that I'm assuming don't belong there, and smudge the black on the ears. Story Horse 21:06, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Dark Forest/StarClan stuff! :"D
Well, while experimenting with effects, i thought that maybe if we blurred the blanks a lil' the lineart would look blurry, resulting it to... leak, i suppose is the word? Anyways, it makes it look more.... spirit-ish? xD Well, here's what I got: Well, i think it looks fine. I just took Foxfire's rougue image and tested a bunch of times, and this is what i got! :D Also, i did the sponge tool on the bottom of the legs and everything a little bit, and here's what i got that time::D Wel, what do you think of it? Should we maybe do this for StarClan/Dark Forest chararts? <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="3" color="dark blue" > noone can hear me scream... <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="dark red"> maybe it's just a dream... 05:32, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

It has been decided that there will not be StarClan or Dark Forest blanks. 16:50, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

That'd be hard to do anyway. Story Horse 21:55, September 24, 2011 (UTC)