Cats of the Clans Wiki talk:Character Art Project

Yellowpool (Q) For Approval


Can you approve the above image? Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 17:06, October 8, 2010 (UTC)

Pixlr won't work. How can I approve this? Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 17:30, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

How is pixlr not working? I'm literally using it right now. Or do you mean your computer isn't letting you get on?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 17:59, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

It isn't letting me save my improved cat. When I hit the save button, it just go's, instead of finishing the savng process. Then when I try to open it here, the changes are obviously not saved, as they come up as they were before I made the changes on pixlr. Basically its not saving properly. Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 16:26, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, I'm not sure if we can help-- 03:07, October 8, 2010 (UTC)

It's okay, I'm downloading GIMP, anyway. Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 16:35, October 8, 2010 (UTC)

There, I got it for you :) The ear pink doesn't match her warrior image. Take that color, and use it for this one  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:54, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Better? (Sorry, I can't really get it up properly) :P Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 15:41, October 11, 2010 (UTC) Hi, it turned out I needed to update flashplayer:P. Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 13:37, October 29, 2010 (UTC)

I added in the charart for you. Blur the ear pink and darken the shading-- 02:52, October 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Better? I did what you asked. Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 17:50, November 8, 2010 (UTC)

I added the pic in for you. :P-Rawr. I win. 05:13, November 13, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks. Any comments? Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 17:11, November 15, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a little, and the ear pink a LOT. Very nice! Dove song  01:15, November 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Once again, it's not coming up(though it's saved to my pc) so I've put the url up there:) I blurred the ear pink a lot and blurred shading. Comments?? Clarrissa   My Talk Page   19:45, November 19, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the highlight on her muzzle; it looks a bit too bright compared with her other highlights. Darken the shading on her belly, legs, and neck  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:06, November 21, 2010 (UTC)

Really? I think it looks fine.  HA WK FI RE98  22:24, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Orangeblossom (R)-For approval
So... My second cat. She's Rug 's mom. :D Comments?- Daughter of Scourge Place of no ☆s!

Hm; her page says she's a kittypet. If she is, then you'll have to wait until we get kittypet blanks approved to put her up  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:24, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

For now, can I use this blank? It's my fave.- Daughter of Scourge Place of no ☆s!

If she's currently a rogue, then you can  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:29, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks!- Daughter of Scourge Place of no ☆s!

No problem ;) Blur and darken the shading a lot, and add more shading. Blur the ear pink as well  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:59, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

Will try!- Daughter of Scourge Place of no ☆s!

Reuploaded...I think. My computer hates me.- Daughter of Scourge Place of no ☆s!

You need to darken and blur the shading a lot more. And don't blur the black part in the eye. -- Mousebrair o r Cloudfrost  15:46, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Do you need any help? :)  HA WK FI RE98  16:03, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Not right, Hawky. But thanks! :D Daughter of Scourge Place of no ☆s! 21:30, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Better?- Daughter of Scourge Place of no ☆s!

I see absolutely no shading, please add a lot, and darken and blur it  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:41, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Now I need help! Hawky?- Daughter of Scourge Place of no ☆s!

I'm on it. :)  HA WK FI RE98  22:24, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Is this any good?  HA WK FI RE98  22:54, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Wow.. but.. she's more brown now. D:- Daughter of Scourge Place of no ☆s!

Then go over the image with the sponge tool set to 10 strength. :)  HA WK FI RE98  23:04, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

I did that, and she more orange now. :D Thanks for the help Hawkfire!!- Daughter of Scourge Place of no ☆s!

Lighten the shading, it's way too dark  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky!00:44, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, but I'm a huge person on shading, and i love how it defines the image. I like dark shading. I think it looks fine, but do whatever with it. :/  HA WK FI RE98  23:11, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, the shading is way too dark. Blur it as well-- 23:44, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

Shading does define the image, but it's not supposed to be as noticeable as this. Like, the first thing you see when you look at this image is shading. When you look at a charart, the first thing you should is, well, the charart :)  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky!23:14, September 29, 2010 (UTC)

You don't fail! I like it this way. Makes it unquie! :D- Daughter of Scourge Place of no ☆s!
 * sigh* Then change it back to the way it was, and someone else better than me help her. I fail.  HA WK FI RE98  23:28, September 29, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe lighten it?  Birdstar  You infected me with mildew? 17:45, October 3, 2010 (UTC)

If I lighten it, she turns too brown, so I'd rather not.- Daughter of Scourge Place of no ☆s!

Don't lighten the image, just lighten the shading  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky!19:13, October 3, 2010 (UTC)

Will do.- Daughter of Scourge Place of no ☆s!

I did change it, but my compter won't let me upload it. I'll trry later.- Daughter of Scourge Place of no ☆s!

She isn't a rogue. She's a kittypet. She shouldn't be on here. I doesn't say she is a rogue. This should be declined due to the reason. Mysticfur You don' say shut up you say please shut up 13:30, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

She was formerly a kittypet, she is currently a rogue  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky!21:34, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

Dark never said she was a rogue.

Hm; her page says she's a kittypet. If she is, then you'll have to wait until we get kittypet blanks approved to put her up  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky!00:24, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

For now, can I use this blank? It's my fave.- Daughter of Scourge Place of no ☆s!

If she's currently a rogue, then you can  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky!03:29, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks!- Daughter of Scourge <sup style="font-family:Ariel;color:Red">Place of no ☆s!

She just did it because she likes the blank.... :/ Vampirewave ☺ ♫Happy Halloween! ♫ 00:22, October 11, 2010 (UTC)

'''Darkcloud, you may only use this blank if Orangeblossom is a rogue. If not, wait until kittypet blanks are approved. 21:02, October 11, 2010 (UTC)'''

Orangeblossom is a rouge.- Daughter of Scourge <sup style="font-family:Ariel;color:Red">Place of no ☆s! 

Guys, seriously! Quit arguing! Orangeblossom is a rogue, okay? Now back to the image. Can you reupload it back yet?  HA WK FI RE98  23:29, October 13, 2010 (UTC)

I did.

Reuploaded: Better?- Daughter of Scourge <sup style="font-family:Ariel;color:Red">Place of no ☆s! 

Yes, but do you want me to redo the shading to make it better? I can. It will save you time and energy. :) Lighter and neater.  HA WK FI RE98  02:03, October 14, 2010 (UTC)

I like it the way it is... Thank you for the offer though! :D- Daughter of Scourge <sup style="font-family:Ariel;color:Red">Place of no ☆s!

I think the shading at least needs to be lighter  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky!02:51, October 16, 2010 (UTC)

If I do that, she goes yellowey. I like it the way it is.- Daughter of Scourge <sup style="font-family:Ariel;color:Red">Place of no ☆s!

The shading is really dark. Find a way to make it look more natural. Blur the ear pink a bit more-- 02:53, October 30, 2010 (UTC)

All right, I'm gonna say it again, Everytime I try to lighten her, she goes yellow! So I can't lighten her. I can blur the ears however, and that's what I'm doing.- Go Giants! <sup style="font-family:Ariel;color:Black">We won the World Series! 20:18, November 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * pouts* Fine! I'll make the shading lighter! D:- Go Giants! <sup style="font-family:Ariel;color:Black">In the World Series!

Darkcloud, if she goes yellow than saturate her  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:55, November 5, 2010 (UTC)

I dont know how to do that.- Go Giants! <sup style="font-family:Ariel;color:Black">We won the World Series! 21:05, November 5, 2010 (UTC)

All you have to do is select the sponge tool, and make sure it's set on "saturate" then, run it over her pelt  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:07, November 5, 2010 (UTC)

I use GIMP, so there is no sponge.-Rawr. I win. 08:47, November 7, 2010 (UTC)

In GIMP, go to Colors>Hue Saturation, then you can move the saturation thing back and forth to change it-- 20:29, November 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Comments?-Rawr. I win. 05:51, November 8, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the shading-- 06:11, November 8, 2010 (UTC)

I Can't.-_- -Rawr. I win.

You can't? Just run the dodge tool over the shading on a low opacity, it should be lightened if you do that-- 06:35, November 8, 2010 (UTC)

I've tried that. I have a lousy mouse, so the brush usally slips, and make it look strange.-Rawr. I win. 07:12, November 8, 2010 (UTC)

Make it a bit more orange. Creamsplash The stars will never forget you.  22:06, November 11, 2010 (UTC)

It was more orange, and she looked like a cat popiscle. -Rawr. I win. 00:15, November 12, 2010 (UTC)

Just lighten the shading and it will be good.-- 07:20, November 14, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:02, November 21, 2010 (UTC)

Ok, I'm going to say this for what, the 10th time?! I CAN"T LIGHTEN THE SHADING ANYMORE!!!-Rawr. I win. 19:33, November 21, 2010 (UTC)

Why not? It's too dark. And if you're worried about the color, than saturate her afterwards  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:59, November 21, 2010 (UTC)

I've tried that. I use GIMP, so it goes yellow, then bright orange. I've tried. I can't get it.-Rawr. I win. 22:16, November 21, 2010 (UTC)

Want some help? I use Pixlr, but I could probably make it work. <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 23:40, November 21, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, please help me.-Rawr. I win. 02:35, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

Dark, can I PLEASE redo it? It will help SO much better!  HA WK FI RE98  22:24, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Sure, I guess.. I personally like it the way it is, but ok, Hawky.-Mapleshade iz Awesum! 22:43, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. See? Much easier. :)  HA WK FI RE98  23:19, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

o_o that's really purty!!-Mapleshade iz Awesum! 00:10, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

Thistlekit (RC) (Ki) - For Approval
Well, here you go. I tried a new style with the stripes - jagged. Personally, I think it looks good. I'm really proud of this. Construcments? 20:58, October 11, 2010 (UTC)

I agree, but the stripes look very unnatural. I would prefer sticking to the more realistic style. Make the ear pink bigger and the eyes more of a yellow-orange color instead of dark orange.  HA WK FI RE98  21:46, October 11, 2010 (UTC)

Also add depth to the eyes once you made it a yellow orange color :)  Sand  BOO...Trick or treat 21:56, October 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Really? I like the stripes as it is now. 21:59, October 11, 2010 (UTC)

Thistlekit doesn't have stripes, he's just a gray tom. Make his legs dark gray-- 22:50, October 11, 2010 (UTC)

No...this is a different Thistlekit, in RiverClan, the son of Rivermoon and Crookedfang. 22:52, October 11, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, you had it as a different Thistlekit. Anyway, darken the shading and make the stripes more realistic. Add more stripes to his face-- 23:00, October 11, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined-- 03:08, October 30, 2010 (UTC)

I like the stripes this way. I don't want to change it. Meanwhile, if I have any time later today, I'll try to work on it. 13:06, October 30, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading, and the eyes look a bit weird. Change the pupil. Creamsplash The stars will never forget you.  22:06, November 11, 2010 (UTC)

Make the pupil look like the one is Scorchkit's picture (below). He looks good otherwise. <font color="Thistle" >Dove song  01:15, November 17, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes are very cartoony and unrealistic. I highly recommend changing them, but that's just my opinion  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:02, November 21, 2010 (UTC)

Birdwing~Up for Approval
Ok this is just a rough drawing thats why it is a complete fail on the highlights and shading So this is Birdwing.  Sand  BOO...Trick or treat 23:08, October 22, 2010 (UTC)

Looks good. Desaturate the earpink some. It's too bright. <font color="Silver" style="background:Black">Katniss <font color="Olive" style="background:Wheat"> x <font color="Cyan" style="background:Khaki">Peeta 00:15, October 26, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded ' Sand  BOO...Trick or treat 00:18, October 26, 2010 (UTC)'''

Comments?  Sand  BOO...Trick or treat 15:53, October 31, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading all around. Creamsplash The stars will never forget you.  16:02, October 31, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded  Sand  BOO...Trick or treat 20:37, October 31, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading some more; I can't see it very well-- 21:26, November 3, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded The shading messed up :P  Sand  Merry Christmas 13:01, November 8, 2010 (UTC)

Comments?  Sand  Merry Christmas 01:25, November 20, 2010 (UTC)

Add some shading to the tail, her posterior region, her shoulder blade, and the back of her neck  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:03, November 21, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded There was shading on the tail i added shading tot eh region to the shoulder blade and the back of her neck  Sand  Merry Christmas 02:48, November 21, 2010 (UTC)

Wow! Nice, but the shading's really dark. Don't worry, Birdwing. You'll get the hang of it.  HA WK FI RE98  22:24, November 25, 2010 (UTC)


 * Sigh* everyone told me to darken it...Im not going to lighten it cause if i lighten it everyones just going to say "Oh darken it its too light"  Sand  Merry Christmas 22:57, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Echowind (W) - For Approval
Ick. I don't like it. Comments? Creamsplash The stars will never forget you.  20:37, November 4, 2010 (UTC)

It's good! All I would suggest is dappling the white specks all over her. Also she is a long haired cat. Darken the ear pink and shading. Vampirewave ☺ ♫Happy Halloween! ♫ 22:54, November 4, 2010 (UTC)

I really don't want to work on this anymore. Anyone want to take over? Creamsplash The stars will never forget you.  22:06, November 11, 2010 (UTC)

I'll try, even though she'll fail epicly. <font color="Thistle" >Dove song  01:15, November 17, 2010 (UTC)

This is a truly beautiful image; and other than what Echo said there really isn't much to be done. Dovesong, it's very kind of you to want to help :) If you're up for it, I think you could do it wonderfully and it would not fail epically ;) Just take the paint brush and use a small size, I think size 5 with the faded edges would do fine. Then just paint some flecks all over her. Then, take the smudge tool and smudge the flecks. As for the long-haired thing; Nightshine can help transfer it to longhaired; if she doesn't mind of course.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:06, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I tried ::coughsandfailedcoughs:: Ellie says;  Merry Christmas!  01:09, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

The flecks are beautiful :D However, I think something went wrong with changing it to longhaired; there are blank spaces here and there  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:14, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

Just fix those white pixels and this will be ready!  HA WK FI RE98  22:24, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  14:13, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

Rug BC- For approval
I think I've finally gotten the hang of it! :D Anyways, it's Rug. -Rawr. I win. 08:25, November 7, 2010 (UTC)

The texture looks like a actual rug. 火の毛皮 22:28, November 7, 2010 (UTC)

So you like it?-Rawr. I win. 05:53, November 8, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink bigger and look more like the ear pink on this image: Thicken the shading. There is some blurred line art on the collar. The colour doesn't really match her other image-- 07:02, November 8, 2010 (UTC)

Aright, I 'll fix the ear, collar, and shading, but does the fur color have to exactly the same?-Rawr. I win. 07:01, November 11, 2010 (UTC)

Well, actually it does. Unless Rug's pelt actually changed color when she joined BloodClan, then it would have to be the same as her rogue image to remain consistent  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:54, November 12, 2010 (UTC)

Well, it is a bit darker... and Rug is older. So it makes sense.-Rawr. I win. 04:12, November 12, 2010 (UTC)

Well no, not really. It's not extremely common for cats' pelts to grow darker and more saturated with age  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:33, November 12, 2010 (UTC)

Their pelt colours do not change if they age. Only their size and figure changes. Nothing else. Smoothen the texture, and blur it more into the pelt. The streaks aren't supposed to stand out, if you look at real-life-cats. 02:09, November 20, 2010 (UTC)

Wow, it looks fantastic! Darken the shading and brighten the highlights just a tiny bit.  HA WK FI RE98  22:24, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Pansyfur (Q) for approval.
Hi, I've been trying really hard with her. Can someone please do the spots and stuff for me, and I'll finish it off. Either that, or someone can do it all. Thanks, Clarrissa   My Talk Page 19:34, November 19, 2010 (UTC)

Dawnheart - For Approval
So, I did this because my mouse worked. I wasn't sure about the shading, it looked REALLY light on GIMP. This is terrible, I know...Comments? 01:39, November 16, 2010 (UTC)

I thought she was creamy white?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:00, November 16, 2010 (UTC)

Hm? 02:04, November 20, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the highlights. Desaturate the ear pink. Blur the shading. Nightfall is right, on her article she is described to be milky-cream coloured, Also add a gray strike on her forehead-- 02:23, November 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Re-did it. 02:44, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

It doesn't seem as if anything changed  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:27, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit more.  HA WK FI RE98  22:24, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Shadowpaw (DC) (A) For Approval
Well, first charart (officially). Comments? Age nt Win dFi re - Delve Deeper 20:38, November 16, 2010 (UTC)

It's really good:) Blur shadings. Clarrissa   My Talk Page   19:47, November 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Are the shadings blurred enough? It's hard to tell. Age nt Win dFi re - Delve Deeper 15:00, November 20, 2010 (UTC)

Comments? Please? Age nt Win dFi re - Delve Deeper 17:16, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

Pale-eyes (W) - For Approval
Worst tabby EVER!!! Shading refuses to blur. Help, please? Comments? <font color="Thistle" >Dove song  01:52, November 17, 2010 (UTC)

It's good(better than mine:P), just sharpen the stripes a little and blur them. Clarrissa  My Talk Page 19:48, November 19, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot, and blur the cream transition as well. This is very good though :)  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:12, November 21, 2010 (UTC)

Basicly, I'm just going to redo her, since the back shading FAILED! Will be up by the weekend, most likely. <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 23:57, November 21, 2010 (UTC)

Darkstrike -for approval
 --bracken-- ~01:59, November 17, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the black markings, add ear pink-- 02:01, November 17, 2010 (UTC)

reuplaoded --bracken-- ~ 04:51, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

That is much better :) I've circled where the transition needs to be blurred  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 18:51, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Make the eyes a bit more of a golden color and blur those transitions.  HA WK FI RE98  22:24, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Singefang (W) - For Approval
Me likey :] Comments? Creamsplash The stars will never forget you.  15:45, November 20, 2010 (UTC)

I see nothing wrong. Very nice! <font color="Thistle" >Dove song  16:39, November 20, 2010 (UTC)

I do, darken the shading and if there is highlights make them brighter. Also make his eyes green, they look kind of amber. Otherwise nice. 14:40, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

Featherkit (Ki) - For Approval
Here's Featherkit! She should be an apprentice soon, along with her brother. Wonder when that'll happen. <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas <font color="Green" >o3o 14:14, November 21, 2010 (UTC)

Comments? <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 22:03, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

It's only been one day, I would only ask for comments after five days of no feedback. The image is lovely; darken and blur the shading, blur the stripes, add a stripe or two to her chest, and darken the shading on her paws  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:08, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, I was getting very antsy. I'll get to work on it. <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 22:42, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

Lunarblaze (W) For Approval
Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:58, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

Brackenshadow (W) For Approval
I like this one :) Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:58, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the white transition. Lighten the ear pink. Darken the brindles on the legs a bit-- 04:13, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

Locustfire (W) - For Approval
This is one of the best I've ever done! I <3 Locustfire. I know this one doesn't look anything like his kit image, but we'll tweak the kit image, because I like this style better. Comments?  HA WK FI RE98  15:51, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

Amazing! Only thing I see is the ear pink, it looks a little orange, make it more red. 15:55, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good :) I actually think that if you make the ear pink more red, then you won't be able to see it. I'd leave it like it is; but that's just my opinion. One thing I'd do is I'd darken the stripes on the tail  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:24, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded! I darkened the stripes on the tail and lightened the ear pink a bit.  HA WK FI RE98  14:23, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink and darken the shading-- 04:12, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

Silverdapple (W) ~ For Approval
It's Silverdapple. Hopefully she didn't fail this time. Comments? <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 21:19, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

Beautiful =) The spots look much better this time. Darken the shading and make the ear pink more salmony colored  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:25, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Had to rename it to upload. Better? <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 21:50, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the back. Add some shading to her head and under the chin. Blur the ear pink-- 04:12, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

Fangkit (Ki) For Approval
My first one hope you like ^^ Echostream <sup style="font-family:Arial;color:Black">We live to fight, We fight to live, tonight you'll hear my battle cry! 22:28, November 23, 2010 (UTC)



Very nice! Add eye white; and maybe change the pupil shape to look like this - Maybe smudge the white dots on his chest to make them look more irregular, blur the ear pink, and darken the shading because I can't really see any  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:30, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Better? Echostream <sup style="font-family:Arial;color:Black">We live to fight, We fight to live, tonight you'll hear my battle cry! 22:56, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

The pupil looks better :) There is a white speck on his belly, fill that in with black. Make the ear pink more of a reddish color, and add shading to the eyes  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:10, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: better? Echostream <sup style="font-family:Arial;color:Black">We live to fight, We fight to live, tonight you'll hear my battle cry! 23:53, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

Darke the shading. Make the ear pink more triangular and desaturate it.-- 04:11, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

Marsh -for approval
It's Marsh. :D Comments?-Rawr. I win. 22:16, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a lot, and make the earpink more reddish. Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  01:51, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Make it more ginger coloured; it looks very yellow. -- 04:10, November 27, 2010 (UTC)