Cats of the Clans Wiki talk:Character Art Project

Clovershine (Ro)- For approval
I hope you like! I worked really hard on her! Tigerfur of Bloodclan 01:24, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

This is good :) Darken and blur the shading. Blur the white on her muzzle a lot  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:04, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Blurred the white on her muzzle a lot. I also Darkened and blurred the shading. Tigerfur of Bloodclan 18:13, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

I'm still having a hard time seeing the shading. Thicken, darken, and blur it  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:00, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I Darkened the shading once more, and blurred it.

This is REALLY Good blur the stripes a bit  Bird  2011 01:12, January 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes, and the shading is still hard to see. Also, where are the highlights? 我愛羅 As long as theres others to kill the world is wonderful  05:06, January 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Blurred the stripes again. I cannot blur them anymore; GIMP won't let me :( Tigerfur of Bloodclan 03:52, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken and blur the shading, make the stripes longer--  night  shine  ❄  22:16, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: How about now?

I don't see anything wrong :) Foxclaw33 Ooh eye ahh ahh a.. TANG TANG WALLA WALLA BING BANG!20:10, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Add some stripes to the back of the neck, add more to the face, make the haunch stripes longer so there isn't a patch of no stripes. Thicken and blur the shading-- Night  shine  04:12, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Tigerfur of Bloodclan 04:17, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken and blur the shading, add shading to the belly area, make the tail stripes longer-- Night  shine  04:35, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

I don't understand what you mean about 'thivken and blur the shading.' All I do is make more shading, look at the hind leg. I like the tail stripes...:(

The shading isn't thick enough in some places. Shading needs to be added to where the red areas are, and you need to get rid of the shading in the orange areas. The ear pink should be the colour that I indicated or similar to it-- Night  shine  04:46, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded

(And If you want you can delete all my chararts besides Clovershine. Or you can ghive them to someone else. Anyone want my chararts besides this one?) Tigerfur of Bloodclan 03:04, February 3, 2011 (UTC)

This is very pretty Tiger. :) If you want, I can help with Clovershine.

Maybe you can help. :) Tigerfur of Bloodclan 02:20, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Stunning! One thing I would suggest is to center the ear pinks, as they look a bit out of proportion. 07:57, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded i  K  i  ba☼  12:28, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink, and blur the highlight on her back. I would define the stripes along her back more too. Add some depth to her eyes  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:06, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploded Tigerfur of Bloodclan 00:07, February 17, 2011 (UTC)

Desaturate the ear pink.-- Night  shine  22:30, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Tigerfur of Bloodclan 04:17, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

Desaturate the ear pink more, it still looks much too red  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:52, February 24, 2011 (UTC)

Charcoal (Q) - For Approval
- Do. Not. Like. Also, I'm making her page. Gaara What is pain? 愛t 03:12, January 19, 2011 (UTC)

I think she looks beautiful! :D Blur the pink in the ears a little more. Tigerfur of Bloodclan 13:14, January 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink more, and blur the shading between the front of back legs, it sorta forms a straight line. 我愛羅 As long as theres others to kill the world is wonderful  05:06, January 20, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined-- Night  shine  04:07, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded

Make the ear pink smaller  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:35, February 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded

Make the ear pink more reddish pink, and add depth to the eyes  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:51, February 3, 2011 (UTC)

30, 2011 (UTC)

Smooth out the pelt a bit. 07:57, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Nightflower, I don't know what you mean...  Sakura -chan   ♥  16:03, February 19, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the patches, make the ear pink reddish-- Night  shine  22:30, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined-- Night  shine  00:46, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

To-be blanks - For Approval
Ahh, good old fashioned Hawkey-made blanks. :D Just like the good ol' days! These aren't my BEST blanks, I finished them in about four minutes, so...yeah. Comments?  HA WK FI RE98  20:27, January 23, 2011 (UTC)

These are good! The back paw closest to us is a bit deformed, maybe round it off a bit, and make the eyes more almond shaped instead of oval shaped  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:32, January 24, 2011 (UTC)

Here's a diagram I made to help:

Reuploaded Sorry about that! Also one of the blanks has an accidental ear tuft in its ear; I'll fix that next time. Echo, I appreciate the diagram, but thats WAY too much unneccessary work.  HA WK FI RE98  18:34, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

I like them :) Chickenstar 18:37, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

The paws need to be rounder, the torso need to be thickened, make the ears wider, eyes should be more cat-like, the whiskers should be closer to the muzzle, and the haunch needs to be reshapen-- Night  shine  23:23, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

I don't like the face, I prefer to keep it to my own style. But I'll do everything else.  HA WK FI RE98  00:29, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

I think these are the cutest things.... Frostcloud 02:12, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded But now, they are cuter. ;)  HA WK FI RE98  20:03, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Make the paws rounder and the tail fluffier. The eyes should be a bit smaller and angle a little toward the nose. Make the whiskers go a little closer to the muzzle-- Night  shine  20:13, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on these or they will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:52, February 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Oh, gosh, I destroyed my long-hairs....  HA WK FI RE98  17:01, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

Make the paws rounder and much smaller, the bellies are much to thin and the limbs are too straight-- Night  shine  19:21, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

And the limbs will REMAIN straight. Also, Tribe cats are very slender, and of course they are wild cats, so they're not fat. I'll fix the short-hair paws.  HA WK FI RE98  20:32, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

Make the heads a bit more rounded, and make the eyes a bit slantier (lol, that is so not a word)  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:29, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

Dapplestep (W) - For Approval
- FAIL FAIL FAIL UBER FAIL D:

Fail? Echo, you're seriously going blind. This is marvelous. It's so pretty <3 Blur the ear pink and make it more of a reddish color and darken the shading on the tail. 20:54, February 3, 2011 (UTC)

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Make the ear pink less gray, and more reddish pink. Add some depth to the eyes, and smudge the patches a little. Ice is right, this is great :)  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:34, February 3, 2011 (UTC)

If this is a fail, then fail means "breathtaking charart" ;) Make the ear pink more reddish. 07:57, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded i  K  i  ba☼  03:22, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Make this a long haired blank, since she is said to be fluffy, darken the shading, make the ear pink more reddish and blur it. The eye lashes look a little weird-- Night  shine  04:05, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Just because a cat is fluffy, doesn't necessarily mean that they're long haired. Take Flarecloud for example, she has fluffy soft fur, but she doesn't have long fur. But I do agree about the ear pink, it's still to purple-gray  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:56, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Can you give me a color code? ':) I'm terrible at ear pink  Sakura -chan   ♥  16:05, February 19, 2011 (UTC)

I found a color code! Just pay attention to the right side. Night Shine made it. Foxeh NO I'M SERIOUS ILL HIT YOU WITH THIS STICK 15:54, February 20, 2011 (UTC)



Fox, I think that's the one I made ;)  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:31, February 21, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined-- Night  shine  00:46, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

Somebody else can take over. I don't have time for this.  Sakura -chan   ♥  02:46, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

I will. Foxclaw33 I hit Adderpaw and Sagestorm with this stick, i'm not afraid to do it to you! 05:16, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Foxclaw33 I hit Adderpaw and Sagestorm with this stick, i'm not afraid to do it to you! 05:16, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Fernkit (Ki)- For approval
I don't like her. Tigerfur of Bloodclan 02:36, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

She's good :) Add a lot more shading to her belly and haunch. Make the dapples bigger and more irregular, these look more like spots. Make the ear pink more reddish instead of purple, and add some shading to the eye color  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:52, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined-- Night  shine  23:58, February 16, 2011 (UTC)


 * If it is okay, may I take over? ♥Icy123♥  ☮Peace, love, and joy!☮  03:44, February 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * Sure, but I can still help. Tigerfur of Bloodclan 22:13, February 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * Reuploaded: I Made the dapples look REALLY weird. I fixed the eyes, and added shading. Tigerfur of Bloodclan 22:23, February 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * Reuploaded: I Made the dapples look REALLY weird. I fixed the eyes, and added shading. Tigerfur of Bloodclan 22:23, February 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * Reuploaded: I Made the dapples look REALLY weird. I fixed the eyes, and added shading. Tigerfur of Bloodclan 22:23, February 19, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and blur the shading, and make the ear pink more reddish. I like the dapples :)  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:50, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined-- Night  shine  00:45, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

Foxpaw (A) For approval
*sniff* ISNT IT BEATIFUL :D?Foxclaw33 I love Foxpaw :)06:39, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink less neon and blur the shading. Looks good :) 07:58, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Foxclaw33 I love Foxpaw :)20:10, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ginger more orangey, blur the ear pink and make it smaller, give the eyes some depth-- Night  shine  04:03, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

It looks to me like you only added highlights on the tail and forehead, then added extreme shading in other areas. I would strongly recommend blurring. Agent WindFire Because it's snowing,  Blowing, All over town... 10:36, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

This is really really red, I suggest making her ginger. The eyes look blue, I think on her article it says that she has green eyes  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:46, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Wait, never mind the green eyes. Blur the shading a lot as well, but this is really good Fox :) I would also blur the ear pink a lot. Also, I would like to say that you did a good job smudign the black transition  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:28, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

I blurred them both alot. Foxclaw33 Don't you just love Valentine's Day? 06:47, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

She still looks really red, try making her more of a ginger  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 17:26, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

I... She's supposed to be dark red, but i'll try. <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">Don't you just love Valentine's Day? 18:20, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Her article says reddish ginger, that's what you told me when you wanted her to be added to WindClan.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:01, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Really? Oh.... Can you change that?? I always planned her to be dark red. <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">900 EDITS! WHERE'S THE PARADE? 23:44, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Cats can't really be that color though. If you'd like, she could be like, dark russet-ginger; which would make her more of a reddish chestnuty? Or, she could be reddish brown  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:10, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Let's go with dark reddish-ginger. <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">OH. MAH. GAWSH. 1,000 EDITS!!!! PARTEH WITH MEH :D 23:50, February 15, 2011 (UTC)

Alright then :) Lighten her pelt, and saturate it some. Blur the shading and ear pink  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:51, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Okay, lightened the pelt, blurred shading AND ear pink. <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxeh <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">NO I'M SERIOUS ILL HIT YOU WITH THIS STICK 16:01, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and shading, and saturate the pelt a bit  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:51, February 24, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:30, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- <font face="Segoe Script" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Papyrus" color="#800517">I hit Adderpaw and Sagestorm with this stick, i'm not afraid to do it to you! 02:06, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Kittypet Blanks-For approval
wanted them to look REALLY cute because they are, well, not feirce...(No offense, Kittehs XD) That would make them look soft and unharmfull...I think i did a great job on that xD <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">I love Foxpaw :)20:38, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Here's an example:

ITS JASMINE :D

It looks like they're wearing sunglasses. i K  i  ba☼  23:57, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Make all the lines fully black. Get rid of the fluffy bit on the top of their head, make the limbs more natural, eyes should be smaller and the torso needs to be thicker-- Night  shine  00:05, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

The tail shouldn't be cut off too :P Poor longhaired kitty... -pets- The corners of the eyes look too sharp on even the males, and I agree that they should be smaller. Agent WindFire Because it's snowing,  Blowing, All over town... 10:38, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Fix the eyes, fix the tails and paws. Right now, there are only two paws. This will need ALOT of work. i K  i  ba☼  13:19, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I TRIED to make them smaller, did i mention i always do bad on eyes >.< <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">Don't you just love Valentine's Day? 23:57, February 11, 2011 (UTC)

o_o You made it worse... USE NIGHTSHINE'S DIAGRAM! SAVE AS PNG. Man, do I have to say that again!? Here's a diagram to help:

i K  i  ba☼  00:10, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

I dont have time to work on these, please give me more time.]

@Echopaw: I did save it. I am used to paint, not PIXLR so i dont know how to change it. Please be as easy as you can on me, School hates me right now, and Sports are kicking my face. <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">Don't you just love Valentine's Day? 01:07, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Echo, my gosh. Calm down, it's not a big deal at all. In fact, it's much better to do blanks on paint rather than pixlr, trust me, I know. I would appreciate it if you'd take a look at the CAP guidelines, they clearly state that your kind of behavior will result in a short CAP ban. Foxclaw: When you save it, just choose the extension of .png instead of .jpg. I might be able to help if paint is being spazzy  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 17:28, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">900 EDITS! WHERE'S THE PARADE? 23:45, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

First of all, make all of the line art black with no lighter pixels in the background-- Night  shine  07:46, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Okay, what's next? <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">900 EDITS! WHERE'S THE PARADE? 16:20, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

All of the line art still needs to be black. -- Night  shine  16:24, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

It is all black lineart <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">900 EDITS! WHERE'S THE PARADE? 16:41, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

No it isn't. When I look at it on Paint I can see that there are many miscoloured pixels throughout-- Night  shine  17:11, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

-.- Paint is always doing that. Even when i have a transparent picture, it still did that on Paint. <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">900 EDITS! WHERE'S THE PARADE? 17:22, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

I dont have anvanced paint like everyone so i cant zoom in, so i can't see it. <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">900 EDITS! WHERE'S THE PARADE? 17:23, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

If you are using paint it should still be all black, maybe you're doing something differently? And you can zoom in under the view dropdown menu-- Night  shine  17:35, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Ok, I can see them now... I fixed it.<font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxeh <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">Bloodclaw2 on deviantART!! 22:30, February 16, 2011 (UTC)

There's one unnaturally thick line in the foreview, 3 out of the 4 images have it. And they all still look cross-eyed. Make the pupils a little smaller, or even take them out of the eyes. Maybe that would be better. Age nt Win dFi re -  Delve Deep er 22:35, February 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Tried to fix all you asked. <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxeh <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">NO I'M SERIOUS ILL HIT YOU WITH THIS STICK 23:50, February 16, 2011 (UTC)

All of the blanks look different from each other. The short haired blanks should look the same and the long haired blanks should look the same. The only difference should be the eyelashes. There is blurred line art in several areas-- Night  shine  23:57, February 16, 2011 (UTC)

Its because I redid it on paint, wich it blurrs every line i put in ?_? Foxclaw(I've got a virus so i don't feel good with signing in :(

Hm, that doesn't really make sense. If you are doing it on paint then it shouldn't do that-- Night  shine  19:52, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined-- Night  shine  00:45, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- <font face="Segoe Script" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Papyrus" color="#800517">I hit Adderpaw and Sagestorm with this stick, i'm not afraid to do it to you! 05:14, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make the eyes smaller and not blurred-- Night  shine  05:26, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Scarheart(W)-For approval
I would consider this the best of all my charats. I wanted to do them after i heard her lost his eye. I might as well do Jack and Jasmine..... I always inmagined like Tallstar.... So what do YOU think about it? <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">Don't you just love Valentine's Day? 00:57, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Ok I know I'm not allowed to be here but he looks black

Not allowed, Adder? Tell me about that.... >.< He is supposed to be black.He is black. <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">Don't you just love Valentine's Day? 01:16, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Again, it's to pixilated. Save the stupid image as PNG. >_< His scarred eye is like, freakin scary and very dislocated. Look at Echowave's image for a reference. Blur the scars, darken white, add shading and highlights, add depth to the eyes and some of the lineart is messed up. i K  i  ba☼  01:42, February 12, 2011 (UTC)


 * Facepalm* Sorry Echo, but it's my first scar-face cat and its epic fail, i agree. But can you let me keep it just this once?? PLEASE? There is shading and highlights, they are blurred(So are the scars) I dont know how to make it not all pixel-y... <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">Don't you just love Valentine's Day? 02:11, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know what you mean by 'keep it'. o_o Just fix it and save it as PNG. not that hard i  K  i  ba☼  16:13, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

I'll change it to PNG, OK? I got that! So what do you mean by 'fix it?' fix WHAT?? <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">Don't you just love Valentine's Day? 02:39, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

I'll take over. -.- i  K  i  ba☼  16:13, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Tried new smudging style. i K  i  ba☼  16:31, February 12, 2011 (UTC)


 * Echo, you cannot take over without Foxclaw's permission! I mean honestly! Foxclaw, go ahead and reupload your version if you wish, I'd be happy to help with advice, critique and such. Adder: Of course you're allowed here, why wouldn't you be? If you want to join, I'd be happy to add you in. Oh and Foxclaw, his article says gray and white, not black and white.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky!

17:24, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Nightfall, i'll run the dode tool over him a few times until he looks gray. <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">Don't you just love Valentine's Day? 18:07, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Echo, I didn't SAY you could take over! I was proud of this one and read what i said on the kittypet blanks-I AM TRYING MY BEST. I'm trying to be nice, but you're making it harder on the both of us, trust me. I know that i'm talking about.

Reuploaded-Liked him better when he was black >.< I was thinking about uploaded THIS epic fail until i zoomed out of the picture XD LOOKS LIKE HE'S BURNING IN THE FIRE >.< <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">Don't you just love Valentine's Day? 18:29, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Lol, it does xD Okay, for the pelt: Blur the shading a lot, and it seems to be a bit pixly...I'm not sure why though because you've saved it to .png. As for the eye: Smudge the skin part, it looks really cartoony. Like, it's all realistic and then there's like this cartoony pink blob on his eye. I would smudge into the pelt to make it look more natural. If you want, you can look at Smolder's charart for reference, it might help some. And, you must rename your image Scarheart.warrior.png.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 18:57, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-I liked the old one better, i split two windows into half of the screen so i could look at Smolder's charat for a refrence and suggested from Nightfall <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">900 EDITS! WHERE'S THE PARADE? 23:51, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

The pink around the eye looks messy, and its going into the nose. Could you change that? -Sage: Do the 800 edits dance! 00:40, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed. Also, for the missing eye, I heard that an apprentice did that, so I'd recomend making a small scar, like on the image I did, or look at Echowave's page for an example. ;)  Sakura -chan   ♥  01:36, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Ok. i'll reuploaded And Swallowflight did it, not an apprentice. It was on the IRC. <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">900 EDITS! WHERE'S THE PARADE? 01:47, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Can't believe I missed it.  Sakura -chan   ♥  01:57, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Good point, echo... You ARE on IRC alot..<font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">900 EDITS! WHERE'S THE PARADE? 04:07, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxeh <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">Bloodclaw2 on deviantART!! 02:49, February 16, 2011 (UTC)

Fox, no offence meant, but this looks a little... messy. The ends of the claw marks (That's what I think they are, at least...) are too round. If I were to scratch your face, right now (Which I won't), The lines would be sharp. Claws are sharp. When dug in, the scratch is wider, when light, the lines are thinner. You don't pull claws right out, they trail a little. Make the brush thinner or something, but sharpen the ends. Go into Pixlr and put another layer of the lineart over it. Kapeesh? Age nt Win dFi re -  Delve Deep er 18:31, February 17, 2011 (UTC)

Kaposh.... I understand.. None taken, by the way, plus this was my first scarred cat so i expected to fail. <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxeh <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">NO I'M SERIOUS ILL HIT YOU WITH THIS STICK 03:55, February 18, 2011 (UTC) (Dont worry, i just fixed the little virus ;) )

I get that, I'd probably fail too at a scarred cat, but understanding the anatomy definitely helps in most cases. Also, the shading on this is... interesting. Go over it with blur or smear, whatever you use, but the gray is shaded in the wrong places. Age nt Win dFi re -  Delve Deep er 10:30, February 18, 2011 (UTC)

There, I made a diagram. Finally >.< Anyway, if you look, you can see where the black and the red don't intersect. I can get where the nicked ear would not line up, but the rest of it, no idea. Unless the injured eye was physically pretty much pulled apart and pulled down, I doubt that his/her anatomy would allow that. Doubt. I don't know cats very well, so...

Another thing might be the scratches on the rest of her body. They frankly look like ... well, pink spaghetti might be the most appropriate way to put it. Age nt Win dFi re -  Delve Deep er 10:54, February 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-<font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxeh <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">NO I'M SERIOUS ILL HIT YOU WITH THIS STICK 03:18, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Fox, If you want, you could use my Scarheart. I don't mind. Just add teh scars. (cause I'm terrible at scars TT^TT)  Sakura -chan   ♥  16:02, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Okay. I actually like yours better :) I'm not good at scars either... <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxeh <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">NO I'M SERIOUS ILL HIT YOU WITH THIS STICK 16:13, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

1000% Better! I just noticed the ear pinks look a little different. -Sage: Spring is Coming! 16:44, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

The scars are good! This may get CBA'd soon! Ok, on the left earpink, it's too light. Make it the same colour as the right. After that, I think this is ready!  Sakura -chan   ♥  16:48, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, smudge the patches more -- Night  shine  19:52, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-<font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxeh <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">NO I'M SERIOUS ILL HIT YOU WITH THIS STICK 23:09, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

The scars look a bit too blurred, make them more defined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:50, February 24, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined-- Night  shine  00:45, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

WORK ON IT FOXEH OR I WILL HIT YOU WITH A LOG! Adderpaw 03:32, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Improments? ;) <font face="Segoe Script" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Papyrus" color="#800517">I hit Adderpaw and Sagestorm with this stick, i'm not afraid to do it to you!02:04, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe blurr it a LITTLE Adderpaw 02:05, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

I did. <font face="Segoe Script" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Papyrus" color="#800517">I hit Adderpaw and Sagestorm with this stick, i'm not afraid to do it to you! 02:34, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Birdwing (Q) Withdrawn
I am just throwing this out there THE. SHADING. IS. UNDER.PROGRESS. But i would like some help with the shading cause i did it on my Laptop and right now i can only fix it on my lap top so it's not finished Yet  Bird  2011 18:36, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

This looks pretty good. Add ear pink, and add shading to the white paw. Make the white much shorter though, her article says she has a white paw and this charart has a white leg. As for the shading, when you say you need help, I would be happy to. Or, do you want me to give critique on where the shading should be?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 18:59, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Yes i would like that can you do the paw too please? And omg i forgot Ear-pink DX STUPID LAP TOP Can you do that too cause i can never do the color right :3 THANKS :D  Bird  2011 19:09, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Add shading to the back and haunch. If you want, I could try and help. ♥Icy123♥ ☮Peace, love, and joy!☮  03:49, February 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Added shading where necessary, fixed the paw, and I added a few highlights :) Like it Bird?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:01, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink, lighten the whole thing-- Night  shine  19:52, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

I think the lighting and Ear pink are fine, I don't want to change them  Bird  2011 20:22, February 25, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the haunch shading, blur the shading-- Night  shine  07:25, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

I still don\t think it should be lightened and i think the shading blurring is fine, I'll blur the ear-pink then though cause on my lap-top it's light enough as it is  Bird  2011 15:24, February 26, 2011 (UTC).

The shading is too blotchy though, you should blur it some. The shading around the haunch and belly is too dark so I can't see the line art-- Night  shine  17:56, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Well i cann see it, Actually quite clearly and it's proboly blotchy because she is a black cat  Bird  2011 18:26, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Please just lighten and blur it though, this is for constructive critisism so if I thought it didn't need to be changed, I would have said it--- Night  shine  00:45, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

Don't worry about it, Im with-drawing her, She fails anyways XD  Lyze  We have Nothing to fear, Except fear itself 01:04, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

Jack(R)-For approval
I wanted him to look like my real life cat Jack, after all he is based on my real life cat, so i had him lay on my bed and i had to keep looking back at him. I just LOOOOOVVVVVEEEEEE this one :3 <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">OH. MAH. GAWSH. 1,000 EDITS!!!! PARTEH WITH MEH :D 22:10, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

This is over the limit. ._.  Sakura -chan   ♥  22:13, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Can you go through the charats that have a CBA??? Like Spottedpelt and Spottedwing <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">OH. MAH. GAWSH. 1,000 EDITS!!!! PARTEH WITH MEH :D 22:31, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

I'll look through them now, but next time you should make sure it's under the limit. You already have 4 other images up for approval and the most you are supposed to have is three. Please stick to the limits. And also, you need to have this reserved on the table, which you have not.-- Night  shine  23:30, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

There actually isn't a limit to how many chararts you can have on the page to my knowledge, we never made one. But, I suppose we could. I think four or five is a reasonable number  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:34, February 15, 2011 (UTC)

I agree... And is there problems with the image o.e <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">OH. MAH. GAWSH. 1,000 EDITS!!!! PARTEH WITH MEH :D 23:49, February 15, 2011 (UTC)



Here's a daigram I made. The blue means lighten black. Red means remove whatever is circled and green means that the lineart is messed up.  Sakura -chan   ♥  13:34, February 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Ok, that helped. Thanks, Echo! Anyways, i reuploaded and fixed everything.<font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxeh <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">Bloodclaw2 on deviantART!! 22:23, February 16, 2011 (UTC)

You might have to re-do this. The lineart is messed up. The black is too dark, the stripes are too thick. Darken the shading. Make the ear pink more reddish. That type of pink is not natural for a cat's ear pink colour. ♥Loveheart♥ ☮Happy Valentines Day!☮  23:36, February 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-(Darkened shading)I don't see anything wrong with the lineart ?_? <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxeh <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">NO I'M SERIOUS ILL HIT YOU WITH THIS STICK 23:43, February 16, 2011 (UTC)

I see the problem. Fox, the ear on viewer's left has rigid lineart. It's hard to compare them... Here, I'll make a small diagram for you.

Please work on this or it will be declined-- Night  shine  07:24, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

I DONT KNOW WHATS WRONG WITH THE IMAGE!!! Gosh, what the heck is wrong with the lineart?? And i dont see a diagram o.o Fox(Working on siggy)

First off, there is alot of things wrong with it. It's very pixely and there's no shading whatsoever. The black needs to be very dark gray, not real black, then we won't see the lineart, and the lineart is bblurred.

Thunderkit (Ki) - For Approval

 * [[File:Thunderkit.kit.png]]I think he's one of the best I've done. ♥Loveheart♥  ☮Happy Valentines Day!☮  23:17, February 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * This is really good! Make the ear pink and eye white bigger, and darken the shading. Darken the flecks too  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky!

02:35, February 18, 2011 (UTC)


 * Re-Uploaded: I think it looks better! ♥Icy123♥  ☮Peace, love, and joy!☮  03:58, February 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * Make the ear pink bigger still, and darken the shading on his midriff, the leg farthest from us, and under his chin  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky!
 * Make the ear pink bigger still, and darken the shading on his midriff, the leg farthest from us, and under his chin  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky!

21:26, February 19, 2011 (UTC)


 * Re-Uploaded: Done. ♥Icy123♥  ☮Peace, love, and joy!☮  22:03, February 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * Comments Before Approval?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky!

22:11, February 19, 2011 (UTC)

There is some gray outside the cheek.  Sakura -chan   ♥  22:37, February 19, 2011 (UTC)

No there isn't..? ♥Icy123♥ ☮Peace, love, and joy!☮  22:42, February 19, 2011 (UTC)

If you have a laptop, tilt the screen back. Yu will see gray on the cheek.  Sakura -chan   ♥  22:50, February 19, 2011 (UTC)


 * I see it, but it's not on the GIMP when I try to edit it. ♥Icy123♥  ☮Peace, love, and joy!☮  22:55, February 19, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, lighten the ear pink, blur the highlights- Night  shine  04:53, February 20, 2011 (UTC)


 * Re-Uploaded: First, Echo, there was no gray on GIMP. Second, I just blurred the highlights because the shading and earpink was fine. ♥Icy123♥  ☮Peace, love, and joy!☮  17:03, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights again, lighten the ear pink it's hard to see.-- Night  shine  19:52, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Make the pupil a little bit larger, his eyes look...weird. (No offense intended) •Maple  fern•  12:43, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined-- Night  shine  00:43, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

Timbercloud (W) - For Approval
- Best. Image. I. Have. Ever. Done. Comments?  Sakura -chan   ♥  16:09, February 19, 2011 (UTC)

This is awesome! Make the stripes a little thiner and make the scars more reddish type. Darken and blur the ear pink. Otherwise, EPIC! ♥Icy123♥ ☮Peace, love, and joy!☮  16:28, February 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I didn't want to change the stripes, because I like dem that way. :) btw, IRC?  Sakura -chan   ♥  16:36, February 19, 2011 (UTC)

Okay then. Then I take that is that how you imagine him? lol grammar. anwyways, darken the ear pink some more. They're too pink-ish. And sure, I'll be on in a sec. ♥Icy123♥  ☮Peace, love, and joy!☮  16:55, February 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  Sakura -chan   ♥  16:59, February 19, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is too gray. Make it the same color of the scars. Marluxia; The Graceful Assassin  17:32, February 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  Sakura -chan   ♥  19:20, February 19, 2011 (UTC)

Isn't thsi under the limits O.o Or did they change the rules??? I havent really been here lately <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxeh <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">NO I'M SERIOUS ILL HIT YOU WITH THIS STICK 21:55, February 19, 2011 (UTC)

Since there are three discussions, one image that has been warned to work on it or it will be declined, and two CBA'd images, this can stay. Blur the ear pink some; this is brilliant!  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:08, February 19, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry i didn't know about new rules <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxeh <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">NO I'M SERIOUS ILL HIT YOU WITH THIS STICK 22:40, February 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  Sakura -chan   ♥  23:05, February 19, 2011 (UTC)

This is over the limit of 35. So it will be declined-- Night  shine  04:41, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

It's alright, there are three discussions, and three CBA'd images  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:48, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

This is ready. Comments before approval? ♥Icy123♥ ☮Peace, love, and joy!☮  15:36, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Are all the scars suposed to be on his face? •Maple fern•  22:19, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Yea I think it is................ right echo? Adderpaw 22:49, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, read his page  Sakura -chan   ♥  01:03, February 21, 2011 (UTC)

I know, it's just battle scars are often all over the body, not just on the face. •Maple fern•  01:12, February 21, 2011 (UTC)

mehhhh Dx I'm terrible at scars. I can only do them on the face.  Sakura -chan   ♥  01:15, February 21, 2011 (UTC)

I can help with the scars, if you want. Xigbar; The Freeshooter  12:49, February 21, 2011 (UTC)\

Can you make the tail tip a bit more fluffy?-- Night  shine  07:14, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

I tried, and it just ruined the image...  Sakura -chan   ♥  22:17, March 2, 2011 (UTC)

Raingaze(W)- For Approval
I messed up on the shading. Tigerfur of Bloodclan 22:58, February 19, 2011 (UTC)

Beatiful, Tigerfur! I would make the ear pink just a tinch lighter :) <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxeh <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">NO I'M SERIOUS ILL HIT YOU WITH THIS STICK 03:14, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

This is over the limit of 35. So it will be declined-- Night  shine  04:41, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

It's alright, there are three discussions, and three CBA'd images  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:48, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Even if there are images in CBA, this is still over the limit so it will be declined-- Night  shine  19:52, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

It's alright. Nightfall is the leader Tigerfur of Bloodclan 21:16, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

The rules state that images over the 35 image limit will be declined. I can talk to Nightfall once I get home next Saturday, until this will be declined-- Night  shine  21:30, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Why you? ♥Icy123♥ ☮Peace, love, and joy!☮  15:38, February 21, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, alright, don't start this guys. Images have been approved and archived, so we're below the limit once more. Ice: Nightshine is one of my most trusted senior warriors, of course she could talk to me about any of this. Tigerfur: As for the image. It's really good; thicken the shading a lot, blur the flecks to make them look more irregular, and make her more gray, she's blue right now  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:08, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Starclan help me with the shading! Tigerfur of Bloodclan 04:28, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

Do you need help? *HAWKEY TO THE RESCUE!!* :D  HA WK FI RE98  23:49, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

Can you try to make her a long-hair? If not, it's fine. I've just always imagined her as a long-hair. Also, try lightening the shading some, then blurring it. One more thing, I know images don't need highlights, but maybe try adding some to her to give her more depth. Mew Mew  Zakuro  23:34, February 25, 2011 (UTC)

Bloodclaw(W)- For Approval
Best charat i've done!! Comments/Critisim?<font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxeh <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">NO I'M SERIOUS ILL HIT YOU WITH THIS STICK 03:13, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

This is very good! Blur the highlight on his haunch, add a highlight to his shoulder, and blur the shading on the tail  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:17, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken the sahding, make the ear pink more reddish, blur the highlights. There should only be white near the pupil. ♥Icy123♥ ☮Peace, love, and joy!☮  03:19, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

I think the white looks pretty good there, but Fox, change it if you want to  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:20, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Well its an eclipse and the sun is shining on him so i though that'd be OK to put up... <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxeh <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">NO I'M SERIOUS ILL HIT YOU WITH THIS STICK 03:23, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Wait, what do you mean? You forgot the highlight on his shoulder  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:25, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-<font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxeh <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">NO I'M SERIOUS ILL HIT YOU WITH THIS STICK 03:27, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think the changes are showing  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:29, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

It's on his shoulder >.> <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxeh <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">NO I'M SERIOUS ILL HIT YOU WITH THIS STICK 03:32, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

This is over the limit, yes I added all of it up. This is image 36 for approval.  Sakura -chan   ♥  03:42, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

This can stay since there are a few images that have been CBA'd. Foxclaw: As for the highlight on his shoulder, brighten it a lot  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:02, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Here ya go!

This is over the limit of 35. So it will be declined-- Night  shine  04:41, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Like I said in my above comment, there are three images that have been CBA'd, it's okay for this to stay. Fox, I'm still not sure that the changes are showing up  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:45, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

They are showing up on my screen ?_?

Oh, I think you misunderstood me. I mean, like, a round highlight in the middle of his shoulder, like the one on his haunch  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 05:49, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-OH okay :) Please do CBA :3 <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxeh <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">NO I'M SERIOUS ILL HIT YOU WITH THIS STICK 06:19, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Add shading or highlighting to the face. Right now it look flat in comparison to the rest of the body. •Maple fern•  13:37, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Make the shading thicker and the ear pink is too pink. ♥Icy123♥ ☮Peace, love, and joy!☮  15:11, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-PLEEAAASEEEE CBA?? I just want ONE cba for once.... <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxeh <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">NO I'M SERIOUS ILL HIT YOU WITH THIS STICK 15:47, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

This still needs alot of work. Begging for CBA won't get you any closer. The highlights and shading are good, but the ear pink is too pink, make it gray. Also save this as one file: Bloodclaw.warrior.png and don't change it. The white stripe down the neck looks creey and there's alot of blurred lineart.  Sakura -chan   ♥  15:49, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-

This is still over the 35 limit-- Night  shine  19:52, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

CBA images don't count. <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxeh <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">NO I'M SERIOUS ILL HIT YOU WITH THIS STICK 20:21, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

See my message above-- Night  shine  22:30, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Nightfall said that it didnt matter on like 6 messages >.< <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxeh <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">NO I'M SERIOUS ILL HIT YOU WITH THIS STICK 23:08, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Nightfall and I are going to discuss it soon so this will be declined. -- Night  shine  23:33, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Well why decline it when you dont know if to decline it or not >.> <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxeh <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">NO I'M SERIOUS ILL HIT YOU WITH THIS STICK 00:10, February 21, 2011 (UTC

No. This will stay for now. Foxclaw, this is wonderful. JUst darken the shading a teensy bit more. ♥Icy123♥ ☮Peace, love, and joy!☮  15:38, February 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Thank you Icy :)<font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxeh <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">I am the chosen one, nuo? 18:39, February 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the patches  Bird  2011 21:11, February 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-

Blur the highlights, and make the ear pink smaller  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:09, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

There's some patches of blurred lineart on the chin and lots on the ear. Can you fix that please? :)  HA WK FI RE98  23:48, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

Fox, a few tips on lineart - what helps me is to actually erase the lineart, do the coloring, then place a layer of the lineart over. That way, you only need to worry about the coloring getting a little blurred :) Age nt Win  dFi re -  Delve Deep er  13:42, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined-- Night  shine  00:43, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

Quailfeather - For Approval
This is what she is supposed to look like. ♥Icy123♥ ☮Peace, love, and joy!☮  19:09, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

This is over the limit of 35 -- Night  shine  19:52, February 20, 2011 (UTC)


 * It's fine. =.=  Sakura -chan   ♥  20:59, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and highlights, make the earpink bigger. Xigbar; The Freeshooter  21:01, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

See my message above-- Night  shine  22:30, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Ice, this is really good, but it doesn't match Quailfeather's description. It says on her article that she's dark gray with a darker gray paw  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:10, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I'm going to change that. ♣Saint♣Ice♣ 15:32, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely! But the highlights still look round and circlish...maybe smudge them out a little?  HA WK FI RE98  23:47, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined-- Night  shine  00:42, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

Someone else can take over this. ☘Saint <font color="Lime">Ice☘ 15:42, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Image Limit
I just want to remind everyone that the image limit is 35 so please do not post chararts when there are already 35 on the page. They will be declined and you can put them up when there is room. -- Night  shine  21:12, February 21, 2011 (UTC)

I just counted them, It is fine Nightshine cut them some slack  Bird  2011 21:17, February 21, 2011 (UTC)

True, maybe we should archive the CBA's ones f your worried.  Sakura -chan   ♥  22:07, February 21, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I've just archived the CBA images because it was 24 hours, (had it not been, they would not have been archived) And I do agree with Nightshine; I think once one image goes over the limit, then everyone thinks it's okay to put their images over the limit. We can discuss the image limit going up if you guys think it should, I'm open to ideas  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:49, February 21, 2011 (UTC)

No, I think this limit is fine. The scroll bar on my screen is really small already (as in, the page is rather long). A lot of critique for most of these images is required, so I think 35 should remain the limit. •Maple fern•  11:58, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

I kinda wish it was 40, but i would be fine if we kept the limit.

40? That's kind of a lot, I say at least 36  Lyze  We have Nothing to fear, Except fear itself 17:49, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

36 is pointless, it's just an image after, while we're getting at least ten more images. I think 35 should remain the limit as Maple said. ♣Saint♣Ice♣ 17:56, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

Sneerkit (K) For Approval


Here he is. :P -Sage: Spring is Coming! 00:21, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

He looks gray, I'd darken the image a lot. Blur the shading, highlights, and ear pink, and add eye white  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:28, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

Also make the Eye black more rectangular, See other kit images for example also add eye depth  Bird  2011 00:45, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry Bird, I didn't see your comment before I finished him. I added eye white, and blurred everything. I am now adding the eye depth and pupil. -Sage: Spring is Coming! 22:13, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. -Sage: Spring is Coming! 22:22, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink, add a highlight to the haunch, and muzzle  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:47, February 24, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. -Sage: Spring is Coming! 22:56, February 25, 2011 (UTC)'''

There is blurred line art in various places, make the pupils more centered in the eye, blur the shading-- Night  shine  07:12, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Could someone help me with replacing the lineart? -Sage the little kitten. 03:52, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

Oceanbreeze - For Approval
Here she is. (Excuse me if there's a redlink). Comments? •Maple fern•  00:36, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

Um, Maple, are you using the correct blank...? ♣Saint♣Ice♣ 15:27, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

She's a warrior. •Maple fern•  17:20, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

You aren't. Use this one: Save that to your computer. ♣Saint♣Ice♣ 20:52, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, while you disappeared (xP) Nightshine fixed the blank. As for the image, make the stripes more natural. And blur them alot. Blur the white paws and the eyes look... weird :P  Sakura -chan   ♥  01:57, February 24, 2011 (UTC)

Maple, I can help you change it to the newer blank if you want-- Night  shine  07:11, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined--- Night  shine  00:42, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

Tigerkit (Ki)- For Approval
Here he is! :D Oh yea Nightshine don't have a spaz attackthis is the 35th :P Oh and I had help from Nightfall XP Adderpaw 19:57, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

This is great! Add stripes to the paws and the stomach/chest. Add some more to the chin as well as the sides of the face, smudge the tail-tip some more and make the ear pink more visible, as in, defining it. ♣Saint♣Ice♣ 20:57, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

I like it! There's some blurred lineart on the tailtip and also darken the shading some.  HA WK FI RE98  23:46, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

I think the stripes look fine, make the ear pink dark reddish and a bit smaller-- Night  shine  07:11, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

OK Idon't see where it is blurred :/ and Everytime I try to make the earpink smaller it looks messed up. :/ Adderpaw 20:32, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

Lilackit (Ki) ~ For Approval
Eh, I'm not so sure. I'm not very good at black cats. Mew Mew  Zakuro  01:07, February 24, 2011 (UTC)

I like her a lot! Darken the shading, brighten the high lights  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:48, February 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened shading and brightened highlights. Mew Mew  Zakuro  01:01, February 25, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:54, February 25, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink a bit-- Night  shine  07:10, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I need help witht the shading. <font color="#00FF00">Lettuce <font color="#76EEC6">The Porpoise 00:38, March 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and make it triangular, I'll help with the shading -- Night  shine  00:33, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

I did the shading for you and also went ahead and blurred the ear pink-- Night  shine  00:41, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks a billion, Nightshine. <font color="#00FF00">Lettuce <font color="#76EEC6">The Porpoise 01:16, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the face, even with my screen at its brightest I'm having difficulty seeing the line art  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:32, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

Cedarkit (Ki) For Approval
I know I know he needs some work Adderpaw 00:29, February 25, 2011 (UTC)

Very nice! I think he needs to be darkened though, I always imagined him like a havana brown cat when I suggested his character. Blur the ear pink, and there's some blurred line art on his ears  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:44, February 25, 2011 (UTC)

I don't see it :/ oh and every time I try to make him more brown I can't add the shading DX Adderpaw 19:49, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

Cloverleaf - For Approval
Cloverleaf. Nuff said. If it's already been approved, sorry, she didn't have it on her page. •Maple fern•  17:38, February 25, 2011 (UTC)

What do you mean it's been approved? Darken the shading, blur the ear pink, and blur the stripes-- Night  shine  07:09, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Get rid of the gray stuff outside of the charart  Bird  2011 20:48, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Angel (CG) - For Approval
Comments?-- Night  shine  03:59, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

She's so cute! The only thing is, I imagined her fluffy and like her real image. =)  Sakura -chan   ♥  04:04, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded made changes-- Night  shine  06:22, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe blur the patches a bit other then that it's good  Lyze  We have Nothing to fear, Except fear itself 17:45, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred patches-- Night  shine  00:32, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the black paw farthest from us  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:54, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

Jaystorm (Ro) - For Approval
Comments?-- Night  shine  03:59, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

This is wonderful! Lighten the white, it's almost the same color as the stripes, and it looks gray. Xigbar; The Freeshooter  13:51, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

Also blur patches  Lyze  We have Nothing to fear, Except fear itself 15:36, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur patches and stripes, and maybe add some more gray patches. ;)  HA WK FI RE98  16:44, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

Mmm. Add more gray patches, and blur the stripes, it's kinda non-realistic looking. Blur the ear pink a bit and darken the stripes, I can barely see them. Otherwise, great job. ;) ☘Saint <font color="Lime">Ice☘  13:11, March 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I lightened the white and blurred the patches and ear pink. There are enough patches in my mind and the white stripes look fine to me.- Night  shine  00:28, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

There are not enough patches to the body, and the stripes could be darkened just a bit. ☘Saint <font color="Lime">Ice☘ 00:31, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe add a patch to the front leg nearest us?  Lyze  We have Nothing to fear, Except fear itself 01:08, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

Well on his warrior image he has no gray patch there-- Night  shine  01:10, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I just noticed he had a front gray paw, so I added that-- Night  shine  01:13, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, maybe darken the belly shading a teeny bit  Lyze  We have Nothing to fear, Except fear itself 01:15, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

Blanks
Ok, so first, Nigthshine, if you edit a blank and fix it, could you upload it onto the gallery of blanks? And two for SpiritClan cats, I think we should make them a bit transparent. Like just able to see but still kinda fades. :3  Sakura -chan   ♥  08:22, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

Should there even be images for SpiritClan cats? It's pretty much like another StarClan and StarClan cats don't have special images for that. -- Night  shine  18:44, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

Well, we could use the same blank, just lower the transparency. Because, they are faded cats.

Well, guys I think we should just table StarClan/Dark Forest/SpiritClan blanks for later. Once StarClan blanks are approved, then we can work something out for SpiritClan. I don't really picture them having true bodies, I picture that they have a shimmery cat body outline, and that they're sort of melted into light. And their eyes are really bright. Anyway, let's just table this for later ;)  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:41, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

Wildkit (Ki) For Approval
I don't know...comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:43, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

Awshume :D Blur dappples a teeny bit  Lyze  We have Nothing to fear, Except fear itself 22:55, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

....Um...wow. This is just....beyond awesome. Wait, that's not even a good word for it. I'm sorry but I'll be ripping up the dictonary trying to find the correct word for it; it's just so....awesome!!!! I really don't see anything wrong. The dapples are fine they way it is, you just have to add more on the paw facing us. ☘Saint <font color="Lime">Ice☘ 13:09, March 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Wow, thanks guys! Bird: I blurred them a bit, and Ice, I added flecks to the paw facing us  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:24, March 2, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome possom I don't see nothing wrong Good job Night  Lyze  We have Nothing to fear, Except fear itself 01:07, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

Lol, thanks Bird :)  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:55, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

One of the bests on the Wiki so far. comments before approval? ☘Saint <font color="Lime">Ice☘ 01:19, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

Frost (CG) - For Approval
It's been sitting in my computer for two weeks along with Dawnfrost :P Anyways, I'm not sure about the patches, do they look okay? 00:04, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

This is really good, but her article says she's supposed to have wispy white patches  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:11, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

Is there a cave guard named Frost? I don't see one in the allegiances -- Night  shine  00:14, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

Nightshine: Yeah, it's Frost that Glimmers in Sunlight. Nightfall: There are white patches, but I'll define them as needed. 01:43, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

Dawnfrost (E) - For Approval
Not sure if this would be considered a tabby, but I was basing it off of my neighbor's kitty :3 00:04, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

It's really good :) Define the stripes, and darken the shading  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:11, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the stripes a lot more and darken the tail tip a tiny bit. 13:01, March 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Had to re-do :P 00:50, March 2, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink and nose more reddish  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:07, March 2, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading quite a bit. :D  HA WK FI RE98  03:02, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

Mintsong (W) - For Approval
Comments? Xigbar; The Freeshooter  21:22, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

She is.....................cute! X3 Darken the shading. Adderpaw 23:16, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

I see that there is some really dark places inside places like around the, um, lets go how they say it in health, bloodius maximus -.- and the chest. Is that supposed to be there, i think it is, just checking... <font face="Segoe Script" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Papyrus" color="#800517">I hit Adderpaw and Sagestorm with this stick, i'm not afraid to do it to you! 03:46, March 1, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? Xigbar; The Freeshooter  20:49, March 2, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the back paws  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:56, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? Xigbar; The Freeshooter  15:40, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Deidara (Ro) - For Approval
Haven't done one in a while and I know this one isn't great, so, comments? Moon 05:52, March 2, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome :) I would darken the shading and ear pink  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:06, March 2, 2011 (UTC)

Foxmask (W) - For Approval
Comments? Xigbar; The Freeshooter  02:27, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

This is really good! Blur and thicken the tail shading. Also, there's some blurred line art on the front right arm, (the one closest to us) and along the back of the tail  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:57, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? Xigbar; The Freeshooter  15:01, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

Rose (Ro) For Approval
How is she? :D  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:01, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

She's lovely :D The pink eye looks a little salmoney though, and the nose strip only goes to a point just above her eyes. :) Age nt Win  dFi re -  Delve Deep er  01:05, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

Cute! Smudge the patches a bit more, they look too bland.  HA WK FI RE98  03:01, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

Tigerleap (W) For Approval
Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:53, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

This is BEAUTIFUL! The stripes on the tail are smudged a little too much, there's smears everywhere.  HA WK FI RE98  03:01, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

He is........................ BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Darken him please X3. Adderpaw 02:08, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Silversong(W)For approval
Epic fail D: <font face="Segoe Script" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Papyrus" color="#800517">I hit Adderpaw and Sagestorm with this stick, i'm not afraid to do it to you!02:36, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

what the h*ll happened to him? (why did I censor the 'e'? Poor 'e' D:) The tuft of fur is very awkward and the shading on the back is black. Alot of the lineart is blurred, The highlights are good, smudge the paws more.  Sakura -chan   ♥  02:45, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Foxclaw, you need to add this to your reservations and you already have 5 images up for approval. You should work on those images before starting new ones-- Night  shine  02:48, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Him? Its a girl Echo -_- I tried my best on the tuft, it's supposed to be like that..... Let me work on it. <font face="Segoe Script" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Papyrus" color="#800517">I hit Adderpaw and Sagestorm with this stick, i'm not afraid to do it to you!03:22, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Foxclaw, I hope you didn't just ignore my comment. You should work on your other images before starting another. Your kittypet blanks will be declined soon due to lack of work so you should get on those or withdraw them. Make sure you add all of your reservations to the table before you post them here.-- Night  shine  03:39, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

I just edited them &#91;&#91;User: Foxclaw33&#124;&lt;font face=&quot;Segoe Script&quot; color=&quot;#15317E&quot;&gt;Tigerstar :3&lt;/font&gt;&#93;&#93;&#91;&#91;User_Talk: Foxclaw33&#124;&lt;sup&gt;&lt;font face=&quot;Papyrus&quot; color=&quot;#800517&quot;&gt;HES GONNA KILL YOU RUN! &lt;/font&gt;&lt;/sup&gt;&#93;&#93; 06:55, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

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