Cats of the Clans Wiki talk:Character Art Project

Flowercloud -(W) For Approval
I'm really proud of this!:D Comments? Clarrissa  My Talk Page  Brownkit... 20:00, December 3, 2010 (UTC)

Smudge the white transition a little more  Sand  Merry Christmas 03:17, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-I smudged the transition. Comments? Clarrissa  My Talk Page  Brownkit... 16:20, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading and ear pink-- 01:49, December 10, 2010 (UTC)

This is the same charart I approved with Yellowpool. I just added green eyes and her white foot.(Flowercloud is Yellowpool's daurghter) I'll darken the shading and stuff, I'm just a little surprised. Clarrissa  My Talk Page  Brownkit... 18:43, December 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Done. I get how the haunch highlight looked a little unnatural. Didn't really notice before:P Clarrissa   My Talk Page  Brownkit...

17:19, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

Can you change this to be the new blank? I can help you if you want. Blur the ear pink, smudge the white transition, darken the shading-- 21:43, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Huh? Clarrissa  My Talk Page  Brownkit... 16:57, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- (Could you please help me with that:P-it's hard)Anyways, I used Foxclaw33's image and made a few changes:) Comments?(I basically did the previous comments).

I changed the line art for you. Darken the shading a lot. This looks a little too yellow, so can you make it more gingery?-- 19:47, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Do you use the dodge tool and the burn tool for shading & highlights? here are some tutorials that might help. http://catsofclans.wikia.com/wiki/Character_Art_Project/Tutorials

Here is mine.. Its not the best though... Foxclaw33's CAP Tutorial And my tutorial continued... Foxclaw33's CAP Tutorial Continued Foxclaw33 My talk!17:27, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I tried to make her more gingery. I'm kinda taking over now...(Clara said I could) Improvements? Zoe27 Gossip Queen!!! 17:52, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

Just darken the shading and ear pink-- 02:42, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I darkened the ear-pink, but every time I darken the shading, the fur around it becomes darker than the rest of the fur, so I decided I'd leave it. If anyone can tell me what to do about it, it would be greatly appreciated:) Zoe27 Gossip Queen!!! 16:56, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Just use a bigger brush or spray on the shading--  night  shine  ❄  03:43, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Magicpaw (A) ~ For Approval
Comments? Merry Christmas! o3o 21:54, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

This is beautiful! Lighten the ear pink, and make the dash on her forehead more gray  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:06, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Tried to fix earpink and dash on her forehead. Merry Christmas! o3o 21:05, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Make the right ear pink smaller, desaturate it, blur all the patches a bit more. Make the colours more natural looking, right now it looks like a DarkClan cat-- 02:46, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. She has to have a large amount of purple and pink in her gray and cream, but they are a little more natural. Merry Christmas! o3o 01:29, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Desaturate the ginger, lighten the ear pink, smudge the patches together more, darken the shading-- 21:37, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I changed the colors of the cream, ginger, and gray. The shading was darkened, and the earpink was lightened. ☯Silver  Bells☮ 19:46, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

I love it! It actually does look better now. The only thing I see is to make the ear pink a bit bigger  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:16, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

I kind of light grey outside the lineart on the ears around the face on the left, can you erase that? Make the ear pink bigger Foxclaw33 My talk!23:19, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

Oh yes, I see the gray outside the line art too; it's right around the left ear (our left)  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:43, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

I'm getting to this. <font color="Silver" >☯Silver <font color="Goldenrod" > Bells☮ 17:29, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Oh yea and i really like it, not sure what the grey stuff is about O3O Though i really like it. I already said that... I can be anoyying sometimes o.o <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">My talk!23:08, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

I WILL be getting to this, so please don't decline it. It will be up by tomorrow. <font color="Silver" >☯Silver <font color="Goldenrod" > Bells☮ 21:42, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

Ashflame(W) for approval
Echo helped me with it. I have to say now its pretty good. I think i might need to blur? :3 please set out a thing(Can't remember the name of it) that tells me to blur, that would help ALOT. Thanks, Foxclaw33(I gotta problem with SIGGIES!!! AHHHH!!!)12/12/10 (Celebrate! Almost all the numbers are the same xD) 22:33/10:33 (UTC)

This is good! Perhaps change the color of the ear pink though, it's way too purple, it needs to be more of a salmony pink  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 18:37, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Actually, now that i look at it, I agree! Let me work on it then reupload it.... Foxclaw33 10:30, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Even though it's my image I helped, yes, make the ear pink redish/pink then blur the shading. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">Jinglepaw :D 'Merry Christmas 18:51, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED- So how's it now? Foxclaw33 10:49, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

I took it out of thumbnail for you. Make sure the ear pink stays inside the line art. Darken the shading a bit more-- 22:59, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 18:06, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Is this better? Or is the shading to dark? Is there anything i need to edit? Beileve it or not, this IS my siggnature! Foxclaw33 06:53, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

want me to help? --bracken-- ~06:55, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, that'd be wonderful if you helped me o.o. Beileve it or not, this IS my siggnature! Foxclaw33 22:16, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded- ok i got it but thanks anyways, braken.&#91;&#91;User-Foxclaw33&#124; 02:03, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

Add shading, the back of the tail is cut off, make the ear pink more reddish and blur it. Make sure no colour is out of the line art. -- 19:39, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

>.< THERE IS SHADING! I am tired of people saying there is no shading when there is! Let me reupload it with the tail <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">My talk!01:52, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">My talk!01:54, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Note I don't use the burn and dodge tool but i am starting to. I just want to not use it on him, i just want to get him done already :P <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">My talk!17:06, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Fix the ear pink- see a tutorial. It's a little to bright. <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:violet">Gossip Queen!!! 17:56, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

Foxclaw, you don't use the dodge and burn tool? What are using to shade and highlight? Those are the only two tools that effectively work for highlights and shading  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:38, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

Yea i just started to, i thought by now it would be CBA already.... And i dont need tutorials, i figure out things on my own. For instance, if i played a wii game... I just throw away the instructions. :P Believe it or not i do that :P :D... Ok so ill darken Ashflame<font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">My talk!00:14, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I'm glad you started to. Like I said, the burn tool is the only tool that creates shading, and the dodge tool is the only tool that creates highlights. Darken the shading and desaturate him too, he's too neon orange. Just click the sponge tool if you use pixlr, and set it to "desaturate". Make the ear pink less of a purple color, and make sure that it doesn't overlap the lineart  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:36, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-<font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">TEEEHEEE o3o Made ya look!!02:33, January 18, 2011 (UTC)

I see no light source in this, there is a line of lighter colour going across the pelt, so get rid of it. Make the ear pink more reddish and blur it--  night  shine  ❄  03:42, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blackberry (W) For Approval
The shading sucks i know, Lost mah skillz at shading XD but i will get it back at one point XD but whatever, Heres Blackberry the spot was easy amazingly  Sand  Merry Christmas 23:17, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

Desaturate the ear pink, blur the shading, blur the white transition-- 04:29, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Blurred shading all the way didn't know what white transition you were talking about so i blurred both of them  Sand  Merry Christmas 17:38, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading to the back of the haunch and to her back, blur the ear pink more, blur the shading a lot, blur the white transition-- 20:58, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I added shading to the back of her haunch but not the back cause of light source and if i blurred the shading anymore it would mess up the highlights i blurred the ear-pink and the white transition  Sand  Merry Christmas 16:31, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

Where exactly is the light coming from? Blur all the shading a lot, 19:35, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

"If i blurred the shading anymore it would mess up the highlights" The light is coming from the top or side i'm not going to pout shading on the back cause even though im not really sure where the light is coming from wherever it is there would be no back shading, Also like i said if i blur the shading anymore it would mess up the highlights  Bird  2011 19:39, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Bird asked for my help on the IRC. The shading was difficult for me to work with; I think mainly because I'm too used to my own style xD Anyway though, I tried to smudge the shading all around the leg and belly, because the back leg shading was only in one spot, as was the belly shading. I brightened the highlights as well, blurred the ear pink, smudged the white dab a bit, and added depth to the eyes  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:40, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

The haunch shading looks very spiky, so smooth that out. --  night  shine  ❄  03:40, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Frostpelt (W) For approval
<font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">My talk!21:58, January 6, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good. Does she have an eye color? -Sagestorm70 16:31, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

There are tons of white pixels and there is some faded lineart on her. Also, she needs eye color and earpink. I can fix that for you, if you'd like, and you can take it from there. <font color="Silver" >☯Silver <font color="Goldenrod" > Bells☮ 16:49, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

That's very nice of you, but i think i need to do it myself and learn. I'm working on it right now. And Sagestorm, sorry that i forgot the eye color. I will go and redo that, as i will also add eye pink. I just didnt have time, and you know, it's the holidays, in a hurry to wrap presents and decorate. I was in quite a rush.(I didnt look at her description that much, i will in a sec) I didn't realize that, and thank you for reminding me. In just a second i'll have it all done. Beileve it or not, this IS my siggnature! Foxclaw33 22:07, December 24, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded-How's thisBeileve it or not, this IS my siggnature! Foxclaw33 22:20, December 24, 2010 (UTC)'''

Use this blank: make the ear pink more pinkish and blur it, darken the shading and blur it, get rid of all the white pixels-- 20:57, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is sorta coming out of the blank. -Sagestorm70 15:42, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

Sis is working on it, she is working on many other ones, and she's fixing Ashflame, too! ~Bloodclaw 22:32, December 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-you have to look at it really close if you want to see the highlights and shading--Beileve it or not, this IS my siggnature! Foxclaw33 02:25, December 30, 2010 (UTC)

Her page says that she's a dark gray she-cat, and this is a pale gray she-cat. Darken the image a lot. <font color="Silver" >☯Silver <font color="Goldenrod" > Bells☮ 01:18, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">My talk!21:58, January 6, 2011 (UTC)

Add shading, make sure the ear pink stays in the lines, blur the ear pink, make the ear pink more reddish. Darken the whole thing-- 19:35, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-<font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">My talk!01:49, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

This is fantastic! Blur the face shading, and the shading on the foreleg. Make the ear pink on both sides smaller, the tips are overlapping the line art  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:57, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

Hey, Foxclaw33, would you like Frostpelt? She's up in Adoption Center(she's been there for some time now. -Clara said she's cutting back on her rp's)<font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:violet">Gossip Queen!!! 18:19, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Sure :) <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">TEEEHEEE o3o Made ya look!!02:35, January 18, 2011 (UTC)

There are areas on the line art that are blurred, and there is a darker spot of (shading?) on the right side of her face. <font face="Stencil">我愛羅 As long as theres others to kill the world is wonderful  05:06, January 20, 2011 (UTC)

Kittypet Blanks - For Approval
Ack. Please forgive my terrible excuse of a drawing. *headdesk* Agent WindFire  Because it's snowing,  Blowing, All over town... 17:48, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

I took it out of a gallery. The legs are way too long, make the paws more rounded and less hoof-like. Make the tails rounded on the short haired ones-- 00:03, December 24, 2010 (UTC)

Make the stomachs rounder/larger. After all, they are well-fed kittypets.-Mapleshade iz Awesum! 06:40, December 24, 2010

~Comment that might help...

I am not exactly a drawing expert but i would put pupils in the eyes and make the head just a LITTLE round; then make the stomachs larger, i agree with Mapleshade and nightshine, the legs ARE a little long. After you do that then i'd think i'd be approved :). ~Bloodclaw 06:01, December 25, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. StarClan save us all, I tried to make paws. x.x Someday that's going to end the world as we know it.

@Nightshine fixed the legs/paws on the long-haired female as an example, I actually think I messed it up further by trying. Tails on short-haired's are rounded.... I think.

@Darkie Yeah... made these old things back a while. They were supposed to be feral cats - I guess in the process of fixing them up for this, that slipped my mind. I did it on the long-haired female as an example. If you like it, I'll do it on the rest.

@~Bloodclaw Pupils aren't there for a reason, it's a blank. Same case with the apprentice blank, but yeah, you're probably right on the head. I fail epically at anything I try to draw XD I'll give it a shot with the other improvements I'm working on now. Agent WindFire Because it's snowing,  Blowing, All over town... 11:13, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

Want me to help >.<? I'd be glad to. Sorry, i forgot that pupils have to be added by the person USING the blanks o.o You think that you fail epicly on drawing? You should see me when i don't sketch first It's like a horror show >.< ---~Bloodclaw 22:36, December 29, 2010 (UTC)

Try altering the line art like this. Also, the long haired female's hind paws are different then the others  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 06:25, January 3, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined-- 19:34, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

I actually don't think this is even a good starter lineart... maybe I should just re-do it completely. This was really really old anyway. Agent WindFire Because it's snowing,  Blowing, All over town... 00:47, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with you. The anatomy on this isn't correct in many spots and the legs are bent backwards.-- 01:08, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

They are? o.o Sorry, I'm really not the best with cats, I have a dog and I've never really seen a cat before... not up close, that is... *headdesk* StarClan save us all, I'm just going to mess this up again. Agent WindFire Because it's snowing,  Blowing, All over town... 10:48, January 12, 2011 (UTC)

lol, it's fine. Just google a cat online, and draw your line art while looking at it. That's what I did with the leader blanks  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:07, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Wishkit (Ki) ~ For Approval
I really like how this turned out. :) Comments? <font color="Silver" >☯Silver <font color="Goldenrod" > Bells☮ 14:58, December 24, 2010 (UTC)

It turned out well Smudge and blur patches  Sand  Merry Christmas 16:09, December 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. <font color="Silver" >☯Silver <font color="Goldenrod" > Bells☮ 19:52, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Make the spots more irregular, and darken the ear pink a bit  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 05:35, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

See Magicpaw (A). <font color="Silver" >☯Silver <font color="Goldenrod" > Bells☮ 17:29, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

I WILL be getting to this, so please don't decline it. This should be reuploaded by tomorrow. <font color="Silver" >☯Silver <font color="Goldenrod" > Bells☮ 21:42, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

Bloodfoot(R) For approval
Please, I know i did terrible on the shading. It was interesting to make the paws, I thought i should you the spray and blur tool on it. It took me like 2 minutes so i wont mind if i have to edit it :) Beileve it or not, this IS my siggnature! Mosspelt7 22:50, December 24, 2010 (UTC)

Well put the red back in the lineart your not supposed to spray it your supposed to smudge it there are white pixels that have to be filled and...... I can help you with it how about that XD  Sand  Merry Christmas 12:31, December 25, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry about the white lines on the outlining its because anything grey to black will do that, OK let me Un-spray (LOL) the paws. I'm not sure how to make the white lines dissapear, also it didn't do that on one side of the tail O.O! Beileve it or not, this IS my siggnature! Mosspelt7 04:06, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

Use this blank: m Blur the markings, blur the shading, make the ear pink more reddish and blur it, get rid of the white pixels. You may have to redo this. -- 20:56, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I think it looks pretty good :D!!! I really want it to be approved :DBeileve it or not, this IS my siggnature! Mosspelt7 22:53, December 29, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading, make the ear pink more of a salmony color, blur the ginger transition a lot, and add ginger to his chest. And, is it me or do the eyes look small than normal?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 06:43, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- No, the eyes are regular Mosspelt7 07:46, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Huh, my bad. The ear pink still looks purple, make it more reddish. Blur the ginger transition a lot, and you added ginger to the belly, also add some to the chest  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 06:27, January 3, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined-- 19:33, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-<font face="Bradley Hand ITC" color="#800517">Mosspaw <font face="Segoe Script" color="#000000">My talk! 02:27, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Mosspelt, the chest, not the stomach. I circled the chest, and if you need help, you can look at Darkfrost's image. Also, rename the file - Bloodfoot.warrior.png  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:19, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

I would suggest redoing this image, <font face="Stencil">我愛羅 As long as theres others to kill the world is wonderful  05:06, January 20, 2011 (UTC)

Silversong(Q) - For approval
Okay, so the tuft on her head isn't perfect. I almost forgot the ear pink. Maybe you think it's sloppy, but it took many MANY tries to make it like it is. I also did the Queen version, on there i added eye pupils and ear pink. Not sure if i wasnt supposed to but here it is ~Bloodclaw 23:50, December 24, 2010 (UTC)

You were not supposed to do 2 images, and you didn't even use the RIGHT BLANK. Re-do these images with the rogue blank ONLY. <font face="Stencil">Ayako My Ta  lk ☹  01:29, December 25, 2010 (UTC)

WHAT? Nightfall told me that i could do them both and what? Rogue blank? Silversong's RIVERCLAN. The R on my thing stands for riverclan. Uh, actually that IS confusing, let me re do the title. Silversong was a former rougue, Nightfall told me i didnt have to do the rogue blank. Silversong & Bloodfoot joined riverclan and then Silversong was like BOOM she's a queen. ~Bloodclaw 05:10, December 25, 2010 (UTC)

R means rogue -_- <font face="Stencil">Ayako My Talk ☹  01:45, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, sorry for the misuderstanding, i am new. I also talk back when people dont expect me to. Please excuse that ;) ~Bloodclaw 03:56, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

I took it out of the slideshow and created another section. Rename this one Silversong.queen.png or something like that. Blur the markings, add shading, make the ear pink more reddish and blur it, darken the nose colour-- 20:51, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED- OK here it is ~Bloodclaw 02:09, December 30, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a lot smaller, make the nose dark gray, blur the light gray transition, and use this blank over it: Make the eye colour stay in the lines and add a white pixel to the eyes-- 19:29, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- And there she is. User:~Bloodclaw 6:17, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a lot smaller, and blur it a lot. Look at this for an example on how to do the ear pink. Blur the silver transition a lot, blur all the shading and highlights, they look really messy. The ear pink should be more of a reddish color, and the nose is way to bright, I suggest to either darken it a lot, or make it dark gray since gray cats typically have darker gray noses; although they can have reddish pink  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:00, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:49, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Silversong (w) - For Approval
~Bloodclaw 07:27, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

There are a lot of white pixels all around, fix the blurred line art, add eye colour, make the ear pink more reddish and blur it. Use this blank: -- 20:51, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Not sure what the eye color is, but i think that it's light blue. Let me redo it with that blank ~Bloodclaw 02:36, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded- YAY! I DIDN'T FAIL EPICLY ON THE HIGHLIGHTS!!! :D! But you must look closely to see them. ~Bloodclaw 22:39, December 29, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, make the highlights lighter and... turn the mout back, she looks like her mouth is deformed. Smudge the lighter gray translations and make the lineart all black. Nothing else but black! I suggest redoing this. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">Jinglepaw :D 'Merry Christmas 01:27, December 31, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I really like it now :) ~Bloodclaw 06:02, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink smaller and more of a reddish pink. Darken the shading and blur the silver transition a lot  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 06:41, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-~Bloodclaw 07:27, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Blur all the patches, add shading, fix the blurred line art, blur the ear pink-- 19:27, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- &#91;&#91;User:~Bloodclaw&#124;&lt;font face=&quot;Bradley Hand ITC&quot; color=&quot;#15317E&quot;&gt;~Bloodclaw&lt;/font&gt;&#93;&#93;&#91;&#91;User_Talk:~Bloodclaw&#124;&lt;sup&gt;&lt;font face=&quot;Bavuse&quot; color=&quot;#800517&quot;&gt;&#91;&#91;User:~Bloodclaw&#124;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/sup&gt; NEVER STEAL BLOODCLAW&#39;S STICK!&#93;&#93; 02:32, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

You did a fantastic job on the smudging, it looks a lot better. I would add some highlights because it'd really hard to distinguish the shading from the actual color of the pelt. If you want, you can look at my tutorial for help on the highlights. Make the ear pink more reddish, and make sure it stays inside the lines  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:02, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:49, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Darkfang(D) For approval
OK i noticed that nobody would do him so i decided to. It was fun :). I changed Dreamfrost to Darkfang. I wanted to do Darkfang more because the un-natural stripes seemed to be very fun. I tried ot match it up as well as the Warrior image as i could. I know the eyes are bad, please excuse that. Beileve it or not, this IS my siggnature! Foxclaw33 06:39, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

Use this blank: blur the markings, make the ear pink more reddish, get rid of all the white pixels, darken the shading and blur it-- 20:54, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Used different blank, blured markings, made ear pink a little more reddish, blurred the shading -Beileve it or not, this IS my siggnature! Foxclaw33 02:06, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

Alright good now it's the right size. Make the shoulder stripes longer, blur all of the stripes, make sure there is no colour outside of the line art, make the ear pink more reddish and blur it. -- 02:34, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

OK, I'll be extra active this week, so i can work on it Beileve it or not, this IS my siggnature! Foxclaw33 04:42, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Did what you told me to do. Couldn't find anything outside the lineart. Anyway i did everything else. Sorry that the ears are uneven >.< Beileve it or not, this IS my siggnature! Foxclaw33 05:15, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink needs to be much smaller, and made more of a salmony pink color instead of hot pink. Darken the shading, and blur the stripes  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 06:38, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-&#91;&#91;User-Foxclaw33&#124; 07:54, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Layer another line art over this and get rid of the colour outside of the lines. Add shading to it and blur it well, blur the stripes, make the ear pink more reddish-- 19:22, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- How is it now <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">My talk!17:47, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks better but this is gray, Darkfang is black. Darken his pelt and make the stripes look more like his warrior image here by making them thinner, add more, and blur them  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:07, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and the patches. Also make the image more like the warrior image as Nightfall said. ddevans96 back and ready for action 01:18, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

As Dalton and Nightfall started, make the image more like his warrior image, blur the stripes and ear pink, and the random darker strips of gray seen above the leg, ect. <font face="Stencil">我愛羅 As long as theres others to kill the world is wonderful  05:06, January 20, 2011 (UTC)

Mion(R)-for approval
I dont like it  --bracken-- ~23:52, December 29, 2010 (UTC)

It's cute! Make the ear pink more salmony color. ;D <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">Jinglepaw :D 'Merry Christmas 11:10, December 30, 2010 (UTC)

This is beautiful!! Make the pupil a bit bigger, and add eye white  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:06, January 3, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know why you dont like it! it's beautiful. The right and left ear are different eye pink colors, plus i would make it a little more reddish-salmon. <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">My talk!17:57, January 6, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined-- 19:19, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

I could take over for you, if you'd like, Bracken. <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:violet">Gossip Queen!!! 17:59, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

go ahead ` --bracken-- ~01:49, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:50, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Hippieheart(W) For approval
I just made her and her page, and i wanted to get her image done. I really like it :D. Her description says she's rainbow with peace and shine marks. The shine marks were VERY, VERY hard. So i just did 2. <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">My talk!20:51, January 6, 2011 (UTC)

Nice. I just see a few places where the color goes out the line art. -Sagestorm70 00:45, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-<font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">My talk!02:34, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

Here's a tip for doing Chararts: Do NOT change the lineart. Use a normal bucketfill and a normal smudge. Blur peace markings, add shading and highlights, fix lineart and get all the color out of the lineart INTO the lineart. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">Jinglepaw :D 'Merry Christmas 22:18, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

What? I did do shading and highlights but since shes rainbow its hard to see -_-. What i did was i colored it all red, then i made a black line, and a put blue OVER the the black line so the black line wasnt visable, then i did that with all over the other colors. I didnt change the lineart to be honest :o. I'll reuploaded with blurred peace signs and shine marks. <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">My talk!23:16, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

I don't see any shading or highlights. Brighten the highlights and darken the shading a lot if there is though. And there is a lot of blurred line art  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:41, January 8, 2011 (UTC)


 * Fix the lineart. And the signs are very hard to see. I would re-do them if I were you. 17:24, January 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * I dont understand whats wrong with the lineart ?_? I meant for it to be blurred because she has alot of different colored tranitions. I also dont know how the signs are hard to see, they are white and out there. The peace signs and the white shines are the signs. I'll darken the shading, just give me some time.. *SPOILER AHEAD!* I'm working on the To-Be blanks i'm putting up for approval.. <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">My talk!23:20, January 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * I dont understand whats wrong with the lineart ?_? I meant for it to be blurred because she has alot of different colored tranitions. I also dont know how the signs are hard to see, they are white and out there. The peace signs and the white shines are the signs. I'll darken the shading, just give me some time.. *SPOILER AHEAD!* I'm working on the To-Be blanks i'm putting up for approval.. <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">My talk!23:20, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Foxclaw, the lineart shouldn't be altered at all unless the character has a crooked paw, bent tail, scarred ears, ect. It's basically the outline of the cat, it wouldn't make sense for the outline to be blurred just because she has different colors on her pelt. And, I'm sorry to tell you this but Hawkfire has the to-be blanks reserved  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:09, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the peace signs a bit. <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:violet">Gossip Queen!!! 17:42, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

Use a slightly thicker brush for the symbols. Another thing you can do is take a circle tool, make a circle, and then use a line or path tool to make the symbols straighter. ddevans96 back and ready for action 01:21, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Oh... I am sorry lol... I wont be very active so can you guys give me some more time before you do a 'Please work on this or it will be declined'?<font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">My talk!22:14, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Amberdawn (Q) - For Approval
I kinda like, the shading is bad though :\ Echostream <sup style="font-family:Arial;color:Black">We live to Tfight, We fight to live, tonight you'll hear my battle cry! 05:43, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

I like it too :) Darken the shading, and add some to the underbelly. Change the ear pink and nose color, they're far too purple and need to be more reddish pink. Lighten the eyes as well, it's a bit difficult to see the pupil  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 05:45, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink too <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:violet">Gossip Queen!!! 19:16, January 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- I think i just madeit worse :\ Echostream <sup style="font-family:Arial;color:Black">We live to fight, We fight to live, tonight you'll hear my battle cry! 06:07, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Nah, it just needs a bit of tweaking. I think that you're actually mistaking the burn tool for the dodge tool. The dodge tool creates highlights, the brighter parts of the cat where the sun is hitting its pelt. Shading is the darker parts of the cat, where the light isn't touching it  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 06:11, January 8, 2011 (UTC)


 * Next time, please put 'For Approval' near your cat's name. I have done that for you now. This is good for a starter - all I see is that you have to use the burn tool for the shading. Add it at the base of the tail, back, haunch, paws, chest, and underbelly. The midriff and throat could use some as well. So could the head. This is optional; but I would add some highlights if I were you, on the haunch, chest area, and muzzle. Smudge/blur the ear pink, and make it smaller. Good job. 17:20, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- eh i tried :\ Echostream <sup style="font-family:Arial;color:Black">We live to fight, We fight to live, tonight you'll hear my battle cry! 00:36, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink smaller and more reddish, blur the shading. This looks too yellow, so desaturate it some. -- 06:23, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:50, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blue Night (PH) - For Approval
- Excuse the terrible fail, also, I thought Mouseh said the ear pink isn't visible on this blank, if so, another fail, please decline Draco and Snuggles. They are fails. Gaara What is pain? 愛t 18:11, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Well i don't think there is any ear pinm X|  Bird  2011 19:13, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

This is over the limit so it will be declined-- 19:19, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

After I went through the other chararts, this is now under the limit so it can stay.-- 19:53, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

There isn't supposed to be ear pink on this blank, so that's fine. This looks really good! Darken the nose colour and darken the shading behind the head.-- 19:53, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Gaara What is pain? 愛t 19:59, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:53, January 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changed blank and blurred/darkened shading. Baisiclly redid the whole thing :P Gaara What is pain? 愛t 01:53, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

This is good :) Blur the shading more  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:52, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Gaara What is pain? 愛t 14:40, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is going across in a straight line, could you make it go more with the way she is shaped? I hope that made sense--  night  shine  ❄  03:37, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Aqua (R) For approval
I really like her <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">My talk!18:39, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

There's a little gray going out of the chest. -Mudkit: The Thinker. 13:44, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I'd fix that lineart and blur the highlights a bit. <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:violet">Gossip Queen!!! 17:41, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot, and blur the ear pink. There are these parts of the lineart where it's thicker than normal, I don't know what that's all about. See if you can fix it. And I think you altered the eye line art some how  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:49, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-I forgot the highlights O3O how dare i! And Nightfall, i cant fix the thicker parts of the lineart, sorry about that... <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">My talk!22:05, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

How did they get that way? If they can't be fixed, then I bet someone will be able to layer the original line art over it and fix.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:03, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed the line art for you--  night  shine  ❄  03:36, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Skykit (Ki) - For Approval
Hi, this isn't my, charart. It's Clara's. Since she's been blocked though, she said I could take over for her, so any improvements that need to be made, will be taken over by me, until she returns:) Comments? <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:violet">Gossip Queen!!! 17:40, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more triangular, darken the shading, and smudge the white transition a lot  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:48, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

Add more highlights and blur the ear pink slightly. I would also blur the edges of the highlights of the eyes slightly as they are very pronounced. ddevans96 back and ready for action 01:13, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I tried to do what you all asked:) Comments? <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:violet">Gossip Queen!!! 16:35, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, make the ear pink more triangular, smudge the white transition-- 06:20, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

reuplooaded-done:D <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:violet">Gossip Queen!!! 18:08, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink bigger, darken the shading--  night  shine  ❄  02:25, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Sunrise Behind Cliff (K) - For Approval
Ah, my first charart in a long time! Featuring the adorable tom-boy to-be Sunrise Behind Cliff!  HA WK FI RE98  19:12, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

This is pretty :) Darken the ear pink and blur the stripes more  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:09, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed with whats started above. <font face="Stencil">我愛羅 As long as theres others to kill the world is wonderful  05:06, January 20, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined.--  night  shine  ❄  02:25, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Cloudkit (Ki) For Approval
Hi, this isn't my image-it's Clara's she fixed the legs and emailed it to me to put it up. I'll be doing the improvements though. Comments? <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:violet">Gossip Queen!!! 17:56, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the black on her paws, make the ear pink bigger and darken it, darken the shading and brighten the highlights  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:48, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I smudged her paws, made the ear pink bigger and kinda darkened it. I also brightened the highlights on the tail, as I felt this was where the highlights were needed most. I really think it looks much better now:D Comments? <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:violet">Gossip Queen!!! 19:09, January 12, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and smudge the black transition-- 06:22, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I've done that now. Improvements? <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:violet">Gossip Queen!!! 16:54, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading--  night  shine  ❄  02:24, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Tigerfur (Ro) - For approval
I'm not really good at these. Tigerfur

Be sure to put your images here, not in the archives, those are past images that have already been approved. And no, don't think that; it just takes practice and this is good for your first try. Create an article for him, if there's no article, then there's no place to put the image. Add more stripes and blur the stripes, and add shading, ear pink, and eye white as well.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:20, January 12, 2011 (UTC)

Create an ear pink.(This is good if its your first tabby) <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:violet">Gossip Queen!!! 19:18, January 12, 2011 (UTC)

Please remember to tell us when you've reuploaded. Make the ear pink more of a reddish pink, right now it's more hot pink. Thicken the shading a lot, and darken the shading  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:44, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I made the ear insides pinker and blured the shading a little. I also Darkened the shading. Tigerfur of Bloodclan 01:30, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, and blur it a lot. Make the stripes a bit thinner, and make the ear pink more reddish  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:01, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful. You can use the Dodge dool for highlights and the Burn tool for shading. Make the ear pink salmony then blue it. Blur the stripes <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">TEEEHEEE o3o Made ya look!!23:03, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

I'll try as best as I can to fix him. Tigerfur of Bloodclan 13:17, January 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I totally fixed it! Tigerfur of Bloodclan 13:36, January 19, 2011 (UTC)

That sure is alot of stripes O.O nice job on the highlights! Do you want help on Tabby stripes? I would be glad to help. In fact i would be delighted ;) I just think its not natural for Tabby stripes to be straight... Don't you agree??<font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">TEEEHEEE o3o Made ya look!!22:33, January 19, 2011 (UTC)

Sure you can help! You can on my two other ones too! Tigerfur of Bloodclan 03:44, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Flower That Moves In Wind (PH) - For approval
Please! I worked really ard on this but will edit it if needed. :)



Tigerfur of Bloodclan 02:49, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

Hey, Tigerfur? Can you please stop putting your images in the archives? Those are images that have already been approved, this is where they must go first; so users can offer comments and critique. As for the image, this is lovely! Blur the stripes a lot, make them thinner, and darken the shading.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:52, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes thinner and more blurred in, darken shading and make highlights more visable, and fix the areas of line art in which the stripes over lip i.e. along the back. <font face="Stencil">我愛羅 As long as theres others to kill the world is wonderful  05:06, January 20, 2011 (UTC)

Clovershine (Ro)- For approval
I hope you like! I worked really hard on her! Tigerfur of Bloodclan 01:24, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

This is good :) Darken and blur the shading. Blur the white on her muzzle a lot  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:04, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Blurred the white on her muzzle a lot. I also Darkened and blurred the shading. Tigerfur of Bloodclan 18:13, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

I'm still having a hard time seeing the shading. Thicken, darken, and blur it  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:00, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I Darkened the shading once more, and blurred it.

This is REALLY Good blur the stripes a bit  Bird  2011 01:12, January 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes, and the shading is still hard to see. Also, where are the highlights? <font face="Stencil">我愛羅 As long as theres others to kill the world is wonderful  05:06, January 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Blurred the stripes again. I cannot blur them anymore; GIMP won't let me :( Tigerfur of Bloodclan 03:52, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Lichenpaw (A) ~ For Approval
Yay! New tabby style, which looks a billion times better than before to me. Anyways, it Lichenpaw. Sorry if the mottling's hard to see. Comments? <font color="Silver" >☯Silver <font color="Goldenrod" > Bells☮ 21:42, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

This is beautiful! maybe blur the marks some  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:34, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear-pink and center the left ear pink  Bird  2011 01:11, January 20, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed with whats stated above. Also, lighten the left ear pink to match the right. <font face="Stencil">我愛羅 As long as theres others to kill the world is wonderful  05:06, January 20, 2011 (UTC)

Cave Guard Blanks - For Approval
Comments? I'm not that proud of these :\--  night  shine  ❄  05:55, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

I like them :) I'd add the second hind leg, and make both the hind legs longer  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 06:05, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Darkstrike (W) - For approval
My first character art since I returned to the wiki, And -bracken let me do Darkstrike! :D §₩1ƒ₮¥ BLAAAHH, Elder dance! 23:39, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

This is really good! Fix the white pixels on his paws  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:19, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded §₩1ƒ₮¥ BLAAAHH, Elder dance! 01:31, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

There's a bit of gray outside his chest, near his neck  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:15, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed with whats stated above. Also, on the front left leg there are still white pixels near the paw and top of the leg. Fills those in. I also see a few pixels of gray way outside the line art, under the tail. <font face="Stencil">我愛羅 As long as theres others to kill the world is wonderful  05:06, January 20, 2011 (UTC)

Kovan (Ro) For Approval
Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:51, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like the pupil is blurred into the eye color a little, on the left of the viewer's pov. On purpose? Agent WindFire Because it's snowing,  Blowing, All over town... 02:14, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

Well, it's actually just that there's shading where the pupil is. If you pull it up on your art program and zoom in, you'll see what I'm talking about. Do you want me to change it anyway?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:59, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

I was looking at it closely, and it dosen't seem blurred. Maybe lighten it around that area more so the pupil isn't as mixed in. <font face="Stencil">我愛羅 As long as theres others to kill the world is wonderful  06:08, January 18, 2011 (UTC)

Oooh.... nvm, my eyesight isn't that great XD Agent WindFire  Because it's snowing,  Blowing, All over town... 06:24, January 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Better?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:09, January 20, 2011 (UTC)

Yes. I don't see anything wrong with this, now, and I believe it's ready. Senior warrior/deputy mind putting the "comments before approved" message? <font face="Stencil">我愛羅 As long as theres others to kill the world is wonderful  05:06, January 20, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit more and blur the ear pink some more-  night  shine  ❄  02:14, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Better?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:21, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Yep. Comments before approval?--  night  shine  ❄  02:23, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Rosevine (Q) For Approval
Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:51, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

WOW! That's awesome. I can't really see anything wrong. -I like Sage 17:27, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Possibly blur the shading a tad more on the bend of the tail, it sorta sticks out. Other than that, amazing! <font face="Stencil">我愛羅 As long as theres others to kill the world is wonderful  06:04, January 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Better?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:06, January 20, 2011 (UTC)

Yes. <font face="Stencil">我愛羅 As long as theres others to kill the world is wonderful  05:06, January 20, 2011 (UTC)

CBA?--  night  shine  ❄  02:13, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Silver (Q) For Approval
Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:51, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

Ah, brilliant as usual, Night! Just darken the shading and blur the spots just a tad, so they blend into the fur more. §₩1ƒ₮¥ BLAAAHH, Elder dance! 01:16, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

StarClan, that's AWESOME! maybe round the ear pink a little, at the ear tips? Agent WindFire Because it's snowing,  Blowing, All over town... 02:11, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Better?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:58, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

StarClan forbid you do bad on charats :D Its beatiful. The right eye(our right) looks like its blurred. Can you fix that...? <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">TEEEHEEE o3o Made ya look!!18:57, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Lol, thanks Foxclaw :D As for the eye, the line art isn't blurred. There's just a gray fleck on her eye lash, so it looks like it  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:04, January 17, 2011 (UTC)


 * Brilliant. Blur the specks a tad, and add some more to the paws. Darken the haunch and midriff shading. Overall, it's very well done. 00:09, January 19, 2011 (UTC)

Oh okay.<font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">TEEEHEEE o3o Made ya look!!00:20, January 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I blurred the spots and added more to the paws, but I hesitate to darken the shading. I don't want to make her look more gray than white, and I think it's dark enough already  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:02, January 20, 2011 (UTC)

CBA?--  night  shine  ❄  02:13, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Loner Blanks - For Approval
- Hope you like them. Cause I don't XP Here's an example:It's Kabuto! :D ANyway, here are the blanks :P Gaara What is pain? 愛t 15:00, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

These are really tiny, you might want to make them look bigger, and older. They look more like kits  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 17:25, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

One: I don't know how to resize on gimp D: and two: What do you mean by older? Should I change their eyes or somethin? Gaara What is pain? 愛t 17:35, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Well I mean, they just look really young. They don't look like adult cats  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 18:07, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Nightfall is right. If you want you can redo them. I'll try to resize for you. <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">TEEEHEEE o3o Made ya look!!18:59, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, they need to be sitting up taller, more straight. The anatomy isn't quite right, so I've drawn a diagram. The red line art indicates what should be rearranged  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:12, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Well besides them being more "adult" like, these were supposed to be the to-be blanks. Thats why their small and kid-like. :P Gaara What is pain? 愛t 01:25, January 18, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, but they're for the loners now  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:59, January 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Gaara What is pain? 愛t 13:23, January 19, 2011 (UTC)

Also, here's an example: Gaara What is pain? 愛t 13:29, January 19, 2011 (UTC)

I like them! Can you put the feet on? Tigerfur of Bloodclan 13:40, January 19, 2011 (UTC) P.S. The first one's nose is different.

I used Nightfall's diagram, as for the nose, the hairtuft is in the way, so it looks different. It's also on the Female's too. ;) Gaara What is pain? 愛t 13:44, January 19, 2011 (UTC)

Then they are wonderful! :D Tigerfur of Bloodclan 13:50, January 19, 2011 (UTC)

The example looks like Silversong... If these get accepted can you put her up for approval if it is Silversong?? I'm sure Mossy would enjoy that...<font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">TEEEHEEE o3o Made ya look!!22:28, January 19, 2011 (UTC)

Foxclaw, Silversong was a rogue, not a loner (unless you change it of course) I think it's an example of Echo's character, Charcoal. And Echo, I'm sorry if I wasn't clear; I couldn't add paws because pixlr limited my space. I just meant do that to their upper bodies, but add paws, make their legs nice and long, haunches, a butt, ect. ;)  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:35, January 20, 2011 (UTC)


 * It's not...done. 00:46, January 20, 2011 (UTC)

Foxclaw: Since I made it, taking credit for it would be considered stealing. Since it's not Silversong I will not let you use it. It is my cat, that when these get approve I want to put up. Next time, look at the file name. It's called Charcoal.loner.png. If your not sure of that, click the image. Gaara What is pain? 愛t 02:07, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Sneer(Ro)For approval
I love him :3 By the way, he has a fang sticking out because he had crooked teeth. <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">TEEEHEEE o3o Made ya look!!03:27, January 18, 2011 (UTC)

Finally someone does him. I see a few patched of white on the legs. Could you color them in? -I like Sage 14:02, January 18, 2011 (UTC)


 * Darken the shading and thin it out. The ear pink is tro pink. Make it more red like. Same with the nose. Fill in the white specks and rearrange the eye. Thicken the lineart on the tooth. 00:08, January 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * Reuploaded- I liked him better how he was but OK :) <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">TEEEHEEE o3o Made ya look!!00:17, January 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * Reuploaded- I liked him better how he was but OK :) <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">TEEEHEEE o3o Made ya look!!00:17, January 19, 2011 (UTC)


 * It might be me, but I think his face is a little dark. :P -I like Sage 13:55, January 19, 2011 (UTC)


 * Reuploaded- I dont know if its you or not :P but i lightened it. <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">TEEEHEEE o3o Made ya look!!22:18, January 19, 2011 (UTC)


 * Ok, Re-arange the ear pink (i can't spell D:), make the ear pink a salmony colour, Add shading, add highlights, blur them and it's either my screen, but there's flecks outside of the lineart. ~ Gaara What is pain? 愛t 22:24, January 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * I did do shading and highlights. Look close.... I think its your screen i dont see flecks O.o <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">TEEEHEEE o3o Made ya look!!22:27, January 19, 2011 (UTC)

I don't see a light source, make the ear pink more reddish and blur it, blur the shading thoroughly--  night  shine  ❄  02:05, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Charcoal (Q) - For Approval
- Do. Not. Like. Also, I'm making her page. Gaara What is pain? 愛t 03:12, January 19, 2011 (UTC)

I think she looks beautiful! :D Blur the pink in the ears a little more. Tigerfur of Bloodclan 13:14, January 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink more, and blur the shading between the front of back legs, it sorta forms a straight line. <font face="Stencil">我愛羅 As long as theres others to kill the world is wonderful  05:06, January 20, 2011 (UTC)