Cats of the Clans Wiki talk:Character Art Project

Pansyfur (W) for approval
Here she is! What do you think? Please comment! Clar ris  sa! :)  09:42, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

maybe add some shadin to Pansyfur?pebble2pineow 15:03, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the boundaries between brown and white, and add shading, but other than that, it looks pretty good.  Blaze -Pelt   Huzzah  15:04, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading, blur white transitions, make pupils bigger and add white and fix the ear pink. Maybe add more white onto it because she is "brown and white" this just looks brown with white markings.-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   17:56, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded -I blured the white transitions,shaded,fixed the ear pink and made the pupils bigger. Better? Clar ris  sa! :)  18:47, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Look at the other approved images to see what the ear pink should look like. Darken the shading more and blur the white transitions more-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   00:40, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded -I blured the white transition a little bit more and I fixed the ear pink,I did it the way the approved images are. Clar ris  sa! :)  08:01, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading and highlights. Mist cloud  10:40, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading and highlights, also if Pansyfur is brown and white add some large white patches. :) Very good Clara! Γǻώή  ςτόŗm  18:02, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Where should I put the patches? Clar ris  sa! :)  10:33, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

You wanna put it everywhere also highlights aren't neccesary she only has to put them if she wants to but you do have to put shading. Mo onp elt  ₪   19:04, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded - I put a few spots in. Does it look nicer or should i get rid of them? Clar ris  sa! :)  17:41, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

I think its better. CBA? Zoe27 18:58, May 12, 2010 (UTC)

'''This is not in the CBA stage. Zoe, you can not CBA or Approve images unless you are a senior warrior. Understood? Good.''' All I see is that the image needs shading and highlights. Quailflight 09:52, May 13, 2010 (UTC)

I've already added highlights, should I make them larger? Clar ris  sa! :)  09:40, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

Add or darken the shading. -- Nighty Lohan's PRE-DEPO PARTAYYY! 12:49, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded -I darkened the shading, better? Clar ris  sa! :)  16:17, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more reddish, and blur all of the white patches  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:33, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:18, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded -I darkened the ear-pink and blurred the shading. Better? 07:34, May 29, 2010 (UTC)

Darkfur - For Approval
He is back! I am so tired of redoing him.  Blaze -Pelt   Huzzah  21:44, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

Blur verything firstly, especially the shading and highlights then make the ear pink darker and blur it. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  16:47, May 3, 2010 (UTC)'

Reuploaded I tried, I'll redo it later  Blaze -Pelt   Huzzah  00:53, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

Blur everything.-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   22:44, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the haunches Clar  ris  sa! :)  18:42, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

I'll reupload this later today. Sorry its taking so long!  ddevans96z Science Project... 13:17, May 13, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:48, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded It wouldn't blur anymore, so I tried to smudge it a little.  ddevans96z Goodbye Middle School! 14:22, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

I highly reccomend redoing this. Please look at this tutorial; however the part about the layers isn't really necessary. I use Pixlr, and I've never used layers. Just look at highlights and shading  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 17:26, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

I honestly can't do shading and highlights right at all. I've tried several tutorials, none of them work for me. If someone else wants to help with the highlights and shading, they can. I can do anything else beyond that  ddevans96z Goodbye Middle School! 20:21, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, I'll work on him :)  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:35, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Hold on, I finally figured it out, but I lost it before i could reupload. :( I'll try again tomorrow.  ddevans96z Goodbye Middle School! 02:55, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Note to Self...ALWAYS use pixlr in fullscreen mode, lest you hit the browser's back button :(  ddevans96z Goodbye Middle School! 03:31, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Finally found a way to do it. Yay!  ddevans96z Goodbye Middle School! 02:31, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

Make the highlights bigger, darken shading, make ear pink more pink coloured and blur it-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:26, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

Fang (D) For Approval
This was a tough one... Constructments? -- ¿ Moonpelt ? 04:27, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

The claws on one of the back paws look like they're growing out of the top of the paw. Raven flight 92 17:56, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading and like Raven said, the claws at the back look like they are coming out of the top of the paw ;) Γǻώή  ςτόŗm

Blur shading, fix claws, and blur highlights. Also, to get awsomer looking claws, choose one light shade of the one you have now, the color you have now, and a darker color, now make it look like their acatually bones/teeth! It works! :P EARTH DAY!   Make sure you recycle! You get $!  20:32, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? Moonpelt ? 04:26, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

Can you just blur the highlights a little bit more? Do that, and this will be ready. :) Batwing  |  Dovefeather  11:12, May 6, 2010 (UTC)!

Can't really blur it anymore. :(~ Mo onp <font color="#333399 ">elt  <font color="#3366FF ">₪   03:58, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Try making the collar rounder-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:07, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

??? --<font color="#333399">Mo <font color="#3333CC">onp <font color="#333399 ">elt  <font color="#3366FF ">₪   00:00, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Look at Kaito's image-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   00:09, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? <font color="#333399">Mo <font color="#3333CC">onp <font color="#333399 ">elt  <font color="#3366FF ">₪   02:46, May 13, 2010 (UTC)

Make the collar smoother still.-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   01:23, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Can you do it? I still don't realy get what you mean....LOL <font color="#330066">Mo <font color="#CC6600">on 01:36, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not completley sure here, but shouldn't this just be a BloodClan blank? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Crimson;">Nightwhisker Now... Nightkit! 21:23, May 29, 2010 (UTC)

Fawndapple (Ki)- For Approval
ǻώή ςτόŗm  18:59, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

This is great,Fawny! Just blur the back a bit more. Clar ris  sa! :)  19:25, May 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred the back-shading and flecks. ;) Γǻώή  ςτόŗm  12:13, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

Darken ear pink and make pupils bigger-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:07, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? Γǻώή ςτόŗm  08:46, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Where's the image? <font color="#50c878">Raven <font color="#6495ed">flight <font color="#9966cc">92 23:51, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Here. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  15:30, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Comments.....? Γǻώή ςτόŗm  15:39, May 13, 2010 (UTC)

Relax, it's only been two days. Users will comment when they have the time. For the image, darken the shading, and brighten the highlights. -- Icestorm Peace 20:26, May 13, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:48, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Night. :( I think the nightlights and shading look fine. Γǻώή  ςτόŗm  15:19, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

Make the pupils much bigger and darken the ear pink-- Night s h i n e   R  07:10, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

REuploaded  Γǻώή ςτόŗm  10:17, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Ashpaw (A) - For Approval
The highlights are kinda weird. Anyway, constructments? <font color="#50c878">Raven <font color="#6495ed">flight <font color="#9966cc">92 00:23, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

PS- Echo, let me know if I got anything glaringly wrong with his image.

This is very good, blur shading/highlights and ear pink and add/make more visible highlights. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  08:15, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

Just blur the shading. Clar ris  sa! :)  10:10, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

The shading looks good, it just needs to be darkened. Blur the ear pink, too. -- Icestorm Peace 13:00, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Clap your hands if My Immortal is the saddest song you've ever heard! -claps wildly- Anyway, constructments? <font color="#50c878">Raven <font color="#6495ed">flight <font color="#9966cc">92 18:58, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

-Claps hands- Wow Raven. This is how i imaged him. Good job! Mist cloud  21:25, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

Centre the ear pink-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:10, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 18:57, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

I wasn't entirely sure what you meant about the ear pink, but here he is. <font color="#50c878">Raven <font color="#6495ed">flight <font color="#9966cc">92 01:48, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading, especially on the tail and chest  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:36, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined-- Night s h i n e   R  07:09, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Ashblaze(BC) -for approval
ah well here's ashblazepebble2pineow 00:41, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Wow that was quick. Blur the highlights and take away the ear pink away on the ear farthest to us. PaRtY In TeH UsA!  00:44, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

The eyes look orange. <font color="#333399">Mo <font color="#3333CC">onp <font color="#333399 ">elt  <font color="#3366FF ">₪   03:52, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Blur it more. Some cats have orange eyes. Clar ris  sa! :)  18:50, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

It says amber not orange. <font color="#333399">Mo <font color="#3333CC">onp <font color="#333399 ">elt  <font color="#3366FF ">₪   04:36, May 13, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. <font color="#330066">Mo <font color="#CC6600">on 03:00, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

His eyes look fine to me. The only thing I see wrong is that the ear pink on the ear farthest from us needs to be removed  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:23, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

Shinekit(M) (Ki) For Approval
I like her. Constructments? --<font color="#333399">Mo <font color="#3333CC">onp <font color="#333399 ">elt  <font color="#3366FF ">₪   17:25, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

It looks good. Maybe blur the patches some more. <font color="#50c878">Raven <font color="#6495ed">flight <font color="#9966cc">92 23:50, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? <font color="#333399">Mo <font color="#3333CC">onp <font color="#333399 ">elt  <font color="#3366FF ">₪   02:05, May 13, 2010 (UTC)

Desaturate the patches a bit  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:38, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

??? <font color="#330066">Mo <font color="#CC6600">on 02:58, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Desaturate means make it less bright. I think the tool is a sponge in pixlr, I don't know if it's on GIMP  ddevans96z Goodbye Middle School! 03:01, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

I think Nightfall would have sid darken it if she wanted me to darken it. I think duserate means to makea color more rich color. <font color="#330066">Mo <font color="#CC6600">on 01:54, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

Desaturate doesn't mean "darken," it means take the color out. Like if you have a dark color, if you desaturate it enough, it turns into a dark gray. "Saturation" is making a color more rich.  ddevans96z Goodbye Middle School! 17:00, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

Thats what I said. You said dursurate is make it less bright (darken). <font color="#330066">Mo <font color="#CC6600">on 13:37, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

"Less Bright" and "Darker are two different things, and you didn't say that, you reversed it.  ddevans96z Goodbye Middle School! 15:21, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

Grayheart (W) For Approval
I like this one. Thanks for some of the shading tips Nightshine! Or at least I tried... LOL ... Constructments? --<font color="#333399">Mo <font color="#3333CC">onp <font color="#333399 ">elt  <font color="#3366FF ">₪   19:48, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great! Lighten the eyes a bit-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:11, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? <font color="#333399">Mo <font color="#3333CC">onp <font color="#333399 ">elt  <font color="#3366FF ">₪   23:19, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

There are some white pixels on the haunch, left back leg and front left arm-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:25, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? <font color="#333399">Mo <font color="#3333CC">onp <font color="#333399 ">elt  <font color="#3366FF ">₪   23:29, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

He looks good! Just brighten the highlights a tad. -- Icestorm Peace 12:10, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? <font color="#333399">Mo <font color="#3333CC">onp <font color="#333399 ">elt  <font color="#3366FF ">₪   02:25, May 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:39, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined-- Night s h i n e   R  07:11, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry! Couldn't really blur it... But I tried. <font color="#009900">Mo<font color="#00FF00">onp<font color="#009900">elt  <font color="#009900"><font color="#00FF00"><font color="#00FF00">TM 12:42, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Mintblaze(W) - For Approval
Ugh I hate it. XP My first tortie. Comments? PaRtY In TeH UsA!  22:07, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

It's not that bad, Echo! Darken the ear pink some. <font color="#50c878">Raven <font color="#6495ed">flight <font color="#9966cc">92 22:08, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

On her hind leg the brown/black isn't blurred. Also there is a lot of blurred lineart. I'll add a diagram later, can you sort it out? Γǻώή ςτόŗm  09:17, May 12, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:41, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Fawny: What are you talking about? Lucy Whiskers!  18:30, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

On the back leg there is a spot between the brown and black that isn't blurred-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   05:37, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

I don't see any blurred lineart, but there is a place where the black is blurred near the lineart  ddevans96z Goodbye Middle School! 22:00, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

I'm so sorry but I don't see any thing about the gray and brown not being blurred.  Brook paw   The truth  20:07, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

Look carefully:



And there are also some spots with burred lineart. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  09:11, May 29, 2010 (UTC)

Blur it. 12:38, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

When you say, "Blur it," you should be more specific, so they know what to blur dde  vans  96z  14:34, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

someone else can work on this. withdrawing.  Brook paw   The truth  17:22, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

May I take over? There's really not much that needs to be fixed  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:52, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Sure.  Brook paw   The truth  01:40, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

Yellowpool (Q) for approval
Do you think this is okay? I did this because she is currently a queen and she was a queen when she had Brownkit(who is also up for approval), anyway, i don't think it is over the limit, and I know it looks bad. Clar ris  sa! :)  19:28, May 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the back, apart from that, it's fine <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 08:19, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink should be enlarged.  ddevans96z Science Project... 18:43, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded -I enlargened the ear-pink and blured her back more, better? Clar ris  sa! :)  16:05, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

Center the ear pink more, and blur the shading and highlights  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:42, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:14, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded -I blured the shading and highlights. Is it better? I can't blur it any more. 17:59, May 29, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading and make the ear pink more red-- Night s h i n e   R  07:11, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

What colour should I use for ear-pink? 08:30, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Fawndapple (MC)-For Approval
Γǻώή ςτόŗm  16:31, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Nice! But the earpink looks weird. Maybe you fix it and blur it? Quailflight 09:56, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink looks fine. It just needs to be smaller and darker. -- Icestorm Peace 12:13, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

Won't be able to upload this until the end of the week. :( And its how I do my ear pink... Γǻώή  ςτόŗm  15:17, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

Ear pink on cats doesn't go that far back. Darken the shading and ear pink-- Night s h i n e   R  07:12, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Like this? Γǻώή ςτόŗm  10:18, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Flipperpaw (A) - For Approval
Here's Flipperpaw! I know it's horrible. Comments? -- Quailflight 10:14, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

He's good! Blur the shading and highlights a lot; lighten the eyes; and the ear pink looks a bit purple, make it more pink  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:59, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. It only looks the same. sigh. I'll lighten the eyes later.-- Quailflight 09:59, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink looks way too light.  ddevans96z Goodbye Middle School! 15:08, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

I'll get to this soon. I have a huge project to work on. Quailflight 09:36, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Petal (PH) - For Approval
Comments?-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   00:53, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

WOW. This is incredible! Darken the stripes on her face, and shouldn't she have ear pink?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:43, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded darkened face stripes. These blanks don't need ear pink-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   01:05, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Okay then :) Comments Before Approval?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:45, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

On the ear to our right there does need to be ear pink. <font color="#330066">Mo <font color="#CC6600">on 02:57, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Wouldn't the ear be facing backwards slightly, so we wouldn't see it? It looks like that to me...  ddevans96z Goodbye Middle School! 02:59, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Mousetalon also said this: Cats of the Clans Wiki talk:Character Art Project/Disscussions 1-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   07:03, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

The right ear looks strange then... <font color="#330066">Mo <font color="#CC6600">on 15:20, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

No, I don't think so. It just looks like the ear is turned away, like he or she is flattening it againist his or hers head. Lightning that Burns Sky Unattractive... 16:21, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Any other comments?-- Night s h i n e   R  06:58, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

This s amazing as always Night! Maybe blur the stripes on her back leg furthest away from us? They look a little sharp. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  10:20, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Flarekit (Ki) For Approval
Flarekit.kit.png Yay :3 Comments? [[User:Nightfall101Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:52, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

It looks too me like the white speck should be moved to the left a little bit. But that could just be me :D  ddevans96z Goodbye Middle School! 15:08, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I apologize if it hasn't moved at all; it was difficult trying to get it to  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:39, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

Creamfur (BC) For Approval
Creamfur joined BloodClan, so I thought I'd do her charart :) Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:32, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

Looks awesome!! Darken the tail and belly shading and blur the ear pink-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   02:44, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Thanks :3  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:29, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

Brookpaw (kit) - For Approval
- Well here she is! Sorry I didn't researve her but firefox is being stupid. Comments?  Brook paw   The truth  22:05, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes don't look blurred enough.  ddevans96z Goodbye Middle School! 22:07, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

Looks awesome Echo! CW -  Always workin'!  22:08, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a bit bigger, and the pupils look kinda wierd. Look at Berrystep's kit image for how to do the eye. This is really good :)  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:12, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I will get to the ear pink thing later. For now comments? :)  Brook paw   The truth  20:05, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the stripes some more-- Night s h i n e   R  19:48, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

Icekit (I) - For Approval
Here she is! Comments? I think she's pretty good. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">ICEY Wait, that's not how you spell Icy! 23:47, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

I love it! But she needs white spots, like Snowstorm. Other wise, it looks awesome! Lightning that Burns Sky Unattractive... 02:59, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks, Snow! I added white spots. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">ICEY Wait, that's not how you spell Icy! 12:04, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe add some to her legs? You don't have to if you don't want too. :) Lightning that Burns Sky Unattractive...  15:06, May 29, 2010 (UTC)

Pansy (K)- For Approval
I am proud of her :D Lightning that Burns Sky Unattractive... 03:23, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

You should be! 'Tis is good! And by good, I mean really good! Blur the ear pink some and lighten the back shading and head shading. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">ICEY Wait, that's not how you spell Icy! 12:14, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe make her pupils bigger? CW -  Always workin'!  19:29, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

Blackberry(W) - For Approval
- Comments?  Brook paw   The truth  20:44, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

Blue the ear pink some more, but other than that, it looks really good! CW -  Always workin'!  21:58, May 29, 2010 (UTC)

Mistyfur - For Approval
Here she is! I tried a new shading style. You like? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">ICEY Wait, that's not how you spell Icy!

Blur the shading and darken the ear pink-- Night s h i n e   R  07:12, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Beechpaw (A) - For Approval
My first apprentice! Comments? CW -  Always workin'!  14:24, May 29, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights more and the ear pink. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">ICEY Wait, that's not how you spell Icy! 14:25, May 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Comments? CW -  Always workin'!  16:29, May 29, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink looks a little bit crooked.  ddevans96z Goodbye Middle School! 16:47, May 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Comments? CW -  Always workin'!  19:24, May 29, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading, make the ear pink more red and blur it-- Night s h i n e   R  07:13, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Partially Reuploaded. I changed the ear pink and blurred it, but I'm really bad at darkening the shading. Can someone do it for me? That'd be a huge help. Remember, he's supposed to be light gray. Construction  Worker  Beechpaw for approval! Please comment! 11:17, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Spiderstep - Warrior (For Approval)
Here he is. He's back and better than ever! GIMP is screwing up with the blur tool, so if anyone can help, I'd appreciate it. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Crimson;">Nightwhisker Now... Nightkit! 21:20, May 29, 2010 (UTC)

I can try, if you want. Other than that, it looks good.  ddevans96z Goodbye Middle School! 21:58, May 29, 2010 (UTC)\

OK, thanks. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:black;">Who am I? Nighty98 21:59, May 29, 2010 (UTC)

Nighty said I could help, so yeah, I tried. What do you think? dde vans  96z  14:44, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Windpaw (A)-For Approval
New way of shading/highlights. What do you think. The light is coming up from his paws. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  09:17, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

darken the shading. It's really good!-- Night s h i n e   R  19:46, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Tried to. I ad blurred the shading a lot before. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  10:12, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Icestar (L) - For Approval
Here she is! Comments? Brookheart I must not give up... 16:14, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

I like it! The ear pink on her right ear looks like a boomerang. And Make the white in her eye bigger. Very goo though. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  16:24, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

Very goo? xD Anyways, it looks great. The ear does look a little weird, and the white looks big enough, but a little awkward. dde vans  96z  00:06, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Troutleap - For Approval
He came out more worse than I thought. -shudders- Probably my most fail of all my Chararts. Comments? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:blue; border:2px solid; -mox-border-raiuds: 1em;color:white;">Midnighttail I will serve SkyClan with every breath I can take 18:42, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

It doesn't look that bad. maybe blur the earpink a little more?  ddevans96z Goodbye Middle School!

'''He's great! I wish he will join Cloverheart one day... any way do what Dalton said and fix the eyes. 01:40, May 31, 2010 (UTC)'''

Blazepelt - For Approval
Nighty98 made this for me when I first came here and she said I could put it up for approval and edit it if needed. Comments? dde vans  96z  22:12, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a pink colour, not white. Make the white face smaller, so that it ends at his chin. Thicken and blur the shading, make the highlights bigger-- Night s h i n e   R  07:14, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Magicheart(W) - For Approval
comments?  Brook paw   The truth  17:46, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Birdpaw (A) For Approval
I'am 99% sure that Silver based his entire description on a charart I made for her once of a manx cat xD Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:22, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

Lulz XD All I see is trhat you should blur the patches a bit more.  Brook paw   The truth  01:40, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: xD Blurred patches  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:48, June 1, 2010 (UTC)