Cats of the Clans Wiki talk:Character Art Project

Hawkfire (D) - Redone
Orignal artist, Awesome Hawkcake. Kill me now if it is horrible. Like srsly. I don't like the stripes a lot nor do I like the white transition. And -prays that it matches the warrior image- xP ☘Saint Ice☘  23:52, March 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * This is really pretty Ice :) But, she doesn't really match her warrior image. Try saturating and darkening her more, and add a lot more stripes  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky!

00:02, March 11, 2011 (UTC)

Make this a short-haired blank. Darken the ear pink and smudge the white transition-- Night  shine  00:15, March 11, 2011 (UTC)


 * How, Nightshine? ☘Saint Ice☘  00:16, March 11, 2011 (UTC)

How what?-- Night  shine  00:23, March 11, 2011 (UTC)

How do you change the blank? ☘Saint Ice☘ 00:27, March 11, 2011 (UTC)

Either redo it or layer another blank over it and get rid of the black pixels-- Night  shine  00:37, March 11, 2011 (UTC)


 * May someone do that for me? -utterly clueless- I do not want to re-do her after the work I spent on her. There's no way I'm going to get the shading right again xP

Re-Uploaded I changed the blank for you. You need to make this look like her warrior image because right now it doesn't-- Night  shine  17:42, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

CUTE! Add a lot more stripes, make the shading/saturating more like flame-colored, and make the white chest only go up slightly past the muzzle. Not over her eyes.  HA WK FI RE98  16:42, March 15, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined-- Night  shine  22:26, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Done. Somjeone change the blank again? xP Chocolate  Frost  22:53, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

You could have used the one I fixed, but I'll do it again. Night shine  23:03, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Okay I fixed it-- Night  shine  23:12, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the white areas, they look too gray. Add shading to the white areas. Make the stripe pattern match her warrior image. Night shine  23:16, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry Nightshine, I used the one I had saved to my desktop. Chocolate Frost  14:34, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Here let me get you an example, although i didnt work hard on it- You should just make stripes with the dodge dool and the burn tool, that should work. Try that. Self-proclaimed genius :3 I am awesome, and you have to deal with being jeleous :3 03:32, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

Oops. Sorry, it got messed up. It looked fine on my laptop...  Self-proclaimed genius :3 I am awesome, and you have to deal with being jeleous :3 00:36, March 23, 2011 (UTC)

Firepelt (W) - Redone

 * [[File:Firepelt.warrior.png]]Um...meh. Orignal artist was Satsu, and I think her version is way much better than mine xP. The scars are....horrible. ☘Saint Ice☘  00:06, March 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * Ice he's awesome! Define the scars more, and blur the shading on his chest  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky!

00:07, March 11, 2011 (UTC)


 * What do you mean define? -no vocabulary skills- *dies* XP ☘Saint Ice☘  00:08, March 11, 2011 (UTC)

Define just means they have to be more noticeable. Darken the ear pink and shading. Also add this to your reservations along with Hawkfire's image. -- Night  shine  00:14, March 11, 2011 (UTC)

I can't see the scars.... at all ;P

I would define them, since Echo can't see them, The right eye looks blurred. If its not, i apoligize. and fox I'm only known for the mistakes i've made.... 06:20, March 12, 2011 (UTC) 22:34, March 15, 2011 (UTC)

Echo, maybe your screen isn't bright enough? I can see the scars fine-- Night  shine  23:11, March 15, 2011 (UTC)

Well then make them either lighter or darker, cause I'm on my ipod touch and I still can't see them.

Please work on this or it will be declined Night  shine  22:28, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Chocolate  Frost  23:00, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Hmmm.... Well, now... Ummm... I dont see anything wrong... Beatiful ;3 and fox I'm only known for the mistakes i've made.... 06:20, March 12, 2011 (UTC) 23:02, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading, it's too dark in some areas. Darken the ear pink, lighten the scars a bit Night  shine  23:02, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Chocolate  Frost  23:08, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

There is some seriously smudged line art by the scars XD  Lyze  We have Nothing to fear, Except fear itself 23:27, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Ugh, sorry I didn't see that =/ I only did one layer. I'll try to fix it. Chocolate Frost  14:33, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

I can if you want  Self-proclaimed genius :3 I am awesome, and you have to deal with being jeleous :3 03:31, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

Patch (R) - Declined
Comments? Xigbar; The Freeshooter  02:17, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Thicken and darken the shading a bit, define the ear pink-- Night  shine  02:22, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined Night  shine  21:50, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work-- Night  shine  22:07, March 24, 2011 (UTC)

Forestheart (W) Redone
HERE HE IS!  HA WK FI RE98  01:50, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Blur the ear pink, darken the shading, make the eyes more amber-ish because they look too yellow right now Night  shine  01:52, March 16, 2011 (UTC)


 * Are you SURE about darkening the shading? It would make him look almost black.  HA WK FI RE98  14:10, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Or you could add/brighten highlights. It just looks pretty flat right now-- Night  shine  22:54, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Added faint highlights, blurred ear pink, darkened eye color.  HA WK FI RE98  23:00, March 17, 2011 (UTC)

Wow this is beatiful! I would make the pelt a little lighter, or its my screen. and fox <font face="Papyrus" color="#800517">I'm only known for the mistakes i've made.... 06:20, March 12, 2011 (UTC) 03:59, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Really? On my screen, I can see his pelt and stripes and stuff.  HA WK FI RE98  22:08, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading or lighten the highlights more. It seems flat to me. Night shine  22:26, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Well, let's see what other people think. It would be difficult to lighten stuff and he's dark enough.  HA WK FI RE98 

Oops, sorry. Now that i look at it, i can see them. Nevermind that all above, he looks good. Lighten the highlights just a tinch more... <font face="Segoe Script" color="#15317E">and fox <font face="Papyrus" color="#800517">I'm only known for the mistakes i've made.... 06:20, March 12, 2011 (UTC) 22:59, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

I still don't see the shading on this. Can you make it more visible somehow? Night shine  22:08, March 24, 2011 (UTC)

Kestrelfeather (W) - Redone
First mottled cat, and I'm proud. I added depth to the eye and a furry texture. I /think/ this is the short-haired blank, dunno xP Comments? Chocolate Frost  23:28, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, make the ginger and white patches bigger Night  shine  23:30, March 19, 2011 (UTC)


 * I don't think they have to be bigger because they're mottled, not patches. But I'll darken the shading. Chocolate  Frost  23:32, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Okay then add more mottles, it just looks like specks right now-- Night  shine  23:38, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

I hate to tell you this, but the mottles look like brightly colored sprinkles on a gray cupcake. XD Anyways, try toning the orange down a tad, its too bright. And do everything said above.  HA WK FI RE98  04:16, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Aw, he's so handsome <3 make the flecks a bit more like patches or dapples, and blur them some  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 05:50, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with Hawkey. The orange is way to bright. I would make the orange a lot darker, and blur it some more. But it's still super awesome :D Snow  Storm  15:15, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

I don't really think the orange needs to be darker, maybe just desaturated  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:51, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

Crookedfang (A) - Tweaked
I darkened the stripes a bit and blurred them. I also darkened the shading a bit. Night shine  18:51, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

He's awesome! The only thing I see is his front paw farthest from us, it looks kind of weird; like it was altered. And there's a white part on it that wasn't colored  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:34, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded filled in white area. That's just the way the lineart looks Night  shine  22:41, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

There are some parts where the stripes/shading is awfullly dark, lighten that a lot.  Icy 123   ♥  01:11, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

Like where? I didn't change the shading drastically from its original Night  shine  02:30, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

It's on the haunch, elbow, tail, and some other places.  Icy 123   ♥  11:59, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

Nightshine, the image is wonderful, but, if you edit or fix a blank, could you add it to the gallery? As for the image, I don't see anything wrong. Icy: The stripes are fine.  Pokemon Black and White!   ♥  12:43, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

No, not the stripes, the shading. It's just too dark...Icestorm

I think the shading is fine. Maybe it's just your computer? I added the edited version to the gallery a few weeks ago. Night shine  21:49, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

This is beatiful! I don't see anything wrong ;) Oh wait, i would lighten the shading on where the tail starts, or, butt -.-<font face="Segoe Script" color="#15317E">and fox <font face="Papyrus" color="#800517">I'm only known for the mistakes i've made.... 06:20, March 12, 2011 (UTC) 00:19, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

Wait, shouldn't he have a twisted jaw?  Lyze  We have Nothing to fear, Except fear itself 19:27, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

Well, the apprentice blank doesn't really show the jaw on the line art  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:36, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe the lineart below his mouth should be crooked. Justa thought, cause that's kinda his chin part... -- Shodn I can't stand him, I hate him, I need to escape!  21:33, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded moved the jaw and lightened the tail shading Night  shine  23:00, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe make the cream dash on this ---> front leg more pronounced, it's kind of difficult to see  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:04, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

I think it's easy to see. What does everyone else think? Night shine  23:08, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

I just mean make it brighter, it's kind of hidden by the stripe and shading  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:15, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

Coppernose (W) CBA
Original artist was Hawkfire, I believe. Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 06:05, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! I see nothing wrong Night  shine  22:39, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading around her chest and muzzle area, its too dark.  HA WK FI RE98  22:47, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I lightened it some, but I didn't really feel the need to blur it  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:57, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? Night shine  22:05, March 24, 2011 (UTC)

Bluemoon (Q) CBA
Original artist was Swiftpelt. Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:45, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful I can't see anything wrong  Lyze  We have Nothing to fear, Except fear itself 21:24, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

Make the blue more saturated and lighten the ear pink a bit-- Night  shine  22:39, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink is also a little funky-looking. Yes, brighten it, and try making it triangular and fitted into the middle of the ear.  HA WK FI RE98  22:48, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I saturated the color and lightened the ear pink, but I think the position is fine; it's how I've always done ear pink  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:58, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Night shine  22:05, March 24, 2011 (UTC)

Cloudstar (D) Redone
Original artist was me...I don't really like this at all. What do you guys think?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:45, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

Noice :D maybe blur the patches a bit  Lyze  We have Nothing to fear, Except fear itself 21:23, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

Hm, the colours don't really match her leader image. Make the ginger on the haunch more yellow-ish and darken the right ear pink a little Night  shine  22:39, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Okay, I think this looks better  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:48, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

Saturate the ginger areas Night  shine  22:04, March 24, 2011 (UTC)