Cats of the Clans Wiki talk:Character Art Project

Thistleflame (W) For Approval
Comments?The gost,12:37,june 28,2011.

Reuploaded.08:53,4 August,2011.(UTC)

Brighten the highlights on his shoulder and face, to even out the brightness of the one on his haunch  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 05:11, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:14, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.The changes aren't showing yet.The gost,09:13,14 August ,201.(UTC)

Reuploaded.14:17,august 15,2011.(UTC)

Blur the highlights  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:45, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink smaller  England  Flying Mint Bunny 17:23, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

In my opinion, the ear pink looks okay... The highlight on the shoulder looks really bright compared to the other ones.... either lighten the others or darken that one? It might just be my screen though You know my rattata...? The top percentage of rattata 18:00, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on the tail looks rough, blur it out some. Moon 03:18, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Mudheart (W) For Approval
The gost,13:07,July 26,2011.(UTC)

The shading and highlights are a bit messy, blur them both. Add eye white as well  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:56, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

Hey, is it okay if i have mine back :/ Yes, it is true I was on this page but i usually only swoop in for the Blanks... I just want to get done with those. So can i please? If you want to keep them its fine, also, the shading+highlights are pretty messy, as Nightfall said. Nightfall, i see eye white on there XD So i herd... YOU LIEK MUDKIPS????17:11, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, Gost I think you should let Foxclaw have the charart back since it was her's to begin with.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:46, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Can i also have Foxfire back, too? I did most of the work but i don't want to be unfair D:  So i herd... YOU LIEK MUDKIPS???? 18:04, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Foxfire's image is on her article already  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:23, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry,but i want to keep this.And Nightfall,please give me the original grey and brown color,and how is Foxfire's image approved?14:11,august 09,2011.(UTC)

Fine. Foxfire's image is on her page.  So i herd... YOU LIEK MUDKIPS???? 15:09, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Wait a minute though, I think Fox has a right to this image, she's the one who did it  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 15:58, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not sure whats going to happen, but Nightfall, can you give me a heads-up on how more images i need to be a Warrior on CAP?  You know my rattata...? The top percentage of rattata 16:30, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Let's see, Foxfire counts for both you and Gost, and then you've got Mudkip on CBA, so one more  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky!

Fine,then I let you.20:04,august 04,2011.(UTC)

Thanks gost :) There are plenty of other images on this wiki that need to be done, if you go to the reservation table, you'll find a link to a whole list  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 17:09, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Sorry Gost, but you could do Foxfire as a queen once she gets there, i'll let you do that if you want to  You know my rattata...? The top percentage of rattata 19:25, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

That's a good idea :) Blur the shading a lot  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 17:41, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blurred it to the max  You know my rattata...? The top percentage of rattata 01:46, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

I think you should try lightening the shading some  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:56, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:45, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  You know my rattata...? The top percentage of rattata 18:04, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Whitethroat (W) For Approval
Comments?The gost,09:38,21 July,2011.(UTC)

Blur the shading  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:56, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.10:11,August 2,2011.(UTC)

This is realy good! I'd blur the hghlights a little though. <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:violet">Gossip Queen!!! 13:08, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.18:07,august 9,2011.(UTC)

Make the ear-pink a bit smaller  England  Flying Mint Bunny 16:23, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.12:43,august 16,2011.(UTC)

Darken the shading on the white and blur the ear pink  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:38, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 13:46, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Try smoothing out the white transition, it's a bit sloppily blurred  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:46, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a little, it looks pitch black... <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="5" color="purple" > You know my rattata...? <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="orange">The top percentage of rattata 18:05, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.22:09,august 21,2011.(UTC)

Fawnpaw (A) CBA
First one with dapples. Hope it's good! Venomsplash 19:16, August 1, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the left ear pink a bit more  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 17:42, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

Rename this Fawnpaw.apprentice.png.The gost,23:18,august 02,2011.(UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  England  Flying Mint Bunny 15:02, August 16, 2011 (UTC

Can I take over this?The gost,20:57,16 august,2011.(UTC)

Go ahead, I think it'd be alright. It's been about two weeks since Venom has reuploaded  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:45, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Go ahead Venomsplash 20:14, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Omg Venom, there you are :D  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:41, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 06:53, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

The left ear pink still looks a little hard to see, define it some more  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 16:16, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

What Nightfall said <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="5" color="purple" > You know my rattata...? <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="orange">The top percentage of rattata 18:06, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.22:04,august 21,2011.(UTC)

Comments Before Approval? Good job Vemon and Gost :)  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:57, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Silentkit (Ki) For Approval
Lol, I did a set of black-furred kitties :) I incorporated the silver into the fur using a series of highlights with a splash-like brush. I really like how she turned out. Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:56, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

Wow! I don't see anything wrong :O :D  England  Flying Mint Bunny 12:22, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

17:51, August 5, 2011 (UTC)



Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:13, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink a tad darker. 'tis beautiful, Nighty :) Vega;  Beauty is absoulute.  22:54, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Darkened ear pink  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:43, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

The depth in the eye looks... Wierd XD Can you try and fix that, or is it just me?  England  Flying Mint Bunny 17:24, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

@Bird:Maybe it's just your screen.... I'm not sure...Beautiful, Night! :) <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="5" color="purple" >You know my rattata...? <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="orange">The top percentage of rattata 18:06, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Weird like how?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:57, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Like there is a very defined line in the eyes  England  Flying Mint Bunny 20:01, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Is this better?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:02, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

We'll have to wait a while for the actual changes to show up  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:53, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blossompaw (A) CBA
Wow, I haven't done a tortoiseshell in a long time. I have a picture of a precious tortoiseshell kitten that came to our house one night before strolling off back to her own house, and I based Blossompaw's image off of her. Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 18:51, August 7, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful :D, blur the orange a bit  England  Flying Mint Bunny 16:20, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: :) I blurred the ginger patches  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 16:26, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Looking good~ Blur the earpink a tad more. Vega; Beauty is absoulute.  22:53, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Blurred ear pink  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:44, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great :D Vega;  Beauty is absoulute.  14:52, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

I don't see anything remotly wrong, unless I need glasses XD CBA?  England  Flying Mint Bunny 17:25, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Lol XD I only see one thing... On her hind leg, there is this really weird looking splotch... Or is it me? <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="5" color="purple" > You know my rattata...? <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="orange">The top percentage of rattata 18:08, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Aw come on, just when it gets CBA'd. Which splotch? There are six splotches on her hind leg  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:00, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Silverpaw (A)-For approval
Can somebody help me fix this? I tried but i couldn't :/ Otherwise, i love this <3 <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="5" color="gray" > So i herd... <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="darkblue">YOU LIEK MUDKIPS???? 18:42, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

I tried i think i messed up the lineart a little bit tho think you can fix that ?

Blur the stripes a lot, add ear pink, and the eyes look awfully strange; look at an approved apprentice image to see how the pupils and eye white could be arranged  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:23, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry guys, this one's the wrong file. All my files are on my mother's laptop so can you wait a little bit? <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="5" color="gray" > So i herd... <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="darkblue">YOU LIEK MUDKIPS???? 15:22, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Sure!  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 15:59, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry Fox, but it's been a little over a week. Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:46, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, i'm back at my Mom's. Can someone fix the waste? I don't know how to do it D: Thanks for trying Pebble, but i dont know how to get the lineart fixed.... <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="5" color="purple" > You know my rattata...? <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="orange">The top percentage of rattata 18:09, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Eveningpaw(A)-For approval
a little dark...? --bracken-- ~ 19:02, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Not too dark, the white on her just needs to be lightened. And add the blue-gray flecks as well  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:55, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

The blue gray flecks are supposed to be in the eye but yea I added them in I'll fix the white a little later --bracken-- ~ 02:09, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

Can I take over this? 06:40, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Almondeyes (W) For Approval
I'm pretty proud of her :) Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:08, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Wow! beautiful, blur the ear-pink a bit :)  England  Flying Mint Bunny 22:01, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, it's really good :) Anyways, I'd blur the shading a little. <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:violet">Gossip Queen!!! 18:12, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Thanks guys :) I blurred the shading and ear pink  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:12, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful~ <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="5" color="purple" > You know my rattata...? <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="orange">The top percentage of rattata 18:09, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Adeline(Ro)-For approval
The gost,pazuzu,10:05,august 10,2011.(UTC)

Blur the brown and white transition  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 16:27, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.14:45,11 August,2011.(UTC)

Blur the ear pink slightly, <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:violet">Gossip Queen!!! 18:11, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blured to max.10:36,august 14,2011.(UTC)

Reuploaded.I redid it.19:32,August 19,2011.(UTC)

This looks beautiful! Blur the white transition, and perhaps darken the highlight on her shoulder just a little  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 16:15, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.19:58,August 20,2011.(UTC)

Pretty! I would just smudge the creamish parts, as the chest is the only thing smudged. <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="5" color="purple" > You know my rattata...? <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="orange">The top percentage of rattata 18:10, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Tweek weak
When will tweek weak will begun?The gost,roxi,11:28,august 13,2011.(UTC)

By the way,i wanna know if I can be a warrior,because I do have 3 images.11:29,August 13,2011.(UTC)

Well, we already had tweak week; there really aren't any other images that need tweaking at this moment. Once you get either Adeline's, Willowtail's, Thistleflame's, or Frostwind's image approved, then I'll add you in as a warrior. The thing about Shaderiver and Foxfire was that you didn't really 'do' the images, you just finished them for the artists. That doesn't necessarily count to me, the only images that I would count up to becoming a warrior were the ones you actually made yourself  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:54, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Ohhh...I've done 3 images too! (Skypaw(A), Cloudflower(W) and Yellowpool(E)), I also helped withsome of Clara's images. Can I be a warrior too? <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:violet">Gossip Queen!!! 15:08, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Yep, congrats :)  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:44, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! :D <font color="white" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Zoeyy <font color="black" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:hotpink">My Talkpage!!! 15:19, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Can I be a warrior too?I've Snowy's rogue image,Abby as a kit,Frostwind as a warrior,Minpaw as a apprentice. 19:26, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

I know, I've added you a few days ago ;)  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 16:14, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Yellowpool (Elder) - CBA
Comments? <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:violet">Gossip Queen!!! 15:08, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! I would define the shading, and there is some white inside the outline; right on the hind leg and a little pixel on the back paw. <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="5" color="purple" >You know my rattata...? <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="orange">The top percentage of rattata 16:46, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

 Reuploaded- Thanks! I tried to define the shading and fixed the white pixel. Comments? <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:violet">Gossip Queen!!! 18:13, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

I don't really see anything else major that could be improved...maybe just darken the shading around her haunch  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:39, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

 Reuploaded- Done :D <font color="white" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Zoeyy <font color="black" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:hotpink">My Talkpage!!! 11:59, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

So...should I put her up for CBA, now, or wait for a senior user to do so? <font color="white" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Zoeyy <font color="black" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:hotpink">My Talkpage!!! 20:48, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks greenish on her haunch. Vega; Beauty is absoulute.  02:30, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

 reuploaded done

Comments Before Approval?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 15:51, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Oakclaw (W)- For Approval
Oakclaw

Tigerfur of Bloodclan 21:31, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur and smudge the patches a little :) <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:violet">Gossip Queen!!! 10:26, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Blurred and smudged patches Tigerfur of Bloodclan 16:08, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken the shading  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:21, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

The changes aren't showing.May I help you?The gost,17:05,august 15,2011.(UTC)

Reuploaded- The changes should show now :) Tigerfur of Bloodclan 15:58, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

I sort of recommend redoing this, the white on his fur should be a very pale gray, not straight white. First just fill in the fur with a very pale gray, then use a softer edged brush for the shading  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:42, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

!Darkangel ~ For Approval

 * [[File:Darkangel.warrior.png]]- UGH I hate this! >.> [[File:Anger.gif]]  M e e p!  16:42, August 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * It's quite good actually :) Blur the highlights and white transition more though, <font color="white" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Zoeyy <font color="black" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:hotpink">My Talkpage!!! 18:09, August 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * Can I take over this?The gost,19:52,august 20,2011.(UTC)
 * Reuploaded No. :|  M e e p!  01:15, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

The only thing I would do is lighten the white some, it looks a bit gray  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 15:35, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blueclaw(A)-For Approval
I'm going to need a LOT of help with this... <font color="white" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Zoeyy <font color="black" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:hotpink">My Talkpage!!! 15:18, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

The shading and highlights are done nicely, it's just the white spots. Make them less circular, and more irregular  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:40, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Could someone help me? I've been trying all day. <font color="white" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Zoeyy <font color="black" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:hotpink">My Talkpage!!! 20:47, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Sure :)  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:56, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: The spots aren't as crisp as I was trying to make them...but I think this is better  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:10, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Looks like snow :D, maybe blur the ear-pink more  England  Flying Mint Bunny 17:26, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

 Reuploaded- Thanks! I blurred the ear-pink a little :) <font color="white" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Zoeyy <font color="black" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:hotpink">My Talkpage!!! 19:22, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Hollybreeze(W)-for Approval


Can someone help with this? She's come out pinkish and I'm not sure what earpink to use. Thanks, <font color="white" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Zoeyy <font color="black" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:hotpink">My Talkpage!!! 16:06, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Could I help you?The gost,20:50,16 August,2011.(UTC)

Reuploaded.How is this? 11:04, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks :) <font color="white" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Zoeyy <font color="black" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:hotpink">My Talkpage!!! 11:49, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading some, and blur the ear pink  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:10, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

 Reuploaded:- Done :) <font color="white" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Zoeyy <font color="black" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:hotpink">My Talkpage!!! 20:05, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blackkit(RC)(Ki)- For approval


It's okay...I guess.

Tigerfur of Bloodclan 16:16, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken and blur the shading, and make the ear pink narrower  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:40, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.

The shading is still a bit too defined, maybe lighten it some and blur it  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:46, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.How is this?The gost,20:29,August 22,2011.(UTC)

Blackpaw(A)- For approval


Tigerfur of Bloodclan 17:16, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

I will help you with his apprentice and kit image. 21:02, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Okay! Thanks :) Tigerfur of Bloodclan 01:56, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

This needs alot of work. Thicken and blur the shading, add ear pink and highlights and the back front paw is too dark. Kiba Inuzuka  w00f w00f! :D 23:29, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.How is this?The gost,20:28,august 22,2011.(UTC)

Hollybreeze(A)-For Aprroval
Comments? 20:28, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

This is beautiful! Desaturate the ear pink, and blur the shading on the tail  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:45, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.19:49,august 20,2011.(UTC)

The ear pink still looks to saturated and bright, run the desaturate tool over it again  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:51, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.15:09,august 22,2011.(UTC)

Shadefall(W)-For Approval
Comments?The gost,08:53,August 20,2011.(UTC)

She's too dark; Shadefall is dark gray, not black. I suggest lightening it a lot, and then blur the shading and ear pink  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 15:53, August 20, 2011 (UTC)


 * Blur highlights. Alot. 76.185.139.101 00:14, August 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * The highlights look REALLY weird.... <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="5" color="purple" > You know my rattata...? <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="orange">The top percentage of rattata 18:12, August 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * The highlights look REALLY weird.... <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="5" color="purple" > You know my rattata...? <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="orange">The top percentage of rattata 18:12, August 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * The highlights look REALLY weird.... <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="5" color="purple" > You know my rattata...? <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="orange">The top percentage of rattata 18:12, August 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * The highlights look REALLY weird.... <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="5" color="purple" > You know my rattata...? <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="orange">The top percentage of rattata 18:12, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Hershey(Ki)-For Approval
The gost,11:04,August 20,2011.(UTC)

This is really good! Make the ear pink smaller  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 16:13, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Bullpaw (A) CBA
Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:31, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

It's beautiful!You rock,Nighty!The gost,09:27,21 august,2011.(UTC)

Beautiful, if you can, Blur the black some XD  England  Flying Mint Bunny 13:50, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: lol, thanks guys. I blurred the black transition  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 15:56, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty! <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="5" color="purple" > You know my rattata...? <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="orange">The top percentage of rattata 18:12, August 21, 2011 (UTC)


 * Beautiful Nighteh! CBA? Kiba Inuzuka  w00f w00f! :D  23:26, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Happymealpaw(W)-For Approval
Comments?The gost,09:23,August 21,2011.(UTC)

The M's look weird. And Happymealpaw isn't a warrior. Kiba Inuzuka ''' w00f w00f! :D 23:24, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Foxkit (WC2)-For approval
The gost,10:`10,august 21,2011.(UTC)

This is just me being picky, but I would make her eyes a different color. Green or amber or something, so she's not an exact copy of her mom. The article doesn't specify blue eyes, just the same pelt color  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 15:34, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

I indended her to have Green eyes. The color is kind of a red, can you make it a little dark orange-red? <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="5" color="purple" > You know my rattata...? <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="orange">The top percentage of rattata 18:13, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.The changes aren't showing yet!13:36,august 22,2011.(UTC)

Mudkit(WC)-For approval
The gost,10:12,august 20,2011.(UTC)

Make the eye white bigger, and blur the shading  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 15:37, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty~ Although the eyes... look kinda Cross-eyed...Might just be my screen though.<font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="5" color="purple" > You know my rattata...? <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="orange">The top percentage of rattata 18:14, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Image is not showing
Nightfall,there is a problem with the images .At Hollybreeze's apprentice image,i did do what did you say to do.The thing is that the changes aren't showing.It's so at Shadefall's warrior image,Hershey's,Adeline's.Just look at the history.It is so even with other users.The gost,11:02,august 12,2011.(UTC)

Yep, I noticed that issue. Let's try saving images under a different file name, and then just moving them to the appropriate name when they're approved. However, I think it may be working now, I can tell that Echopaw's image of Darkangel has reuploaded correctly.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 15:33, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, that happens to me too. It does showafter about a day, though. <font color="white" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Zoeyy <font color="black" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:hotpink">My Talkpage!!! 19:09, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Redfire (W) For Approval
The Origional Spoofy 20:07, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

It's good for your first try :) Add ear pink, blur the shading, and fix the eye white; it's overlapping the line art  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:08, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED better? ish? The Origional Spoofy 20:12, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah! Make the ear pink a bit more of a reddish salmony color, and blur it. I think you should try making his pelt a little more reddish. Just pick the sponge tool and set it to saturate. You can choose the vibrancy setting too  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:32, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED Better? The Origional Spoofy 01:29, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

The color looks better, but the ear pink is still off. It's a very hot pink at the moment; make it more of a salmony red  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:55, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED Is that good? It's at least salmon-ish. The Origional Spoofy 02:02, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I think that is better, but darken it a little bit  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:10, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

May I help you?the gost,09:26,august 22,2011.(UTC)

Yeah the color is a bit off, it looks kind of purple. And the highlights are to harsh, level them out more with the shading to make it look more natural. Moon 18:07, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Dappler (RO) For Approval
Okay, this is Dappler, Redfire's rouge dad. Does the shading look okay? The Origional Spoofy 01:47, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

I like it! Blur the ear pink, and blur the highlights  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:55, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED Better? The Origional Spoofy 01:59, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Make the color of the ear pink a bit more reddish  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:01, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Mudheart (Q) For Approval
Slightly different shading style I think, if it's too much then tell me.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:05, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

So pretty. :D -Sagestorm70 02:13, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

I'm glad you think so :3  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:15, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

I'd blur the transitions a little, but apart from that, it's really good :) <font color="white" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Zoeyy <font color="black" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:hotpink">My Talkpage!!! 08:42, August 22, 2011 (UTC)


 * Pretty! Darken the gray and blur the gray transition on the head, Kiba Inuzuka ''' w00f w00f! :D  12:40, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Moonkit (Ki) For Approval
I think she turned out very pretty. Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:15, August 22, 2011 (UTC)


 * I love it! I see nothing wrong :) Kiba Inuzuka  w00f w00f! :D  12:39, August 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * You rock,Nightfall!:0.The gost,17:16,august 22,2011.(UTC)
 * There seems to be nothing wrong. Gonna wait about one more day to have everyone see it before putting it in CBA. Moo   nstr   ike  20:57, August 22, 2011 (UTC)