Cats of the Clans Wiki talk:Character Art Project

Attention

 * Due to the lack of activity on the wiki, I'm going to go ahead and end tweak week. There are still a few images on that list that were never fixed, but I'm sure we'll get them fixed soon. Remember that the image limit on this page is still 35. That is all,  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky!

20:52, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

When will Tweak Week be over? It's been like three months. By the way, I'm back!

Tigerfur of Bloodclan 15:29, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

mmmm id spect it will be when we get every image listed for tweaking done  Hetalia  Epic show, go Russia 22:59, May 18, 2011 (UTC)


 * Birdpaw is right, when all the nominated images are done then it'll be over  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky!

18:42, May 22, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, thanks :)

Tigerfur of Bloodclan 21:49, May 23, 2011 (UTC)

To-be blanks - For Approval
Ahh, good old fashioned Hawkey-made blanks. :D Just like the good ol' days! These aren't my BEST blanks, I finished them in about four minutes, so...yeah. Comments?  HA WK FI RE98  20:27, January 23, 2011 (UTC)

These are good! The back paw closest to us is a bit deformed, maybe round it off a bit, and make the eyes more almond shaped instead of oval shaped  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:32, January 24, 2011 (UTC)

Here's a diagram I made to help:

Reuploaded Sorry about that! Also one of the blanks has an accidental ear tuft in its ear; I'll fix that next time. Echo, I appreciate the diagram, but thats WAY too much unneccessary work.  HA WK FI RE98  18:34, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

I like them :) Chickenstar 18:37, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

The paws need to be rounder, the torso need to be thickened, make the ears wider, eyes should be more cat-like, the whiskers should be closer to the muzzle, and the haunch needs to be reshapen-- Night  shine  23:23, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

I don't like the face, I prefer to keep it to my own style. But I'll do everything else.  HA WK FI RE98  00:29, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

I think these are the cutest things.... Frostcloud 02:12, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded But now, they are cuter. ;)  HA WK FI RE98  20:03, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Make the paws rounder and the tail fluffier. The eyes should be a bit smaller and angle a little toward the nose. Make the whiskers go a little closer to the muzzle-- Night  shine  20:13, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on these or they will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:52, February 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Oh, gosh, I destroyed my long-hairs....  HA WK FI RE98  17:01, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

Make the paws rounder and much smaller, the bellies are much to thin and the limbs are too straight-- Night  shine  19:21, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

And the limbs will REMAIN straight. Also, Tribe cats are very slender, and of course they are wild cats, so they're not fat. I'll fix the short-hair paws.  HA WK FI RE98  20:32, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

Make the heads a bit more rounded, and make the eyes a bit slantier (lol, that is so not a word)  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:29, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

Can someone help me with the heads and eyes? It's just how I draw my cats. Everytime I try to change it, it looks horrible. D:  HA WK FI RE98  23:30, March 9, 2011 (UTC)

I'll see what I can do. You should make all of the blanks the same, but change two of them to long haired cats. The paws and limbs look different to me on the short haired compared to the long haired-- Night  shine  00:14, March 10, 2011 (UTC)

Dapplestep (W) - For Approval
- FAIL FAIL FAIL UBER FAIL D:

Fail? Echo, you're seriously going blind. This is marvelous. It's so pretty <3 Blur the ear pink and make it more of a reddish color and darken the shading on the tail. 20:54, February 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded

Make the ear pink less gray, and more reddish pink. Add some depth to the eyes, and smudge the patches a little. Ice is right, this is great :)  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:34, February 3, 2011 (UTC)

If this is a fail, then fail means "breathtaking charart" ;) Make the ear pink more reddish. 07:57, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded i  K  i  ba☼  03:22, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Make this a long haired blank, since she is said to be fluffy, darken the shading, make the ear pink more reddish and blur it. The eye lashes look a little weird-- Night  shine  04:05, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Just because a cat is fluffy, doesn't necessarily mean that they're long haired. Take Flarecloud for example, she has fluffy soft fur, but she doesn't have long fur. But I do agree about the ear pink, it's still to purple-gray  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:56, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Can you give me a color code? ':) I'm terrible at ear pink  Sakura -chan   ♥  16:05, February 19, 2011 (UTC)

I found a color code! Just pay attention to the right side. Night Shine made it. Foxeh NO I'M SERIOUS ILL HIT YOU WITH THIS STICK 15:54, February 20, 2011 (UTC)



Fox, I think that's the one I made ;)  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:31, February 21, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined-- Night  shine  00:46, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

Somebody else can take over. I don't have time for this.  Sakura -chan   ♥  02:46, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

I will. Foxclaw33 I hit Adderpaw and Sagestorm with this stick, i'm not afraid to do it to you! 05:16, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Foxclaw33 I hit Adderpaw and Sagestorm with this stick, i'm not afraid to do it to you! 05:16, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good. CBA?(I started it, Foxclaw did the rest, dunno... ;__;)  Sakura -chan   ♥  00:17, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the patches more, make the ear pink more pinkish-- Night  shine  00:22, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Echo, you can't CBA your own images ;)  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:57, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

The eyelashes look....odd. Xigbar; The Freeshooter  02:41, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Foxpaw (A) For approval
*sniff* ISNT IT BEATIFUL :D?Foxclaw33 I love Foxpaw :)06:39, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink less neon and blur the shading. Looks good :) 07:58, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Foxclaw33 I love Foxpaw :)20:10, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ginger more orangey, blur the ear pink and make it smaller, give the eyes some depth-- Night  shine  04:03, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

It looks to me like you only added highlights on the tail and forehead, then added extreme shading in other areas. I would strongly recommend blurring. Agent WindFire Because it's snowing,  Blowing, All over town... 10:36, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

This is really really red, I suggest making her ginger. The eyes look blue, I think on her article it says that she has green eyes  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:46, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Wait, never mind the green eyes. Blur the shading a lot as well, but this is really good Fox :) I would also blur the ear pink a lot. Also, I would like to say that you did a good job smudign the black transition  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:28, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

I blurred them both alot. Foxclaw33 Don't you just love Valentine's Day? 06:47, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

She still looks really red, try making her more of a ginger  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 17:26, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

I... She's supposed to be dark red, but i'll try. Foxclaw33 Don't you just love Valentine's Day? 18:20, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Her article says reddish ginger, that's what you told me when you wanted her to be added to WindClan.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:01, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Really? Oh.... Can you change that?? I always planned her to be dark red. Foxclaw33 900 EDITS! WHERE'S THE PARADE? 23:44, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Cats can't really be that color though. If you'd like, she could be like, dark russet-ginger; which would make her more of a reddish chestnuty? Or, she could be reddish brown  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:10, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Let's go with dark reddish-ginger. <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">OH. MAH. GAWSH. 1,000 EDITS!!!! PARTEH WITH MEH :D 23:50, February 15, 2011 (UTC)

Alright then :) Lighten her pelt, and saturate it some. Blur the shading and ear pink  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:51, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Okay, lightened the pelt, blurred shading AND ear pink. <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxeh <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">NO I'M SERIOUS ILL HIT YOU WITH THIS STICK 16:01, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and shading, and saturate the pelt a bit  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:51, February 24, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:30, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- <font face="Segoe Script" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Papyrus" color="#800517">I hit Adderpaw and Sagestorm with this stick, i'm not afraid to do it to you! 02:06, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink more, then saturate and lighten her some  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:17, March 7, 2011 (UTC)

Kittypet Blanks-For approval
I wanted them to look REALLY cute because they are, well, not feirce...(No offense, Kittehs XD) That would make them look soft and unharmfull...I think i did a great job on that xD <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">I love Foxpaw :)20:38, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Here's an example:

ITS JASMINE :D

It looks like they're wearing sunglasses. i K  i  ba☼  23:57, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Make all the lines fully black. Get rid of the fluffy bit on the top of their head, make the limbs more natural, eyes should be smaller and the torso needs to be thicker-- Night  shine  00:05, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

The tail shouldn't be cut off too :P Poor longhaired kitty... -pets- The corners of the eyes look too sharp on even the males, and I agree that they should be smaller. Agent WindFire Because it's snowing,  Blowing, All over town... 10:38, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Fix the eyes, fix the tails and paws. Right now, there are only two paws. This will need ALOT of work. i K  i  ba☼  13:19, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I TRIED to make them smaller, did i mention i always do bad on eyes >.< <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">Don't you just love Valentine's Day? 23:57, February 11, 2011 (UTC)

o_o You made it worse... USE NIGHTSHINE'S DIAGRAM! SAVE AS PNG. Man, do I have to say that again!? Here's a diagram to help:

i K  i  ba☼  00:10, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

I dont have time to work on these, please give me more time.]

@Echopaw: I did save it. I am used to paint, not PIXLR so i dont know how to change it. Please be as easy as you can on me, School hates me right now, and Sports are kicking my face. <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">Don't you just love Valentine's Day? 01:07, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Echo, my gosh. Calm down, it's not a big deal at all. In fact, it's much better to do blanks on paint rather than pixlr, trust me, I know. I would appreciate it if you'd take a look at the CAP guidelines, they clearly state that your kind of behavior will result in a short CAP ban. Foxclaw: When you save it, just choose the extension of .png instead of .jpg. I might be able to help if paint is being spazzy  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 17:28, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">900 EDITS! WHERE'S THE PARADE? 23:45, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

First of all, make all of the line art black with no lighter pixels in the background-- Night  shine  07:46, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Okay, what's next? <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">900 EDITS! WHERE'S THE PARADE? 16:20, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

All of the line art still needs to be black. -- Night  shine  16:24, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

It is all black lineart <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">900 EDITS! WHERE'S THE PARADE? 16:41, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

No it isn't. When I look at it on Paint I can see that there are many miscoloured pixels throughout-- Night  shine  17:11, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

-.- Paint is always doing that. Even when i have a transparent picture, it still did that on Paint. <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">900 EDITS! WHERE'S THE PARADE? 17:22, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

I dont have anvanced paint like everyone so i cant zoom in, so i can't see it. <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">900 EDITS! WHERE'S THE PARADE? 17:23, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

If you are using paint it should still be all black, maybe you're doing something differently? And you can zoom in under the view dropdown menu-- Night  shine  17:35, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Ok, I can see them now... I fixed it.<font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxeh <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">Bloodclaw2 on deviantART!! 22:30, February 16, 2011 (UTC)

There's one unnaturally thick line in the foreview, 3 out of the 4 images have it. And they all still look cross-eyed. Make the pupils a little smaller, or even take them out of the eyes. Maybe that would be better. Age nt Win dFi re -  Delve Deep er 22:35, February 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Tried to fix all you asked. <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxeh <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">NO I'M SERIOUS ILL HIT YOU WITH THIS STICK 23:50, February 16, 2011 (UTC)

All of the blanks look different from each other. The short haired blanks should look the same and the long haired blanks should look the same. The only difference should be the eyelashes. There is blurred line art in several areas-- Night  shine  23:57, February 16, 2011 (UTC)

Its because I redid it on paint, wich it blurrs every line i put in ?_? Foxclaw(I've got a virus so i don't feel good with signing in :(

Hm, that doesn't really make sense. If you are doing it on paint then it shouldn't do that-- Night  shine  19:52, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined-- Night  shine  00:45, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- <font face="Segoe Script" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Papyrus" color="#800517">I hit Adderpaw and Sagestorm with this stick, i'm not afraid to do it to you!05:14, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make the eyes smaller and not blurred-- Night  shine  05:26, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

I think you should use NIghtshine's diagram. ☘Saint <font color="Lime">Ice☘ 15:46, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded <font face="Segoe Script" color="#15317E">fox <font face="Papyrus" color="#800517">I'm only known for the mistakes i've made.... 01:00, March 7, 2011 (UTC)

Scarheart(W)-For approval
I would consider this the best of all my charats. I wanted to do them after i heard her lost his eye. I might as well do Jack and Jasmine..... I always inmagined like Tallstar.... So what do YOU think about it? <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">Don't you just love Valentine's Day? 00:57, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Ok I know I'm not allowed to be here but he looks black

Not allowed, Adder? Tell me about that.... >.< He is supposed to be black.He is black. <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">Don't you just love Valentine's Day? 01:16, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Again, it's to pixilated. Save the stupid image as PNG. >_< His scarred eye is like, freakin scary and very dislocated. Look at Echowave's image for a reference. Blur the scars, darken white, add shading and highlights, add depth to the eyes and some of the lineart is messed up. i K  i  ba☼  01:42, February 12, 2011 (UTC)


 * Facepalm* Sorry Echo, but it's my first scar-face cat and its epic fail, i agree. But can you let me keep it just this once?? PLEASE? There is shading and highlights, they are blurred(So are the scars) I dont know how to make it not all pixel-y... <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">Don't you just love Valentine's Day? 02:11, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know what you mean by 'keep it'. o_o Just fix it and save it as PNG. not that hard i  K  i  ba☼  16:13, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

I'll change it to PNG, OK? I got that! So what do you mean by 'fix it?' fix WHAT?? <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">Don't you just love Valentine's Day? 02:39, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

I'll take over. -.- i  K  i  ba☼  16:13, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Tried new smudging style. i K  i  ba☼  16:31, February 12, 2011 (UTC)


 * Echo, you cannot take over without Foxclaw's permission! I mean honestly! Foxclaw, go ahead and reupload your version if you wish, I'd be happy to help with advice, critique and such. Adder: Of course you're allowed here, why wouldn't you be? If you want to join, I'd be happy to add you in. Oh and Foxclaw, his article says gray and white, not black and white.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky!

17:24, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Nightfall, i'll run the dode tool over him a few times until he looks gray. <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">Don't you just love Valentine's Day? 18:07, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Echo, I didn't SAY you could take over! I was proud of this one and read what i said on the kittypet blanks-I AM TRYING MY BEST. I'm trying to be nice, but you're making it harder on the both of us, trust me. I know that i'm talking about.

Reuploaded-Liked him better when he was black >.< I was thinking about uploaded THIS epic fail until i zoomed out of the picture XD LOOKS LIKE HE'S BURNING IN THE FIRE >.< <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">Don't you just love Valentine's Day? 18:29, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Lol, it does xD Okay, for the pelt: Blur the shading a lot, and it seems to be a bit pixly...I'm not sure why though because you've saved it to .png. As for the eye: Smudge the skin part, it looks really cartoony. Like, it's all realistic and then there's like this cartoony pink blob on his eye. I would smudge into the pelt to make it look more natural. If you want, you can look at Smolder's charart for reference, it might help some. And, you must rename your image Scarheart.warrior.png.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 18:57, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-I liked the old one better, i split two windows into half of the screen so i could look at Smolder's charat for a refrence and suggested from Nightfall <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">900 EDITS! WHERE'S THE PARADE? 23:51, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

The pink around the eye looks messy, and its going into the nose. Could you change that? -Sage: Do the 800 edits dance! 00:40, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed. Also, for the missing eye, I heard that an apprentice did that, so I'd recomend making a small scar, like on the image I did, or look at Echowave's page for an example. ;)  Sakura -chan   ♥  01:36, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Ok. i'll reuploaded And Swallowflight did it, not an apprentice. It was on the IRC. <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">900 EDITS! WHERE'S THE PARADE? 01:47, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Can't believe I missed it.  Sakura -chan   ♥  01:57, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Good point, echo... You ARE on IRC alot..<font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">900 EDITS! WHERE'S THE PARADE? 04:07, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxeh <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">Bloodclaw2 on deviantART!! 02:49, February 16, 2011 (UTC)

Fox, no offence meant, but this looks a little... messy. The ends of the claw marks (That's what I think they are, at least...) are too round. If I were to scratch your face, right now (Which I won't), The lines would be sharp. Claws are sharp. When dug in, the scratch is wider, when light, the lines are thinner. You don't pull claws right out, they trail a little. Make the brush thinner or something, but sharpen the ends. Go into Pixlr and put another layer of the lineart over it. Kapeesh? Age nt Win dFi re -  Delve Deep er 18:31, February 17, 2011 (UTC)

Kaposh.... I understand.. None taken, by the way, plus this was my first scarred cat so i expected to fail. <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxeh <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">NO I'M SERIOUS ILL HIT YOU WITH THIS STICK 03:55, February 18, 2011 (UTC) (Dont worry, i just fixed the little virus ;) )

I get that, I'd probably fail too at a scarred cat, but understanding the anatomy definitely helps in most cases. Also, the shading on this is... interesting. Go over it with blur or smear, whatever you use, but the gray is shaded in the wrong places. Age nt Win dFi re -  Delve Deep er 10:30, February 18, 2011 (UTC)

There, I made a diagram. Finally >.< Anyway, if you look, you can see where the black and the red don't intersect. I can get where the nicked ear would not line up, but the rest of it, no idea. Unless the injured eye was physically pretty much pulled apart and pulled down, I doubt that his/her anatomy would allow that. Doubt. I don't know cats very well, so...

Another thing might be the scratches on the rest of her body. They frankly look like ... well, pink spaghetti might be the most appropriate way to put it. Age nt Win dFi re -  Delve Deep er 10:54, February 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-<font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxeh <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">NO I'M SERIOUS ILL HIT YOU WITH THIS STICK 03:18, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Fox, If you want, you could use my Scarheart. I don't mind. Just add teh scars. (cause I'm terrible at scars TT^TT)  Sakura -chan   ♥  16:02, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Okay. I actually like yours better :) I'm not good at scars either... <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxeh <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">NO I'M SERIOUS ILL HIT YOU WITH THIS STICK 16:13, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

1000% Better! I just noticed the ear pinks look a little different. -Sage: Spring is Coming! 16:44, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

The scars are good! This may get CBA'd soon! Ok, on the left earpink, it's too light. Make it the same colour as the right. After that, I think this is ready!  Sakura -chan   ♥  16:48, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, smudge the patches more -- Night  shine  19:52, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-<font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxeh <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">NO I'M SERIOUS ILL HIT YOU WITH THIS STICK 23:09, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

The scars look a bit too blurred, make them more defined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:50, February 24, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined-- Night  shine  00:45, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

WORK ON IT FOXEH OR I WILL HIT YOU WITH A LOG! Adderpaw 03:32, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Improments? ;) <font face="Segoe Script" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Papyrus" color="#800517">I hit Adderpaw and Sagestorm with this stick, i'm not afraid to do it to you!02:04, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe blurr it a LITTLE Adderpaw 02:05, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

I did. <font face="Segoe Script" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Papyrus" color="#800517">I hit Adderpaw and Sagestorm with this stick, i'm not afraid to do it to you! 02:34, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make the scars a bit thinner  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:16, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 07:23, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Jack(R)-For approval
I wanted him to look like my real life cat Jack, after all he is based on my real life cat, so i had him lay on my bed and i had to keep looking back at him. I just LOOOOOVVVVVEEEEEE this one :3 <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">OH. MAH. GAWSH. 1,000 EDITS!!!! PARTEH WITH MEH :D 22:10, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

This is over the limit. ._.  Sakura -chan   ♥  22:13, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Can you go through the charats that have a CBA??? Like Spottedpelt and Spottedwing <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">OH. MAH. GAWSH. 1,000 EDITS!!!! PARTEH WITH MEH :D 22:31, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

I'll look through them now, but next time you should make sure it's under the limit. You already have 4 other images up for approval and the most you are supposed to have is three. Please stick to the limits. And also, you need to have this reserved on the table, which you have not.-- Night  shine  23:30, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

There actually isn't a limit to how many chararts you can have on the page to my knowledge, we never made one. But, I suppose we could. I think four or five is a reasonable number  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:34, February 15, 2011 (UTC)

I agree... And is there problems with the image o.e <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">OH. MAH. GAWSH. 1,000 EDITS!!!! PARTEH WITH MEH :D 23:49, February 15, 2011 (UTC)



Here's a daigram I made. The blue means lighten black. Red means remove whatever is circled and green means that the lineart is messed up.  Sakura -chan   ♥  13:34, February 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Ok, that helped. Thanks, Echo! Anyways, i reuploaded and fixed everything.<font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxeh <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">Bloodclaw2 on deviantART!! 22:23, February 16, 2011 (UTC)

You might have to re-do this. The lineart is messed up. The black is too dark, the stripes are too thick. Darken the shading. Make the ear pink more reddish. That type of pink is not natural for a cat's ear pink colour. ♥Loveheart♥ ☮Happy Valentines Day!☮  23:36, February 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-(Darkened shading)I don't see anything wrong with the lineart ?_? <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxeh <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">NO I'M SERIOUS ILL HIT YOU WITH THIS STICK 23:43, February 16, 2011 (UTC)

I see the problem. Fox, the ear on viewer's left has rigid lineart. It's hard to compare them... Here, I'll make a small diagram for you.

Please work on this or it will be declined-- Night  shine  07:24, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

I DONT KNOW WHATS WRONG WITH THE IMAGE!!! Gosh, what the heck is wrong with the lineart?? And i dont see a diagram o.o Fox(Working on siggy)

First off, there is alot of things wrong with it. It's very pixely and there's no shading whatsoever. The black needs to be very dark gray, not real black, then we won't see the lineart, and the lineart is bblurred.

Thin out the stripes, blur them, and add a lot more. He doesn't really look like a tabby at the moment.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:15, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 07:23, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Bloodclaw(W)- For Approval
Best charat i've done!! Comments/Critisim?<font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxeh <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">NO I'M SERIOUS ILL HIT YOU WITH THIS STICK 03:13, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

This is very good! Blur the highlight on his haunch, add a highlight to his shoulder, and blur the shading on the tail  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:17, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken the sahding, make the ear pink more reddish, blur the highlights. There should only be white near the pupil. ♥Icy123♥ ☮Peace, love, and joy!☮  03:19, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

I think the white looks pretty good there, but Fox, change it if you want to  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:20, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Well its an eclipse and the sun is shining on him so i though that'd be OK to put up... <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxeh <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">NO I'M SERIOUS ILL HIT YOU WITH THIS STICK 03:23, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Wait, what do you mean? You forgot the highlight on his shoulder  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:25, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-<font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxeh <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">NO I'M SERIOUS ILL HIT YOU WITH THIS STICK 03:27, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think the changes are showing  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:29, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

It's on his shoulder >.> <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxeh <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">NO I'M SERIOUS ILL HIT YOU WITH THIS STICK 03:32, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

This is over the limit, yes I added all of it up. This is image 36 for approval.  Sakura -chan   ♥  03:42, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

This can stay since there are a few images that have been CBA'd. Foxclaw: As for the highlight on his shoulder, brighten it a lot  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:02, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Here ya go!

This is over the limit of 35. So it will be declined-- Night  shine  04:41, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Like I said in my above comment, there are three images that have been CBA'd, it's okay for this to stay. Fox, I'm still not sure that the changes are showing up  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:45, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

They are showing up on my screen ?_?

Oh, I think you misunderstood me. I mean, like, a round highlight in the middle of his shoulder, like the one on his haunch  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 05:49, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-OH okay :) Please do CBA :3 <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxeh <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">NO I'M SERIOUS ILL HIT YOU WITH THIS STICK 06:19, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Add shading or highlighting to the face. Right now it look flat in comparison to the rest of the body. •Maple fern•  13:37, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Make the shading thicker and the ear pink is too pink. ♥Icy123♥ ☮Peace, love, and joy!☮  15:11, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-PLEEAAASEEEE CBA?? I just want ONE cba for once.... <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxeh <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">NO I'M SERIOUS ILL HIT YOU WITH THIS STICK 15:47, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

This still needs alot of work. Begging for CBA won't get you any closer. The highlights and shading are good, but the ear pink is too pink, make it gray. Also save this as one file: Bloodclaw.warrior.png and don't change it. The white stripe down the neck looks creey and there's alot of blurred lineart.  Sakura -chan   ♥  15:49, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-

This is still over the 35 limit-- Night  shine  19:52, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

CBA images don't count. <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxeh <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">NO I'M SERIOUS ILL HIT YOU WITH THIS STICK 20:21, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

See my message above-- Night  shine  22:30, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Nightfall said that it didnt matter on like 6 messages >.< <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxeh <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">NO I'M SERIOUS ILL HIT YOU WITH THIS STICK 23:08, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Nightfall and I are going to discuss it soon so this will be declined. -- Night  shine  23:33, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Well why decline it when you dont know if to decline it or not >.> <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxeh <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">NO I'M SERIOUS ILL HIT YOU WITH THIS STICK 00:10, February 21, 2011 (UTC

No. This will stay for now. Foxclaw, this is wonderful. JUst darken the shading a teensy bit more. ♥Icy123♥ ☮Peace, love, and joy!☮  15:38, February 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Thank you Icy :)<font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxeh <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">I am the chosen one, nuo? 18:39, February 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the patches  Bird  2011 21:11, February 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-

Blur the highlights, and make the ear pink smaller  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:09, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

There's some patches of blurred lineart on the chin and lots on the ear. Can you fix that please? :)  HA WK FI RE98  23:48, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

Fox, a few tips on lineart - what helps me is to actually erase the lineart, do the coloring, then place a layer of the lineart over. That way, you only need to worry about the coloring getting a little blurred :) Age nt Win  dFi re -  Delve Deep er  13:42, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined-- Night  shine  00:43, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

Can somebody take over? <font face="Segoe Script" color="#15317E">fox <font face="Papyrus" color="#800517">I'm only known for the mistakes i've made.... 21:45, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Nevermind that above. <font face="Segoe Script" color="#15317E">fox <font face="Papyrus" color="#800517">I'm only known for the mistakes i've made.... 00:52, March 7, 2011 (UTC)

I think the line art is still kind of messed up on the ears  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:14, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 07:22, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Quailfeather - For Approval
This is what she is supposed to look like. ♥Icy123♥ ☮Peace, love, and joy!☮  19:09, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

This is over the limit of 35 -- Night  shine  19:52, February 20, 2011 (UTC)


 * It's fine. =.=  Sakura -chan   ♥  20:59, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and highlights, make the earpink bigger. Xigbar; The Freeshooter  21:01, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

See my message above-- Night  shine  22:30, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Ice, this is really good, but it doesn't match Quailfeather's description. It says on her article that she's dark gray with a darker gray paw  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:10, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I'm going to change that. ♣Saint♣Ice♣ 15:32, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely! But the highlights still look round and circlish...maybe smudge them out a little?  HA WK FI RE98  23:47, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined-- Night  shine  00:42, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

Someone else can take over this. ☘Saint <font color="Lime">Ice☘ 15:42, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:29, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

You might want to blur the shading on it a bit more, espically on the chest. Good job Ice/Nightfall, -- Ashenstream ''' The Journey Of A Thousand Miles  23:13, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

Sneerkit (K) For Approval


Here he is. :P -Sage: Spring is Coming! 00:21, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

He looks gray, I'd darken the image a lot. Blur the shading, highlights, and ear pink, and add eye white  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:28, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

Also make the Eye black more rectangular, See other kit images for example also add eye depth  Bird  2011 00:45, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry Bird, I didn't see your comment before I finished him. I added eye white, and blurred everything. I am now adding the eye depth and pupil. -Sage: Spring is Coming! 22:13, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. -Sage: Spring is Coming! 22:22, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink, add a highlight to the haunch, and muzzle  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:47, February 24, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. -Sage: Spring is Coming! 22:56, February 25, 2011 (UTC)'''

There is blurred line art in various places, make the pupils more centered in the eye, blur the shading-- Night  shine  07:12, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Could someone help me with replacing the lineart? -Sage the little kitten. 03:52, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I fixed the line art for you-- Night  shine  01:22, March 7, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you so Much! -Sage the little kitten. 01:48, March 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and the highlights  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:13, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Cedarkit (Ki) For Approval
I know I know he needs some work Adderpaw 00:29, February 25, 2011 (UTC)

Very nice! I think he needs to be darkened though, I always imagined him like a havana brown cat when I suggested his character. Blur the ear pink, and there's some blurred line art on his ears  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:44, February 25, 2011 (UTC)

I don't see it :/ oh and every time I try to make him more brown I can't add the shading DX Adderpaw 19:49, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

I'll help!

Reuploaded-

There is blurred ear pink in the ears, blur the ear pink, darken the shading-- Night  shine  23:40, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

I'll help again.. <font face="Segoe Script" color="#15317E">fox <font face="Papyrus" color="#800517">I'm only known for the mistakes i've made.... 07:34, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-<font face="Segoe Script" color="#15317E">fox <font face="Papyrus" color="#800517">I'm only known for the mistakes i've made.... 07:34, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Foxclaw, you are only allowed to help if the user asks for help, please wait for this in the future. Make the ear pink reddish and smaller, -- Night  shine  01:01, March 7, 2011 (UTC)

The eyes match the pelt color. -Sage the little kitten. 02:19, March 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Made the ear pink more reddish and smaller and changed eye color :P Adderpaw 22:49, March 7, 2011 (UTC)

The pupils look really funny, maybe look at an approved kit image for pupil reference? I can't see the ear pink, lighten it some and straighten it out  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:12, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Frost (CG) - For Approval
It's been sitting in my computer for two weeks along with Dawnfrost :P Anyways, I'm not sure about the patches, do they look okay? 00:04, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

This is really good, but her article says she's supposed to have wispy white patches  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:11, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

Is there a cave guard named Frost? I don't see one in the allegiances -- Night  shine  00:14, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

Nightshine: Yeah, it's Frost that Glimmers in Sunlight. Nightfall: There are white patches, but I'll define them as needed. 01:43, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

If you mean Frost That Glimmers in Sunshine, she already has a prey hunter image. Night shine  23:35, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - OH! Oops. I meant Frost that Covers Grass. Sorry about that. 02:05, March 7, 2011 (UTC)

Ah I see, darken the nose colour and darken the shading-- Night  shine  02:10, March 7, 2011 (UTC)

Deidara (Ro) - For Approval
Haven't done one in a while and I know this one isn't great, so, comments? Moon 05:52, March 2, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome :) I would darken the shading and ear pink  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:06, March 2, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 07:27, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Foxmask (W) - For Approval
Comments? Xigbar; The Freeshooter  02:27, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

This is really good! Blur and thicken the tail shading. Also, there's some blurred line art on the front right arm, (the one closest to us) and along the back of the tail  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:57, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? Xigbar; The Freeshooter  15:01, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

There is still some blurred line art on the arm-- Night  shine  23:33, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Gimp weirdly isn't working for me. Can someone take this over? Dymitrie; Shilva, моя любовь.  23:02, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Sure! I fixed the blurred line art, and darkened the shading on the foreleg farthest from us  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:08, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Night :) Dymitrie;  Shilva, моя любовь.  23:11, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Rose (Ro) For Approval
How is she? :D  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:01, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

She's lovely :D The pink eye looks a little salmoney though, and the nose strip only goes to a point just above her eyes. :) Age nt Win  dFi re -  Delve Deep er  01:05, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

Cute! Smudge the patches a bit more, they look too bland.  HA WK FI RE98  03:01, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Better?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:28, March 7, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink and the shading a bit-- Night  shine  01:00, March 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Darkened ear pink and shading  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 05:15, March 7, 2011 (UTC)

Rug (BC)~For approval
Meh, been a while since I put anythin' up -<font face="Stencil">ナナシ Who am I? Vampire Kit  01:55, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

I would suggest not putting the missing ear there at all, but you dont have to.

The missing ear needs to be there. It's what she looks like. The point is to make the image look like the cat as much as possible. -<font face="Stencil">ナナシ Who am I? Vampire Kit  05:47, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Oh ok. <font face="Segoe Script" color="#15317E">fox <font face="Papyrus" color="#800517">I'm only known for the mistakes i've made.... 07:31, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

This is great(compared to my charries) =) Blur the highlights a bit more, <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:violet">Gossip Queen!!! 20:10, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry Darkcloud, we're only doing current ranks at the moment (see the purple notice at the top of the page) and Rug used to be in BloodClan, she isn't now. If you change the eye color to green, this could be Dusk.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:16, March 7, 2011 (UTC)

Oh sorry, I didn't realize dying counted as a rank change. -<font face="Stencil">ナナシ Vampire Kit  04:03, March 7, 2011 (UTC)

Er, what? She didn't become a BloodClan warrior when she died...  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:08, March 7, 2011 (UTC)

No, no she was in BloodClan when she died... That's why she still had the collar. -<font face="Stencil">ナナシ Vampire Kit  04:17, March 7, 2011 (UTC)

Really? On her article, it says her current affiliation is rogue, and her past affiliations are BloodClan and a kittypet.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:31, March 7, 2011 (UTC)

Huh... I should fix that xD -<font face="Stencil">ナナシ Vampire Kit  04:32, March 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Blurred more ;) -<font face="Stencil">ナナシ Vampire Kit  01:16, March 10, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty! :3 Fix the blurred/smudged lineart on her haunch, legs, face etc. and darken the shading. The eye looks a little...creepy, try adding more black pixels. Make the teeth on her collar a little yellowish.  HA WK FI RE98  15:04, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 07:24, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Goldenheart(W)~For approval
I absolutely love him! I just helped Whitestar get this character and i wanted to do his first character, Goldenheart, done.

Reuploaded- Oops, forgot the earpink! Now he's ready.

I don't you why you put this up. You have 5 images up for approval right now and the kittypet blanks. You can only post things if you reserve them, and you need to work on your other images. Please listen to what I'm saying and don't just ignore it and post another charart. I just want to get my point across. Also read the guidelines please Night  shine  04:09, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry Night Shine, I didnt read the rules when i started... Although Nightfall said that there was no rule on a limit. I'm sorry, i will work on my other charats right now... Right now i'm putting up videos for my tutorial so i was like hey why not put them up? I hope you understand.

Well, I said that the subject was open for discussion. Generally, I think a user should have only three chararts up at a time, that's a reasonable number. I think you should wait and put him up when your other five are approved  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 05:21, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Ok. And Nightfall, can you help with Silversong?

Blur and smudge the shading and highlights a lot, and make the ear pink more of a reddish-pink color.  HA WK FI RE98  15:03, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 07:24, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Darkpaw (Ro) ~For approval
I timed it and i took 14 minutes o.o i did this on Hypercam because i decided to do a tutorial, and dont have a seizure Night, i reserved it.<font face="Segoe Script" color="#15317E">fox <font face="Papyrus" color="#800517">I'm only known for the mistakes i've made.... 21:43, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

We're only doing Current blanks, and don't be rude...  Sakura -chan   ♥  00:00, March 7, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry. Bu this is his current blank... Its not BloodClan, he left BloodClan but kept the collar <font face="Segoe Script" color="#15317E">fox <font face="Papyrus" color="#800517">I'm only known for the mistakes i've made.... 00:05, March 7, 2011 (UTC)

Foxclaw, you now have 8 things up for approval. Please just stop posting new chararts...-- Night  shine  00:11, March 7, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with Nightshine, and I'm also pretty sure you ignored my message above about Goldenheart, if you hadn't then you wouldn't have put this up for approval  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:27, March 7, 2011 (UTC)

I just worked on all my other ones. <font face="Segoe Script" color="#15317E">fox <font face="Papyrus" color="#800517">I'm only known for the mistakes i've made.... 01:03, March 7, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, but you tend to always go awhile without working on them. I highly recommend withdrawing Darkpaw and Goldenheart, and waiting until your other chararts are approved to put them back up. We're almost over the limit, other users who only have one or two up for approval need a chance; you already have five, not including Darkpaw and Goldenheart  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:15, March 7, 2011 (UTC)

Im withdrawing one, i might withdraw this one... I just want this one to get approved or declined, i really want him to have an image. <font face="Segoe Script" color="#15317E">fox <font face="Papyrus" color="#800517">I'm only known for the mistakes i've made.... 02:43, March 7, 2011 (UTC)

Well, how about you withdraw two; the two that you're least likely to work on. And remember, you can always put them back up  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:12, March 7, 2011 (UTC)

I didnt know that! I will withdraw Silversong and i think i withdrawed something else.. <font face="Segoe Script" color="#15317E">fox <font face="Papyrus" color="#800517">I'm only known for the mistakes i've made.... 00:04, March 8, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 07:25, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Cypresspaw (A) ~For approval
I did him not to long ago. He was fun to do. Fox wanted me to RP and do charart more, so i decided to. &#91;&#91;User:~Bloodclaw&#124;&#39;&#39;&#39;&lt;span style=&quot;background:navy; color:goldenrod; font-family:mistral;&quot;&gt;Bloodclaw&lt;/span&gt;&#93;&#93;Bloodclaw&#91;&#91;User Talk:~Bloodclaw&#124;&lt;sup&gt;&lt;span style=&quot;color:khaki;&quot;&gt;ITS.MAI.SITCK.DONT TOUCH IT. PERIOD.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/sup&gt;&#93;&#93;&lt;/pre&gt; 04:27, March 7, 2011 (UTC)

He looks great! Blur the ear pink, lighten the shading on his legs, and darken the shading on his tail.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:40, March 7, 2011 (UTC)

Nah, his legs are fine. Add some faint highlights to his haunch, face, and shoulder areas, as well as the tail, and make the ear pink more pink-ish. It looks purple. Also, you might want to fix your signature.  HA WK FI RE98  15:00, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 07:25, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Ivyfrost (W) For Approval
Probably need to add highlights. How is she?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:00, March 8, 2011 (UTC)

I think she's fine as is. -- Shodn I can't stand him, I hate him, I need to escape!  21:12, March 8, 2011 (UTC)

Highloughts would be nice....blur the ear pink and add shading to the empty part on the haunch. ☘Saint <font color="Lime">Ice☘ 01:01, March 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I think she looks better now. I blurred the ear pink and added shading to the haunch  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:14, March 10, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! Smudge the gray patch on her chest, it looks like a blob with spikey things in it (XD), and blur the shading/highlight transition a bit.  HA WK FI RE98  14:58, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Smudged the gray patch, and blurred the shading/highlight transition  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:10, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Abby(Ki)For Approval


Here's my first character. If you find mistakes,don't be suprised. I'm new. Comments?11:04,8 march,2011,The gost,roxi.

Wow, this is way better than my first charrie:) LOL. Maybe you could try and make the ea-pink more triangular, and a bit smaller? Apart from that, it's really good.<font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:violet">Gossip Queen!!! 17:31, March 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Comments?The gost,roxi,22:33,2 march,2011.

Make the ear pink darker, make this more gingery, it's too yellow right now. Darken the shading-- Night  shine  01:59, March 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.comments?The gost,roxi,10:01,10 march,2011.

You can have my image if you want, just change the eye color-

<font face="Segoe Script" color="#15317E">fox <font face="Papyrus" color="#800517">I'm only known for the mistakes i've made.... 23:48, March 10, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks,Foxclaw,but i need it to do it on my own.The gost,12:15,28 June,2011.

Reuploaded.The gost,12:17,28 June,2011.

Make the pupils bigger, and add some highlights to the eyes  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 17:49, June 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.The gost,10:57,30 june,2011.

I didn't mean add a highlight to her face, I meant actually in her eye (the brown part). It adds depth to them. Do that, and darken the shading on < this cheek  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 06:55, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Hollybreeze (W) Up for approval.
Right. I know this is rubbish, so I'm preparing right now for hatemail:P (My first one was worse) It's just my first tabby-trust me- I haven't got a clue how to do these.... <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:violet">Gossip Queen!!! 18:05, March 8, 2011 (UTC)\

It's good for a first tabby, Just add more stripes, they dont have to be touching the lineart, Make them with style, not just curved lines, also for the earpink, the style for warriors is a bit different, and i think adding shading and highlights will help  Lyze  We have Nothing to fear, Except fear itself 20:07, March 8, 2011 (UTC)

Zoe, make the stripes defined and curved, and smooth-looking. Right now they look like random bars of color. :) If you need help, I can teach you how to do it.  HA WK FI RE98  14:57, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 07:26, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Cotton (Ro) - For Approval
This is better than my previous one, but I totally ruined it with the highlights. Tips? <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:violet">Gossip Queen!!! 18:19, March 8, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, and I don't see earpink. <font color="#00FF00">Lettuce <font color="#76EEC6">The Porpoise 21:05, March 9, 2011 (UTC)\

zoe, learn to put the correct headings. um, add ear pink, darkent the shading, darken the high colour and yeah. by the way this isn't the rogue blank... ☘Saint <font color="Lime">Ice☘ 02:15, March 10, 2011 (UTC)

I assume this is my character here: http://catsofclans.wikia.com/wiki/Cotton. If so you need to add the gray spots. Also make the eyes and earpink a little darker, they look too white now.

Also what Ice said about the blanks. ddevans96 Join the Quest! 02:40, March 10, 2011 (UTC)

It looks a bit pixly...I would redo it quickly and save it as a PNG image, and shade/highlight/blur it on www.pixlr.com/editor  HA WK FI RE98  14:56, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 07:26, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Mudpaw (A) For Approval
I've been looking forward to putting this up. Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:09, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Wow Nightfall, this is really good! You have so much talent! I do think you should either make the ear pink on the right ear small or make the ear pink on the left ear bigger. That's all I can see that could be improved! Nightfall this is amazing! -- Ashenstream  The Journey Of A Thousand Miles 17:41, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Thanks! I made the ear pink on the right smaller  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 07:13, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Featherstep (D) For Approval
I'm not sure how I feel about her. Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:47, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

This looks great~. Blur the shading and make the earpink less neon. Dymitrie; Shilva, моя любовь.  13:53, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

This is epic! I know I'm repeating what Dymitrie said, but you need to blur the shading. -- Ashenstream  The Journey Of A Thousand Miles 23:07, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Wow, thanks! Blurred shading and desaturated ear pink  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 06:59, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Join
Hi,can I join?User page:Pazuzu12


 * Of course! I'll add you in. Please read over these Basic Guidelines so you can get an idea for how the project works, and what we will and will not tolerate. If you need help getting started on character art, I suggest looking over these Character Art Tutorials. If you're having some trouble trying to find a character with no image, then this list will help. If you have any more questions, feel free to ask!  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky!

20:15, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

Thistleflame(W)-For approval


Comments?The gost,12:37,june 28,2011.

Reupload this in full size version  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 17:48, June 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.The gost,10:55,30 june,2011.

Darken the shading on the paws, and blur the white transition  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 16:42, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 17:02, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on his belly. And, I'm not really sure what's going on with his eyes...how about just pick one color. Odd-eyed cats usually have white pelts, I think it would be very rare otherwise. And I'm pretty sure if Thistleflame was odd-eyed, it would have specified on his article. I always imagined him with yellow eyes, so maybe stick with that for both eyes  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:14, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.The gost,23:38,june 30,2011.

Blur the shading. It's too sharp. Make the pupils on the eyes bigger! -- Ashenstream  The Journey Of A Thousand Miles 23:06, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

I actually think that the pupils should be left as they are, they're part of the warrior blank line art  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 06:57, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Snowy(R)-For approval


Comments?The gost,11:38,30 june,2011.

Add some color to the nose, and make the pupils bigger  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 16:29, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.The gost,19:48,30 june,2011.

This is really good gost!!!! You need to blur the ear pink though! -- Ashenstream  The Journey Of A Thousand Miles 23:03, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on her belly, and under her chin  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 06:53, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Ashenstream: Join
Hi I'm Ashenstream and I'd be delighted if you'd let me join this project! From what I can tell there are buckets of talents in this project and I would like to contribute what I can to it! I hope you will let me join, -- Ashenstream  The Journey Of A Thousand Miles 09:47, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

Of course you can join! I reccomend reading over this list of basic guidelines so you can see how this project works. If you want some guidance in starting a charart, then you can look at these Character Art Tutorials, all the tutorials offer a basic guide to shading/highlights, and some have more stuff than others. If you want any help at all, then please feel free to ask  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 16:41, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for all your help Nightfall, I'm really glad you let me join the project! I'll try my best to contribute in a positive way to the project! Thanks once again, -- Ashenstream ''' The Journey Of A Thousand Miles  17:39, June 30, 2011 (UTC)