Cats of the Clans Wiki talk:Character Art Project

Flowercloud -(W) For Approval
I'm really proud of this!:D Comments? Clarrissa  My Talk Page  Brownkit... 20:00, December 3, 2010 (UTC)

Smudge the white transition a little more  Sand  Merry Christmas 03:17, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-I smudged the transition. Comments? Clarrissa  My Talk Page  Brownkit... 16:20, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading and ear pink-- 01:49, December 10, 2010 (UTC)

This is the same charart I approved with Yellowpool. I just added green eyes and her white foot.(Flowercloud is Yellowpool's daurghter) I'll darken the shading and stuff, I'm just a little surprised. Clarrissa  My Talk Page  Brownkit... 18:43, December 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Done. I get how the haunch highlight looked a little unnatural. Didn't really notice before:P Clarrissa   My Talk Page  Brownkit...

17:19, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

Can you change this to be the new blank? I can help you if you want. Blur the ear pink, smudge the white transition, darken the shading-- 21:43, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Huh? Clarrissa  My Talk Page  Brownkit... 16:57, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- (Could you please help me with that:P-it's hard)Anyways, I used Foxclaw33's image and made a few changes:) Comments?(I basically did the previous comments).

I changed the line art for you. Darken the shading a lot. This looks a little too yellow, so can you make it more gingery?-- 19:47, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Do you use the dodge tool and the burn tool for shading & highlights? here are some tutorials that might help. http://catsofclans.wikia.com/wiki/Character_Art_Project/Tutorials

Here is mine.. Its not the best though... Foxclaw33's CAP Tutorial And my tutorial continued... Foxclaw33's CAP Tutorial Continued Foxclaw33 My talk!17:27, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I tried to make her more gingery. I'm kinda taking over now...(Clara said I could) Improvements? Zoe27 Gossip Queen!!! 17:52, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

Just darken the shading and ear pink-- 02:42, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I darkened the ear-pink, but every time I darken the shading, the fur around it becomes darker than the rest of the fur, so I decided I'd leave it. If anyone can tell me what to do about it, it would be greatly appreciated:) Zoe27 Gossip Queen!!! 16:56, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Just use a bigger brush or spray on the shading--  night  shine  ❄  03:43, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

(i took over-thanx zoe) could somebody help me with that?? Clarrissa  My Talk Page  Brownkit...

18:10, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I darkened the shading and smudged the white transition a bit-- Night  shine  04:32, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks a lot better; brighten the white on her leg though, there seems to be some ginger in it  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 18:51, February 1, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks so much for helping me with it! :) Do I get to do the improvements now? Clarrissa   My Talk Page  Brownkit...  20:00, February 1, 2011 (UTC)

Of course :)  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:18, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a tad, particularly on the top of the haunch. Looks great :D 07:57, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Skykit (Ki) - For Approval
Hi, this isn't my, charart. It's Clara's. Since she's been blocked though, she said I could take over for her, so any improvements that need to be made, will be taken over by me, until she returns:) Comments? Zoe27 Gossip Queen!!! 17:40, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more triangular, darken the shading, and smudge the white transition a lot  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:48, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

Add more highlights and blur the ear pink slightly. I would also blur the edges of the highlights of the eyes slightly as they are very pronounced. ddevans96 back and ready for action 01:13, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I tried to do what you all asked:) Comments? Zoe27 Gossip Queen!!! 16:35, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, make the ear pink more triangular, smudge the white transition-- 06:20, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

reuplooaded-done:D Zoe27 Gossip Queen!!! 18:08, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink bigger, darken the shading--  night  shine  ❄  02:25, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

reuploadedimprovements?? Zoe27 Gossip Queen!!! 17:12, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink lighter near the top and darken the shading a lot--  night  shine  ❄  22:16, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I'm taking her back now:D (Thanks Zoe-you did a good job) I lightened upper ear pink. Could someone help me to darken the shading? I might sound stupid, but it's really hard, even though its obvious the shading need to be darkened:P Clarrissa   My Talk Page  Brownkit... 17:46, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Is this good?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:47, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Make the back paw fully white-- Night  shine  04:13, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Made whole paw white  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 07:21, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Are you doing the improvements now? Clarrissa  My Talk Page  Brownkit... 20:06, February 1, 2011 (UTC)

No, you can take her back now :) I was just helping out  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:55, February 4, 2011 (UTC)

Cloudkit (Ki) For Approval
Hi, this isn't my image-it's Clara's she fixed the legs and emailed it to me to put it up. I'll be doing the improvements though. Comments? Zoe27 Gossip Queen!!! 17:56, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the black on her paws, make the ear pink bigger and darken it, darken the shading and brighten the highlights  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:48, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I smudged her paws, made the ear pink bigger and kinda darkened it. I also brightened the highlights on the tail, as I felt this was where the highlights were needed most. I really think it looks much better now:D Comments? <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:violet">Gossip Queen!!! 19:09, January 12, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and smudge the black transition-- 06:22, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I've done that now. Improvements? <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:violet">Gossip Queen!!! 16:54, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading--  night  shine  ❄  02:24, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Done!!:) <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:violet">Gossip Queen!!! 17:11, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a lot more--  night  shine  ❄  22:16, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Well. I've taken her back now. I guess I tried (and failed) to darken the shading. :P Clarrissa   My Talk Page  Brownkit...

18:04, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

It's hard to distinguish the shading from the color of the pelt  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:46, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

I could help you with the shading if you'd like, Clara. Marluxia; The Graceful Assassin  19:10, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

If there was a tutorial or something it would help...and if you could give me some tips, Elorisa, I might be able to improve on it:) Clarrissa   My Talk Page  Brownkit...

20:09, February 1, 2011 (UTC)

Ok :). Marluxia;  The Graceful Assassin  23:51, February 1, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 07:57, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Clovershine (Ro)- For approval
I hope you like! I worked really hard on her! Tigerfur of Bloodclan 01:24, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

This is good :) Darken and blur the shading. Blur the white on her muzzle a lot  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:04, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Blurred the white on her muzzle a lot. I also Darkened and blurred the shading. Tigerfur of Bloodclan 18:13, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

I'm still having a hard time seeing the shading. Thicken, darken, and blur it  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:00, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I Darkened the shading once more, and blurred it.

This is REALLY Good blur the stripes a bit  Bird  2011 01:12, January 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes, and the shading is still hard to see. Also, where are the highlights? <font face="Stencil">我愛羅 As long as theres others to kill the world is wonderful  05:06, January 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Blurred the stripes again. I cannot blur them anymore; GIMP won't let me :( Tigerfur of Bloodclan 03:52, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken and blur the shading, make the stripes longer--  night  shine  ❄  22:16, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: How about now?

I don't see anything wrong :) <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">Ooh eye ahh ahh a.. TANG TANG WALLA WALLA BING BANG!20:10, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Add some stripes to the back of the neck, add more to the face, make the haunch stripes longer so there isn't a patch of no stripes. Thicken and blur the shading-- Night  shine  04:12, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Tigerfur of Bloodclan 04:17, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken and blur the shading, add shading to the belly area, make the tail stripes longer-- Night  shine  04:35, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

I don't understand what you mean about 'thivken and blur the shading.' All I do is make more shading, look at the hind leg. I like the tail stripes...:(

The shading isn't thick enough in some places. Shading needs to be added to where the red areas are, and you need to get rid of the shading in the orange areas. The ear pink should be the colour that I indicated or similar to it-- Night  shine  04:46, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

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(And If you want you can delete all my chararts besides Clovershine. Or you can ghive them to someone else. Anyone want my chararts besides this one?) Tigerfur of Bloodclan 03:04, February 3, 2011 (UTC)

This is very pretty Tiger. :) If you want, I can help with Clovershine.

Maybe you can help. :) Tigerfur of Bloodclan 02:20, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Stunning! One thing I would suggest is to center the ear pinks, as they look a bit out of proportion. 07:57, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded i  K  i  ba☼  12:28, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Charcoal (Q) - For Approval
- Do. Not. Like. Also, I'm making her page. Gaara What is pain? 愛t 03:12, January 19, 2011 (UTC)

I think she looks beautiful! :D Blur the pink in the ears a little more. Tigerfur of Bloodclan 13:14, January 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink more, and blur the shading between the front of back legs, it sorta forms a straight line. <font face="Stencil">我愛羅 As long as theres others to kill the world is wonderful  05:06, January 20, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined-- Night  shine  04:07, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

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Make the ear pink smaller  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:35, February 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded

Make the ear pink more reddish pink, and add depth to the eyes  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:51, February 3, 2011 (UTC)

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Smooth out the pelt a bit. 07:57, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

To-be blanks - For Approval
Ahh, good old fashioned Hawkey-made blanks. :D Just like the good ol' days! These aren't my BEST blanks, I finished them in about four minutes, so...yeah. Comments?  HA WK FI RE98  20:27, January 23, 2011 (UTC)

These are good! The back paw closest to us is a bit deformed, maybe round it off a bit, and make the eyes more almond shaped instead of oval shaped  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:32, January 24, 2011 (UTC)

Here's a diagram I made to help:

Reuploaded Sorry about that! Also one of the blanks has an accidental ear tuft in its ear; I'll fix that next time. Echo, I appreciate the diagram, but thats WAY too much unneccessary work.  HA WK FI RE98  18:34, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

I like them :) Chickenstar 18:37, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

The paws need to be rounder, the torso need to be thickened, make the ears wider, eyes should be more cat-like, the whiskers should be closer to the muzzle, and the haunch needs to be reshapen-- Night  shine  23:23, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

I don't like the face, I prefer to keep it to my own style. But I'll do everything else.  HA WK FI RE98  00:29, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

I think these are the cutest things.... Frostcloud 02:12, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

Ichigo (R) - FOr Approval
- I had to use pixlr for this and found some cool brushes to use =3 anyway, I failed at the Loner blanks and I'mma givin um up. So yeah. Here's Ichigo, and if you want me to change the lineart, I will. Gaara What does pain feel like? 愛 00:00, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

Line art is way to thick, color and eyes aren't right. <font face="Stencil">我愛羅 As long as theres others to kill the world is wonderful  00:03, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

It's good :) The line art is a bit too cartoony though; I suggest thinning it out and make it look spiky. And he looks too golden, saturate him more  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:05, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

Echo, I'll give tou the basic color layout on IRC. <font face="Stencil">我愛羅 As long as theres others to kill the world is wonderful  00:07, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

Echoey, looks kewl :) The thing about pixlr is that even with the magic wand tool, things blur together. Try making one layer that's just the white section of the lineart, erasing the lineart so there isn't any, and make another one that's just the lineart with the white part taken out. If that made any sense. Agent WindFire  Because it's snowing,  Blowing, All over town...     00:02, January 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded @Agent: I don't use layors for pixlr or GIMP

The spikiness still looks cartoony.. Marluxia; The Graceful Assassin  14:19, February 1, 2011 (UTC)

I really don't know how to fix that. Cartoony is my style... {[User:Echopaw/Signature}}

i could try for you --bracken-- ~04:01, February 3, 2011 (UTC)

Go ahead

Toshiro (R) For Approval
Fail. Comments? -- Jalapeño I look really CREEPY with these glasses on...  21:16, January 28, 2011 (UTC)

Holy cow :D thats really good. I dont see shading or a light source, though.... <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">Ooh eye ahh ahh a.. TANG TANG WALLA WALLA BING BANG!20:11, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

There's no shading or highlights, and the spikey fur looks odd. Gaara What does pain feel like? 愛 22:40, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Odd how? That's how he looks, and I'm not changing it. As for the shading and highlights, I choose not to use highlights. I've never done highlights before, and last time I checked, they weren't required, so I'll darken the shading, if I can. -- Jalapeño I look really CREEPY with these glasses on...  15:51, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

At least make the spikeyness look natural. Right now it looks looks very weird. I'd either remove it or redo it. Lighten black, add highlights, lighten shading and fis ear pink and eye. Gaara What does pain feel like? 愛 18:00, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

I think the spikiness looks fine, just thicken the line art on the bang over his eye. Blur the black transition, and darken the shading on the white parts  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:59, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Nighty, try making the white a little bit of an off-white, for the sake of highlights. That might help. Agent WindFire Because it's snowing,  Blowing, All over town... 10:21, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not sure about this, I I can't get shading to be visible or highlights. I'm not sure I can change the color. Any help? -- Jalapeño I look really CREEPY with these glasses on...  22:21, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

Stormpaw (WC) - For Approval


My first piece of work back after so long! I'm not sure about it... comments? -- Fawny Keep On Smiling :D 20:31, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

This is incredible! Lighten the shading a bit, and add ear pink  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:36, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Not sure if this is any better?

The ear pink looks good. Lighten the chest and paw shading more though  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:42, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great :) Make the left earpink a bit more triangular though. 07:57, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blazingstar(L) For approval
I just love it. I only hate the ear pink :/ <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">Ooh eye ahh ahh a.. TANG TANG WALLA WALLA BING BANG!20:40, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more centered and more reddish. Blur the shading, darken the nose colour-- Night  shine  04:00, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading, keep the pupil of the eye inside of the eyes, and make the ear pink/nose pink more reddish. -- Fawny Keep On Smiling :D 13:05, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-<font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">Ooh eye ahh ahh a.. TANG TANG WALLA WALLA BING BANG!20:02, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Make the eear pink light red, blur the shading, I don't see a light source in this. - Night  shine  21:22, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">I love Foxpaw :)07:12, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpinks and shading. 07:57, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

They are blurred. <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">I love Foxpaw :) 16:37, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and blur the back shading, make the ear pink light red and blur it a lot-- Night  shine  04:06, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Fox, this needs to definitely be blurred. The darkened color looks like lines on the cat because it is lines on the cat, and it doesn't look good. Agent WindFire Because it's snowing,  Blowing, All over town... 10:25, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Brightkit (Ki) - For Approval
Comments? Marluxia; The Graceful Assassin  14:43, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

This looks great! Make the ear pink more triangular and darken the face and tail stripes-- Night  shine  19:15, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

This is absolutely gorgeous :) Do what Night said, and maybe lighten the shading on her back  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:54, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? I was hesitant to lighten her back, I did a bit, because that's a broad back stripe or something. There's little stripelets coming off of it. Marluxia; The Graceful Assassin  21:17, January 31, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, I see. I think it looks fine; maybe make the ear pink a bit bigger though  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:42, February 1, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? Marluxia; The Graceful Assassin  00:29, February 2, 2011 (UTC)


 * I missed so much, I can hardly tell shading from highlights anymore. But that doesn't mean I'm exactly stupid right now ;) Anyways, the spots on the haunch should be darkened, so it's more visible. 03:21, February 2, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Horray, I failed at that. Comments? Marluxia; The Graceful Assassin  22:25, February 3, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes a little more, it's kind of hard to tell that she's a tabby. And no you did not fail :)  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:44, February 3, 2011 (UTC)

Flaresong (W) ~ For Approval
I like it! :) Comments? <font color="Magenta" >☯Maxine: <font color="Black" >Your Cutest Nightmare☮ 21:04, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

This looks great! Darken the ear pink and darken the shading. There is a bit of white on the haunch so make that ginger-- Night  shine  21:15, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? <font color="Magenta" >☯Maxine: <font color="Black" >Your Cutest Nightmare☮ 21:45, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

This is pretty :) Make the white stretch all the way up past her muzzle (see real life image for reference), and saturate it more, she looks a bit brown  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:44, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty kitty! Blur the shading under her chin and on her haunch a little bit.  HA WK FI RE98  18:16, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Basicly, I re-did her. Any better? Mew Mew  Pudding  13:50, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the white transition, darken the shading, desaturate the ear pink-- Night  shine  21:22, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit. 07:57, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Firefur (Ro)- For approval
I don't really like him...Tigerfur of Bloodclan 21:36, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Firefur I think you need to be careful about how many images you put up on this page. You have Tigerfur, Clovershine, Flower, Mistytail, Flamebelly, and an orange rogue. That's six images, not including this one. Also, please be sure to upload your images using the full size version, I took it out of thumb nail for you. Blur the shading a lot, and darken the shading on the white part of his pelt.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:52, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

It's not that I don't love the image, but I think this will have to be declined due to the reason above. ~

I don't think that's necessary. There used to be users here who put up a ton of chararts, and I'm just warning Tigerfur that they were more than those users could handle. I just recommend keeping the number of images down.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 17:46, February 1, 2011 (UTC)

DON'T DECLINE THIS ONE, THOUGH NIGHTFALL! Tigerfur of Bloodclan 03:08, February 3, 2011 (UTC)

Tigerfur, did you not read what I just typed? I'm just saying, you may want to keep the number of your chararts to a minimum. Like I said before, blur the shading a lot, and darken the shading on the white part of his pelt.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:39, February 3, 2011 (UTC)

Nightfall told me to keep my images to 4. That sounds like a good amount. Why don't you try to keep it to 3 or 4 at a time? (just some advice) There is a random line of gray on the chest. <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">Ooh eye ahh ahh a.. TANG TANG WALLA WALLA BING BANG! 20:04, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

@Fox - I thought the limit was 3....?

About the image, it really should be blurred. If it gets taken down, you'll have time to work on it and save it for later anyway :) Agent WindFire  Because it's snowing,  Blowing, All over town...     10:28, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Cloudpaw (A) - For Approval
Comments? Marluxia; The Graceful Assassin  14:38, February 1, 2011 (UTC)

This is beautiful! Lighten the black on the paws  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 17:47, February 1, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? Marluxia; The Graceful Assassin  23:45, February 1, 2011 (UTC)

I just realized how much I love the expression on her face... This looks pretty good, but maybe the ear pink should be a little tiny bit more pink. Agent WindFire Because it's snowing,  Blowing, All over town... 00:05, February 2, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? Marluxia; The Graceful Assassin  00:31, February 2, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah :) Blur the face and neck shading  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:34, February 3, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Failure. Better? Marluxia; The Graceful Assassin  22:39, February 3, 2011 (UTC)

Not a failure, El :) Darken the left ear pink, and there's some blurred line art around her hind paw closest to us, the tail tip, and the front leg farthest from us  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:14, February 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Marluxia; The Graceful Assassin  03:00, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Much better. :) Darken the shading a bit more.  HA WK FI RE98  18:15, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? Marluxia; The Graceful Assassin  00:32, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

I still see a bit of blurred line art on her hind paw and tail tip  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:11, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pinks even 07:57, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Dapplestep (W) - For Approval
- FAIL FAIL FAIL UBER FAIL D:

Fail? Echo, you're seriously going blind. This is marvelous. It's so pretty <3 Blur the ear pink and make it more of a reddish color and darken the shading on the tail. 20:54, February 3, 2011 (UTC)

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Make the ear pink less gray, and more reddish pink. Add some depth to the eyes, and smudge the patches a little. Ice is right, this is great :)  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:34, February 3, 2011 (UTC)

If this is a fail, then fail means "breathtaking charart" ;) Make the ear pink more reddish. 07:57, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded i  K  i  ba☼  03:22, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Make this a long haired blank, since she is said to be fluffy, darken the shading, make the ear pink more reddish and blur it. The eye lashes look a little weird-- Night  shine  04:05, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Just because a cat is fluffy, doesn't necessarily mean that they're long haired. Take Flarecloud for example, she has fluffy soft fur, but she doesn't have long fur. But I do agree about the ear pink, it's still to purple-gray  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:56, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Ripplepool (W) - For Approval

 * [[File:Ripplepool.warrior.png]]I'll upload the other half of it right now. 22:49, February 3, 2011 (UTC)

This is pretty :) Darken the stripes and shading  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:31, February 4, 2011 (UTC)

Add some stripes to her face and darken the shading. :)  HA WK FI RE98  18:11, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes look unnatural... anyway, add stripes to face, belly and chest. i K  i  ba☼  14:54, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Lightstep(W)- For approval



 * Shake head* Bad Chickenstar 23:51, February 4, 2011 (UTC)

Finally someone did one of my characters! :D This isn't bad at all! Maybe darken the shading a little, blur the stripes more, and darken the ear pink.  HA WK FI RE98  18:12, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

'''I am redoing this whole thing! Chickenstar 18:54, February 5, 2011 (UTC)'''

Oh...okay! This time make him a light brown  HA WK FI RE98  20:26, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe you would consider making the stripes a little sharper? The ends of them look too round, but then again I don't have the best eye for this type of thing. -shrug- Agent WindFire  Because it's snowing,  Blowing, All over town... 10:31, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Sparkfire (D) For Approval
I really want to upload Deidara, Amberdawn, and Sun, but I can't because my laptop won't connect to the internet. I thought in the mean time, I'd do Sparkfire's deputy image on the computer I'm on right now. Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:17, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

This is fantastic! Blur the right ear pink a bit-- Night  shine  23:09, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed <font face="Stencil">我愛羅 As long as theres others to kill the world is wonderful

Smooth out the highlights. 07:57, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Nightshine: Thanks! I blurred the right ear pink. Satsu: Okay, seriously? Just switch the lettering around, you don't have to do something so obnoxious. I don't watch anime, so I didn't know his name was mispelled ever so slightly, and plus, that's what his article said when I uploaded Sparkfire. Nightflower: I actually don't want to smooth out anything, I think the highlights look fine. They add a sort of texture to his pelt, and I don't really want to change it  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:07, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Eagle (CG) - For Approval
Comments?- Night  shine  22:44, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Perfect as usual.  HA WK FI RE98  23:03, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

This is incredible! Saturate him a bit more, he doesn't really look reddish brown at the moment  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:57, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded saturated image-- Night  shine  20:30, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Swifttail (W) - For Approval
A new style! :) What do you think?  HA WK FI RE98  23:03, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Lighten the white areas. Some of the line art looks blurred-- Night  shine  23:09, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Black is wayyy to dark. I can hardly see the lineart. Lighten that a lot and that's pretty much it. ♥Loveheart♥ ☮Happy Valentines Day!☮  00:26, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Also, smooth out the patches ''just a tad. ''Otherwise, it'll take away the epic-ness :D 07:57, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with Ice, the black part should be off-black a little, but maybe the patch edge near the forwardmost back leg in the image should be blurred a tiny bit? That one part just looks a little unnatural is all. Agent WindFire Because it's snowing,  Blowing, All over town... 10:34, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded What do you think? I lightened the white areas, fixed blurred lineart, attempted to lighten the black (I can't use the dodge tool), fixed the unnatural patch, and smoothed out the patches just a tiny bit. Whew! ;)  HA WK FI RE98  01:17, February 11, 2011 (UTC)

Fernkit (Ki)- For approval
I don't like her. Tigerfur of Bloodclan 02:36, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

She's good :) Add a lot more shading to her belly and haunch. Make the dapples bigger and more irregular, these look more like spots. Make the ear pink more reddish instead of purple, and add some shading to the eye color  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:52, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Tigerdawn (W) - For Approval
Comments? 06:23, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blue the ear pink-Or did you blur it?? <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">I love Foxpaw :)06:38, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I also brightened the highlights a bit. 06:53, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Ok. I don't see anything wrong, why not work on another while waiting for a comment or CBA?? I think CBA, but i'm not a senior warrior status, so i can't do it. <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">I love Foxpaw :)07:06, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink and blur it, darken the shading-- Night  shine  04:02, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

This is pretty :) Add eye white, and make the ear pink more reddish, and blur it  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:47, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  02:07, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

Add eye white, you can see an approved warrior image for reference  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:18, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

The eye white is there. 04:10, February 10, 2011 (UTC)

Desaturate the ear pink and make it smaller, darken the tail stripes a bit-- Night  shine  07:18, February 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:07, February 11, 2011 (UTC)

Foxpaw(A) For approval
*sniff* ISNT IT BEATIFUL :D?<font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">I love Foxpaw :)06:39, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink less neon and blur the shading. Looks good :) 07:58, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-<font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">I love Foxpaw :)20:10, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ginger more orangey, blur the ear pink and make it smaller, give the eyes some depth-- Night  shine  04:03, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

It looks to me like you only added highlights on the tail and forehead, then added extreme shading in other areas. I would strongly recommend blurring. Agent WindFire Because it's snowing,  Blowing, All over town... 10:36, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

This is really really red, I suggest making her ginger. The eyes look blue, I think on her article it says that she has green eyes  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:46, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Wait, never mind the green eyes. Blur the shading a lot as well, but this is really good Fox :) I would also blur the ear pink a lot. Also, I would like to say that you did a good job smudign the black transition  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:28, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

I blurred them both alot. <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">Don't you just love Valentine's Day? 06:47, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Kittypet Blanks-For approval
i wanted them to look REALLY cute because they are, well, not feirce...(No offense, Kittehs XD) That would make them look soft and unharmfull...I think i did a great job on that xD <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">I love Foxpaw :)20:38, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Here's an example:

ITS JASMINE :D

It looks like they're wearing sunglasses. i K  i  ba☼  23:57, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Make all the lines fully black. Get rid of the fluffy bit on the top of their head, make the limbs more natural, eyes should be smaller and the torso needs to be thicker-- Night  shine  00:05, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

The tail shouldn't be cut off too :P Poor longhaired kitty... -pets- The corners of the eyes look too sharp on even the males, and I agree that they should be smaller. Agent WindFire Because it's snowing,  Blowing, All over town... 10:38, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Fix the eyes, fix the tails and paws. Right now, there are only two paws. This will need ALOT of work. i K  i  ba☼  13:19, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I TRIED to make them smaller, did i mention i always do bad on eyes >.< <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">Don't you just love Valentine's Day? 23:57, February 11, 2011 (UTC)

o_o You made it worse... USE NIGHTSHINE'S DIAGRAM! SAVE AS PNG. Man, do I have to say that again!? Here's a diagram to help:

i K  i  ba☼  00:10, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

I dont have time to work on these, please give me more time.]

@Echopaw: I did save it. I am used to paint, not PIXLR so i dont know how to change it. Please be as easy as you can on me, School hates me right now, and Sports are kicking my face. <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">Don't you just love Valentine's Day? 01:07, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Spottedwing (W) - For Approval
Comments? 22:56, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Dont make it smudge all the way to the SW way, here are examples-

The one on the right is better because its smudged in the right and left direction, not one. THat makes it more relistic, so do that on the chest and the muzzle white patch(thingy, forgot the word :/) in two directions. |Foxheart<font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">Don't you love Valentine's Day?23:14, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Foxclaw, the white is fine. I'm removing your unnessisary images. As for Nightflower's image, this is beautiful! :D Add depth to the eyes and darken shading. i K  i  ba☼  23:48, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Unnessisary images?? What are you talking about -.- <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">Don't you just love Valentine's Day? 02:11, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Your 'examples' to show smudging, were useless. It doesn't matter if you smudge it this way or that, we all have different opinions. i K  i  ba☼  03:07, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  03:35, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, define the ear pink more-- Night  shine  04:01, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Echo, please don't be so hard on Foxclaw, she was just trying to help. Fox, Echo does have a point, Nightflower did a beautiful job smudging the transitions. Nightflower: Lighten the ear pink, and add eye white  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:50, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  02:07, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

You still haven't put any eye white in, look at an approved warrior image for reference  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:17, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

I put in an eye white. 04:10, February 10, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink smaller-- Night  shine  07:17, February 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:07, February 11, 2011 (UTC)

Spottedpelt (W) - For Approval
Guess I'm doing all the Spotted- XD Comments? 22:56, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

There is a light blue-purple splotch (look really close), i would fix that. |Foxheart<font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">Don't you love Valentine's Day?23:15, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

What are you talking about Fox? I see no purple. =/ Also, darken shading. i K  i  ba☼  23:50, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Right next the the chest and the arm, Echo.<font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">Don't you just love Valentine's Day? 02:08, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Thats the brown. If you look closely it's on some other sections too. i K  i  ba☼  03:20, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  03:35, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and lighten the ear pink-- Night  shine  04:01, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

This is pretty... maybe you should add a shine to the eyes? What do they call it, depth? Agent WindFire Because it's snowing,  Blowing, All over town... 10:40, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, depth and add eye white as well  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:51, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuloaded  02:07, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

I still don't see any eye white, you can look at an approved warrior image to see where it's supposed to go  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:17, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

I already put in an eye white. 04:10, February 10, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a little smaller-- Night  shine  07:16, February 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:07, February 11, 2011 (UTC)

Smolder (Ro) For Approval
Okay, wow. This took a long time xD I probably would have failed on the scarred side of her face so badly had it not been for me drawing Brightheart, Cloudtail, and Whitekit together on note book paper last semester in school. I pray to the Lord almighty that the scars are on the correct side of the face xD Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:15, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Oops, forgot the knicks in her ear  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:22, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

Wow...this is OUTSTANDING! I feel so bad for her scars, she didn't deserve them. I say put spikes on both sides of her tail, not just the top of it.  HA WK FI RE98  22:30, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Thank you! I added spikes to the back of the tail  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:01, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

That's so weird, it's not showing up here, but the changes show on the file history  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:43, February 10, 2011 (UTC)

It's showing up now, darken the shading on the ginger areas and darken the nose colour, lighten the ear pink-- Night  shine  07:16, February 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Man, why do I always forget the nose color? Anyway, added nose color, lightened ear pink, and darkened shading on the the ginger areas  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:47, February 10, 2011 (UTC)

Once i looked at this is was like BRIGHTHEART ISNT A ROUGUE!!! I would lighten the shading on the underbelly JUST a bit.(Dont know if its nessicary, but if you want more work, go ahead XD) <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">Don't you just love Valentine's Day? 00:01, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

@Foxclaw: How can you think that? O_O

@Nightfall: This is beautiful! :D Lighten the orange, it looks kinda red on my computer screen. i K  i  ba☼  00:18, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Foxclaw, lol xD I think I might leave the shading the way it is, the light is coming from above her, so her belly would be darker than her back. Echo, I'm a tinsy bit reluctant to lighten the ginger, it doesn't look red on my computer screen. It might just be your screen resolution  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:22, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Okay Nightfall... I uh.... see what you mean.... (Sure i do xD) <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">Don't you just love Valentine's Day? 00:58, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Foxclaw if you don't understand then just tell me, I'd be happy to explain. Say the sun is shining on Smolder's back. Well, her belly is under her back, so the sunlight wouldn't reach there, right? So, by reason, the belly would be dark because the light is not reaching it  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:11, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

OOOOOOOHHHHHHHKAAAAYYYYYYY!!!! THat makes sense!! <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">Don't you just love Valentine's Day? 01:17, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Tobias (R) - For Approval
Comments? Marluxia; The Graceful Assassin  01:41, February 10, 2011 (UTC)

darken the striles, make the ear pink brighter and more reddish-- Night  shine  07:15, February 10, 2011 (UTC)

This is beautiful! Add ear pink, and darken the stripes  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:12, February 10, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''But it's not showing up... Marluxia; The Graceful Assassin  00:45, February 11, 2011 (UTC)

Opalkit (Ki) For Approval
Meh meh meh. Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:12, February 10, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Darken the left ear pink-- Night  shine  00:50, February 11, 2011 (UTC)

This may just be me, but I see pinkish-lilac color in the background. -- Jalapeño I look really CREEPY with these glasses on...  23:02, February 11, 2011 (UTC)

I do, too, Night. Maybe trying to make them transparent there was a little problem??<font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">Don't you just love Valentine's Day? 23:59, February 11, 2011 (UTC)

I'll get right on it; I was experimenting with layers and I didn't get all the pink off of the back ground. Foxclaw, I don't really understand your question; it doesn't make sense  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:02, February 12, 2011 (UTC)


 * facepalm* Nevermind.... <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">Don't you just love Valentine's Day? 00:07, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Scarheart(W)-For approval
I would consider this the best of all my charats. I wanted to do them after i heard her lost his eye. I might as well do Jack and Jasmine..... I always inmagined like Tallstar.... So what do YOU think about it? <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">Don't you just love Valentine's Day? 00:57, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Ok I know I'm not allowed to be here but he looks black

Not allowed, Adder? Tell me about that.... >.< He is supposed to be black.He is black. <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">Don't you just love Valentine's Day? 01:16, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Again, it's to pixilated. Save the stupid image as PNG. >_< His scarred eye is like, freakin scary and very dislocated. Look at Echowave's image for a reference. Blur the scars, darken white, add shading and highlights, add depth to the eyes and some of the lineart is messed up. i K  i  ba☼  01:42, February 12, 2011 (UTC)


 * Facepalm* Sorry Echo, but it's my first scar-face cat and its epic fail, i agree. But can you let me keep it just this once?? PLEASE? There is shading and highlights, they are blurred(So are the scars) I dont know how to make it not all pixel-y... <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">Don't you just love Valentine's Day? 02:11, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know what you mean by 'keep it'. o_o Just fix it and save it as PNG. not that hard i  K  i  ba☼  16:13, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

I'll change it to PNG, OK? I got that! So what do you mean by 'fix it?' fix WHAT?? <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">Don't you just love Valentine's Day? 02:39, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

I'll take over. -.- i  K  i  ba☼  16:13, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Tried new smudging style. i K  i  ba☼  16:31, February 12, 2011 (UTC)