Cats of the Clans Wiki talk:Character Art Project

Alpinefrost(W)-for approval
sorry nightwhisker ... er hem so here's Alpinefrost...uhm...how is he? construc,ents?Pebble2Pineow 22:24, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

He's good. Just darken the shading a little. -- Nighty Meh kitteh is hoplessley confused... 22:30, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry but this is over the limit.--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     23:09, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

What you don't realize, Nightshine, is that there are some images in the CBA stage. I'm no senior warrior, but I know that this can stay. §₩1ƒ₮¥ Do da Kitteh bop! 00:31, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

Okay this can stay now--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     00:36, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

reuploadedPebble2Pineow 19:25, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink and blur the tail stripes some more--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     20:38, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

Blur his texture a tad more. Ice Spring is here! 15:54, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

reuploadedpebble2pineow 00:26, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

The only thing left is that the eye white is a bit hard to see Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 21:04, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

reuploadedpebble2pineow 18:31, April 15, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink some more-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   18:05, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   16:29, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded pebble2pineow 14:42, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more red-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   18:01, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   22:38, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

Batwing (L) - For Approval
I don't know what the heck is up with her shading/highlights, it won't blur anymore. :/ Someone help me out? Midnightpelt ♥ 02:04, April 12, 2010 (UTC)!

What do you use? (pixlr, gimp, etc) Mo  onp  elt   ۞  04:21, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

She uses gimp

 ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:24, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

You could go to sircle fuzzy on brush sizes and make it a little bigger. Thats what I di fir my highlights. Mo onp  elt   ۞  13:13, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Grr, what is wrong with this, it looked like 1000 times better in GIMP. Midnightpelt ♥ 00:20, April 13, 2010 (UTC)!

Lighten the white transition. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 22:50, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

It's supposed to be silver. Midnightpelt ♥ 19:17, April 14, 2010 (UTC)!

The lineart isn't visible. Lighten the black so it's a very dark gray-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   16:57, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink, it's too dark at the moment. And the silver needs to be darkened, since it looks grey right now. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 01:20, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

@Nightshine- you can see the lineart if you look closely. It is a dark gray, not black. But you should probably lighten it some. Raven flight 92 23:10, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Huh, well, that looks awful. :/ Batwing  |  Dovefeather  19:49, April 28, 2010 (UTC)!

Blur shading, make ear pink triangular and add highlights. :) Γǻώή  ςτόŗm  18:21, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Doesn't her left ear need ear pink? Raven flight 92 23:06, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

Lightningice (W) - For Approval
Nothing to say but there is one 'Can I join' Mist  cloud  13:50, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Ah, Tigerfang's wonderful mate. As for the image, just darken the shading. -- Nighty You know what... I like pie. XD 13:53, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

I really can't add any or darken the shading! :O Mist  cloud  13:57, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Then I would say that it's good, but the right (her right) eye looks a little weird. Can you fix it? -- Nighty You know what... I like pie. XD 14:20, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Mist  cloud  14:24, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

You need to darken the shading. I see no shading right now. Blur her white parts more. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 15:03, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

My shading tool doesn't want to work. :( Mist  cloud  22:49, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

Try to blur it more and shade it more. Zoe27 11:18, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the white-to-grey bits and highlights. darken ear pink. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  18:19, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Can someone help me with the shading? Mist cloud  20:33, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Rainbowpelt (W) For Approval.
I've only just joined so this will kinda be my first charart(I did do one for Blues charart contests,though.) Shes a Darkclan warrior that I put up on Darkclans page,I think i'm allowed her,because they said I could have Goldenpath so here she is. What do you think? Zoe27 14:44, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

No offense, but she looks nothing like a rainbow. I suggest making curved rainbow coloured lines on the body, facing the shoulder. Blue the green more and yellow, and add shading. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 14:47, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Okay,should i try to put a rainbow along her back? I'll do that. Zoe27 17:21, April 18, 2010 (UTC) I tried to put a kind of rainbow on her back but it didnt work so i did this,which one is better? Zoe27 17:33, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Just curious, what are the three stripes on the green leg? ddevans96z Huzzah! 00:44, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

They are all 7 colours of the rainbow,would u like me to make them bigger so they are easier to see? Zoe27 08:26, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

No, the red, green, and, blue stripes on the top of the green leg. ddevans96z Huzzah! 13:11, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

I know,I think its a rainbow,aswell. Could u make it larger,Zoe? Clar ris  sa! :)  18:17, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

I was a rainbow. Zoe27 09:20, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded -Any better? I made the rainbow larger and filled in blank squares i didnt even know existed! Zoe27 09:20, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Which image are you keeping? The one with or without the rainbow on the haunch. Add shading and blur the markings-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   16:34, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe you could redo this to look like her leader image? Just a suggestion, and you don't have to do that. Raven flight 92 23:26, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Ravenflight, they're two completely different cats.  Blaze -Pelt   Huzzah  00:00, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, I'm clueless XD. Add some ear pink, maybe. <font color="#50c878">Raven <font color="#6495ed">flight <font color="#9966cc">92 00:10, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

And it still needs shading and highlights  Blaze -Pelt   Huzzah  00:14, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:13, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded -I blured the transitions a little,i thought this was nessessary,and blured it more,also which image looks better? <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 08:12, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Which image are you keeping?-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   22:40, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

Yellowpool (W) up for approval.
Well here she is. Not sure if she's good enough. I'll propably have to redo her. What do you think? Clar ris  sa! :)  17:04, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Well, she needs ear pink, and I can't really see the pupil and eye-white. And I can't really see the shading, I'd darken and blur it

 ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 17:25, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

I don't see how she is yellow. *shrugs* darken the ear pink and shading-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:15, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

I'll redo it and darken the ear pink. Clar ris  sa! :)  08:42, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded -I darkened the ear pink and did the eye white. Is it better? Clar ris  sa! :)  08:52, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading and make the pupil bigger.-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   16:13, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like you ran the saturation tool over the image. I think it's a too bright of a ginger. Quailflight 11:36, April 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded -I comepletely redid her. Better? Clar ris  sa! :)  10:52, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

Fix the ear pink and darken shading-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   03:09, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded -I changed the ear pink and shaded more. Better? Clar ris  sa! :)  07:52, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Make the highlight's larger. Add some shading to, but very good! Γǻώή ςτόŗm  18:04, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Icemist (D) -- For Approval
Brookheart I must not give up... 00:21, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading in the middle of the image. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 15:47, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Blur shading, lighten ear pink. But very good Maple! Γǻώή ςτόŗm  18:03, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 08:34, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

Pansyfur (W) for approval
Here she is! What do you think? Please comment! Clar ris  sa! :)  09:42, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

maybe add some shadin to Pansyfur?pebble2pineow 15:03, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the boundaries between brown and white, and add shading, but other than that, it looks pretty good.  Blaze -Pelt   Huzzah  15:04, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading, blur white transitions, make pupils bigger and add white and fix the ear pink. Maybe add more white onto it because she is "brown and white" this just looks brown with white markings.-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   17:56, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded -I blured the white transitions,shaded,fixed the ear pink and made the pupils bigger. Better? Clar ris  sa! :)  18:47, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Look at the other approved images to see what the ear pink should look like. Darken the shading more and blur the white transitions more-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   00:40, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded -I blured the white transition a little bit more and I fixed the ear pink,I did it the way the approved images are. Clar ris  sa! :)  08:01, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading and highlights. Mist cloud  10:40, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading and highlights, also if Pansyfur is brown and white add some large white patches. :) Very good Clara! Γǻώή  ςτόŗm  18:02, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Darkdapple - For Approval
I'm not too proud of this...comments? -- Ice The stars will light your path... 19:40, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights and ear pink some more. <font color="#50c878">Raven <font color="#6495ed">flight <font color="#9966cc">92 01:05, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Make ear pink smaller. The chest looks a little awkward. Move it to connect to the chin. Get rid of the tail highlight and put it on the other side of the tail-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   01:43, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I re-did the shading on Pixlr, and blurred it as much as possible, But, come on! I needed to use Pixlr once in a while. ;) -- Ice The stars will light your path... 12:08, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Try making the white like this shape-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   00:02, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Done. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 12:04, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot more-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:45, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

I can't blur it a lot more. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 11:56, April 29, 2010 (UTC)

Then try lightening it-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:51, April 29, 2010 (UTC)

I always imagined Darkdapple being much darker gray. . .  Mo    us    et    al    on    !!   19:40, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

Done! -- Hawkshine Partyyyy! 21:59, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

The shading is very dark-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   03:09, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

The shading needs the most work. Its look shiny too so darken the highlights. ;) Γǻώή  ςτόŗm  17:59, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Dappled Sunlight (Ki) - For Approval
Well, it's my first charart! Constructments? <font color="#50c878">Raven <font color="#6495ed">flight <font color="#9966cc">92 00:52, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Is this really your first attempt? It looks great to me!  Blaze -Pelt   Huzzah  01:13, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks! -beams proudly- Now does anyone have some suggestions for improvements? <font color="#50c878">Raven <font color="#6495ed">flight <font color="#9966cc">92 01:24, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good! But I'd make the spots more, irregular. They look a bit like polka-dots right now. Then darken them just a bit, so they're more visible  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:34, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

It's really good. Thicken the pupil. Darken the flecks. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 11:58, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded She looks like a little leopard now =). Constructments? <font color="#50c878">Raven <font color="#6495ed">flight <font color="#9966cc">92 21:17, April 29, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the markings and darken the shading-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   03:13, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading and add/make visible highlights. But very good. Blur markings! Γǻώή ςτόŗm  17:50, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry if I failed at the blurring. Some of the spots on her head were for whatever reason not blurred. Raven Fail! <font color="#50c878">Raven <font color="#6495ed">flight <font color="#9966cc">92 22:44, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

No, I think it looks wonderful! Blur the ear pink some more though. And the eyes need some depth. Take the highlight brush and set it at the smallest fuzzy brush. Put that highlight on one side of both the eyes. Then take the smallest size fuzzy burn tool, and put a bit of shading in the corner of the other side. I apologize if that's confusing xD  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:34, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Bluewing (W) - For Approval


Finally got off my lazy butt and made him. Comments? Batwing |  Dovefeather  10:47, April 27, 2010 (UTC)!

Darken the scar and lighten the eyes. Mist cloud  10:52, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

This is great, Blue. Darken the white transition and darken the haunch shading. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 11:57, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Add ear pink. Darken the shading some more-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:25, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Added ear pink (duh!), darkened shading & scar. I didn't want to lighten the eyes because they're often mentioned as very dark blue-black... :/ Fire, do you think this is ok? Batwing |  Dovefeather  19:46, April 28, 2010 (UTC)!

He is good, just blur the ear pink more. 火の毛皮 17:35, April 29, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and scar, make the ear pink and scar pinker and blur the hghlights and shading. Very good though Blue ;) Γǻώή  ςτόŗm  17:49, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Batwing  |  Dovefeather  22:51, May 6, 2010 (UTC)!

I can barley see the eyes clearly. Mist cloud  22:55, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

Rainfeather - For Approval
She is back, and made on Pixlr! Construments? -- Ice The stars will light your path... 12:11, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

blur or smudge the shading maybe? and enlarge the glint in the eye toopebble2pineow 00:00, April 30, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights and add a white bit to the eye. Darken ear pink and blur it ;) Γǻώή  ςτόŗm  17:47, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. Batwing |  Dovefeather  11:10, May 6, 2010 (UTC)!

Crowfire - For Approval
here she is. Comments? I like my texture....I think the shading looks good. ;) -- Ice The stars will light your path... 22:05, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights look more like patches of lighter fur than highlights. Blur them some more. <font color="#50c878">Raven <font color="#6495ed">flight <font color="#9966cc">92 22:16, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. They wouldn't blur anymore. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 23:12, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

try the smudge tool maybe?pebble2pineow 23:59, April 29, 2010 (UTC)

I did, but it made the image worse-looking. -- Hawkshine Partyyyy! 21:58, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

Darken ear pink, blur shading and blur ear pink-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   03:14, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Add some more highlights to the tail, darken and blur ear pink. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  17:45, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Brownbird - For Approval
here she is. :3 My second tortie on all wikis, and first on this. I think this is my best work, personally. *winks* Let the construments begin! -- Ice The stars will light your path... 23:12, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

isnt Brownbird a she-cat? maybe the eye should have a glint in it and then eyelash thing too, also maybe make the earpink..more...pink? `pebble2pineow 23:58, April 29, 2010 (UTC)

She is a she-cat! XD lol, Sorry about Golden! But anyway about the image, Change her blank into a she-cat thenmake her eyes like chocolate pudding. ;) Mist  cloud  17:14, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

Cnahge the blank, darken the ear pink and blur the highlights. Very good though ICy ;) Γǻώή  ςτόŗm  17:43, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

There is no highlights. -- Hawkshine Partyyyy! 21:19, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Isn't there? Blur the shading then add highlights. There ahould have been some anyway. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  15:42, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

Acually, there don't have to be highlights on an image.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 17:04, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

Songkit (Ki) For Approval
Here is Songkit. Constrctments? --<span style="color:lime;font-family:Century Gothic;background:black;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">Moonpelt is a Jayfeather fan :3 00:59, April 29, 2010 (UTC)

This is good, but the music notes could be a little more sharp, and not as blurred. 火の毛皮 20:11, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Conatructments? <font color="#66FF99"> <font color="#66FF99">¿ <font color="#66CCCC">Moonpelt <font color="#66FF99">? 16:40, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink lighter and make the eye colours a little less 'neon'. ;) Γǻώή  ςτόŗm  16:57, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

The music notes look a bit square now  Blaze -Pelt   Huzzah  23:53, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? <font color="#66CCCC">Moonpelt <font color="#66FF99">? 04:32, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

Blackheart - For Approval
Epic Fail. Comments?-- Quailflight 11:34, April 29, 2010 (UTC)

It's good, Quail! Blur the ear pink some more. <font color="#50c878">Raven <font color="#6495ed">flight <font color="#9966cc">92 02:30, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. It won't blur anymore than that.-- Quailflight 11:16, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Blur all the shading. But it's very good. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  16:50, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Shadefrost - For Approval
Here he is. I have to say, I'm pretty proud of him. I cannot blur the shading anymore. D: Anyways, comments? -- Hawkshine Partyyyy! 12:13, April 30, 2010 (UTC)

Very good, just darken the highlights and blur the ear pink and shading! ;) Γǻώή  ςτόŗm  16:48, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

The shading is unblurable. I tried to make the back shading like Shade's shading and the highlights. -- Hawkshine Partyyyy! 21:18, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Good, but please make sure your character has a page before you post an image for him. Batwing |  Dovefeather  11:10, May 6, 2010 (UTC)!

Darkfur - For Approval
He is back! I am so tired of redoing him.  Blaze -Pelt   Huzzah  21:44, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

Blur verything firstly, especially the shading and highlights then make the ear pink darker and blur it. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  16:47, May 3, 2010 (UTC)'

Reuploaded I tried, I'll redo it later  Blaze -Pelt   Huzzah  00:53, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

Blur everything.-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   22:44, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

Rubystar (W) For Approval
Here she is! Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:01, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

Amazing, as always, Night. :) Just blur the ear pink a little more. Batwing  |  Dovefeather  18:15, May 2, 2010 (UTC)!

Reuploaded: Thanks, Blue! I blurred the ear pink as much as I could  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:09, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

I love this ! Make the ear pink lighter and I can see nothing wrong! Γǻώή ςτόŗm  16:46, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks! But, the ear pink is the exact same color as her leader and deputy images; should I lighten it anyway?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:15, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

I actually see nothing wrong with this. Comments before approval? Batwing |  Dovefeather  11:11, May 6, 2010 (UTC)!

Fang (D) For Approval
This was a tough one... Constructments? --<font color="#66FF99"> <font color="#66FF99">¿ <font color="#66CCCC">Moonpelt <font color="#66FF99">? 04:27, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

The claws on one of the back paws look like they're growing out of the top of the paw. <font color="#50c878">Raven <font color="#6495ed">flight <font color="#9966cc">92 17:56, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading and like Raven said, the claws at the back look like they are coming out of the top of the paw ;) Γǻώή  ςτόŗm

Blur shading, fix claws, and blur highlights. Also, to get awsomer looking claws, choose one light shade of the one you have now, the color you have now, and a darker color, now make it look like their acatually bones/teeth! It works! :P EARTH DAY!   Make sure you recycle! You get $!  20:32, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? <font color="#66CCCC">Moonpelt <font color="#66FF99">? 04:26, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

Can you just blur the highlights a little bit more? Do that, and this will be ready. :) Batwing  |  Dovefeather  11:12, May 6, 2010 (UTC)!

Mintfrost (A) - For Approval
Nothing much to say. I love torties.-- Quailflight 12:03, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Very good! Blur the shading some more and the ear pink. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  16:30, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED-- Quailflight 11:50, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

Fawndapple (Ki)- For Approval
Γǻώή ςτόŗm  18:59, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Sharpclaw Blanks - For Approval
These are really horrible...  ddevans96z Science Project... 01:41, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

Try making them smaller. -- N i g h t s h i n e    {   03:23, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not going to have time to work on these for weeks, could you archive them please?  ddevans96z Science Project... 00:25, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

Barkfoot (A) For Approval
Constructments? --<font color="#66CCCC">Moonpelt <font color="#66FF99">? 04:34, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink: it's hard to see. <font color="#50c878">Raven <font color="#6495ed">flight <font color="#9966cc">92 23:14, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

Add a scar to his face. Weird, I have a cat named Barkfoot on my wiki!-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:45, May 6, 2010 (UTC)