Cats of the Clans Wiki talk:Character Art Project

Batwing (L) - For Approval
I don't know what the heck is up with her shading/highlights, it won't blur anymore. :/ Someone help me out? Midnightpelt ♥ 02:04, April 12, 2010 (UTC)!

What do you use? (pixlr, gimp, etc) Mo  onp  elt   ۞  04:21, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

She uses gimp

 ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:24, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

You could go to sircle fuzzy on brush sizes and make it a little bigger. Thats what I di fir my highlights. Mo onp  elt   ۞  13:13, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Grr, what is wrong with this, it looked like 1000 times better in GIMP. Midnightpelt ♥ 00:20, April 13, 2010 (UTC)!

Lighten the white transition. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 22:50, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

It's supposed to be silver. Midnightpelt ♥ 19:17, April 14, 2010 (UTC)!

The lineart isn't visible. Lighten the black so it's a very dark gray-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   16:57, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink, it's too dark at the moment. And the silver needs to be darkened, since it looks grey right now. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 01:20, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

@Nightshine- you can see the lineart if you look closely. It is a dark gray, not black. But you should probably lighten it some. Raven flight 92 23:10, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Huh, well, that looks awful. :/ Batwing  |  Dovefeather  19:49, April 28, 2010 (UTC)!

Blur shading, make ear pink triangular and add highlights. :) Γǻώή  ςτόŗm  18:21, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Doesn't her left ear need ear pink? Raven flight 92 23:06, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

Blue has left. Will archive later-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:00, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Oh no you didn't! Batwing  |  Dovefeather  00:42, May 10, 2010 (UTC)!

Please work on this or it will be declined-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   03:55, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Lightningice (W) - For Approval
Nothing to say but there is one 'Can I join' Mist  cloud  13:50, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Ah, Tigerfang's wonderful mate. As for the image, just darken the shading. -- Nighty You know what... I like pie. XD 13:53, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

I really can't add any or darken the shading! :O Mist  cloud  13:57, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Then I would say that it's good, but the right (her right) eye looks a little weird. Can you fix it? -- Nighty You know what... I like pie. XD 14:20, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Mist  cloud  14:24, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

You need to darken the shading. I see no shading right now. Blur her white parts more. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 15:03, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

My shading tool doesn't want to work. :( Mist  cloud  22:49, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

Try to blur it more and shade it more. Zoe27 11:18, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the white-to-grey bits and highlights. darken ear pink. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  18:19, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Can someone help me with the shading? Mist cloud  20:33, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

I will, just hang on a sec-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   22:59, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded darkened shading and added highlights-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   00:01, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Thank you so much Nightshine! PaRtY In TeH UsA!  00:06, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Rainbowpelt (W) For Approval.
I've only just joined so this will kinda be my first charart(I did do one for Blues charart contests,though.) Shes a Darkclan warrior that I put up on Darkclans page,I think i'm allowed her,because they said I could have Goldenpath so here she is. What do you think? Zoe27 14:44, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

No offense, but she looks nothing like a rainbow. I suggest making curved rainbow coloured lines on the body, facing the shoulder. Blue the green more and yellow, and add shading. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 14:47, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Okay,should i try to put a rainbow along her back? I'll do that. Zoe27 17:21, April 18, 2010 (UTC) I tried to put a kind of rainbow on her back but it didnt work so i did this,which one is better? Zoe27 17:33, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Just curious, what are the three stripes on the green leg? ddevans96z Huzzah! 00:44, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

They are all 7 colours of the rainbow,would u like me to make them bigger so they are easier to see? Zoe27 08:26, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

No, the red, green, and, blue stripes on the top of the green leg. ddevans96z Huzzah! 13:11, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

I know,I think its a rainbow,aswell. Could u make it larger,Zoe? Clar ris  sa! :)  18:17, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

I was a rainbow. Zoe27 09:20, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded -Any better? I made the rainbow larger and filled in blank squares i didnt even know existed! Zoe27 09:20, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Which image are you keeping? The one with or without the rainbow on the haunch. Add shading and blur the markings-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   16:34, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe you could redo this to look like her leader image? Just a suggestion, and you don't have to do that. Raven flight 92 23:26, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Ravenflight, they're two completely different cats.  Blaze -Pelt   Huzzah  00:00, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, I'm clueless XD. Add some ear pink, maybe. <font color="#50c878">Raven <font color="#6495ed">flight <font color="#9966cc">92 00:10, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

And it still needs shading and highlights  Blaze -Pelt   Huzzah  00:14, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:13, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded -I blured the transitions a little,i thought this was nessessary,and blured it more,also which image looks better? <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 08:12, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Which image are you keeping?-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   22:40, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

Which is better? <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 13:43, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

I think you should re-do it. Make sure to add shading and blur all the markings-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:01, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Icemist (D) -- For Approval
Brookheart I must not give up... 00:21, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading in the middle of the image. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 15:47, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Blur shading, lighten ear pink. But very good Maple! Γǻώή ςτόŗm  18:03, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 08:34, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

Fixed. Brookheart I must not give up... 23:11, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

Blur ear pink and middle shading-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:02, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Pansyfur (W) for approval
Here she is! What do you think? Please comment! Clar ris  sa! :)  09:42, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

maybe add some shadin to Pansyfur?pebble2pineow 15:03, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the boundaries between brown and white, and add shading, but other than that, it looks pretty good.  Blaze -Pelt   Huzzah  15:04, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading, blur white transitions, make pupils bigger and add white and fix the ear pink. Maybe add more white onto it because she is "brown and white" this just looks brown with white markings.-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   17:56, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded -I blured the white transitions,shaded,fixed the ear pink and made the pupils bigger. Better? Clar ris  sa! :)  18:47, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Look at the other approved images to see what the ear pink should look like. Darken the shading more and blur the white transitions more-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   00:40, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded -I blured the white transition a little bit more and I fixed the ear pink,I did it the way the approved images are. Clar ris  sa! :)  08:01, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading and highlights. Mist cloud  10:40, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading and highlights, also if Pansyfur is brown and white add some large white patches. :) Very good Clara! Γǻώή  ςτόŗm  18:02, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Where should I put the patches? Clar ris  sa! :)  10:33, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

You wanna put it everywhere also highlights aren't neccesary she only has to put them if she wants to but you do have to put shading. <font color="#333399">Mo <font color="#3333CC">onp <font color="#333399 ">elt  <font color="#3366FF ">₪   19:04, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded - I put a few spots in. Does it look nicer or should i get rid of them? Clar ris  sa! :)  17:41, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

I think it's better. CBA? <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 07:30, May 12, 2010 (UTC)

Dappled Sunlight (Ki) - For Approval
Well, it's my first charart! Constructments? <font color="#50c878">Raven <font color="#6495ed">flight <font color="#9966cc">92 00:52, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Is this really your first attempt? It looks great to me!  Blaze -Pelt   Huzzah  01:13, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks! -beams proudly- Now does anyone have some suggestions for improvements? <font color="#50c878">Raven <font color="#6495ed">flight <font color="#9966cc">92 01:24, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good! But I'd make the spots more, irregular. They look a bit like polka-dots right now. Then darken them just a bit, so they're more visible  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:34, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

It's really good. Thicken the pupil. Darken the flecks. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 11:58, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded She looks like a little leopard now =). Constructments? <font color="#50c878">Raven <font color="#6495ed">flight <font color="#9966cc">92 21:17, April 29, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the markings and darken the shading-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   03:13, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading and add/make visible highlights. But very good. Blur markings! Γǻώή ςτόŗm  17:50, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry if I failed at the blurring. Some of the spots on her head were for whatever reason not blurred. Raven Fail! <font color="#50c878">Raven <font color="#6495ed">flight <font color="#9966cc">92 22:44, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

No, I think it looks wonderful! Blur the ear pink some more though. And the eyes need some depth. Take the highlight brush and set it at the smallest fuzzy brush. Put that highlight on one side of both the eyes. Then take the smallest size fuzzy burn tool, and put a bit of shading in the corner of the other side. I apologize if that's confusing xD  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:34, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

It wasn't that confusing. But just what do you mean by "smallest fuzzy brush"? The smallest one is half the size of the eye. <font color="#50c878">Raven <font color="#6495ed">flight <font color="#9966cc">92 22:13, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Bluewing (W) - For Approval


Finally got off my lazy butt and made him. Comments? Batwing |  Dovefeather  10:47, April 27, 2010 (UTC)!

Darken the scar and lighten the eyes. Mist cloud  10:52, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

This is great, Blue. Darken the white transition and darken the haunch shading. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 11:57, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Add ear pink. Darken the shading some more-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:25, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Added ear pink (duh!), darkened shading & scar. I didn't want to lighten the eyes because they're often mentioned as very dark blue-black... :/ Fire, do you think this is ok? Batwing |  Dovefeather  19:46, April 28, 2010 (UTC)!

He is good, just blur the ear pink more. 火の毛皮 17:35, April 29, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and scar, make the ear pink and scar pinker and blur the hghlights and shading. Very good though Blue ;) Γǻώή  ςτόŗm  17:49, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Batwing  |  Dovefeather  22:51, May 6, 2010 (UTC)!

I can barley see the eyes clearly. Mist cloud  22:55, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

You're not supposed to; they are always mentioned as a very (very x 20) dark blue, or a dark blue-black. Fire said this was how she pictued them. Batwing |  Dovefeather  02:01, May 7, 2010 (UTC)!

This looks really good. Maybe blur the white transition on the paws a bit more. <font color="#50c878">Raven <font color="#6495ed">flight <font color="#9966cc">92 18:03, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Declined. Will archive later.-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:02, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Oh no you didn't! Batwing  |  Dovefeather  00:43, May 10, 2010 (UTC)!

Rainfeather - For Approval
She is back, and made on Pixlr! Construments? -- Ice The stars will light your path... 12:11, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

blur or smudge the shading maybe? and enlarge the glint in the eye toopebble2pineow 00:00, April 30, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights and add a white bit to the eye. Darken ear pink and blur it ;) Γǻώή  ςτόŗm  17:47, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. Batwing |  Dovefeather  11:10, May 6, 2010 (UTC)!

Reuploaded. -- Icestorm Peace 12:08, May 7, 2010 (UTC)

Darkken the eye color. <font color="#333399">Mo <font color="#3333CC">onp <font color="#333399 ">elt  <font color="#3366FF ">₪   19:24, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Songkit (Ki) For Approval
Here is Songkit. Constrctments? --<span style="color:lime;font-family:Century Gothic;background:black;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">Moonpelt is a Jayfeather fan :3 00:59, April 29, 2010 (UTC)

This is good, but the music notes could be a little more sharp, and not as blurred. 火の毛皮 20:11, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Conatructments? <font color="#66FF99"> <font color="#66FF99">¿ <font color="#66CCCC">Moonpelt <font color="#66FF99">? 16:40, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink lighter and make the eye colours a little less 'neon'. ;) Γǻώή  ςτόŗm  16:57, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

The music notes look a bit square now  Blaze -Pelt   Huzzah  23:53, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? <font color="#66CCCC">Moonpelt <font color="#66FF99">? 04:32, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading and lighten the black paws. Make the pupils bigger-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:05, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Blackheart - For Approval
Epic Fail. Comments?-- Quailflight 11:34, April 29, 2010 (UTC)

It's good, Quail! Blur the ear pink some more. <font color="#50c878">Raven <font color="#6495ed">flight <font color="#9966cc">92 02:30, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. It won't blur anymore than that.-- Quailflight 11:16, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Blur all the shading. But it's very good. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  16:50, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. It won't blur anymore. *destroys mouse*-- Quailflight 06:06, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great! CBA?-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:05, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Shadefrost - For Approval
Here he is. I have to say, I'm pretty proud of him. I cannot blur the shading anymore. D: Anyways, comments? -- Hawkshine Partyyyy! 12:13, April 30, 2010 (UTC)

Very good, just darken the highlights and blur the ear pink and shading! ;) Γǻώή  ςτόŗm  16:48, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

The shading is unblurable. I tried to make the back shading like Shade's shading and the highlights. -- Hawkshine Partyyyy! 21:18, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Good, but please make sure your character has a page before you post an image for him. Batwing |  Dovefeather  11:10, May 6, 2010 (UTC)!

The shading it too dark and the highlights are too bright-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:06, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Hm...I'll let someone else work on him for now. -- Icestorm Peace 23:11, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Darkfur - For Approval
He is back! I am so tired of redoing him.  Blaze -Pelt   Huzzah  21:44, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

Blur verything firstly, especially the shading and highlights then make the ear pink darker and blur it. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  16:47, May 3, 2010 (UTC)'

Reuploaded I tried, I'll redo it later  Blaze -Pelt   Huzzah  00:53, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

Blur everything.-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   22:44, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the haunches Clar  ris  sa! :)  18:42, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Fang (D) For Approval
This was a tough one... Constructments? --<font color="#66FF99"> <font color="#66FF99">¿ <font color="#66CCCC">Moonpelt <font color="#66FF99">? 04:27, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

The claws on one of the back paws look like they're growing out of the top of the paw. <font color="#50c878">Raven <font color="#6495ed">flight <font color="#9966cc">92 17:56, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading and like Raven said, the claws at the back look like they are coming out of the top of the paw ;) Γǻώή  ςτόŗm

Blur shading, fix claws, and blur highlights. Also, to get awsomer looking claws, choose one light shade of the one you have now, the color you have now, and a darker color, now make it look like their acatually bones/teeth! It works! :P EARTH DAY!   Make sure you recycle! You get $!  20:32, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? <font color="#66CCCC">Moonpelt <font color="#66FF99">? 04:26, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

Can you just blur the highlights a little bit more? Do that, and this will be ready. :) Batwing  |  Dovefeather  11:12, May 6, 2010 (UTC)!

Can't really blur it anymore. :(~ <font color="#333399">Mo <font color="#3333CC">onp <font color="#333399 ">elt  <font color="#3366FF ">₪   03:58, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Try making the collar rounder-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:07, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

??? --<font color="#333399">Mo <font color="#3333CC">onp <font color="#333399 ">elt  <font color="#3366FF ">₪   00:00, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Look at Kaito's image-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   00:09, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Fawndapple (Ki)- For Approval
Γǻώή ςτόŗm  18:59, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

This is great,Fawny! Just blur the back a bit more. Clar ris  sa! :)  19:25, May 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred the back-shading and flecks. ;) Γǻώή  ςτόŗm  12:13, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

Darken ear pink and make pupils bigger-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:07, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? Γǻώή ςτόŗm  08:46, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Where's the image? <font color="#50c878">Raven <font color="#6495ed">flight <font color="#9966cc">92 23:51, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Here. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  15:30, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Barkfoot (A) For Approval
Constructments? --<font color="#66CCCC">Moonpelt <font color="#66FF99">? 04:34, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink: it's hard to see. <font color="#50c878">Raven <font color="#6495ed">flight <font color="#9966cc">92 23:14, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

Add a scar to his face. Weird, I have a cat named Barkfoot on my wiki!-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:45, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

His article says that he got the scar as a warrior, so he doesn't need one for this image. <font color="#50c878">Raven <font color="#6495ed">flight <font color="#9966cc">92 23:50, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? <font color="#333399">Mo <font color="#3333CC">onp <font color="#333399 ">elt  <font color="#3366FF ">₪   03:56, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great! CBA?-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:08, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

I think it should be CBA stage now. Clar ris  sa! :)  18:44, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Wave(PH) - For Approval
I am really proud of him. I really like rping him as well as the annoying Wolf. Mist cloud  04:01, May 7, 2010 (UTC)

His nose looks white. If you colored it in, make it a bit brighter/darker. <font color="#50c878">Raven <font color="#6495ed">flight <font color="#9966cc">92 20:38, May 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Well here he is. PaRtY In TeH UsA!  23:09, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm... blur the highlights some more. <font color="#50c878">Raven <font color="#6495ed">flight <font color="#9966cc">92 23:50, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Fawndapple!
I made Fawndapple's medicine cat image and put her up for approval becuase it said that she was a medicine cat. 'It' was the needed page and it siad: Fawndapple Kit, MCA and then MC. I did her because it said. The image was declined but if she was never a medicine cat, why did it say that she was? Γǻώή ςτόŗm  11:50, May 7, 2010 (UTC)

Its probably a typo error,if it is,just wait until the medcat apprentice pixels have come out,and do him then :) Clar  ris  sa! :)  19:24, May 7, 2010 (UTC)

Well, that "articles that need images" page is a bit unorganized; I think we should start paying a lot more attention to it.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:39, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

If you'd like, I can sort that out for everyone. Everyone has duties to perform and I'd like t help out. I don't really want another users to do an image listed here that isn't needed. ;) Γǻώή  ςτόŗm  08:12, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

Brownkit up for approval.
I'm quite proud of this! What do you think? Clar ris  sa! :)  19:18, May 7, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, he's really good. :) Add a highlight to the tail, brighten the highlights, blur them and blur the orange tranistion. Darken the earpink, too. Other than that, it's amazing! -- Icestorm Peace 20:11, May 7, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded -I blurred the highlights,blurred the orange transition and added highlights to the tail. Better? Clar ris  sa! :)  10:30, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

To do the highlights, pick a bigger brush size, I use 70/50. Make the ear pink lighter as well. ;) Very good though. Γǻώή  ςτόŗm  12:06, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

 Reupladed -I did highlights and used a bigger brush. I also blurred more. Any better? Clar ris  sa! :)  17:06, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Blur it more<font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 07:28, May 12, 2010 (UTC)

Ashpaw (A) - For Approval


The highlights are kinda weird. Anyway, constructments? <font color="#50c878">Raven <font color="#6495ed">flight <font color="#9966cc">92 00:23, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

PS- Echo, let me know if I got anything glaringly wrong with his image.

This is very good, blur shading/highlights and ear pink and add/make more visible highlights. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  08:15, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

Just blur the shading. Clar ris  sa! :)  10:10, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

The shading looks good, it just needs to be darkened. Blur the ear pink, too. -- Icestorm Peace 13:00, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Clap your hands if My Immortal is the saddest song you've ever heard! -claps wildly- Anyway, constructments? <font color="#50c878">Raven <font color="#6495ed">flight <font color="#9966cc">92 18:58, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

-Claps hands- Wow Raven. This is how i imaged him. Good job! Mist cloud  21:25, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

Centre the ear pink-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:10, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Talon of Mouse (Mouse) - For Approval
Here she is! Comments? My first prey hunter. :) -- Icestorm Peace 16:01, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

This is great, Iceh! Blur the highlights some more. <font color="#50c878">Raven <font color="#6495ed">flight <font color="#9966cc">92 21:26, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

Can I have help with blurring it? -- Icestorm Peace 21:42, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

Blur it some more, use pixlr if GIMP doesn't work. Clar ris  sa! :)  18:47, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Sandmist - For Approval
Here she is. :) -- Icestorm Peace 16:27, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the earpink. <font color="#333399">Mo <font color="#3333CC">onp <font color="#333399 ">elt  <font color="#3366FF ">₪   19:15, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

I think its fine, without darkening the ear pink. Clar ris  sa! :)  18:48, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

No the ear pink does need to be darkened at least a tad. <font color="#333399">Mo <font color="#3333CC">onp <font color="#333399 ">elt  <font color="#3366FF ">₪   02:21, May 12, 2010 (UTC)

Ashblaze(BC) -for approval
ah well here's ashblazepebble2pineow 00:41, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Wow that was quick. Blur the highlights and take away the ear pink away on the ear farthest to us. PaRtY In TeH UsA!  00:44, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

The eyes look orange. <font color="#333399">Mo <font color="#3333CC">onp <font color="#333399 ">elt  <font color="#3366FF ">₪   03:52, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Blur it more. Some cats have orange eyes. Clar ris  sa! :)  18:50, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Russetstar (L) For Approval
Sorry Fawnstorm I thought I might try. Constructments? --<font color="#333399">Mo <font color="#3333CC">onp <font color="#333399 ">elt  <font color="#3366FF ">₪   16:46, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Its okay, I love this. :) Blur the shading a bit more and then brighten the highlights. ;) Blur ear pink and make it lighter. :3 Very good though mOnn. And don't worry, I 'm not really bothered. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  08:18, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit more. It's a great image, Moon. <font color="#50c878">Raven <font color="#6495ed">flight <font color="#9966cc">92 21:28, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

PS - I meant ear pink. Sorry xD

Shinekit(M) (Ki) For Approval
I like her. Constructments? --<font color="#333399">Mo <font color="#3333CC">onp <font color="#333399 ">elt  <font color="#3366FF ">₪   17:25, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

It looks good. Maybe blur the patches some more. <font color="#50c878">Raven <font color="#6495ed">flight <font color="#9966cc">92 23:50, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Grayheart (W) For Approval
I like this one. Thanks for some of the shading tips Nightshine! Or at least I tried... LOL ... Constructments? --<font color="#333399">Mo <font color="#3333CC">onp <font color="#333399 ">elt  <font color="#3366FF ">₪   19:48, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great! Lighten the eyes a bit-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:11, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? <font color="#333399">Mo <font color="#3333CC">onp <font color="#333399 ">elt  <font color="#3366FF ">₪   23:19, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

There are some white pixels on the haunch, left back leg and front left arm-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:25, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? <font color="#333399">Mo <font color="#3333CC">onp <font color="#333399 ">elt  <font color="#3366FF ">₪   23:29, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

He looks good! Just brighten the highlights a tad. -- Icestorm Peace 12:10, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? <font color="#333399">Mo <font color="#3333CC">onp <font color="#333399 ">elt  <font color="#3366FF ">₪   02:25, May 12, 2010 (UTC)

Flowercloud (W) For Approval
I LOVE this one. Constructments? <font color="#333399">Mo <font color="#3333CC">onp <font color="#333399 ">elt  <font color="#3366FF ">₪   20:19, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Looks awesome! Blur the arm shading a bit and darken the ear pink-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:11, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? <font color="#333399">Mo <font color="#3333CC">onp <font color="#333399 ">elt  <font color="#3366FF ">₪   23:40, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

on the tail it looks like you put a white line between the color and lineart. PaRtY In TeH UsA!  21:10, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Volefur (W) For Approval
Constructments? --<font color="#333399">Mo <font color="#3333CC">onp <font color="#333399 ">elt  <font color="#3366FF ">₪   20:52, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

This is really great, Moonpelt! Blur the gray transition some more.

Reuploaded Thanks! Remember to sign your post with four ~'s. Constructments? <font color="#333399">Mo <font color="#3333CC">onp <font color="#333399 ">elt  <font color="#3366FF ">₪   21:45, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

What are those blue lines on the top of the ears? Is it a Darkclan cat? Clar ris  sa! :)  18:51, May 10, 2010 (UTC)


 * Clarrisa: Volefur is a brownish-gray tom with blue-ish ears and amber eyes. By "blue-ish" I think Nightwhisker meant "blue-gray". Batwing  |  Dovefeather  20:22, May 10, 2010 (UTC)!

Blur the shading on the back some more. It looks really good! <font color="#50c878">Raven <font color="#6495ed">flight <font color="#9966cc">92 22:10, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Tawnypaw (A) - For Approval
I used a new blurring style. Comments?-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:55, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

There is some blurred line art. <font color="#333399">Mo <font color="#3333CC">onp <font color="#333399 ">elt  <font color="#3366FF ">₪   23:58, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I tried fixing it-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   00:08, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

There still is some [blurred lineart] on the paws, face, and tail. Batwing |  Dovefeather  20:18, May 10, 2010 (UTC)!

I can't see it. Or does Raven just need a stronger prescription on her glasses? xD <font color="#50c878">Raven <font color="#6495ed">flight <font color="#9966cc">92 22:09, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Berrypaw (A) - For Approval
Comments?-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:55, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

This is great, just blur it some more. Clar ris  sa! :)  18:53, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Blur what?-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   03:54, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

This is very good Night. I'd blur the shading slightly. But I like this. :) Γǻώή  ςτόŗm  18:32, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

This is beautiful, Night! I don't really have anything to say about it that hasn't already been said =) <font color="#50c878">Raven <font color="#6495ed">flight <font color="#9966cc">92 21:27, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Rosevine (W)- For Approval
HorridSnowstorm 02:39, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the markings, ear pink and shading-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   03:54, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading and darken it. -- Icestorm Peace 12:09, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Snowstorm 02:39, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blur shading and make highlights more visible. If your having trouble with the blurring see this tutorial. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  18:30, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Beechkit (K) - For Approval
Although he's not born yet, I decided to make his Charart in advance. For being my first one, I think it looks pretty good. =) Construction   Worker   Do you need help?  22:01, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Make the earpink smaller and less bright, and blur it some more. Redo the eyes to make them look more like the other approved kit images. Add some shading and highlights. <font color="#50c878">Raven <font color="#6495ed">flight <font color="#9966cc">92 22:04, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Construction   Worker   Do you need help?  22:24, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Mintblaze(W) - For Approval
Ugh I hate it. XP My first tortie. Comments? PaRtY In TeH UsA!  22:07, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

It's not that bad, Echo! Darken the ear pink some. <font color="#50c878">Raven <font color="#6495ed">flight <font color="#9966cc">92 22:08, May 11, 2010 (UTC)