Cats of the Clans Wiki talk:Character Art Project

Pansyfur (W) for approval
Here she is! What do you think? Please comment! Clar ris  sa! :)  09:42, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

maybe add some shadin to Pansyfur?pebble2pineow 15:03, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the boundaries between brown and white, and add shading, but other than that, it looks pretty good.  Blaze -Pelt   Huzzah  15:04, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading, blur white transitions, make pupils bigger and add white and fix the ear pink. Maybe add more white onto it because she is "brown and white" this just looks brown with white markings.-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   17:56, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded -I blured the white transitions,shaded,fixed the ear pink and made the pupils bigger. Better? Clar ris  sa! :)  18:47, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Look at the other approved images to see what the ear pink should look like. Darken the shading more and blur the white transitions more-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   00:40, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded -I blured the white transition a little bit more and I fixed the ear pink,I did it the way the approved images are. Clar ris  sa! :)  08:01, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading and highlights. Mist cloud  10:40, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading and highlights, also if Pansyfur is brown and white add some large white patches. :) Very good Clara! Γǻώή  ςτόŗm  18:02, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Where should I put the patches? Clar ris  sa! :)  10:33, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

You wanna put it everywhere also highlights aren't neccesary she only has to put them if she wants to but you do have to put shading. Mo onp elt  ₪   19:04, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded - I put a few spots in. Does it look nicer or should i get rid of them? Clar ris  sa! :)  17:41, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

I think its better. CBA? Zoe27 18:58, May 12, 2010 (UTC)

'''This is not in the CBA stage. Zoe, you can not CBA or Approve images unless you are a senior warrior. Understood? Good.''' All I see is that the image needs shading and highlights. Quailflight 09:52, May 13, 2010 (UTC)

I've already added highlights, should I make them larger? Clar ris  sa! :)  09:40, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

Add or darken the shading. -- Nighty Lohan's PRE-DEPO PARTAYYY! 12:49, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded -I darkened the shading, better? Clar ris  sa! :)  16:17, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more reddish, and blur all of the white patches  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:33, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:18, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded -I darkened the ear-pink and blurred the shading. Better? Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 07:34, May 29, 2010 (UTC)

Darken shading and add shading to white patches-- Night s h i n e   R  05:54, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined-- Night s h i n e   R  22:21, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded -I added more shading and added shading to the white atches. Better? Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 17:04, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Add/darken the shading to the white patches a lot more. Blur them as well-- Night s h i n e   R  04:38, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, but I honestly can't blur the white patches anymore. Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 16:31, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Do you use GIMP? Add shading to the white patches-- Night s h i n e   R  22:40, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

No, I use pixlr, and i really can't blur those patches anymore, it just won't work, I'll try to add shading to them, though. Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 18:43, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Yellowpool (Q) for approval
Do you think this is okay? I did this because she is currently a queen and she was a queen when she had Brownkit(who is also up for approval), anyway, i don't think it is over the limit, and I know it looks bad. Clar ris  sa! :)  19:28, May 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the back, apart from that, it's fine Zoe27 08:19, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink should be enlarged.  ddevans96z Science Project... 18:43, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded -I enlargened the ear-pink and blured her back more, better? Clar ris  sa! :)  16:05, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

Center the ear pink more, and blur the shading and highlights  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:42, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:14, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded -I blured the shading and highlights. Is it better? I can't blur it any more. Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 17:59, May 29, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading and make the ear pink more red-- Night s h i n e   R  07:11, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

What colour should I use for ear-pink? Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 08:30, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Just a dark pink-- Night s h i n e   R  05:49, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined-- Night s h i n e   R  22:21, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded -Darkened the ear-pink. How else can I improve it? Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 17:08, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

It's a bit to electric pink now. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  17:16, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Can you give me a colour I could use? I am really stuck with trying to get the right one. Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 16:33, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Use this ear pink chart to get the ear color for a ginger cat. dde vans  96z  17:39, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded -Thanks Ddevans! I finally got my ear-pink right! Is it better? Or is there any othr way I can improve? Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 19:42, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Make nose colour darker and move the left <-- ear pink down. Blur the ear pink-- Night s h i n e   R  02:47, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

Icekit (I) - For Approval
Here she is! Comments? I think she's pretty good. ICEY Wait, that's not how you spell Icy! 23:47, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

I love it! But she needs white spots, like Snowstorm. Other wise, it looks awesome! Lightning that Burns Sky Unattractive... 02:59, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks, Snow! I added white spots. ICEY Wait, that's not how you spell Icy! 12:04, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe add some to her legs? You don't have to if you don't want too. :) Lightning that Burns Sky Unattractive... 15:06, May 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Midnighttail I will serve SkyClan with every breath I can take 12:01, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Make the pupils rounder.-- Night s h i n e   R  22:21, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

What do you mean by 'rounder'? Icefall Icy Winds 21:43, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

They look very rectangular right now. Get rid of the two corner pixels and it should look good-- Night s h i n e   R  02:18, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined-- Night s h i n e   R  02:48, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

Nightshine, I still don't get what you mean. Icefall★ Talk 01:14, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Remove the two bottom corner pixels of the pupil. dde vans  96z  01:16, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Can you show me an example? Icefall★ Talk 01:27, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Seriously? All you have to do is take the two pixels in the corners at the bottom of the pupil and make them the eye color dde  vans  96z  02:55, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Sorry, I was a little confused by what you meant. Is this better? Icefall★ Talk 14:33, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the sparkles abit. §₩1ƒ₮¥ Do da Kitteh bop! 14:36, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

If I blur them any more, they look gray when they're supposed to be white. Icefall★ Talk 14:43, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

CBA?--  Night s h i n e    ~  01:43, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Troutleap - For Approval
He came out more worse than I thought. -shudders- Probably my most fail of all my Chararts. Comments? Midnighttail I will serve SkyClan with every breath I can take 18:42, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

It doesn't look that bad. maybe blur the earpink a little more?  ddevans96z Goodbye Middle School!

He's great! I wish he will join Cloverheart one day... any way do what Dalton said and fix the eyes. 01:40, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink is fine, it's blurred enough. Do you mean the inside of the ear? That'll work. And Echo, he will someday. :) What do you mean by, 'fix the eyes'? Midnighttail I will serve SkyClan with every breath I can take 20:39, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Left eye's pupil looks weird.  Brook paw   The truth  21:06, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great! Darken the highlight on the chest just a tinsy bit; it kind of gives the impression that he has a white chest  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:46, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Darkened chest. Ice fall 20:26, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Comments? Icefall Icy Winds 12:09, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Add stripes to his left forearm. Darken chest highlight-- Night s h i n e   R  22:21, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Added stripes, darkened chest highlight. Icefall Icy Winds 17:52, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights more-- Night s h i n e   R  03:21, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Icefall★ Talk 01:21, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading, and add a highlight to the face  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:35, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Crookedpaw (A) For Approval
Yay :3 I like how he turned out  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 16:39, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Make the two back paws cream. Mo onp elt TM 17:12, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure that Icy based Crookedpaw's description entirely off of Crookedstar, who has cream only on on his front paws. However, I'll change it if Icy says otherwise  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 17:15, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, I did. But he doesn't need cream back paws. He's really good! Just darken the tail shading some. Ice fall 20:24, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Thanks :) Darkened tail shading  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 07:33, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

How did you do those awesome stripes? <3 Comments before approval? Ice fall 21:24, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry but can ou blur the stripes some more? They look a bit sharp. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  09:04, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

I really like them that way, it's how I always pictured Crookedpaw with a apprentice image. Ice fall 12:14, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, they do look sharp. Almost like they aren't blurred at all. Darken the ear pink-- Night s h i n e   R  05:10, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Darkened ear pink  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:29, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the markings more-- Night s h i n e   R  03:18, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded:  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 05:14, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

There's a bit of blurred lineart on the paw. Can you fix it? Icefall★ Talk 14:34, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Which paw?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 07:32, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Front one facing us. Icefall★ Talk 13:16, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Rainpaw (RC) (Ki) - For Approval
Here she is. I think I went fail on the white splash. Comments? Ice fall 23:19, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Comments? Icefall Icy Winds 12:04, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink and darken the shading. Also can you make his eye pupis a little smaller they look huge! LOL Nice job! Mo <font color="#00FF00">onp <font color="#009900">elt <font color="#00FF00">TM 02:45, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Icefall Icy Winds 21:37, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Make the eye white bigger. Make the pupils rounder. The stripes look strange-- Night s h i n e   R  04:40, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

I think their to straight. Make the white patch whiter. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  15:18, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Fawnstorm, it's white enough. Nightshine, what do you mean make pupils rounder? I like the stripes the way it is now. Icefall Icy Winds 17:49, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

I think it should be darker, her description says she's silver, but this looks extremely pale gray  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:30, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Icefall★  Talk 01:25, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Desaturate the ear pink--  Night s h i n e    ~  01:48, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Elmopaw (A) For Approval
He's wierd looking.... Comments? --<font color="#009900">Mo <font color="#00FF00">onp <font color="#009900">elt <font color="#00FF00">TM 18:56, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Ah...Elmopaw <3. His nose needs to be bigger and black. 火の毛皮 19:01, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? <font color="#009900">Mo <font color="#00FF00">onp <font color="#009900">elt <font color="#00FF00">TM 03:12, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Blur ear pink-- Night s h i n e   R  22:21, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? <font color="#009900"><font color="#00FF00">  M  o  o  n  p  e  l  t   1786  23:14, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Add eye colour. Make his nose red-- Night s h i n e   R  20:14, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Read the description it says beady black pupils. Also Elmo doesn't have an eye color. And FirePelt said up above to make the nose black and this is his character. <font color="#009900"><font color="#00FF00">  M  o  o  n  p  e  l  t   1786  20:34, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

His eyes are white right now. They should be all black or a dark gray-- Night s h i n e   R  04:41, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

I would make them just plain gray, dark gray or black would look strange. You wouldn't be able to see the pupils as much  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:31, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this. §₩1ƒ₮¥ Do da Kitteh bop! 21:01, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Muse Blanks- Withdrawn
They are all female because Mousetalon is female. Well, I altered the deputy blanks and re-did the tails. Comments? Mo   us    et    al    on    !!   14:52, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

The tails look weird on the longhairs. dde vans  96z  22:53, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, the lineart goes thick-thin etc. make it fluffier as well. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  10:55, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' Mo    us    et    al    on    !!   20:42, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, what's a muse? xD Batwing  |  Dovefeather  19:49, June 14, 2010 (UTC)!

A member of the Council of Light and Prophecy. dde vans  96z  19:52, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

LOL Blue. So, anything else? Mo   us    et    al    on    !!   22:09, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

The tail line art should be thickened. There are strange pixels jutting out of the back left paw. The front paws don't look natural at all. What is on their heads?-- Night s h i n e   R  04:36, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Nightshine, these were the deputy blanks before she changed them. And she didn't change the paws at all. She erased the back right so she can put the tail there but nothing else. <font color="#009900"><font color="#00FF00">  M  o  o  n  p  e  l  t   1786  14:45, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

The paws do look pretty odd though-- Night s h i n e   R  01:56, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

I don't get what your saying. The paws look fine to me. dde vans  96z  03:46, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

The two front paws don't look like paws. The back paw has a huge rectangular pixel jutting out of the top. -- Night s h i n e   R  21:06, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

I can;t do anything about that. They are the way they were. Mo   us  et  al  on   !! <font color="#7a009a">Here comesSUMMER!   04:21, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

At least make them they same style; I'd change the front paws to make them look like the back paws  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:32, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

They are exactly the same as the deputy blanks, I don't see your logic dde  vans  96z  03:41, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

I wasn't on this wiki when the deputy blanks were approved. I don't think the front paws look like paws. Try and make them look like the back paws. Get rid of the rectangular pixel coming out of the top of the back paw-- Night s h i n e   R  16:23, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

Now that the deputy blanks have been approved, you cannot ask for them to be changed. And the front paws look exaclty like the one from the warrior blanks. §₩1ƒ₮¥ Do da Kitteh bop! 21:03, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Now that the Co8 is done, these aren't needed. Mo   us  et  al  on   !! <font color="#7a009a">Here comesSUMMER!   21:51, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Rainpaw (A) For Approval
I wasn't sure which one to use...I'm quite fond of both :3 Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:25, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

I like the right one better, but they are both awesome. dde vans  96z  21:31, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

I like the second one better. Does this mean I'll need to re-do my image of Rainkit? Icefall Icy Winds 21:32, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Wait...Icy's is light gray, and this is just gray...I'm confused dde vans  96z  21:38, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Her description here describes her as "silver and black" I didn't know if that meant silver with black tabby stripes; or mottled silver and black. So I just did both  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:47, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

I really like the first one-- Night s h i n e   R  02:51, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

Grayfall(W) - For Approval
-- I love this one. :D Comments? DuskStar 02:21, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

This is lovely :D Blur the ear pink some  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:17, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded DuskStar  17:33, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

It says he's black on his article, and this looks just dark gray. Run the burn tool over it a couple of times  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:26, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

Is he too black nowz? DuskStar 02:42, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

I would do the same with the other two below. But it looks good. This is ddevans96z, my signature is being weird

Lighten the whole thing a bit and desaturate the ear pink-- Night s h i n e   R  22:37, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Grayfall(A) - For Approval
-- Comments? DuskStar 17:32, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

Blur ear pink more-- Night s h i n e   R  22:36, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Grayfall(K) - For Approval
-- Comments? DuskStar 17:32, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

Blur ear pink more-- Night s h i n e   R  22:37, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Tatterkit (Ki): For Approval


Comments? Fawny Keep on Smiling :D 16:32, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

Comments? Fawny Keep on Smiling :D 11:08, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

Looks fantastic! Blur the ear pink more-- Night s h i n e   R  22:36, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? Fawny Keep on Smiling :D 10:53, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Looks good! Maybe darken the ear pink a tad though. Otherwise great job!!! Moon Talk 02:56, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

.Blur the marking on his back. Icefall★ Talk 14:26, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Wolfkit (K) - For Approval


Here she is! Mousetalon's oldest kit! Comments? Mo   us  et  al  on   !! <font color="#7a009a">Here comesSUMMER!   22:33, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

Ello? Mo   us  et  al  on   !! <font color="#7a009a">Here comesSUMMER!   12:49, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

Beautiful :D Brighten the white chest, and blur the white transition  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 18:28, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

The eyes looks strange. Make them more gradient or a solid colour-- Night s h i n e   R  22:38, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Mo    us  et  al  on   !! <font color="#7a009a">Here comesSUMMER!   17:33, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

The eyes still look strange. Darken the shading--  Night s h i n e    ~  01:55, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Blackberry (W)- For approval


§₩1ƒ₮¥ Do da Kitteh bop! 16:22, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

This is good Swifty but.... Her paw is totally white and she has like a tiny spot on her chest and she has green eyes. Look at mine for an example. DuskStar 02:57, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

The paw IS totally white. If you mean more that, it would be her leg. And if you had looked, she DOES have green eyes. I'm glad to see you again, Echo, but I need improvements, not descriptions. §₩1ƒ₮¥ Do da Kitteh bop! 11:35, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the paw and chest and blur them. Icefall Icy Winds 11:53, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded §₩1ƒ₮¥ Do da Kitteh bop! 16:51, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

Swifty, it says a white DAB on her chest, not a white chest, you kinda got to fix that. Also lighten the eye color, they look teal. Look at this for an example:  DuskStar  18:25, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

How's this? Reuploaded. §₩1ƒ₮¥ Do da Kitteh bop! 22:13, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

.......... ._o Hello? §₩1ƒ₮¥ Do da Kitteh bop! 20:11, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

Add some more shadding to the back and haunch. Icefall Icy Winds 21:48, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. §₩1ƒ₮¥ Do da Kitteh bop! 23:40, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Blur white paw. Lighten the whole thing a bit.-- Night s h i n e   R  02:52, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

I had to put the blank over the rest of the picture since I also lightened the blank.. Reuploaded. §₩1ƒ₮¥ Do da Kitteh bop! 12:20, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading; blur the white dab. Icefall★ Talk 14:41, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Anything else? §₩1ƒ₮¥ Do da Kitteh bop! 16:23, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Mosskit (Ki)
how is it? Mossstar101 23:47, June 26, 2010 (UTC)



It's very nice for a beginner, Mossy, but... (1) You cannot usePaint or something along the lines for editing. I suggest you download GIMP or go to Pixlr.com. Also, your lineart it screwy. I suggest to download the blank. (Right click it, Save as. ) and open it up in one of the programs I just mentioned. When you open the program, I suggest : re-do the image. then, make sure you blur the patches to the white base fur. Then, add shading and highlighting. (Dodging/Burning.) Then add earpink but make SURE to blur it. Hope this helps! §₩1ƒ₮¥ Do da Kitteh bop! 11:45, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

Mossy you don't have to add highlights. Moonpelt is very strange... 15:06, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. i fixed the highlights. Mossstar101 23:47, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

I don't think you did any of the things that Swiftpelt said  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:50, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry! i tried to. Is it ok if i do it tomorow? i don't have much time... Mossstar101 00:03, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Sure! :) Also, Nightfall, call me Swifty. ;) §₩1ƒ₮¥ Do da Kitteh bop! 00:47, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Lol, kk  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:02, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

(re-uploaded). Soooo Sorry i couldn't do this faster! It was family movie night last night, (lol Toy Story 2!) And i couldn't miss it! (btw Swifty and nightfall, I Love your Signatures!) Mossstar101 11:13, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink, darken the white, blur the markings. Icefall★ Talk 14:40, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

(re-uploaded) I did what you said Icefall. Mossy Rules! XD      Kitty Love!      16:41, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Mosspaw (A)

 * I got GIMP. how's the art?Mossstar101 14:49, June 26, 2010 (UTC)
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First off, the ear pink doesn't look real, darken and desaturate it. Second, it looks nothing like the kit image you already have up. Tjird, it needs blurring and some of the colors need to reach the lineart to make it look realistic. Fourth, it needs shading. Mo   us  et  al  on   !! <font color="#7a009a">Here comesSUMMER!   17:36, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

It's not the same cat. Mossstar101 23:39, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

I'm a bit confused, I didn't even know we had a Mosspaw, or a Mosskit. Which Clan is she in, and who roleplays her?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:48, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

(Re-uploaded) I roleplay mosspaw in skyclan. and Maple plays mosskit. Mossstar101 23:59, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

I think you're using paint. You should use a proper art program like this one -http://www.pixlr.com/- it's easy and free :)  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:01, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

No, nightfall. i'm using GIMP. Well, i am new at this. but i did the best i could! (btw is pixlr's blurring tool stronger than GIMP's?) Mossstar101 10:55, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

(re-uploaded)Mossstar101 13:03, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

It needs shading. Mo   us  et  al  on   !! <font color="#7a009a">Here comesSUMMER!   13:22, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

(Re-uploaded) ok i shaded it.

Darken the entire thing, blur the patches, make the ear pink smaller and blur it. Icefall★ Talk 15:07, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

(re-uploadedI did what you said icefall, and now what do i do? Mossstar101 16:13, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

I still can't see any shading  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:46, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

(re-uploaded) I put even more shading in. Mossy Rules! XD  Kitty Love!  11:53, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pinks and markings. Darken the white transition. Icefall★ Talk 14:39, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

(re-uploaded) I did what you said Icefall. Mossy Rules! XD  Kitty Love!  16:43, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

I still don't see any shading, and she needs eye white  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 07:31, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

(re-uploaded) More shading added! Mossy Rules! XD  Kitty Love!  11:29, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

I'm really sorry, but I still don't see any shading. Look at this tutorial to help you with the shading  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:34, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

(re-uploaded) Wow.... That looks much better than without shading. Thanks 4 the tutorial! Mossy Rules! XD  Kitty Love!  11:01, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Stay inside the blanks lines, seems to be going out on the top of the chest and just below the ear. TEAM JACOB! •  Spiritcloud  12:49, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

(Re-uploaded) I fixed it. Anything else? Mossy Rules! XD      Kitty Love!      13:12, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Brookstep (Q) - For Approval
failfailfail. I always imagined Brookstep with darker tabby streaks, when I first suggested a name for her when she was first born on a PT. So, that's how I drew it. Yay, I'm going to get a tablet next week. :D Icefall★  Talk 01:11, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Lucky you. I've been asking for one for a very long time, but still haven't got one. I only have the terrible 5-year-old laptops from my dad's work. As for the image, darken the ear pink, add more stripes in between-- Night s h i n e   R  04:06, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Aww, poor you. :P Although your art is SO good. Icefall★ Talk 15:05, June 27, 2010 (UTC)(boo yah Icestorm here)

Darken the ear pink some more. Add a few smaller stripes on the haunch, tail, and face. Blur all the stripes, they look very rounded and straight right now--  Night s h i n e    ~  18:52, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

They're supposed to look straight.. Icefall★ Talk 19:12, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Solarkit - For Approval
Well here he is. :P Terrible, eh. Icefall★ Talk 01:22, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

His eyes should be amber-- Night s h i n e   R  02:58, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

No, I asked her to change them to green since he looked to much like Solarwind before. Just lighten the image, it looks kinda gray. But this is really good!  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:59, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Icefall★  Talk 15:06, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

I would just say blur the tail shading, If there is any. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:green; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">ँঁઁଁఁँঁઁଁఁ ˚, ˳˚, ˳˚, ˳˚, ˳ 15:07, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

There isnt. Icefall★ Talk 21:43, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading--  Night s h i n e    ~  18:52, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Flarepaw (A) For Approval
I like this one :D. Comments? Moonpelt is very strange... 02:35, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

This is great! Just darken the ear pink some more-- Night s h i n e   R  02:55, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? Moonpelt is very strange... 03:09, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before Approval? Icefall★ Talk 14:25, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Wait, lighten the white dab on her chest a little  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 07:30, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? Moon Talk 15:06, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Crowkit (K) For Approval
I made his eyes look like puppy-kitty eyes. :P I like em' but if you want me to change them I can. Comments? Moonpelt is very strange... 02:41, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Wow! Just lighten the ear pink more and lighten the tail shading-- Night s h i   n e   R  02:55, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? Moonpelt is very strange... 16:19, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the tail stripes. Icefall★ Talk 14:17, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Beter? Moon Talk 14:48, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Nightstar (L) - For Approval
Comments?-- Night s h i n e   R  04:07, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Mo   us  et  al  on   !! <font color="#7a009a">Here comesSUMMER!   13:20, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

It shouldn't need blurring.--  Night s h i n e    ~  01:57, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Cookiefur (Q) - For Approval


Ah, no blanks for medicine cat apprentices', gave up on that too. So here she is! ϠSp iritc  loudϠ  20:54, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Since cookiefur is a kittypet, you must wait for the kittypet blanks to be released. Sorry, but this will have to be declined. §₩1ƒ₮¥ Do da Kitteh bop! 21:07, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

This is fine. You just need to add a collar. Blur the ear pink. Wow, a cat with...cookies on her fur. That is the strangest thing in the world--  Night s h i n e    ~  21:16, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Good job! :D It is kind of strange isn't it. Make the ear pink a bit more red. It looks purple. Also add color to the nose. Moon Talk 22:21, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded I know, strange isnt it? Thats why I thought that no one would still the fur color or the name! Also, my computers been pretty wacky today, so expect the unexpected. XP ϠSp  iritc  loudϠ  23:26, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Iceberry(W) for approval
o3o i have finally got of mai lazy butt :Pbracken- 15:23, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the part where the gray meets the white. Icefall★ Talk 18:01, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

This is great! Get rid of the colour that is out of the line art. The line art on the face looks grayish. Ice, the cloths don't need blurring. Darken the shading--  Night s h i n e    ~  21:18, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Oh. O.O I didn't think they were cloths, I thought they were apart of the fur. Icefall★ Talk 21:20, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

No, it says in her description that she uses cloths to cover the scars on her legs. This is really good :) Lighten the shading some  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 07:28, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Hawkshine (Q) For Approval
There is three discussions so this is under the limit. Comments? Moon Talk 15:34, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Um...the darker transitions of ginger isn't how I imagined her. I always imagined her with thin, tabby stripes. Can you make them thin? Icefall★ Talk 17:59, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded How is that? Moon Talk 20:36, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

This is beautiful! Lighten the ear pink a bit--  Night s h i n e    ~  21:17, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Do you want me to lighten it even more? I lit it some but if you want me to lighten it some more I will, and thanks! Moon Talk 22:17, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, lighten it more. I can't see it very well--  Night s h i n e    ~  22:25, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

I love it Moon, it's amazing. Lighten the ear pink as Night said. Fawny Keep on Smiling :D 11:17, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Mossflame (W) For Approval
I like siamese cats. Comments? Moon Talk 15:36, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Beautiful! But the brown near her left eye is too dark, and there are white/light gray pixels near the tail. Lighten the brown on the back paws a little. §₩1ƒ₮¥ Do da Kitteh bop! 16:01, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

She looks a bit too white, darken that part so she's pale cream. This is gorgeous :)  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:09, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Oh ok. It's just the one I saw had a white body... Thanks! :) Do you want me to change it? Moon  Talk 22:13, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Here is her pic: Mo   us  et  al  on   !! <font color="#7a009a">Here comesSUMMER!   22:45, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Kittypet Blanks - For Approval
I thought since Hawkfire was gone I could use her blanks. Can I? If not just decline them. Otherwise comments? Moon Talk 01:27, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

On the long hair's tails, the lineart looks thick. Thin it. Icefall★ Talk 02:19, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

I didn't change the lineart at all. So it should be just like the ones that were approved exept for the collar. Moon Talk 02:31, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

These are the BloodClan blanks. Please make your own original blanks.--  Night s h i n e    ~  18:47, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Stormstar (L)- For Approval
Likey? §₩1ƒ₮¥ Do da Kitteh bop! 12:53, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

I think He's supposed to have a mysterious glow to him. but besides that he looks good! Mossy Rules! XD   Kitty Love!   13:04, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Wasn't Stormstar deleted? Icefall★ Talk 13:12, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

It does have a glow. Change your background. If it's white, you can't see it. §₩1ƒ₮¥ Do da Kitteh bop! 13:43, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Stormstar shouldn't have an image. The whole thing about MoonClan did not happen. This will be declined, unless it can be another leader--  Night s h i n e    ~  18:50, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Cloverleaf (Q) - For Approval
Here's Cloverleaf! Sorry for being so inactive. Anywho, comments? Brookheart I must not give up... 07:09, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading, add some more tabby stripes, make the eye colour less 'noen' but it's good. Fawny Keep on Smiling :D 11:15, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Waterpaw (ki) - For Approval
Here's Waterkit! Brookheart I must not give up... 07:31, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and the shading along her back. Fawny Keep on Smiling :D 11:14, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Question
Why are WWikis' blanks all the same? I mean the warriors, queens, elders, all pretty much have the same base. Why arent ares? Not saying that either is better nore worse than the other. TEAM JACOB! •  Spiritcloud  12:47, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Um...that's how we made our blanks. Icefall★ Talk 13:54, June 30, 2010 (UTC)