Cats of the Clans Wiki talk:Character Art Project

Attention

 * Due to the lack of activity on the wiki, I'm going to go ahead and end tweak week. There are still a few images on that list that were never fixed, but I'm sure we'll get them fixed soon. Remember that the image limit on this page is still 35. That is all,  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky!

20:52, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

When will Tweak Week be over? It's been like three months. By the way, I'm back!

Tigerfur of Bloodclan 15:29, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

mmmm id spect it will be when we get every image listed for tweaking done  Hetalia  Epic show, go Russia 22:59, May 18, 2011 (UTC)


 * Birdpaw is right, when all the nominated images are done then it'll be over  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky!

18:42, May 22, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, thanks :)

Tigerfur of Bloodclan 21:49, May 23, 2011 (UTC)

To-be blanks - For Approval
Ahh, good old fashioned Hawkey-made blanks. :D Just like the good ol' days! These aren't my BEST blanks, I finished them in about four minutes, so...yeah. Comments?  HA WK FI RE98  20:27, January 23, 2011 (UTC)

These are good! The back paw closest to us is a bit deformed, maybe round it off a bit, and make the eyes more almond shaped instead of oval shaped  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:32, January 24, 2011 (UTC)

Here's a diagram I made to help:

Reuploaded Sorry about that! Also one of the blanks has an accidental ear tuft in its ear; I'll fix that next time. Echo, I appreciate the diagram, but thats WAY too much unneccessary work.  HA WK FI RE98  18:34, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

I like them :) Chickenstar 18:37, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

The paws need to be rounder, the torso need to be thickened, make the ears wider, eyes should be more cat-like, the whiskers should be closer to the muzzle, and the haunch needs to be reshapen-- Night  shine  23:23, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

I don't like the face, I prefer to keep it to my own style. But I'll do everything else.  HA WK FI RE98  00:29, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

I think these are the cutest things.... Frostcloud 02:12, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded But now, they are cuter. ;)  HA WK FI RE98  20:03, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Make the paws rounder and the tail fluffier. The eyes should be a bit smaller and angle a little toward the nose. Make the whiskers go a little closer to the muzzle-- Night  shine  20:13, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on these or they will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:52, February 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Oh, gosh, I destroyed my long-hairs....  HA WK FI RE98  17:01, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

Make the paws rounder and much smaller, the bellies are much to thin and the limbs are too straight-- Night  shine  19:21, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

And the limbs will REMAIN straight. Also, Tribe cats are very slender, and of course they are wild cats, so they're not fat. I'll fix the short-hair paws.  HA WK FI RE98  20:32, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

Make the heads a bit more rounded, and make the eyes a bit slantier (lol, that is so not a word)  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:29, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

Can someone help me with the heads and eyes? It's just how I draw my cats. Everytime I try to change it, it looks horrible. D:  HA WK FI RE98  23:30, March 9, 2011 (UTC)

I'll see what I can do. You should make all of the blanks the same, but change two of them to long haired cats. The paws and limbs look different to me on the short haired compared to the long haired-- Night  shine  00:14, March 10, 2011 (UTC)

Kittypet Blanks-For approval
I wanted them to look REALLY cute because they are, well, not feirce...(No offense, Kittehs XD) That would make them look soft and unharmfull...I think i did a great job on that xD Foxclaw33 I love Foxpaw :)20:38, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Here's an example:

ITS JASMINE :D

It looks like they're wearing sunglasses. i K  i  ba☼  23:57, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Make all the lines fully black. Get rid of the fluffy bit on the top of their head, make the limbs more natural, eyes should be smaller and the torso needs to be thicker-- Night  shine  00:05, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

The tail shouldn't be cut off too :P Poor longhaired kitty... -pets- The corners of the eyes look too sharp on even the males, and I agree that they should be smaller. Agent WindFire Because it's snowing,  Blowing, All over town... 10:38, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Fix the eyes, fix the tails and paws. Right now, there are only two paws. This will need ALOT of work. i K  i  ba☼  13:19, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I TRIED to make them smaller, did i mention i always do bad on eyes >.< Foxclaw33 Don't you just love Valentine's Day? 23:57, February 11, 2011 (UTC)

o_o You made it worse... USE NIGHTSHINE'S DIAGRAM! SAVE AS PNG. Man, do I have to say that again!? Here's a diagram to help:

i K  i  ba☼  00:10, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

I dont have time to work on these, please give me more time.]

@Echopaw: I did save it. I am used to paint, not PIXLR so i dont know how to change it. Please be as easy as you can on me, School hates me right now, and Sports are kicking my face. Foxclaw33 Don't you just love Valentine's Day? 01:07, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Echo, my gosh. Calm down, it's not a big deal at all. In fact, it's much better to do blanks on paint rather than pixlr, trust me, I know. I would appreciate it if you'd take a look at the CAP guidelines, they clearly state that your kind of behavior will result in a short CAP ban. Foxclaw: When you save it, just choose the extension of .png instead of .jpg. I might be able to help if paint is being spazzy  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 17:28, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Foxclaw33 900 EDITS! WHERE'S THE PARADE? 23:45, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

First of all, make all of the line art black with no lighter pixels in the background-- Night  shine  07:46, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Okay, what's next? Foxclaw33 900 EDITS! WHERE'S THE PARADE? 16:20, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

All of the line art still needs to be black. -- Night  shine  16:24, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

It is all black lineart Foxclaw33 900 EDITS! WHERE'S THE PARADE? 16:41, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

No it isn't. When I look at it on Paint I can see that there are many miscoloured pixels throughout-- Night  shine  17:11, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

-.- Paint is always doing that. Even when i have a transparent picture, it still did that on Paint. Foxclaw33 900 EDITS! WHERE'S THE PARADE? 17:22, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

I dont have anvanced paint like everyone so i cant zoom in, so i can't see it. Foxclaw33 900 EDITS! WHERE'S THE PARADE? 17:23, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

If you are using paint it should still be all black, maybe you're doing something differently? And you can zoom in under the view dropdown menu-- Night  shine  17:35, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Ok, I can see them now... I fixed it.<font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxeh <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">Bloodclaw2 on deviantART!! 22:30, February 16, 2011 (UTC)

There's one unnaturally thick line in the foreview, 3 out of the 4 images have it. And they all still look cross-eyed. Make the pupils a little smaller, or even take them out of the eyes. Maybe that would be better. Age nt Win dFi re -  Delve Deep er 22:35, February 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Tried to fix all you asked. <font face="Papyrus" color="#15317E">Foxeh <font face="Segoe Script Bold" color="#800517">NO I'M SERIOUS ILL HIT YOU WITH THIS STICK 23:50, February 16, 2011 (UTC)

All of the blanks look different from each other. The short haired blanks should look the same and the long haired blanks should look the same. The only difference should be the eyelashes. There is blurred line art in several areas-- Night  shine  23:57, February 16, 2011 (UTC)

Its because I redid it on paint, wich it blurrs every line i put in ?_? Foxclaw(I've got a virus so i don't feel good with signing in :(

Hm, that doesn't really make sense. If you are doing it on paint then it shouldn't do that-- Night  shine  19:52, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined-- Night  shine  00:45, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- <font face="Segoe Script" color="#15317E">Foxclaw33 <font face="Papyrus" color="#800517">I hit Adderpaw and Sagestorm with this stick, i'm not afraid to do it to you!05:14, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make the eyes smaller and not blurred-- Night  shine  05:26, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

I think you should use NIghtshine's diagram. ☘Saint <font color="Lime">Ice☘ 15:46, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded <font face="Segoe Script" color="#15317E">fox <font face="Papyrus" color="#800517">I'm only known for the mistakes i've made.... 01:00, March 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded once more(big update)
Redid 'em. <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="5" color="darkblue" > Foxclaw <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="2" color="gray">of DerpClan 06:30, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

They look a bit too young to me, like little kittens. Not all kittypets are kittens, I honestly can't imagine my cat Nick or Angel with this blank. Maybe try to make them look older? And also be sure that no parts of their body are cut out, right now their tails aren't fully in the blank  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 18:51, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Quailfeather - For Approval
This is what she is supposed to look like. ♥Icy123♥ ☮Peace, love, and joy!☮  19:09, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

This is over the limit of 35 -- Night  shine  19:52, February 20, 2011 (UTC)


 * It's fine. =.=  Sakura -chan   ♥  20:59, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and highlights, make the earpink bigger. Xigbar; The Freeshooter  21:01, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

See my message above-- Night  shine  22:30, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Ice, this is really good, but it doesn't match Quailfeather's description. It says on her article that she's dark gray with a darker gray paw  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:10, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I'm going to change that. ♣Saint♣Ice♣ 15:32, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely! But the highlights still look round and circlish...maybe smudge them out a little?  HA WK FI RE98  23:47, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined-- Night  shine  00:42, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

Someone else can take over this. ☘Saint <font color="Lime">Ice☘ 15:42, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:29, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

You might want to blur the shading on it a bit more, espically on the chest. Good job Ice/Nightfall, -- Ashenstream  The Journey Of A Thousand Miles 23:13, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

Foxmask (W) - For Approval
Comments? Xigbar; The Freeshooter  02:27, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

This is really good! Blur and thicken the tail shading. Also, there's some blurred line art on the front right arm, (the one closest to us) and along the back of the tail  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:57, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? Xigbar; The Freeshooter  15:01, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

There is still some blurred line art on the arm-- Night  shine  23:33, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Gimp weirdly isn't working for me. Can someone take this over? Dymitrie; Shilva, моя любовь.  23:02, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Sure! I fixed the blurred line art, and darkened the shading on the foreleg farthest from us  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:08, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Night :) Dymitrie;  Shilva, моя любовь.  23:11, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Rose (Ro) For Approval
How is she? :D  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:01, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

She's lovely :D The pink eye looks a little salmoney though, and the nose strip only goes to a point just above her eyes. :) Age nt Win  dFi re -  Delve Deep er  01:05, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

Cute! Smudge the patches a bit more, they look too bland.  HA WK FI RE98  03:01, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Better?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:28, March 7, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink and the shading a bit-- Night  shine  01:00, March 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Darkened ear pink and shading  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 05:15, March 7, 2011 (UTC)

Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 18:47, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Darkpaw (Ro) ~For approval
I timed it and i took 14 minutes o.o i did this on Hypercam because i decided to do a tutorial, and dont have a seizure Night, i reserved it.<font face="Segoe Script" color="#15317E">fox <font face="Papyrus" color="#800517">I'm only known for the mistakes i've made.... 21:43, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

We're only doing Current blanks, and don't be rude...  Sakura -chan   ♥  00:00, March 7, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry. Bu this is his current blank... Its not BloodClan, he left BloodClan but kept the collar <font face="Segoe Script" color="#15317E">fox <font face="Papyrus" color="#800517">I'm only known for the mistakes i've made.... 00:05, March 7, 2011 (UTC)

Foxclaw, you now have 8 things up for approval. Please just stop posting new chararts...-- Night  shine  00:11, March 7, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with Nightshine, and I'm also pretty sure you ignored my message above about Goldenheart, if you hadn't then you wouldn't have put this up for approval  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:27, March 7, 2011 (UTC)

I just worked on all my other ones. <font face="Segoe Script" color="#15317E">fox <font face="Papyrus" color="#800517">I'm only known for the mistakes i've made.... 01:03, March 7, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, but you tend to always go awhile without working on them. I highly recommend withdrawing Darkpaw and Goldenheart, and waiting until your other chararts are approved to put them back up. We're almost over the limit, other users who only have one or two up for approval need a chance; you already have five, not including Darkpaw and Goldenheart  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:15, March 7, 2011 (UTC)

Im withdrawing one, i might withdraw this one... I just want this one to get approved or declined, i really want him to have an image. <font face="Segoe Script" color="#15317E">fox <font face="Papyrus" color="#800517">I'm only known for the mistakes i've made.... 02:43, March 7, 2011 (UTC)

Well, how about you withdraw two; the two that you're least likely to work on. And remember, you can always put them back up  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:12, March 7, 2011 (UTC)

I didnt know that! I will withdraw Silversong and i think i withdrawed something else.. <font face="Segoe Script" color="#15317E">fox <font face="Papyrus" color="#800517">I'm only known for the mistakes i've made.... 00:04, March 8, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 07:25, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

But what do i need to work on?? Im a little confused :/ <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="5" color="darkblue" >Foxclaw <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="2" color="gray">of DerpClan 23:58, July 2, 2011 (UTC)

The collar looks a little weird, straighten it out some  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:49, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

'''REUPLOADED. '''<font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="5" color="darkblue" > Foxclaw <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="2" color="gray">of DerpClan 23:45, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlight on his back, and darken the shading on his stomach, chest, and haunch  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 18:49, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Ivyfrost (W) For Approval
Probably need to add highlights. How is she?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:00, March 8, 2011 (UTC)

I think she's fine as is. -- Shodn I can't stand him, I hate him, I need to escape!  21:12, March 8, 2011 (UTC)

Highloughts would be nice....blur the ear pink and add shading to the empty part on the haunch. ☘Saint <font color="Lime">Ice☘ 01:01, March 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I think she looks better now. I blurred the ear pink and added shading to the haunch  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:14, March 10, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! Smudge the gray patch on her chest, it looks like a blob with spikey things in it (XD), and blur the shading/highlight transition a bit.  HA WK FI RE98  14:58, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Smudged the gray patch, and blurred the shading/highlight transition  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:10, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 18:47, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Abby(Ki)For Approval


Here's my first character. If you find mistakes,don't be suprised. I'm new. Comments?11:04,8 march,2011,The gost,roxi.

Wow, this is way better than my first charrie:) LOL. Maybe you could try and make the ea-pink more triangular, and a bit smaller? Apart from that, it's really good.<font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:violet">Gossip Queen!!! 17:31, March 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Comments?The gost,roxi,22:33,2 march,2011.

Make the ear pink darker, make this more gingery, it's too yellow right now. Darken the shading-- Night  shine  01:59, March 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.comments?The gost,roxi,10:01,10 march,2011.

You can have my image if you want, just change the eye color-

<font face="Segoe Script" color="#15317E">fox <font face="Papyrus" color="#800517">I'm only known for the mistakes i've made.... 23:48, March 10, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks,Foxclaw,but i need it to do it on my own.The gost,12:15,28 June,2011.

Reuploaded.The gost,12:17,28 June,2011.

Make the pupils bigger, and add some highlights to the eyes  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 17:49, June 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.The gost,10:57,30 june,2011.

I didn't mean add a highlight to her face, I meant actually in her eye (the brown part). It adds depth to them. Do that, and darken the shading on < this cheek  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 06:55, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.13:36,1 July,2011.

Either darken the highlight on her face, or add a highlight to her back  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 18:48, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. 20:54, July 10, 2011 (UTC)'''

Mudpaw (A) For Approval
I've been looking forward to putting this up. Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:09, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Wow Nightfall, this is really good! You have so much talent! I do think you should either make the ear pink on the right ear small or make the ear pink on the left ear bigger. That's all I can see that could be improved! Nightfall this is amazing! -- Ashenstream  The Journey Of A Thousand Miles 17:41, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Thanks! I made the ear pink on the right smaller  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 07:13, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

-gasps- OH MY GOSH. This was sooo worth the wait :D It's.... Perfect :D <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="5" color="darkblue" > Foxclaw <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="2" color="gray">of DerpClan 18:18, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Fox :D  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 18:23, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Just blur the gray a tad then this'll be good :3 Chell;  Aperture Science Test Subject.  14:25, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Blurred gray :)  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 05:06, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Thistleflame(W)-For approval


Comments?The gost,12:37,june 28,2011.

Reupload this in full size version  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 17:48, June 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.The gost,10:55,30 june,2011.

Darken the shading on the paws, and blur the white transition  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 16:42, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 17:02, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on his belly. And, I'm not really sure what's going on with his eyes...how about just pick one color. Odd-eyed cats usually have white pelts, I think it would be very rare otherwise. And I'm pretty sure if Thistleflame was odd-eyed, it would have specified on his article. I always imagined him with yellow eyes, so maybe stick with that for both eyes  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:14, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.The gost,23:38,june 30,2011.

Blur the shading. It's too sharp. Make the pupils on the eyes bigger! -- Ashenstream  The Journey Of A Thousand Miles 23:06, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

I actually think that the pupils should be left as they are, they're part of the warrior blank line art  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 06:57, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.11:42,July 1,2011,(UTC)

Darken the shading on his tail and chest, and blur the white more  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:48, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.23:50,july10,2011.(UTC)


 * I really think you should keep the eyes yellow, instead of frequently changing them. Like I told you, I think if a character had a very unusual eye color such as purple, or odd-eyed, then it would have been specified in the description  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky!

16:39, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.11:26,14 july ,2011.

Darken the shading on his chin, and blur the shading on his shoulder  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:04, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Snowy(R)-For approval


Comments?The gost,11:38,30 june,2011.

Add some color to the nose, and make the pupils bigger  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 16:29, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.The gost,19:48,30 june,2011.

This is really good gost!!!! You need to blur the ear pink though! -- Ashenstream  The Journey Of A Thousand Miles 23:03, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on her belly, and under her chin  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 06:53, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.10:31,july 1,2011.Ashenstream ,i can't blur anymore the ear pink.

Blur the shading  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 07:44, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.11:39,july 1,2011.

Sorry, but I think you need to lighten the earpink Paulmer 00:03, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

Even out the shading as well, it looks a bit blotchy  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:47, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is still blotchy, there is like holes in the middle of a clean line of shadow. Darken the shading and add highlights, and blur like mad. Paulmer 18:08, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.08:52,July 2,2011.

Hello?

The pupils are kind of strange, one is bigger than the other. Perhaps bring up this on your art program to get an idea of how the pupils and eye white should be arranged  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 16:38, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.The gost,14:49,july 14,2011.

Brightpaw (A) - CBA
First image in pixlr. Comments? Dymitrie; Shilva, моя любовь.  23:30, July 2, 2011 (UTC)

Well done. The eyes look a little, odd. The left pupil is larger than the other. Add highlights. Paulmer 23:34, July 2, 2011 (UTC)

Also make the earpink larger Paulmer 11:29, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I think the eyes are fine. Dymitrie; Shilva, моя любовь.  13:47, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe define the highlights and shading. Paulmer 15:22, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

Can someone help me with that? I miss gimp 3:. Pixlr has a terrible dodge/burn tool. Dymitrie; Shilva, моя любовь.  01:02, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Is that okay? I installed gimp 2.6 a while ago on my laptop <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="5" color="darkblue" > Foxeh.. <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="gray">Tobi, good boy. 02:49, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Fox~ Dymitrie;  Shilva, моя любовь.  14:13, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

The only thing I see wrong is a weird, sloppy highlight line on her rear end. Smooth that out and she'll be ready  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 17:52, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? Chell; Aperture Science Test Subject.  12:17, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Yep :) Comments Before Approval?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:02, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Iron(Ro)- For Approval
Spotted her on the cats needing charecter art list! I thought I'd try her out! Anyway, This is Iron! Comments or helpful tips? Paulmer 23:42, July 2, 2011 (UTC)

ZOMGZ. Ish so buutiifull! I would just make the earpink darker <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="5" color="darkblue" >Foxclaw <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="2" color="gray">of DerpClan 02:22, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded  Paulmer 02:27, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

I SAY! THIS LOOKS PERFECT. <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="5" color="darkblue" >Foxclaw <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="2" color="gray">of DerpClan 02:28, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! :D Paulmer 02:29, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more reddish, darken the shading on her chest, and add a few more stripes  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:46, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Paulmer 11:29, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

Her ear pink is still too pink, make it more of a salmon/reddish color. Make the stripes a bit thinner, and add more to her face, chest, and haunch  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 15:30, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

I redid the earpink, and the stripes. Paulmer 15:44, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

Thin the stripes out some more  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 17:03, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Thinned the stripes Paulmer 17:29, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

That's better! Add a few more stripes to her back and haunch  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 17:31, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded  Paulmer 17:48, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the stripes and shading some  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 17:49, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded  Paulmer 18:01, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

Add some more stripes to her legs  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:51, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 05:01, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Stormkit (KI) For approval
Stormkit ^^ Personally i think that the charat would look better without the lightning mark...(but he really has a mark like that)<font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="5" color="darkblue" > Foxeh.. <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="gray">Tobi, good boy. 23:30, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

He's very good! But, the mark on his chest is sort of just a blob. Make the gray around the lightning shaped mark black  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 17:52, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="5" color="darkblue" > Foxeh.. <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="gray">Tobi, good boy. 19:42, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 05:00, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded- Well it looks kinda weird now, but i kinda like it. Wooooo~ <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="5" color="gray" > So i herd... <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="darkblue">YOU LIEK MUDKIPS???? 23:01, July 15, 2011 (UTC)'''

Mousepaw(TC)-For approval
Mousepaw ^^ This is for Bird. Hope you all like it :) <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="5" color="darkblue" > Foxeh.. <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="gray">Tobi, good boy. 23:30, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

This is pretty good :) You'll need to remove all the white though, as stated on her article she's a brown tabby with green eyes. And add eye white  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 17:40, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 05:00, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-WHAT IS THIS? I DUN EVEN NUUU <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="5" color="gray" > So i herd... <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="darkblue">YOU LIEK MUDKIPS???? 23:06, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Mudheart-For approval
Mudheart ^^ <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="5" color="darkblue" >Foxeh.. <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="gray">Tobi, good boy. 03:52, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Brilliant :D The coloring isn't exactly right, make the brown less bright, more like a dull brown. You could probably just run the desaturate tool over her a couple of times (it's the sponge tool, just set it on desaturate)  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 17:54, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Imma be uploadin <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="5" color="gray" >So i herd... <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="darkblue">YOU LIEK MUDKIPS????02:30, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the silver~ Dymitrie;  Shilva, моя любовь.  02:32, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Woah this got kinda crazy. <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="5" color="gray" > So i herd... <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="darkblue">YOU LIEK MUDKIPS???? 23:14, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

There are these random blotches of shading around her patches, blur those and blur the gray more  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:05, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Foxfire-for approval
Foxfire ^^ <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="5" color="darkblue" >Foxeh.. <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="gray">Tobi, good boy. 03:52, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Foxclaw,you need to add the black paws,tip oft he tail,and ears.Otherway,it's beautiful!The gost,08:56,6 july,2011.(UTC)

Oh my gosh, i can't believe i forgot about that :D I'll work on in in a while... Sorry about that :/ <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="5" color="darkblue" >Foxeh.. <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="gray">Tobi, good boy. 19:41, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Add the color eye and remove the ear torn,and make it darker.

The ear is supposed to be torn. It's on her description <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="5" color="darkblue" > Foxeh.. <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="gray">Tobi, good boy. 19:18, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 05:00, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Better? <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="5" color="gray" > So i herd... <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="darkblue">YOU LIEK MUDKIPS???? 23:12, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Add color to her eyes (If it's just a really pale blue that my eyes aren't making out, that darken the color) and if there's black on her chest then add it, but if you want to keep it this way we can change her description  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:06, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Mistytail (R)- For Approval
Tigerfur of Bloodclan 14:57, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is very messy, thicken and blur it  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 17:54, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:58, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Moonsky (Q)- For Approval
Tigerfur of Bloodclan 15:01, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading, and blur the white transition. Make the chest and underbelly white as well  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 17:55, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:58, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Oakclaw (W)- For Approval
Tigerfur of Bloodclan 15:02, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken the shading on his belly, haunch, and cheek  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 17:55, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:59, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Willowtail (W)- For Approval
Tigerfur of Bloodclan 15:04, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken the shading on his haunch, belly, chest, and tail  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 17:56, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:59, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Russel~ For Approval
Fail lol  Hetalia  Epic show, go Russia 20:39, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

I like it! Darken the shading, and blur the ear pink  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:59, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, can you help me with the shading? I do my chararts without a mouse (Lap top touch pad)  Hetalia  Epic show, go Russia 23:32, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Shaderiver(W)-For approval


I actually have no comment to this. --bracken-- ~16:39, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Bracken, this is beautiful! In fact, all I see that can be improved is that her ear pink should be a bit darker, and blurred more. Also, there seems to be some sort of defined line on her rear end, just where her rump connects to her tail. Fix that, maybe add one more stripe to her tail, and darken the stripes on her face  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:59, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Wow..... This is beautiful, I see some smudged ear-pink on the right ear (Our Right)  Hetalia  Epic show, go Russia 13:40, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Mudkip(W)-For approval
Lol, don't ask. I can change the eyes if i have to, but his eyes are designed like that in the animie and in Pokemon. DEAL WITH IT XD. MUD. KIP. <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="5" color="gray" >So i herd... <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="darkblue">YOU LIEK MUDKIPS????03:24, July 13, 2011 (UTC)


 * Usually I wouldn't come on, but this spiked my attention greatly :D Make the chest and belly markings the same colour as the tail and make the lines on the tail thinner. Also add shading and highlights. If you want, I'll help. ^_^ ~ Echo


 * Ok, if you would like to use the one I made, here it is: [[file:mudkip.warrior.png]] I really don't like it, but whatever. :)  EC HO WA VE101  18:51, July 14, 2011 (UTC)!
 * Reuploaded- Used Echokip's image XD <font face="Lucida Calligraphy" size="5" color="gray" > So i herd... <font face="Tempus Stans" size="2" color="darkblue">YOU LIEK MUDKIPS???? 23:17, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * This is really nice! Blur the highlight on his haunch, back, and shoulder  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky!
 * This is really nice! Blur the highlight on his haunch, back, and shoulder  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky!

19:03, July 16, 2011 (UTC)