Cats of the Clans Wiki talk:Character Art Project

Yellowpool (Q) for approval
Do you think this is okay? I did this because she is currently a queen and she was a queen when she had Brownkit( who is also up for approval ), anyway, i don't think it is over the limit, and I know it looks bad. Clar ris  sa! :)  19:28, May 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the back, apart from that, it's fine Zoe27 08:19, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink should be enlarged.  ddevans96z Science Project... 18:43, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded -I enlargened the ear-pink and blured her back more, better? Clar ris  sa! :)  16:05, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

Center the ear pink more, and blur the shading and highlights  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:42, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:14, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded -I blured the shading and highlights. Is it better? I can't blur it any more. Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 17:59, May 29, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading and make the ear pink more red-- Night s h i n e   R  07:11, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

What colour should I use for ear-pink? Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 08:30, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Just a dark pink-- Night s h i n e   R  05:49, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined-- Night s h i n e   R  22:21, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded -Darkened the ear-pink. How else can I improve it? Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 17:08, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

It's a bit to electric pink now. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  17:16, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Can you give me a colour I could use? I am really stuck with trying to get the right one. Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 16:33, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Use this ear pink chart to get the ear color for a ginger cat. dde vans  96z  17:39, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded -Thanks Ddevans! I finally got my ear-pink right! Is it better? Or is there any othr way I can improve? Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 19:42, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Make nose colour darker and move the left <-- ear pink down. Blur the ear pink-- Night s h i n e   R  02:47, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded-  I tried, is it better? Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 15:40, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink should be moved down more and blur both of the ear pinks-- n i g h t  s h i n e  19:23, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined-- n i g h t  s h i n e  02:33, July 14, 2010 (UTC)

No DON'T decline it! Clara is on holiday, she can't work on it! Leave iit till Friday, because then she will have come back. Zoe27 17:59, July 14, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded -Thanks so much for not declining this! I just got back from holiday so I have moved down the ear-pink, and blurred them more. Does is look any better? Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 16:27, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

Blur highlights epicly -- Nightpaw Bring on the fight!  14:05, July 24, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights, -- Fawny Keep on Smiling :D 15:21, July 26, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded  - I blurred the highlights, comments? Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 10:28, July 27, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a bigger, blur it, and darken the shading  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:50, July 29, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, I'll do that but i don't have enough time right now. Please don't decline it though. Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 11:13, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded -I made the ear-pink bigger. Comments? Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 12:30, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

I think it's fine. Zoe27 20:02, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is still too small, and the nose needs to be the same color as the ear pink. Also, dodge the muzzle  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:36, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

Try making the ear pink go out to the blue on this diagram:  -♜  ðältøñ  ♜- 22:09, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded -I dodged the muzzle and did the ear-pink like the diagram. Thanks for the diagram, Dalton! Comments?

Make the nose the same color as the ear pink, blur the ear pink, and darken the shading  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:51, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:00, August 21, 2010 (UTC) Please don't decline this, pixlr isn't working on my computer Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 09:09, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

Well blur the earpink  Birdstar  You infected me with mildew? 16:52, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

Frostwing (W) - For Approval
Comments? ★dalton | uoʇlɐp★ 19:48, July 27, 2010 (UTC)

Very nice! I see nothing wrong except for the ear pink. Make it lighter, smaller, and blur it REALLY good.  HA WK FI RE98  19:54, July 27, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Mossstar of FireClan☮ I change my siggie way too often.20:54, July 27, 2010 (UTC)

The shading won't blur anymore, and that's how I do it anyways. For the ear pink, I'll do that in a while. ★dalton | uoʇlɐp★ 21:04, July 27, 2010 (UTC)

Add a highlight to the muzzle  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 06:23, August 1, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Tried to blur ear pink and shading, added highlight. Πόλη στην  κοιλάδα  23:37, August 1, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the legs farthest from us  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:15, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Not sure if it's dark enough, if I need to I'll try it more later. Πόλη στην  κοιλάδα  17:04, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the tail  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 15:44, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened shading on tail. -♜ ðältøñ  ♜- 17:05, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

...comments? Dalton Bulldog Pride! 21:27, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Blur shading and highligts and earpink a bit more then your good  Birdstar  You infected me with mildew? 00:05, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

...I quote myself: The shading won't blur anymore, and that's how I do it anyways ...so I'm not blurring the shading anymore. Dalton Bulldog Pride! 01:08, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Can you do the ear pink and Highlights?  Birdstar  You infected me with mildew? 16:03, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I can't blur anything much more than that. Dalton Bulldog Pride! 16:32, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

Idea!
You know that some Character arts are harder then others? I was thinking that apprentices could work on teams. On ones like calicos, tortoiseshells and tabbies. Is it a good idea? Mossstar of FireClan☮ I change my siggie way too often.20:25, July 27, 2010 (UTC)

It's a nice idea, but for, say, a tortoiseshell, the only thing different from any other patched cat is that you need to smudge the patches. It'd be more work actually getting the images from one person to another than one person making the whole thing.

I guess it's an idea. But it would be a bit difficult. I guess one user could upload the image up for approval, then different apprentices could take turns reuploading.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:17, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

I disagree. First of all, apprentices need to do their own art. And each user uses different programs, so it would be quite hard. 14:03, September 1, 2010 (UTC)

Shunji (Ro) For Approval
Yay :3 I'm really proud of this :D Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:52, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

The amber eye doesn't look....amber. I think it looks too orangish. Πόλη στην  κοιλάδα  17:55, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Well, I'm not to sure. I made it redder at first, but then it looked the same color as the pelt, and that looked kind of weird  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 17:57, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 15:45, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

The pelt, actually, is a bit brighter than the current one. I think if you fix that, is should be fine and level out the gray and amber eyes. 火の毛皮 06:51, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Is this better? There needs to be a little tinsy bit of gray in the eyes, other wise it's hard to see the pupil  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:20, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

She looks more brown than anything. Make it more ginger. 火の毛皮 04:49, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Better? That's as much as I'll saturate it; if it's saturated too much she'll look way too orange, and a bit cartoony  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:13, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

Lol Blur foot patches  Birdstar  You infected me with mildew? 00:04, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

I'd prefer not to, I love how I smudged them xD  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:06, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

lol its ok XD but if i do a tortie dont look cause it will be horrid....Anyways i see nothing wrong with the image (I need to get working on my MCA blanks and Dawnkit)  Birdstar  You infected me with mildew? 00:09, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit and there is a bit of colour outside of the line art on the back paw-- 00:11, September 1, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Better?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:28, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Flameshine (W) For Approval
I know this doesn't look much like the image she already has, but this is how I picture her. Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:52, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 15:45, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

This is great! But your right, it doesn't look like her other image. What does everyone else think?-- 18:30, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

The color and stripes are off. 火の毛皮 21:10, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

This is more how I pictured her, I just wasn't sure. The other image is just too red. I was thinking of maybe organizing some sort of tweak week, if you guys think it's a good idea. And FIre, what do you mean about the stripes and color? I used the burn tool to do them  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:22, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Nightfall. Let's do a tweak week soon! Hawkfire's warrior image looks nothing like her deputy and queen images. We need to fix them. Let's do it! :D Hawkey  I am a Ninja Duck! Fear me!  21:28, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

That's because you changed her warrior image Hawk ;) Okay, I'll get to work in organizing it :D  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:14, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

I mean that her color and stripes are off because they look nothing like her deputy image on her page. 火の毛皮 19:08, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

Oh okay. Well; I think the roleplayer of the character has first say as to what he/she looks like...what do you guys think?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:12, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

It's fine to me. And I agree. 01:53, August 23, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading-- 00:14, September 1, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Darkened shading  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:31, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Spottail (Q) For Approval
My first queen and my first tortoiseshell. Epic fail... Πόλη στην  κοιλάδα  17:30, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

She's not that bad! Blur the patches, and darken the tail shading  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 17:45, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Added shading, tried to blurred patches, added nose color, saturated image. Πόλη στην  κοιλάδα  17:57, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Make the nose the same color as the ear pink, and there's a shadow by her tail; erase that  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:45, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I cleaned it up a little bit as well. -♜ ðältøñ  ♜- 21:57, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a tinsy bit smaller, and add some more shading to the legs and underbelly  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:20, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

I'm having a lot of trouble shrinking the ear pink.... -♜ ðältøñ  ♜- 17:06, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Do you know how to use the color picker tool?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:24, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, that's the easiest thing to use. All you have to do is click xD -♜  ðältøñ  ♜- 19:40, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

lol :) Just click the color of the fur around the ear pink, and color around the edges of the ear pink until it's smaller. Blur it, and that should work :)  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:42, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

The eyes look a bit... Scary. Sorry. (PS when are her kits due, Dalton?) -- Nightpaw Bring on the fight!  13:34, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

Nightfall: If I get time this weekend, I'll do that. Nighty: What exactly about the eyes is scary? And next time we're on the IRC together. -♜ ðältøñ  ♜- 21:04, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

Beautiful :D make the earpink on our right a tiny bit smaller and i think your good  Birdstar  You infected me with mildew? 00:03, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Stormsurge (W) For Approval
Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:40, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

Amazing job on my character. I don't really see anything, except extend the white on his chest a bit further to the left. Right now, it looks like it's curling at a awkward point. 火の毛皮 06:56, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Thanks! Is this any better?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:27, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, it' s better. 火の毛皮 19:08, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

Add more white to the chest. 01:52, August 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Is this better?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:38, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Hm, it's not uploading for some reason...I'll try again later  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:01, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

Got it :) Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 18:42, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

Bronzepelt (W) - For Approval
Yup. Mah first charart for this wiki. Criticism? Tawny is here... 19:05, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

It's very good, but she looks too golden. Her article describes her as orange-ginger  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:19, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Well, I RP her, and that's supposed to be her pelt color, just couldn't get the right gist of the coloring, like maybe golden-yellow. Sorry about that, Night ;) Tawny is here... 19:29, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Oh okay. Define the flecks more, and make the ear pink more reddish  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:41, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

I think the flecks look fine. Just make the ear pink more natural. 火の毛皮 19:31, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, the flecks are fine. Just blur the highlights on the tip of the tail, and do what Fire said. Hawkey I am a Ninja Duck! Fear me!  21:12, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Work on this, or it WILL be declined. 火の毛皮 04:45, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

She has another three days before the decline warning is to be put up  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:08, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

I forgot the date limit. Sorry, X it. :) 火の毛皮

It's fine ;)  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:18, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:05, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

Locustkit (K) - For Approval
Aw, my little man. :') Comments? Hawkey  I am a Ninja Duck! Fear me!  17:56, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink, blur the shading-- 19:21, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? I added the scar. :) Hawkey  I am a Ninja Duck! Fear me!  19:41, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

I like it! Darken the stripes on his haunch  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:26, August 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Any better? Hawkey I am a Ninja Duck! Fear me!  14:28, August 22, 2010 (UTC)

Nice :) but i can barely see the earpink (Barely i somewhat see it)  Birdstar  You infected me with mildew? 00:02, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Sasuke (Ro - For Approval
For some odd reason, the shading isn't blurring anymore. Can I have help with that? Anyways, I'm SO obsessed with Naruto. :D Comments? 23:56, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

Nice. :) Blur the head tuft, there's a dark spot on his shoulder, and make the head tuft smaller. Hawkey  I am a Ninja Duck! Fear me!  00:40, August 19, 2010 (UTC)

The darker spot is shading. And the head tuft is supposed to be that size. ;) 02:18, August 19, 2010 (UTC)

Make the pupils rounder, blur the shading and highlights a lot. There is some colour out of the lineart on the tail tip. Desaturate and blur the ear pink. Make the eyes more gradient-- 05:11, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Nightshine, I hope you saw what I said above. "For some odd reason, the shading isn't blurring anymore. Can I have help with that?". 22:15, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded sorry if I changed too much of it-- 00:34, September 1, 2010 (UTC)

No, you didn't. Thanks for helping. What else do I need to work on? 14:06, September 1, 2010 (UTC)

I don't really see anything wrong. Comments Before Approval?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 18:42, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

Brindlecloud (W) - For Approval
Comments?-- 05:59, August 19, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good! Lighten the chest, it looks cream rather than white  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:58, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded lightened chest-- 04:03, August 23, 2010 (UTC)

Awesome :) blur patches a bit  Birdstar  You infected me with mildew? 00:00, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred patches more-- 23:59, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the haunch, and the legs farthest from us  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:06, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded darkened shading-- 23:57, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

Cricketpaw (A) - For Approval
Comments?-- 05:59, August 19, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, Nightshine, this is BEAUTIFUL!! One thing: Blur the stripes. :) Hawkey  I am a Ninja Duck! Fear me!  20:13, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred stripes-- 04:04, August 23, 2010 (UTC)

Blur them more. There's blurred line art on the ear pink, fix that. Also, make the ear pink more visible. Add more stripes to the tail. 16:56, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded fixed ear pink and blurred stripes-- 00:02, September 1, 2010 (UTC)

Desaturate the ear pink a bit  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:06, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm, it looks fine to me-- 23:56, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

Lionkit (Ki) For Approval
Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:01, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great! Blur the ear pink a bit more-- 04:04, August 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Okay, I think it reuploaded  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 18:25, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

Blackstorm (W) For Approval
Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:55, August 22, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink a bit-- 04:04, August 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Lightened ear pink  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 18:35, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

Windstep (W) For Approval
Comments?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:56, August 22, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit-- 04:04, August 23, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the earpink more  Birdstar  You infected me with mildew? 23:59, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I think it worked. Is this better?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 18:37, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

Tweak Week
As some users suggested in above discussions, I'm starting to agree with it myself. But I'm a bit uneasy with it, since there are images that need to be deleted due to cats being deleted, users leaving. Also, a Roleplaying Stop would be good. So...do you guys agree? May we start the Tweak Week? 01:54, August 23, 2010 (UTC)

Not a bad idea..... Dalton  Bulldog Pride! 03:09, August 23, 2010 (UTC)

I say yes to Tweak Week! :D Hawkey  I am a Ninja Duck! Fear me!  13:29, August 23, 2010 (UTC)

Um Ok LOL of course i say yes  Birdstar  You infected me with mildew? 14:39, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

When should we have the tweak week?-- 23:08, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

Applepaw (MCA)~Up for approval
-RPed by Maplefern comments?  Birdstar  You infected me with mildew? 02:10, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

This is splendid, Birdpaw. All I say is darken the shading and blur the ear pink. Add white to the eye, to make it have a life. :) 16:55, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

It has a white in the eye if you look closely but i will make it bigger  Birdstar  You infected me with mildew? 16:58, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded UMMMM Fail on darkening the shading but i blurred the earpink  Birdstar  You infected me with mildew? 17:03, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

Applepaw is actually a medicine cat apprentice, not a warrior apprentice. If you can find a different cat for this to be, you can keep her. Otherwise, she'll have to be declined. Sorry!  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:55, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

I knew i was doing something wrong wait one sec  Birdstar  You infected me with mildew? 00:58, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

There is no Med cat Apprentice blanks?  Birdstar  You infected me with mildew? 00:59, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Uh, no. See here for all the blanks we have - http://catsofclans.wikia.com/wiki/Cats_of_the_Clans_Wiki:Character_Art_Project#Blanks  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:11, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Oops lol BTW What do you mean by Current ranks?  Birdstar  You infected me with mildew? 01:16, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Like, Windstep has just been made a warrior, so I'm doing his warrior image. If someone puts his kit image up, it'll be declined. Honeypaw has just been made an apprentice, if someone does her kit image, it'll be declined, ect.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:22, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Ok  Birdstar  You infected me with mildew? 01:28, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Wait the MCA blanks are approved so can i keep this up until they are added to the gallery?  Birdstar  You infected me with mildew? 21:04, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

Can someone else do this cause for some reason Pixlr makes the MCA blanks all pixely Birdstar  Am i the true MCA?  21:51, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

and it wont reupload D: Birdstar  Am i the true MCA?  18:45, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

NVM some how i got working again we can continue with the comments and constructive critisisms Birdstar  Am i the true MCA?  21:05, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading and ear pink. Blur the shading-- 23:08, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

Ravenstorm (W) for approval
This is my first Character art. Any Comments? Breezestar  Only a Breeze... 02:34, August 24, 2010 (UTC) 

This is your FIRST charart? :D You got to be kidding! This is brilliant! But I need you to tweak a few things...


 * Blur the ear pink and the white chest


 * Make the highlights less-centered and blur it really well.


 * Darken the shading.

The far paw looks.....Wierd its his left  Birdstar  You infected me with mildew? 17:04, August 24, 2010 (UTC)
 * Fix the eyes, they look kinda creepy. Look at Hawkfire's warrior image. :) Well done! Hawkey  I am a Ninja Duck! Fear me!  12:41, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

Wierd as in....? Breezestar  Only a Breeze... 18:45, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Theres two little white pixels on the part above the foot  Birdstar  You infected me with mildew? 19:43, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Those are on every warrior image. Dalton Bulldog Pride! 22:10, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Thats not what i mean there are white pixels not on the foot but where the lineart meets the leg 9Even though i might have to show you using the picture :P)  Birdstar  You infected me with mildew? 23:40, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I fixed the white pixels. Breezestar  Only a Breeze... 03:21, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

Darken shading. Blur ear pink. There are a few white pixels near his haunch. Maybe add more white markings?-- 15:37, September 1, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks. I can't add more white markings because this is what Bracken said Ravenstorm looked like. Breezestar  Only a Breeze... 15:47, September 1, 2010 (UTC)

you could add white paws and blur the ear pink too --bracken-- ~18:42, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Ok Flash  In a Flash of light 04:30, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

'''I'm trying to upload it, cause I changed it and saved it, but when I add the pic, the old one comes up. can someone help?Flash ' In a Flash of light'' 04:41, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Only Current Images
As Hawkey stated here, there are hardly any cats with images. I think one problem is that we don't comment enough on other people's images, I have learned this with recent experience. So, from now on, only reserve current ranks. However, you can keep the ones you have up now if you want, just no more new ones. After they are all approved, only current ranks. Thank you,  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:57, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Whitekit (TC) (Ki) - For Approval
Iceshine's kit :D. I love him. He's a playful guy :D Can't wait until he's an apprentice. Anyways, comments? 02:16, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink. Darken the shading. The way you put the ginger looks a bit odd. Blur the white tip on the tail. Make the pupils rounder. Maybe add some ginger to the white arm-- 05:06, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the earpink (Or lighten?) i can barely see it (But it depends)  Birdstar  You infected me with mildew? 23:58, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Alright, I added ginger to the arm, but it didn't look so well....so I deleted it. But in the meantime, I'll darken the shading, make the pupils rounder and blur the ear pink/white tip. GIMP - slow. 16:02, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

Add a ginger patch to his foot though! It looks strange without it.. :/ -- Fawny Keep on Smiling :D 16:06, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Done. 17:27, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

I know you were told to darken the ear pink, but I'd lighten a lot  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:07, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

A couple things that tick me off
1. Does anyone actually read the comments on the chararts? I see a lot of people just instantly make a comment that's been said already.

2. Aren't you supposed to link to the page the charart is for? I see a lot of people not doing this, and I've tried to add them.

I don't know, these just annoy me a lot. Dalton Bulldog Pride! 01:12, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Ok OK im sorry i actually did read but i thought maybe if you tried then something would happen you dont need to get annoyed at me or anyone else cause i actually did read it >:\  Birdstar  You infected me with mildew? 01:14, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry if I offended you, and it's not just you I'm talking about. I've seen it a lot in the past couple weeks, and it's kinda annoying. Dalton Bulldog Pride! 01:20, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Well, by re-adding comments (As you said in '1.'), it's good to get a point across. People like to do this, so it dosen't really matter. And I think it's the user's desicion on wether or not to add links, it's not a rule that must be followed. Thanks, -- Fawny Keep on Smiling :D 15:48, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

Iceshine (Q) - For Approval
My last image before I leave. Meh. But here's Iceshine! I'm really proud of how she turned out. Comments? 17:30, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

Leave? What are you talking about? As for the image, darken the stripes a bit and thicken them. Make them a little bit wavy. Darken the ear pink.-- 17:37, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

Leave - I'm going to be inactive for about a week, since my mom is going to send our computer to someone. Anyways, I will work on that. What do you mean, 'wavy'? 17:46, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

These stripes are very straight. I think they should have more jagged lines in them like her warrior image.-- 17:53, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

I think maybe make the pupils smaller. Dalton Bulldog Pride! 18:28, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

Alright, I'll work on this tommorow. 19:27, August 30, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading and add more stripes, then add some more spots! Great work Icestorm! -- Fawny Keep on Smiling :D 15:44, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

Echowind (W) - For approval
- Oh yes 8D Catherine  I think I'm a little bit to obsessed with this movie. xD  18:09, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the whole thing. Darken the ear pink and blur it. Blur the shading. Blur the spots. Add stripes-- 18:20, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

Echo, this is lovely! Just do all the things above, and also, the eyes look...weird. Look at Hawkfire's warrior image for an example of how to do the eyes! Hawkey I am a Ninja Duck! Fear me!  14:32, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

This is lovely image, Echowind, as Hawkey said! The ear pink needs to be more natural and maybe you should have less spots, there are one to many. :) -- Fawny Keep on Smiling :D 15:43, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

This is great! Just remove a couple spots, and darken the ear pink. I love it! Flash '<sup style="line-height: 1em; "> In a Flash of light'' 18:01, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

Frostkit (K) (RC)
...Not much to say about her i know there are two Frostkits but i dont think they are the same gender just in case i did the pure white one that died sadly this is my first white cat using these blanks thankfully i hope she did not turn out to bad for you guys :3  Birdstar  You infected me with mildew? 21:01, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

Oh yeah, this is the deceased Frostkit :) Blur the shading, and make the ear pink more reddish  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:46, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

For some reason Pixlr is being hicky with me once i figured out whats wrong i will fix it Birdstar  Am i the true MCA?  21:42, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded- i completely re did her  Sand  I'm a new level of awesome 23:21, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

Bramblestripes (W)- For Approval
So, my first CAP Charart! Comments, improvments, constructments? Mousestep 15:55, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Your first? Are you sure? O.O its Awsome but there are two black dots behind the leg nearest us and maybe blur the earpink and patches a little bit and blur highlights  Birdstar  You infected me with mildew?  18:13, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Honeypaw (SC) (A)- For Approval
I tried to base it of Brookheart's tabby style. Comments? -- Fawny Keep on Smiling :D 17:31, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the white transition and tabby stripes then your good  Birdstar  You infected me with mildew? 18:13, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred tabby stripes and white transition. Comments? -- Fawny Keep on Smiling :D 10:15, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 18:41, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

Flash (Q) for approval
I like it. I think it is my best one so far. Comments? <font color="981f1f" style="background:Gold">Flash '<sup style="line-height: 1em; "> In a Flash of light'' 17:06, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot, and make the ear pink more reddish, it looks purple  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 18:39, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

Rabbitkit (Ki) - For Approval
Hmm, I don't know about this one. Comments?-- 22:05, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

darken the ear pink 14:03, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded changed ear pink-- 23:54, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

Shellkit (Ki) - For Approval
It's kind of hard to see the darker ears. Comments?-- 22:05, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, she almost looks black.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:11, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded lightened-- 23:54, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

Cindercloud (MCA) - For Approval
Another Cinderpelt wannabe. Comments?-- 22:05, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

It's really good Night, I don't see anything wrong :)  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 18:39, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

Flarecloud (W) - For Approval
This was temporarily declined before. I hope it's fine if I bring it back-- 22:11, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Of course it's fine :) Desaturate and lighten her  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:15, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded desaturated and lightened-- 22:29, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the shading more  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:10, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

nvm; the resolution on my computer screen made it look too dark. Comments Before Approval?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 18:49, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

Sly (Ki) - For approval
Epic! <font color="yellow" style="background:orange">Spririt "Fall is back, and here comes the coolness! 02:26, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

darken the shading and blur the stripes, add more stripes. 14:02, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

Rug(Ro):for approval
This is my first ever...so. Comments?- Daughter of Scourge <sup style="font-family:Ariel;color:Red">Favored by the Dark Forest!